Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5DGSGHVKTANGSY6GVY4N

Run Details

Duration:
36.8s
Cost:
$0.024165

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered the pavement like bullets as Detective Harlow Quinn's boots pounded against wet concrete. Her quarry—a figure in a dark coat—darted between the late-night revelers stumbling out of Soho's neon-lit establishments. The green glow from The Raven's Nest's sign cast an eerie pallor across Quinn's sharp features as she pressed forward, her worn leather watch catching raindrops that slid down her wrist. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" The suspect glanced back, revealing nothing but shadow beneath a pulled-up hood, then vaulted over a low railing and disappeared down stone steps that Quinn hadn't noticed before. She cursed under her breath. Three years of chasing ghosts through London's underbelly had taught her that nothing good ever came from following suspects into places that shouldn't exist. Her radio crackled with static. "Control to Detective Quinn, what's your location?" "Pursuing suspect on foot, heading..." Quinn paused at the top of the steps, peering into darkness that seemed to swallow her torch beam whole. The stone steps descended far deeper than any normal basement or Underground entrance should. "Heading underground near Camden Lock." The rain drove harder, forcing her to shout over the storm. Water cascaded down the steps like a waterfall, carrying with it the scent of something she couldn't identify—herbs mixed with copper and something else that made her skin crawl. "Detective Quinn, do you require backup?" Quinn's hand hovered over her radio. Backup meant explanations. Explanations meant forms, questions, and the kind of scrutiny that had already cost her two potential promotions since Morris died. The brass tolerated her unconventional methods because her clearance rate remained the highest in the division, but their patience wore thinner with each case that ventured into territory they couldn't categorize. She clicked the radio twice—the signal for negative—and started down the steps. The descent felt endless. Ancient brick walls pressed in from both sides, slick with moisture that had nothing to do with the storm above. Her footsteps echoed strangely, as if the sound travelled both forward and backward simultaneously. The deeper she went, the warmer it became, until steam rose from her rain-soaked coat. A murmur of voices drifted up from below. Quinn drew her weapon, keeping it low but ready. The steps opened into a vast space that defied the geography of Camden's underground. Market stalls stretched away into shadows, their surfaces gleaming with bottles, bones, and objects that hurt to look at directly. Candlelight flickered from wrought-iron fixtures, casting dancing shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources. "Welcome to the Veil Market." Quinn spun toward the voice. A man with olive skin and warm brown eyes stepped from behind a nearby stall, his hands raised peacefully. A Saint Christopher medallion caught the candlelight at his throat. "You're not supposed to be here." His accent carried traces of Spain, soft around the edges but firm with authority. "Neither is my suspect." Quinn kept her weapon trained on him but scanned the market beyond. Figures moved between stalls like smoke, never quite solid enough to focus on. "Which way did he go?" "She. And that depends on what you're willing to trade for the information." Quinn's jaw tightened. "I don't trade. I'm a police officer conducting official business." "Your badge means nothing here, Detective Quinn." The use of her name sent ice through her veins despite the underground warmth. "How do you know—" "The same way I knew you'd follow her down here eventually." The man stepped closer, and she noticed a scar running along his left forearm, pale against his skin. "My name is Tomás Herrera. I provide medical services to people who can't seek conventional treatment." "Like criminals." "Like people whose problems can't be solved with conventional medicine." A crash echoed from deeper in the market. Quinn's suspect was still moving, still within reach if she acted quickly. But every instinct trained into her over eighteen years of police work screamed warnings about this place, about the wrongness that permeated the air like incense. "She's heading for the transit point," Herrera said, following her gaze into the market's depths. "In five minutes, she'll be gone to a place your authority can't reach. In ten minutes, this entire market will relocate, and you'll never find either of us again." "Why are you helping me?" "Because the woman you're chasing killed someone I was trying to save. Someone who trusted me to keep them safe." Quinn studied his face in the candlelight. The medallion at his throat caught her attention—worn smooth by anxious fingers, the kind of talisman carried by someone who'd seen things that challenged faith rather than strengthened it. Another crash, closer this time. Glass shattered in the distance, followed by angry shouts in languages Quinn didn't recognize. "What kind of medical services?" she asked. "The kind that would cost me my license if I still had one to lose." "You lost your medical license?" "I chose to lose it rather than let people die from wounds that don't officially exist." The radio at her shoulder crackled again. "Detective Quinn, Control requesting status update." She looked back toward the stairs, toward the world of procedures and protocols and cases that made sense on paper. Then she looked ahead, into a market that sold impossibilities and harbored fugitives who might hold answers to questions she'd been afraid to ask since Morris died. "Detective?" Quinn clicked her radio. "Pursuing suspect through underground passages. May lose signal." She holstered her weapon and looked at Herrera. "Lead the way." His mouth curved into what might have been approval. "Stay close. Don't touch anything. And whatever you see, don't try to arrest it unless you want to become a permanent resident." They moved deeper into the market, past stalls selling bottled starlight and caged whispers, past vendors whose faces shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them. The air grew thicker with each step, heavy with possibilities that made her skin itch.
total_cost0.024165

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount998
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount998
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"potential"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"potential"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"gleaming"
4"flickered"
5"dancing"
6"scanned"
7"warmth"
8"depths"
9"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
58.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences51
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords987
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount727
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Underground1
Morris2
Camden1
Saint1
Christopher1
Spain1
Figures1
Herrera2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Nest"
3"Morris"
4"Camden"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Spain"
globalScore0.606
windowScore0.833
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"darkness that seemed to swallow her torch beam whole"
1"shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount987
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"steps that Quinn"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean25.31
std19.35
cv0.764
sampleLengths
064
13
257
312
443
540
66
760
812
953
1067
115
1234
1320
1434
1513
1613
177
1818
1945
202
2110
2246
2344
245
2520
2636
2719
287
2915
305
3116
3213
3347
341
3512
3611
3731
3841
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs134
matches
0"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences75
ratio0.053
matches
0"Her quarry—a figure in a dark coat—darted between the late-night revelers stumbling out of Soho's neon-lit establishments."
1"Water cascaded down the steps like a waterfall, carrying with it the scent of something she couldn't identify—herbs mixed with copper and something else that made her skin crawl."
2"She clicked the radio twice—the signal for negative—and started down the steps."
3"The medallion at his throat caught her attention—worn smooth by anxious fingers, the kind of talisman carried by someone who'd seen things that challenged faith rather than strengthened it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount738
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02981029810298103
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01084010840108401
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean13.16
std8.28
cv0.629
sampleLengths
016
117
231
33
428
55
624
75
87
924
1014
115
1211
1329
146
156
163
1720
1831
1912
204
2120
2214
2315
248
259
2614
2720
2816
295
305
3119
3210
3320
3416
3513
365
3713
383
3910
407
4114
424
4329
4416
452
4610
478
4812
4926
84.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.52
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners39
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Then she looked ahead, into"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences50
matches
0"Her quarry—a figure in a"
1"She cursed under her breath."
2"Her radio crackled with static."
3"She clicked the radio twice—the"
4"Her footsteps echoed strangely, as"
5"His accent carried traces of"
6"She looked back toward the"
7"She holstered her weapon and"
8"His mouth curved into what"
9"They moved deeper into the"
ratio0.2
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences50
matches
0"The rain hammered the pavement"
1"Her quarry—a figure in a"
2"The green glow from The"
3"The suspect glanced back, revealing"
4"She cursed under her breath."
5"Her radio crackled with static."
6"Quinn paused at the top"
7"The stone steps descended far"
8"The rain drove harder, forcing"
9"Water cascaded down the steps"
10"Quinn's hand hovered over her"
11"Backup meant explanations."
12"Explanations meant forms, questions, and"
13"The brass tolerated her unconventional"
14"She clicked the radio twice—the"
15"The descent felt endless."
16"Her footsteps echoed strangely, as"
17"The deeper she went, the"
18"A murmur of voices drifted"
19"Quinn drew her weapon, keeping"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The green glow from The Raven's Nest's sign cast an eerie pallor across Quinn's sharp features as she pressed forward, her worn leather watch catching raindrops…"
1"Explanations meant forms, questions, and the kind of scrutiny that had already cost her two potential promotions since Morris died."
2"The brass tolerated her unconventional methods because her clearance rate remained the highest in the division, but their patience wore thinner with each case t…"
3"Her footsteps echoed strangely, as if the sound travelled both forward and backward simultaneously."
4"The steps opened into a vast space that defied the geography of Camden's underground."
5"Candlelight flickered from wrought-iron fixtures, casting dancing shadows that seemed to move independently of their sources."
6"The medallion at his throat caught her attention—worn smooth by anxious fingers, the kind of talisman carried by someone who'd seen things that challenged faith…"
7"Then she looked ahead, into a market that sold impossibilities and harbored fugitives who might hold answers to questions she'd been afraid to ask since Morris …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.3638%