Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5HFJ65RGJ5P2AYFX5K3P

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Duration:
41.5s
Cost:
$0.026310

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube platform beneath Camden stretched into shadow, fluorescent work lights casting harsh pools of white against Victorian brick and decades of grime. Detective Harlow Quinn's footsteps echoed off curved walls as she descended the maintenance stairs, her worn leather watch catching the artificial glare. The air hung thick with dampness and something else—ozone, sharp and electric. "What've we got, Henderson?" Quinn's voice carried the weight of eighteen years on the force, each word measured and precise. Detective Inspector Henderson looked up from his notepad, sweat beading on his forehead despite the underground chill. "Victim's name is Marcus Webb, age thirty-four. Found him about three hours ago when the maintenance crew came down to check the old electrical systems." Webb's body lay sprawled across the disused platform, arms flung wide like he'd been thrown backward by tremendous force. His clothes—expensive suit, Italian leather shoes—seemed oddly pristine except for scorch marks radiating from his chest in perfect geometric patterns. No blood. No obvious wounds. Just those strange burns etched into fabric and flesh with surgical precision. "Crew find anything else?" "That's the odd bit." Henderson gestured toward the far end of the platform where crime scene tape fluttered in the station's perpetual draft. "They swear this section was cleared yesterday during routine inspections. Empty as the day they sealed it in '74. But when they came back today—" He paused, consulting his notes. "Well, aside from the body, they found remnants of what looks like a market." Quinn's sharp jaw tightened. She'd worked enough cases to know when details didn't align, when witnesses held back crucial information. Moving past Henderson, she approached the taped-off area. Scattered across the platform lay wooden crates, their contents spilled and trampled. Glass vials containing unidentifiable liquids. Torn fabric that might once have been market stalls. And everywhere, a fine residue of ash that clung to her fingertips when she crouched to examine it. "Medical examiner's initial assessment?" "Heart failure, but Patterson says he's never seen anything like those burn patterns. They go right through the clothing but don't match any electrical equipment down here. The power's been off to this section for thirty years." Quinn lifted a fragment of green glass, holding it to the light. The liquid inside had crystallized, leaving behind formations that resembled tiny bones. She'd seen similar residue before—three years ago, the night Morris disappeared. The night that ended her faith in logical explanations. "Sir, you should see this." Henderson's voice carried across the platform from the victim's position. Quinn pocketed the glass fragment and joined him beside the body. In Webb's left hand, partially concealed by his sleeve, something metallic glinted. "What is it?" "Looks like a compass, but—" Henderson frowned, leaning closer. "The needle's spinning like mad. Won't hold steady on any direction." Quinn knelt beside the corpse, careful not to disturb the scene. Webb's fingers clutched a small brass compass, its casing green with verdigris. Strange symbols had been etched around the face—not magnetic compass points, but something far older. The needle spun in lazy circles, occasionally pausing as if drawn by invisible forces. "Henderson, when exactly did the maintenance crew discover the body?" "Round half-past seven this morning. Why?" "And they finished yesterday's inspection when?" Henderson flipped through his notepad. "According to their supervisor, they wrapped up around four in the afternoon. Locked the access gate behind them." Quinn stood, brushing dust from her knees. The timeline felt wrong. Webb's body showed no signs of rigor mortis, suggesting death had occurred recently. But the market debris looked older, settled. As if two separate events had somehow occupied the same space. "Detective Quinn?" A woman's voice echoed from the platform entrance. Quinn turned to see a figure with curly red hair and round glasses, carrying a worn leather satchel. The newcomer moved with nervous energy, repeatedly tucking hair behind her left ear as she approached the crime scene tape. "I'm Eva Kowalski from the British Museum. I believe this relates to my research." Henderson stepped forward, hand raised. "Ma'am, this is an active crime scene. You'll need to—" "Let her through." Quinn's interruption carried authority that brooked no argument. Something about the woman's presence felt significant, another piece in a puzzle that refused to follow conventional logic. Eva ducked under the tape, her green eyes taking in the scattered debris with recognition rather than surprise. "You found evidence of the Veil Market." "The what?" "An underground network that operates in abandoned spaces throughout London. They deal in items most people would consider impossible." Eva opened her satchel, withdrawing a leather journal filled with handwritten notes and sketches. "My research suggests they move locations regularly, always staying ahead of authorities." Quinn examined one of Eva's sketches—a brass compass identical to the one clutched in Webb's dead fingers. "What can you tell me about this?" "It's called a Veil Compass. Supposed to point toward supernatural energy sources rather than magnetic north. If Webb had one, he was either a buyer or—" Eva's voice trailed off as she noticed the geometric burns on the victim's chest. "Or he tried to steal from the wrong people." Henderson snorted. "Supernatural energy sources? Come off it. This is a murder investigation, not some fantasy novel." But Quinn remembered Morris, remembered the impossible things she'd witnessed three years ago. The official report called it a gas explosion, but she'd seen the shadows move with purpose, seen reality bend in ways that defied explanation. "Eva, what would cause burn patterns like these?" "Protective wards, most likely. The market vendors guard their wares carefully. If someone tried to take something without paying—" She gestured toward Webb's body. "The items themselves can be lethal." Quinn knelt again beside the corpse, this time focusing on his other hand. Webb's right fist remained clenched around something small. Using her pen, she carefully pried open the rigid fingers. A bone token tumbled onto the platform—yellowed ivory carved with symbols that matched those on the compass. But this token had been snapped cleanly in half. "Henderson, I want you to canvas the area above ground. Find out if anyone saw Webb enter the Camden tube network yesterday evening." "What about you?" Quinn stood, slipping the broken token into an evidence bag. The brass compass continued its restless spinning in Webb's other hand, occasionally pointing toward the deeper tunnels before resuming its circular dance. "I'm going to follow where the evidence leads." Even if that meant accepting possibilities she'd spent three years trying to forget.
total_cost0.02631

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Henderson"
1"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"carried the weight"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"fluttered"
count1
10
word"crystallized"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count2
12
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"electric"
3"carried the weight"
4"measured"
5"chill"
6"pristine"
7"perfect"
8"etched"
9"fluttered"
10"crystallized"
11"magnetic"
12"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1083
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount709
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Victorian1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Detective2
Inspector1
Henderson8
Italian1
Morris2
Webb8
Eva4
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Inspector"
4"Henderson"
5"Morris"
6"Webb"
7"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.583
windowScore0.833
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed oddly pristine except for scorch marks radiating from his chest in perfect geometric patterns"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.923
wordCount1083
matches
0"not magnetic compass points, but something far older"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean26.41
std19.02
cv0.72
sampleLengths
058
120
242
356
44
567
672
74
837
944
105
1133
123
1320
1452
1510
166
176
1823
1942
202
2146
2214
2315
2429
2525
262
2745
2824
2949
3017
3137
328
3330
3431
3526
3623
373
3832
398
4013
87.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences59
matches
0"been thrown"
1"been etched"
2"been snapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences85
ratio0.071
matches
0"The air hung thick with dampness and something else—ozone, sharp and electric."
1"His clothes—expensive suit, Italian leather shoes—seemed oddly pristine except for scorch marks radiating from his chest in perfect geometric patterns."
2"She'd seen similar residue before—three years ago, the night Morris disappeared."
3"Strange symbols had been etched around the face—not magnetic compass points, but something far older."
4"Quinn examined one of Eva's sketches—a brass compass identical to the one clutched in Webb's dead fingers."
5"A bone token tumbled onto the platform—yellowed ivory carved with symbols that matched those on the compass."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount717
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.023709902370990237
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012552301255230125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean12.74
std7.8
cv0.612
sampleLengths
024
122
212
320
417
525
619
720
82
93
1012
114
1223
1330
1414
154
1616
178
1812
195
209
2118
224
2337
2412
2512
2611
279
285
2910
3011
3112
323
339
3411
3511
3612
3715
3814
3910
406
416
425
4318
447
454
4613
477
4811
492
87.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5294117647058824
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners45
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Just those strange burns etched"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences57
matches
0"His clothes—expensive suit, Italian leather"
1"He paused, consulting his notes"
2"She'd worked enough cases to"
3"She'd seen similar residue before—three"
4"She gestured toward Webb's body"
ratio0.088
82.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences57
matches
0"The abandoned Tube platform beneath"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's footsteps echoed"
2"The air hung thick with"
3"Quinn's voice carried the weight"
4"Detective Inspector Henderson looked up"
5"Webb's body lay sprawled across"
6"His clothes—expensive suit, Italian leather"
7"Henderson gestured toward the far"
8"He paused, consulting his notes"
9"Quinn's sharp jaw tightened."
10"She'd worked enough cases to"
11"Glass vials containing unidentifiable liquids."
12"Quinn lifted a fragment of"
13"The liquid inside had crystallized,"
14"She'd seen similar residue before—three"
15"The night that ended her"
16"Henderson's voice carried across the"
17"Quinn pocketed the glass fragment"
18"Henderson frowned, leaning closer"
19"Quinn knelt beside the corpse,"
ratio0.754
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"As if two separate events"
1"Even if that meant accepting"
ratio0.035
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The liquid inside had crystallized, leaving behind formations that resembled tiny bones."
1"The needle spun in lazy circles, occasionally pausing as if drawn by invisible forces."
2"Something about the woman's presence felt significant, another piece in a puzzle that refused to follow conventional logic."
3"The official report called it a gas explosion, but she'd seen the shadows move with purpose, seen reality bend in ways that defied explanation."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.0296%