Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5902TZTKCN3X0GQ8H9DV

Run Details

Duration:
7.5s
Cost:
$0.000545
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the Soho pavements into slick mirrors that reflected the sickly glow of the streetlights. Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t slow. Her boots splashed through puddles, the cold seeping through the leather, but she kept her eyes locked on the figure darting between the shadows ahead. The suspect—tall, lean, moving with the kind of desperate grace that came from knowing the streets like the back of their hand—had already vanished twice tonight. She wasn’t about to let it happen a third time. Ahead, the neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered in the downpour, its glow bleeding into the wet air. The suspect didn’t hesitate. They veered sharp left, shouldered through the bar’s heavy wooden door, and disappeared inside. Quinn didn’t break stride. She hit the door a second later, the warmth of the bar slapping her in the face like a wet towel. The scent of stale beer and old woodsmoke clung to the air, thick enough to taste. The place was half-empty, just a few regulars hunched over their drinks, their eyes flicking up as she stormed in. No sign of the suspect. Quinn’s fingers twitched toward her radio, but she didn’t reach for it. Not yet. She scanned the room—booths lined with cracked red vinyl, a jukebox in the corner playing something slow and mournful, the bar itself a long stretch of dark wood polished smooth by decades of elbows and spilled whiskey. Then she saw it. A bookshelf at the back, slightly ajar. Not enough to be obvious, but enough to catch her eye. The suspect hadn’t come in here to hide. They’d come in here to *go somewhere else*. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She strode across the bar, her boots thudding against the worn floorboards. A burly man in a leather jacket straightened from his stool, his hand drifting toward his pocket. She didn’t spare him a glance. “Police. Sit down.” He sat. She reached the bookshelf and gave it a sharp tug. It swung open with a groan, revealing a narrow passage lit by a single flickering bulb. The air coming from the gap was colder, damp, carrying the scent of earth and something metallic. Blood? Rust? She couldn’t tell. Quinn stepped inside and let the bookshelf swing shut behind her. The passage sloped downward, the walls lined with peeling posters and graffiti so old the paint had cracked. Her pulse thrummed in her throat, but she kept moving, one hand resting on the grip of her service weapon. The suspect had a head start, but they weren’t getting away. Not this time. The passage opened into a wider tunnel, the ceiling lost in darkness. The air here was thicker, heavier, like breathing through a wet cloth. Distant voices echoed, muffled and indistinct, bouncing off the curved walls. Quinn’s fingers tightened around her gun. She wasn’t in the city anymore. She was *under* it. Ahead, the tunnel split. Left or right. She crouched, running her fingers along the damp concrete. Fresh scuff marks on the right. Boot prints, still glistening with rainwater. She followed them. The tunnel sloped downward again, the air growing colder. The voices grew louder, sharper, until she could make out words—snatches of conversation, laughter, the clink of glass. Then, light. Not the sickly yellow of the tunnel bulbs, but something warmer, flickering like candlelight. She slowed, pressing herself against the wall as she crept forward. The tunnel opened into a vast chamber, the ceiling lost in shadow. Stalls lined the walls, their wares spilling out onto rickety tables—jars of glowing liquid, bundles of dried herbs, weapons that hummed with an energy she could *feel* in her teeth. People moved between the stalls, their faces half-hidden in the dim light, their voices a low, constant murmur. The Veil Market. She’d heard the whispers, the rumours, but she’d never believed it was real. And there, weaving through the crowd, was her suspect. Tall, dark-haired, moving with the same desperate urgency as before. They didn’t look back. Didn’t know she was there. Quinn’s breath came fast, her fingers flexing around her gun. She could call for backup. She could turn around, get out of this place before it swallowed her whole. But if she did, the suspect would vanish. Again. She stepped forward, her boot scuffing against the concrete. A few heads turned. Eyes narrowed. She ignored them, her gaze locked on the suspect as they ducked behind a stall selling what looked like vials of swirling smoke. “Oi. You.” Quinn froze. The voice came from behind her, rough and accented. She turned slowly. A man stood there, his arms crossed over a broad chest. Olive skin, dark curls, a scar running down his left forearm like a jagged lightning bolt. He wore a faded NHS lanyard around his neck, the ID long since scratched out. His warm brown eyes flicked over her, assessing. “You’re not supposed to be here.” Quinn didn’t lower her hand from her gun. “And you are?” “Tomás Herrera.” He jerked his chin toward the market. “This isn’t a place for cops.” “Then it’s a good thing I’m not here as a cop.” His eyebrows lifted. “No?” “No.” She didn’t elaborate. Didn’t need to. The suspect was getting away. Herrera’s gaze followed hers, then snapped back. “You’re after *him*?” “Her.” “Her, then.” He exhaled sharply, running a hand over his short curls. “You’ve got no idea what you’re walking into.” “Then enlighten me.” He hesitated, then stepped closer, his voice dropping. “That’s Silas Veyne’s territory. You go in there, you’re not coming out.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “I didn’t ask for a warning.” “No.” His mouth quirked, just for a second. “You didn’t.” She turned back toward the market, her fingers tightening around her gun. The suspect was almost out of sight, disappearing behind a stall draped in black cloth. Herrera’s hand shot out, gripping her wrist. “You don’t understand. This isn’t just some underground market. It’s a *hunt*.” Quinn yanked her arm free. “Then I’ll bring a leash.” She didn’t wait for his response. She strode forward, her boots echoing against the concrete as she stepped into the light. The market fell silent. Dozens of eyes locked onto her, some curious, some hostile, some downright *hungry*. She ignored them all. The suspect was ahead. That was all that mattered. And she wasn’t leaving without them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He exhaled sharply [sharply]"
1"His mouth quirked just [just]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.2
85.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1069
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1069
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"warmth"
2"scanned"
3"pulse"
4"echoed"
5"glistening"
6"flicked"
7"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"Eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords11
totalWords1061
ratio0.01
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"go somewhere else"
2"under"
3"feel"
4"him"
5"hunt"
6"hungry"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount971
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Raven1
Veil1
Market1
Didn2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
places
0"Soho"
1"Market"
globalScore0.934
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like vials of swirling smoke"
11.50% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.885
wordCount1061
matches
0"Not enough to be obvious, but enough to catch her eye"
1"Not the sickly yellow of the tunnel bulbs, but something warmer, flickering like candlelight"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean28.68
std24.57
cv0.857
sampleLengths
087
179
276
34
434
541
62
748
863
951
1031
1154
1276
1328
1438
1538
162
1714
1856
1911
2015
2111
224
2312
2410
251
2620
273
2820
299
3010
3127
3219
3310
3442
359
366
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs182
matches
0"wasn’t leaving"
46.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences118
ratio0.034
matches
0"The suspect—tall, lean, moving with the kind of desperate grace that came from knowing the streets like the back of their hand—had already vanished twice tonight."
1"She scanned the room—booths lined with cracked red vinyl, a jukebox in the corner playing something slow and mournful, the bar itself a long stretch of dark wood polished smooth by decades of elbows and spilled whiskey."
2"The voices grew louder, sharper, until she could make out words—snatches of conversation, laughter, the clink of glass."
3"Stalls lined the walls, their wares spilling out onto rickety tables—jars of glowing liquid, bundles of dried herbs, weapons that hummed with an energy she could *feel* in her teeth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount979
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"suspect—tall, lean, moving"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03268641470888662
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006128702757916241
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean8.99
std6.6
cv0.734
sampleLengths
021
15
225
326
410
520
64
714
84
921
1016
1120
125
1312
142
1537
164
177
1811
198
208
213
2212
2317
246
253
262
2710
2816
2917
301
311
323
3311
3418
3520
3611
373
3812
3912
4011
416
426
434
444
453
469
476
486
493
46.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3220338983050847
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners38
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Then she saw it."
ratio0.011
66.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences94
matches
0"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
1"She wasn’t about to let"
2"They veered sharp left, shouldered"
3"She hit the door a"
4"She scanned the room—booths lined"
5"They’d come in here to"
6"She strode across the bar,"
7"She didn’t spare him a"
8"She reached the bookshelf and"
9"It swung open with a"
10"She couldn’t tell."
11"Her pulse thrummed in her"
12"She wasn’t in the city"
13"She was *under* it."
14"She crouched, running her fingers"
15"She followed them."
16"She slowed, pressing herself against"
17"She’d heard the whispers, the"
18"They didn’t look back."
19"She could call for backup."
ratio0.383
55.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences94
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t slow."
2"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
3"The suspect—tall, lean, moving with"
4"She wasn’t about to let"
5"The suspect didn’t hesitate."
6"They veered sharp left, shouldered"
7"Quinn didn’t break stride."
8"She hit the door a"
9"The scent of stale beer"
10"The place was half-empty, just"
11"Quinn’s fingers twitched toward her"
12"She scanned the room—booths lined"
13"A bookshelf at the back,"
14"The suspect hadn’t come in"
15"They’d come in here to"
16"Quinn didn’t hesitate."
17"She strode across the bar,"
18"A burly man in a"
19"She didn’t spare him a"
ratio0.809
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The rain came down in sheets, turning the Soho pavements into slick mirrors that reflected the sickly glow of the streetlights."
1"The suspect—tall, lean, moving with the kind of desperate grace that came from knowing the streets like the back of their hand—had already vanished twice tonigh…"
2"Stalls lined the walls, their wares spilling out onto rickety tables—jars of glowing liquid, bundles of dried herbs, weapons that hummed with an energy she coul…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.6718%