| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 60.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "electric" | | 3 | "carried the weight" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "pristine" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "fluttered" | | 10 | "crystallized" | | 11 | "magnetic" | | 12 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1083 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 709 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 13 | | Detective | 2 | | Inspector | 1 | | Henderson | 8 | | Italian | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Webb | 8 | | Eva | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Inspector" | | 4 | "Henderson" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Webb" | | 7 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.583 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed oddly pristine except for scorch marks radiating from his chest in perfect geometric patterns" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.923 | | wordCount | 1083 | | matches | | 0 | "not magnetic compass points, but something far older" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 26.41 | | std | 19.02 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 13 |
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| 87.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "been thrown" | | 1 | "been etched" | | 2 | "been snapped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung thick with dampness and something else—ozone, sharp and electric." | | 1 | "His clothes—expensive suit, Italian leather shoes—seemed oddly pristine except for scorch marks radiating from his chest in perfect geometric patterns." | | 2 | "She'd seen similar residue before—three years ago, the night Morris disappeared." | | 3 | "Strange symbols had been etched around the face—not magnetic compass points, but something far older." | | 4 | "Quinn examined one of Eva's sketches—a brass compass identical to the one clutched in Webb's dead fingers." | | 5 | "A bone token tumbled onto the platform—yellowed ivory carved with symbols that matched those on the compass." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 717 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.023709902370990237 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012552301255230125 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 12.74 | | std | 7.8 | | cv | 0.612 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 87.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5294117647058824 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Just those strange burns etched" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "His clothes—expensive suit, Italian leather" | | 1 | "He paused, consulting his notes" | | 2 | "She'd worked enough cases to" | | 3 | "She'd seen similar residue before—three" | | 4 | "She gestured toward Webb's body" |
| | ratio | 0.088 | |
| 82.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube platform beneath" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's footsteps echoed" | | 2 | "The air hung thick with" | | 3 | "Quinn's voice carried the weight" | | 4 | "Detective Inspector Henderson looked up" | | 5 | "Webb's body lay sprawled across" | | 6 | "His clothes—expensive suit, Italian leather" | | 7 | "Henderson gestured toward the far" | | 8 | "He paused, consulting his notes" | | 9 | "Quinn's sharp jaw tightened." | | 10 | "She'd worked enough cases to" | | 11 | "Glass vials containing unidentifiable liquids." | | 12 | "Quinn lifted a fragment of" | | 13 | "The liquid inside had crystallized," | | 14 | "She'd seen similar residue before—three" | | 15 | "The night that ended her" | | 16 | "Henderson's voice carried across the" | | 17 | "Quinn pocketed the glass fragment" | | 18 | "Henderson frowned, leaning closer" | | 19 | "Quinn knelt beside the corpse," |
| | ratio | 0.754 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "As if two separate events" | | 1 | "Even if that meant accepting" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The liquid inside had crystallized, leaving behind formations that resembled tiny bones." | | 1 | "The needle spun in lazy circles, occasionally pausing as if drawn by invisible forces." | | 2 | "Something about the woman's presence felt significant, another piece in a puzzle that refused to follow conventional logic." | | 3 | "The official report called it a gas explosion, but she'd seen the shadows move with purpose, seen reality bend in ways that defied explanation." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |