Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX58CK61TTP99P7VQR4E51

Run Details

Duration:
56.9s
Cost:
$0.001096
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones stood black against the deeper black of the Richmond Park night. Aurora Carter slipped between two of them, the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant cold against her neck. The transition was instantaneous, a subtle pop of pressure in her ears. One step on damp grass, the next on dry, fragrant earth. The air in the Fae Grove was still and warm, thick with the perfume of night-blooming flowers that had no right to exist in a London winter. She’d come back for answers. The pendant, a thumb-sized crimson gem that had been a silent weight for weeks, had begun to pulse with a persistent, low-grade warmth this afternoon, a slow heartbeat against her sternum. The last time it had done that, she’d been within fifty feet of a flickering tear in the air that smelled of ozone and rotting honey—a Hel portal, according to Silas. The Grove was a pocket dimension, a weak spot. If a portal was going to open anywhere she could observe it safely, it would be here. That was the theory, anyway. But the theory hadn’t accounted for the silence. The last time she’d been here with Eva, the Grove had been alive with sound—the rustle of unseen creatures, the whisper of wind through impossible leaves, the distant trickle of water. Now, there was nothing. The absolute quiet pressed against her eardrums. Her own breathing sounded obscenely loud. She forced it to slow, falling back on the cold, analytical detachment that had gotten her through law tutorials and Evan’s worse moods. *Observe. Catalogue.* The wildflowers, which normally glowed with their own soft bioluminescence, were dull. Their petals were closed tight, clenched like fists. The usual ambient light of the place was absent, leaving only the weak silver of a half-moon filtering through the canopy above, casting jagged shadows that seemed to stretch toward her. She moved further into the clearing, her trainers soundless on the moss. The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, not a pulse now but a steady, uncomfortable heat. She pulled it from under her sweater, holding the gem in her palm. Its faint inner glow, usually a soft crimson, was a dull, angry red, like a banked coal. A twig snapped to her left. Rory froze, her head turning slowly. Nothing. Just the dense wall of shadow between two gnarled trees. Her mind supplied the rational explanation—a fox, a badger, the normal inhabitants of the park bleeding through the boundary. But the Grove didn’t have normal inhabitants. She took another step. The moss gave way with a soft, wet sound that was somehow wrong. She looked down. The moss wasn’t just damp; it was glistening, black in the moonlight, and it clung to her shoe with a sticky resistance. She pulled her foot free with a soft *shluck*. A sound drifted from behind her—a long, sighing exhalation that was not her own. It was the sound of someone letting go of a breath they’d held for a very long time. It came from the direction of the standing stones, her only way out. “Hello?” Her voice was sharp, cutting through the thick air. It didn’t echo. The Grove swallowed it whole. No answer. Only the return of that profound, listening silence. She turned in a full circle, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. Every shadow seemed deeper, every shape between the trees suggestive. *There*, something pale and tall, standing just behind that oak. She blinked, and it resolved into a shaft of moonlight on silvery bark. *There*, a flicker of movement at the very edge of her vision, low to the ground. She spun, but only saw the closed flowers, their heads now seeming to tilt slightly away from her. *Paranoia. It’s just the isolation. The weird time dilation.* The Grove could make minutes feel like hours. She checked her watch. The digital face was a blur of meaningless symbols, the numbers melting into each other. She shook her wrist. The display cleared for a second—10:47 PM—then scrambled again into chaotic lines. Time wasn’t just moving differently here; it was broken. The wrongness was a physical weight now, a cold knot in her stomach that had nothing to do with the warm air. The pendant was burning. She tried to drop it, to let it fall back against her chest, but her fingers were locked around it. The deep crimson gem was throbbing in time with her pulse, but out of sync, a dissonant counter-rhythm. A soft, wet crunching noise came from her right. This time she didn’t call out. She dropped into a crouch, making herself small, her back against the rough bark of one of the standing oaks. The crunching continued, methodical, deliberate. Something eating. Or digging. She peered around the curve of the tree. In the center of the clearing, where the grass was usually brightest, a patch of darkness deeper than the surrounding night was spread like a spill of ink. It wasn’t a shadow. It absorbed the moonlight. And at its edge, she saw it. A shape, low and vaguely canine, but with too many angles, its fur the colour of the void. It was nosing at the ground, its head dipping, coming up with a mouthful of the glowing, clenched flowers. It didn’t eat them. It seemed to be… uprooting them. Silencing them. As it lifted its head, two points of refracted light caught the moon—not eyes, but reflections from something slick and dark where eyes should be. It turned its head, not toward her, but toward the space she had been standing in moments before. It sniffed the air, a long, liquid sound. Rory stopped breathing. Every muscle in her body went rigid. The analytical part of her mind shut down, overridden by a primal, shrieking signal that this thing was *other*, and it was aware of her. It took a step in her direction. Its movement was all wrong—a stutter, a blur, then it was three feet closer without seeming to cross the distance. The sound of its paws on the ground was the soft *shluck* of pulling free from sticky moss. She had to move. Now. Pushing off from the tree, she sprinted, not for the standing stones—the thing was between her and them—but for the densest part of the tree line on the opposite side of the clearing. Her flight was not quiet. Dry leaves, leaves that had been soft a second ago, crackled like gunfire under her feet. A noise ripped through the silence behind her. Not a growl. Not a howl. It was the sound of tearing canvas and breaking glass, a violent, jagged protest against the quiet. It was the sound of the thing giving chase. She didn’t look back. She crashed through a thicket, thorns tearing at her jeans and jacket. The world narrowed to the pounding of blood in her ears, the searing heat of the pendant fused to her palm, the need for cover. She burst into a smaller, secondary clearing, this one dominated by a fallen, moss-covered log. She threw herself behind it, pressing her body into the damp earth and rotting wood. She squeezed her eyes shut, trying to mute the pendant’s glow with her clenched fist. The heat was unbearable. Silence returned. Not the first, oppressive silence, but a new, watchful one. The cicadas didn’t resume their song. The wind didn’t stir. The only sound was the frantic, ragged sawing of her own breath, which she fought to stifle. Minutes bled together. The burning in her hand began to subside, fading back to a warm pulse. Had it gone? Had it lost her? She dared to open her eyes, to lift her head just an inch above the log. The clearing was empty. The patch of consuming darkness was gone. The flowers remained clenched and dull. A wave of shaky relief washed over her. It had left. She had to get to the stones. Now. While she had a chance. She pushed herself up onto her knees. A warm, moist breath touched the back of her neck. It carried a scent of upturned earth, of decay, and beneath it, that faint, sweet rot of ozone and honey. The crunching sound was right behind her ear.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1394
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1394
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count4
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"silence"
count5
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"profound"
count1
8
word"resolved"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"methodical"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"whisper"
5"glistening"
6"echo"
7"profound"
8"resolved"
9"flicker"
10"chaotic"
11"stomach"
12"methodical"
13"pounding"
14"searing"
15"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count2
highlights
0"clenched like fists"
1"clenched fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords16
totalWords1378
ratio0.012
matches
0"Observe. Catalogue."
1"shluck"
2"There"
3"There"
4"Paranoia. It’s just the isolation. The weird time dilation."
5"other"
6"shluck"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1377
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Heartstone2
Fae1
Grove6
London1
Hel1
Silas1
Eva1
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Grove"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"shadows that seemed to stretch toward her"
1"seemed deeper every shape between the trees suggestive"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.903
wordCount1378
matches
0"not a pulse now but a steady, uncomfortable heat"
1"not eyes, but reflections from something slick"
2"not toward her, but toward the space she had been standing in moments before"
3"Not the first, oppressive silence, but a new, watchful one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean38.28
std26.36
cv0.689
sampleLengths
084
198
28
373
451
555
66
743
851
945
1018
1110
1282
1361
1464
159
1635
178
1892
1951
2035
2145
225
2354
2440
2556
2634
272
2837
2924
3016
3117
3224
337
3430
358
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"was gone"
66.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was glistening"
1"was burning"
2"was throbbing"
3"was nosing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences128
ratio0.078
matches
0"The last time it had done that, she’d been within fifty feet of a flickering tear in the air that smelled of ozone and rotting honey—a Hel portal, according to Silas."
1"The last time she’d been here with Eva, the Grove had been alive with sound—the rustle of unseen creatures, the whisper of wind through impossible leaves, the distant trickle of water."
2"Her mind supplied the rational explanation—a fox, a badger, the normal inhabitants of the park bleeding through the boundary."
3"The moss wasn’t just damp; it was glistening, black in the moonlight, and it clung to her shoe with a sticky resistance."
4"A sound drifted from behind her—a long, sighing exhalation that was not her own."
5"The display cleared for a second—10:47 PM—then scrambled again into chaotic lines."
6"Time wasn’t just moving differently here; it was broken."
7"As it lifted its head, two points of refracted light caught the moon—not eyes, but reflections from something slick and dark where eyes should be."
8"Its movement was all wrong—a stutter, a blur, then it was three feet closer without seeming to cross the distance."
9"Pushing off from the tree, she sprinted, not for the standing stones—the thing was between her and them—but for the densest part of the tree line on the opposite side of the clearing."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1393
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"absolute quiet pressed against her"
1"dull, angry red, like"
2"was right behind her"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.028715003589375447
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010050251256281407
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean10.77
std7.77
cv0.722
sampleLengths
016
118
212
311
427
55
631
731
89
917
105
118
1231
134
147
156
1623
171
181
1912
208
2131
2212
2313
2413
2517
266
276
281
2910
3019
317
324
3313
343
3522
369
3714
3818
3913
4010
413
425
432
448
4515
4610
4710
4813
4916
38.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners40
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"Just the dense wall of"
1"Only the return of that"
ratio0.017
57.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences116
matches
0"She’d come back for answers."
1"Her own breathing sounded obscenely"
2"She forced it to slow,"
3"Their petals were closed tight,"
4"She moved further into the"
5"She pulled it from under"
6"Its faint inner glow, usually"
7"Her mind supplied the rational"
8"She took another step."
9"She looked down."
10"She pulled her foot free"
11"It was the sound of"
12"It came from the direction"
13"Her voice was sharp, cutting"
14"It didn’t echo."
15"She turned in a full"
16"She blinked, and it resolved"
17"She spun, but only saw"
18"It’s just the isolation."
19"She checked her watch."
ratio0.405
37.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences116
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter slipped between two"
2"The transition was instantaneous, a"
3"The air in the Fae"
4"She’d come back for answers."
5"The pendant, a thumb-sized crimson"
6"The last time it had"
7"The Grove was a pocket"
8"That was the theory, anyway."
9"The last time she’d been"
10"The absolute quiet pressed against"
11"Her own breathing sounded obscenely"
12"She forced it to slow,"
13"The wildflowers, which normally glowed"
14"Their petals were closed tight,"
15"The usual ambient light of"
16"She moved further into the"
17"The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, not"
18"She pulled it from under"
19"Its faint inner glow, usually"
ratio0.845
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"If a portal was going"
1"Now, there was nothing."
2"While she had a chance."
ratio0.026
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The air in the Fae Grove was still and warm, thick with the perfume of night-blooming flowers that had no right to exist in a London winter."
1"The pendant, a thumb-sized crimson gem that had been a silent weight for weeks, had begun to pulse with a persistent, low-grade warmth this afternoon, a slow he…"
2"The last time it had done that, she’d been within fifty feet of a flickering tear in the air that smelled of ozone and rotting honey—a Hel portal, according to …"
3"She forced it to slow, falling back on the cold, analytical detachment that had gotten her through law tutorials and Evan’s worse moods."
4"The usual ambient light of the place was absent, leaving only the weak silver of a half-moon filtering through the canopy above, casting jagged shadows that see…"
5"A sound drifted from behind her—a long, sighing exhalation that was not her own."
6"The wrongness was a physical weight now, a cold knot in her stomach that had nothing to do with the warm air."
7"It was nosing at the ground, its head dipping, coming up with a mouthful of the glowing, clenched flowers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.2359%