Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5KV92QCCYR66JY76GNKJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.003887
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the street in a silver curtain, turning neon into smeared halos along the pavement. The city breathed in gas and rain, exhaled it in a thousand slick reflections. A siren curled in the distance and died. A camera-glow hung on a doorway, catching a silhouette that moved too quickly, too sure of its own steps. Detective Harlow Quinn kept to the edge of the curb, rain running in rivulets down the stem of her worn leather watch. The night arranged itself around her like a question she was determined to answer. Brown eyes flicked from one doorway to the next, mind racing, hands calm but ready. Sixteen hours on the job and the fight still felt cleaner than the truth ever did. The figure ahead moved with the loose-limbed economy of someone who knew the city could be trusted to spit him out at the end of the block. Tomás Herrera. Short, dark curls pressed against the rain, olive skin taking every neon glare in stride. A Saint Christopher medallion swung at his chest with every step, catching a pale tremor of light. A scar ran along his left forearm—knife-work, not long healed, the kind that never forgot how to remind you it existed. Quinn’s breath fogged in her mask of resolve. The chase wasn’t a dance so much as a demand: keep up, or be buried under the city’s machinery of secrets. Tomás turned a corner into a narrow alley, where the sound of water pooling grew louder, louder, until it was all you could hear. He slid against a wall and pressed his back into the damp brick, listening for the telltale echo of footsteps he hoped would vanish. The Saint Christopher swung as a small, stubborn bell against his chest. Quinn closed the distance, every footfall measured, the rain soaking through her jacket, soaking through her hair, soaking into the questions she carried. The alley spit out a cat and a stray plastic bag; Herrera moved again, shoulders hunched, a burst of speed that sent him skidding along slick bricks. A single streetlight hummed a tired yellow as Herrera dashed through a doorway that looked more like a page torn from a map than a door. The Raven’s Nest, the sign above it a distinctive green neon eye watching the street. The nest thrummed with a bar’s chorus of clinking glass, a low murmur, and a rain-soaked hush hiding the city’s louder sins. Quinn slid through the door after him, the bell above tinkling like a bad omen. Inside, the air smelled of malt and wet jackets, of old vinyl and rain-washed stones. The Nest wore its walls like a history book: maps pressed into the plaster, black-and-white photographs tacked in a neat, almost ceremonial order. A barback nodded at her in a half-acknowledgment; the bartender gave a quick, practiced glance that didn’t pretend to know her business. Herrera threaded between tables, moving with a practitioner’s ease, as if the room knew his name and forgave him for it. The crowd’s murmur rose in a tide around him, a current that pulled him toward a back corner where a bookshelf leaned against the wall with the ease of something meant to be moved. Quinn followed, every instinct aligned to the shape of risk. She noted the glint of a coin purse, the slip of leather, the tremor of the Saint Christopher medallion still visible beneath Herrera’s shirt. He pressed a hand to the back of a shelf and the bookshelf conceded, letting a gap reveal a narrow passage hidden behind it—something that looked exactly like a door left unlocked by someone who forgot to close it. A breath of cold came up from the cavity, carrying with it a solemn hush and the faint waft of something chemical, something old. Quinn didn’t hesitate. The city could tumble into a new maze if she wasn’t quick. The passage behind the shelf opened to a stairwell, and the stairwell opened onto a tunnel that smelled of damp stone and something faintly metallic, something almost electrical. The sound of water dripped somewhere a floor away, and the tunnel wound down, a corkscrew through the earth. Herrera moved again, a live wire in a metal case, and Quinn kept to him, feet sure, breath steady. The air grew cooler and thicker as they descended. The stairs opened onto a glass-and-iron platform, a station that hadn’t hummed with life in years but remembered what it used to be. The hum of distant trains was gone, replaced by a muffled, persistent whisper that hinted at secrets better left buried. The walls bore damp lace of mold; a map of the city seemed sketched in black lines along the tunnel walls, a cartography of power and crime, if you knew how to read it. The back room of the Raven’s Nest was a clever ruse, Quinn thought, a chamber for whispers and deals that needed a cover story. But the passage to the underground market wasn’t a trick. It was a highway for those who lived on the edges of the law and the supernatural, a path the Nest’s owners knew to be there even when the world forgot to mention it. They moved. Herrera pulled free of the dim corridor and pressed through a low arch, which opened into a cavernous underground space. The air smelled tangy and cold, like rain laced with pennies and old copper. Strips of pale light built a broken ladder of yellow across the ground. The place beyond the arch—The Veil Market—lay like a secret waiting for someone who believed in it enough to walk through the door. Entry required a token, something bone-chilled and pale as ash, something you bled for? No. It was a token you earned, a toll paid to cross the boundary where magic and necessity shared a private, dangerous handshake. The bone token. Quinn had never owned one. The Market lounged in a no-man’s land between what the police could prove and what people whispered about under breath in back rooms. Herrera paused in the cave-like space, listening to the soft sighs of the market’s other inhabitants: a whisper of fabric, the rustle of a cloak, the soft clack of something metallic on stone. The market’s current location hummed in the air, as if the tunnels themselves remembered where they’d last set up and what they’d traded there. Quinn stepped closer to Herrera, the rain now a memory in the tunnel, replaced by a different weather: the weather of fear, of choices made in the pale light that the underground could offer. “You won’t tell them what you know,” Herrera said, voice low, almost casual, as if he were describing the weather rather than explaining a conspiracy. “You want to keep your job, your badge, your partner’s memory. You want your certainty to feel earned.” “And you want to stay alive long enough to use those favors you’ve been stockpiling,” Quinn snapped back, keeping her tone cool even as the walls pressed in. “Or is your memory of Morris clouding your judgement?” Herrera’s eyes flicked toward her, a spark of defiance, then softened with something more human. The Saint Christopher medallion swung again, catching the pale light of the market and turning it into a small, bright coin of warning. “The clique,” he said. The word felt like a weapon and a confession. “They’re not a group of quiet thieves in three-piece suits. They trade information here, in this tunnel, with people who know how to use fear as currency. The people who run the market—tonight’s buyers and sellers—want something from you, Detective Quinn.” Quinn’s teeth flashed in a quick, almost wry smile. “Then I’ll make a trade. I want the names behind Morris’s death, and I want to see where your loyalties lie.” She stepped closer, one foot in the shadow of a crate that looked to be filled with something more valuable and deadly than it appeared. A chorus of voices moved in the distance, a murmur that rose and fell with the wind of passing footsteps. The market was alive in a way the surface city never admitted to being. There were things here that breathed in the dark, moved with a confidence that came from being unseen, unaccountable. Herrera’s shoulders tightened. He reached to his forearm, the scar there telling a story of violence he hadn’t finished telling. He shot a glance at the Saint Christopher medallion and then looked away, as if the relic were a witness he’d rather ignore. “The bone token,” he whispered, almost to himself. “You’ll not get through the gate without it.” Quinn eyed the stall fronts, where vendors offered jars with shimmering liquids, small pouches with powders that gleamed like crushed stars, and old-fashioned trinkets that hummed with trapped noise or memory. A stall keeper, hooded and pale, weighed out a handful of something that smelled of rain and rainwater and something else she couldn’t name. The Market wasn’t just beneath Camden; it was beneath time and the habit of telling truths in clean, public spaces. “Who runs this place?” Quinn asked, her voice echoing faintly against the damp stone. “The usual,” Herrera replied, gesturing toward a cluster of figures that melted into the shadows when Quinn’s gaze swept their way. “People who read your case file but don’t bother to learn your name. People who’ll talk if you’re willing to pay a price in coins a detective isn’t supposed to carry.” Quinn’s face remained calm, a mask learned through years of keeping the line between personal and professional clear. She studied Herrera’s body language—the way his weight shifted when he leaned a fraction toward the door, the way his hand trembled at his side, the way the Saint Christopher pendant rattled against his chest as if it knew a truth it wasn’t telling. “Why help the clique?” she pressed. “Why risk this—this permanent entry into a world you don’t understand?” The question drew a tight smile from Herrera, a brief thing that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “Because you don’t understand it either, Detective. You think you’re protecting people, but you’re a single thread in a tapestry that’s already woven,” he said, voice dropping to a rough whisper. “And I know you’re chasing something bigger than a case file. I know you’re chasing the truth about Morris.” Her breath snagged in her throat—Morris, the partner who’d vanished into a fog of rumors and supernatural whispers that never quite sounded like an explanation. The memory pressed at the edges of her vision: a corridor, a flare of light, a sudden pain that wasn’t physical, something like a door slamming shut on a possibility she hadn’t finished opening. The market’s edges shifted. The stalls became more crowded, or it felt that way due to the way bodies moved with practiced precision, as if they’d done this a thousand times in a thousand different markets and never once thought it unusual. A woman with a copper coil around her wrists counted coins in a way that made the room feel small and dangerous. A man with eyes like wet slate leaned over a stall and whispered to another, the words too soft to hear and too sharp to ignore. Quinn watched Herrera’s mouth shape a rhythm, a cadence that sounded like a plan. She didn’t need to guess the plan to know it would involve slipping back the way he’d come until the right door opened to the right passage, to the right truth. He drifted closer to a crate stacked with copper canisters that rattled with sound when a ghost-wind passed by. He reached for the crate, his fingers hovering over a latch. The latch clicked, and a narrow stair slid out from the wall with a whisper of treated wood. The Market had a second mouth, a hidden entrance tucked away behind a stall of shimmering powders, a path that led deeper into the earth where what you paid for wasn’t money, but something you could not put a price on with a cash register. Herrera paused, sensing what Quinn had already guessed: if he moved, the door would swallow him and spit him out into the unknown. If he spoke, he might unlock something none of them were prepared to admit aloud. If he ran, he would become a rumor again, a whisper that started in a doorway and ended in a scream. She stepped into the space between them, the air colder there, the darkness thicker, almost a protective shroud around him—and yet a trap for anyone who did not know how to walk through it. Her voice carried a weight that didn’t demand obedience so much as it gave it a reason to exist. “Tomás,” she said, using the name that tasted like a truth he could not swallow. “You’re not leaving this tunnel until you tell me what you know about Morris, about the case you were involved in, about these people who think fear is currency.” He straightened, shoulders stiff, the Saint Christopher pendulum of metal resting on his chest as if it had its own life force. “I didn’t lie to you about the market,” he said. “I told you what I owed them and what they owe me. I told you I’ll pay it with whatever is left of my soul.” He looked at her with that raw mixture of defiance and exhaustion, a man who had learned too late that loyalty could be a contract with a broken end. Quinn’s jaw tightened. “Then we deal with your debt now. You lead, I follow, and when I decide we’re through, you stop paying.” Her words came out even, clear, precise. She wasn’t there to bargain; she was there to extract the truth in a city that was allergic to truth. Herrera exhaled slowly, the breath fogging in the chilly air. His gaze shifted to the hidden stair, to the tunnel’s mouth that waited like a maw in the earth. He glanced at her, a rough half-smile that told her this wasn’t his first choice. “People here,” he began, then paused as if choosing his words with care, “they sell what you can’t prove exists. They trade secrets the surface never names. If you want to reach the names Morris was chasing, you’ll need more than a badge. You’ll need a token you don’t have.” Quinn scanned the market again, counted the subtle signs of entry: a vendor who cataloged stories instead of goods, a child who watched the adults with eyes too old for his age, the way a man moved to shield a woman who wasn’t in danger so much as he wanted the woman to feel protected by something stronger than her voice. It wasn’t just crime here; it was a living map of what people kept hidden, what people needed to forget to survive. The decision pressed in on her like a weight she could not lift without a plan. If she stayed, if she delved deeper, she’d expose herself to a vulnerability she’d trained herself not to show. She’d become part of the Market’s web, a thread the wrong person could pull and use to unspool everything she’d fought to keep safe. If she went back to the surface, she would lose the only chance she had to uncover the truth about Morris, the truth about the clique, the truth about what the city did to those it honored with medals and those it labeled as expendable. Herrera stepped toward a stall where the air tasted metallic and the vendor’s eyes reflected a cold calculation. He reached out again, and the Saint Christopher pendant clinked against his collarbone, a reminder of the road he’d chosen and the one he’d run from. Quinn found her voice, not loud, not a shout, but a decision carved from years on the force and years facing something bigger than the force could hold. She would go down there, if that’s what it took. She would stand at the mouth of the tunnel and step across the threshold into a world that blurred the lines between law and lawlessness, between memory and implication. She would do what she always did: face what terrified her most and then walk through it. “Take me to Morris’s hired hands,” she said, the words steady and clean. “Tell me where the names went after the choice was made.” For a heartbeat, Herrera’s expression didn’t move. Then the corner of his mouth quirked, a glimpse of relief that looked like fear wearing a mask. “That’s not your department,” he said softly. “Not yet.” Quinn didn’t blink. She allowed the question to rise between them, a small, dangerous flame. “It will be.” The market’s murmur swelled, a tide that could swallow almost anyone who didn’t know how to swim in it. The pad of Herrera’s fingers brushed the Saint Christopher and settled there as if he’d found a place to anchor himself. He looked away from her, toward the passage that waited, whispering an invitation to step inside and never return. “Then follow,” he said, and his voice carried a grit that wasn’t fear but resolve. “Stay close. The market changes when the moon grows full. Tonight, a lot of doors open. And a lot of doors close.” That warning rang in Quinn’s ears like a bell. A full moon tonight? The Veil Market’s schedule lay out in the open for those who believed in it. If the moon rose, the market would shift again, and with it would come a cascade of events that could redefine the line she walked between justice and vengeance. The decision pressed down: stay and risk getting lost in a labyrinth she couldn’t control, or go with him and gamble that the truth waited on the other side of a door that could vanish at dawn. Her breath formed a tight circle in the cold air, and then she said it, a word that carried the weight of all the years she’d spent chasing leads that led nowhere and leads that saved lives. “Down there.” The word came out clean, a line drawn in rainwater and stone. Herrera, convinced she’d chosen the path, stepped into the tunnel and dropped into silence behind the stair’s first rung. Quinn followed, the Hollow Market’s memories brushing against her skin as if she’d already trespassed long ago and forgotten the pain of it. The stairs closed above them with a soft sigh, sunken wood and iron, sealing the world above from the world below. The tunnel’s air grew colder still, and the distant murmur of the Market thickened into a near-chant, as if all the voices of its corners had rehearsed their talk for years. They descended. The market’s pulse swelled beneath them, a heartbeat of rainwater and breath and alchemical glitter. The bone token’s absence gnawed at Quinn’s mind—the missing key that could shift the balance of power here, turn a careful pursuit into something elemental and unstoppable. Her mind cataloged the possibilities, the probabilities, the risks. Then Herrera’s pace slowed, and the space opened into something larger, a cavern of a marketplace you could smell in its bones—spices and copper, smoke and salt, something old and something dangerously new. The decision hung in the air, palpable as the electricity that danced along the tunnel walls. Would she cross into the Market’s heart, where legacies and debts walked side by side, where the line between crime and crime’s necessity blurred into a single, dangerous truth? Or would she retreat, coil back into the city above, hoist the door shut behind her, and accept that some answers don’t wait for a badge to fetch them? She caught Herrera’s eye, saw the tremor there, the stubborn, brave thing that kept him upright even as the ground drifted beneath him. He was not the enemy of her investigation; he was the gatekeeper to something she either needed or needed to reveal to others to end Morris’s case. The Market’s center came into view: stalls that breathed with a life all their own, vendors who spoke in whispers and traded in favors, items that shimmered with power in a way that made Quinn’s fingers itch to touch and see if the rumors could be proven true. A merchant’s stall offered a vial of liquid star, a powder that sang when moved, a glass bead that carried some memory from someone else’s life. Another offered a map, not drawn on parchment but etched into water, which shifted and re-formed as you watched, revealing routes you could neither navigate nor understand. Herrera moved again, closer to a shadowed doorway that led deeper into the belly of the Underground. The doorway wasn’t a door so much as a suggestion, a doorway that asked you to step through and leave the world you knew behind. Quinn stood at his shoulder, not touching him, not losing him, listening to the Market breathe around them. The bone token wasn’t in her pocket, not yet. The token wasn’t something she owned, but something she could steal from a place that would trade it for a knowledge it valued more than the fear of a badge. A figure moved between the stalls—a man with eyes like wet stone and a mouth that barely concealed a grin. He stopped a pace from Herrera, looked him up and down as if cataloging him the way a collector catalogues a rare coin. The moment stretched thin and long, a single thread of consequence. “Tomás,” the man said, the word heavy with the weight of a name that wasn’t a name here but a chain. “You brought the one who needs to see the end of this.” The voice was a blend of gratitude and threat, a paradox that didn’t pretend to have a single purpose. Herrera inclined his head. “We’ll see what truth costs us.” Quinn’s chest tightened. The Market didn’t care about truth; it cared about change. It didn’t care about the cost to the living, only the value of the information it could extract from those who believed they still controlled their fates. “Show me Morris’s path,” she said, voice controlled, eyes unblinking. “Show me the names that slipped away when people woke up to themselves in the morning with a different memory.” The Market shifted then, subtly, a wave that didn’t slip through the walls but through the minds of those who dared to listen. A scent rose, at once familiar and alien—a memory of rain on a different street, a memory of a corridor, a memory of a night that never ended. The Market breathed once more, and the walls suggested a direction, a corridor where secrets were stored like jars on a shelf, their contents visible only to those who believed. Tomás stepped toward the doorway again, but stopped, glancing back at Quinn with a look that spoke of a choice she could not read and had never deserved to read. He reached for a small box beside him, not opening it, not lifting it, merely letting it rest between his palms as if weighing a decision that would alter not just his life but every life connected to the clique’s shadow. Quinn didn’t speak. No words seemed big enough to carry the weight of what lay ahead. She looked at the doorway, at the path that would take her deeper into a world where law didn’t always win and where the truth wore a face you could see if you listened to the right voice long enough. Then a single, crisp sentence, spoken with the same calm resolve that had carried her through three dozen dangerous nights: “Down there.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Quinn snapped back [back]"
1"he began then [then]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.15
96.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3983
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3983
totalAiIsms44
found
0
word"determined"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count2
2
word"racing"
count1
3
word"resolve"
count3
4
word"dance"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"footfall"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"aligned"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count5
12
word"chilled"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"weight"
count5
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"tapestry"
count1
17
word"maw"
count1
18
word"scanned"
count1
19
word"cataloged"
count2
20
word"delved"
count1
21
word"reminder"
count1
22
word"implication"
count1
23
word"carried the weight"
count1
24
word"silence"
count1
25
word"pulse"
count1
26
word"palpable"
count1
27
word"shimmered"
count1
28
word"etched"
count1
29
word"navigate"
count1
30
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"determined"
1"flicked"
2"racing"
3"resolve"
4"dance"
5"echo"
6"footsteps"
7"footfall"
8"measured"
9"aligned"
10"glint"
11"whisper"
12"chilled"
13"echoing"
14"weight"
15"trembled"
16"tapestry"
17"maw"
18"scanned"
19"cataloged"
20"delved"
21"reminder"
22"implication"
23"carried the weight"
24"silence"
25"pulse"
26"palpable"
27"shimmered"
28"etched"
29"navigate"
30"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences182
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3952
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions107
wordCount3515
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn30
Herrera27
Saint9
Christopher9
Raven2
Nest4
Veil2
Market14
Camden1
Morris3
Hollow1
Underground1
Tomás3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Raven"
6"Nest"
7"Market"
8"Morris"
9"Tomás"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences162
glossingSentenceCount12
matches
0"seemed sketched in black lines along the tunnel walls, a cartography of power and crime, if you knew how to read it"
1"felt like a weapon and a confession"
2"quite reach his eyes"
3"sounded like an explanation"
4"something like a door slamming shut on a pos"
5"sounded like a plan"
6"tasted like a truth he could not swallow"
7"as if choosing his words with care"
8"looked like fear wearing a mask"
9"as if cataloging him the way a collector catalogues a rare coin"
10"as if weighing a decision that would alter not just his life but every life connected to the clique’s shadow"
11"seemed big enough to carry the weight of what lay ahead"
73.48% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords1.265
wordCount3952
matches
0"not loud, not a shout, but a decision carved from years on the force"
1"not a shout, but a decision carved from years on the force"
2"not drawn on parchment but etched into water"
3"neither navigate nor"
4"not just his life but every life connected to the clique’s shadow"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences197
matches
0"deals that needed"
1"accept that some"
74.88% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean54.14
std22.31
cv0.412
sampleLengths
057
167
282
329
460
550
663
775
855
973
1039
1166
1286
1368
1472
1568
1657
1734
1843
1937
2038
2154
2255
2353
2443
2516
2675
2714
2852
2962
3017
3167
3259
3390
3475
3563
3659
3753
3844
3986
4050
4144
4250
4383
44104
4544
4684
4724
4834
4918
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences182
matches
0"was determined"
1"was gone"
2"were prepared"
3"were stored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs587
matches
0"were describing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount8
flaggedSentences18
totalSentences197
ratio0.091
matches
0"A scar ran along his left forearm—knife-work, not long healed, the kind that never forgot how to remind you it existed."
1"The alley spit out a cat and a stray plastic bag; Herrera moved again, shoulders hunched, a burst of speed that sent him skidding along slick bricks."
2"A barback nodded at her in a half-acknowledgment; the bartender gave a quick, practiced glance that didn’t pretend to know her business."
3"He pressed a hand to the back of a shelf and the bookshelf conceded, letting a gap reveal a narrow passage hidden behind it—something that looked exactly like a door left unlocked by someone who forgot to close it."
4"The walls bore damp lace of mold; a map of the city seemed sketched in black lines along the tunnel walls, a cartography of power and crime, if you knew how to read it."
5"The place beyond the arch—The Veil Market—lay like a secret waiting for someone who believed in it enough to walk through the door."
6"The Market wasn’t just beneath Camden; it was beneath time and the habit of telling truths in clean, public spaces."
7"She studied Herrera’s body language—the way his weight shifted when he leaned a fraction toward the door, the way his hand trembled at his side, the way the Saint Christopher pendant rattled against his chest as if it knew a truth it wasn’t telling."
8"Her breath snagged in her throat—Morris, the partner who’d vanished into a fog of rumors and supernatural whispers that never quite sounded like an explanation."
9"She stepped into the space between them, the air colder there, the darkness thicker, almost a protective shroud around him—and yet a trap for anyone who did not know how to walk through it."
10"She wasn’t there to bargain; she was there to extract the truth in a city that was allergic to truth."
11"It wasn’t just crime here; it was a living map of what people kept hidden, what people needed to forget to survive."
12"The bone token’s absence gnawed at Quinn’s mind—the missing key that could shift the balance of power here, turn a careful pursuit into something elemental and unstoppable."
13"Then Herrera’s pace slowed, and the space opened into something larger, a cavern of a marketplace you could smell in its bones—spices and copper, smoke and salt, something old and something dangerously new."
14"He was not the enemy of her investigation; he was the gatekeeper to something she either needed or needed to reveal to others to end Morris’s case."
15"A figure moved between the stalls—a man with eyes like wet stone and a mouth that barely concealed a grin."
16"The Market didn’t care about truth; it cared about change."
17"A scent rose, at once familiar and alien—a memory of rain on a different street, a memory of a corridor, a memory of a night that never ended."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3542
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount94
adverbRatio0.026538678712591756
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.004517221908526256
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean20.06
std10.9
cv0.543
sampleLengths
016
114
28
319
422
514
615
716
827
92
1015
1117
1221
138
1421
1524
1624
1712
1823
1927
2026
2115
2222
2315
2415
2523
2622
2721
2834
2910
3024
3139
3224
333
3412
3528
3619
3719
389
3923
4020
4134
4224
4310
4434
452
4620
4714
4813
4923
35.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.2182741116751269
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners43
57.14% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences175
matches
0"Then the corner of his"
1"Then Herrera’s pace slowed, and"
2"Then a single, crisp sentence,"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences175
matches
0"He slid against a wall"
1"She noted the glint of"
2"He pressed a hand to"
3"It was a highway for"
4"It was a token you"
5"She stepped closer, one foot"
6"He reached to his forearm,"
7"He shot a glance at"
8"he whispered, almost to himself"
9"She studied Herrera’s body language—the"
10"he said, voice dropping to"
11"Her breath snagged in her"
12"She didn’t need to guess"
13"He drifted closer to a"
14"He reached for the crate,"
15"She stepped into the space"
16"Her voice carried a weight"
17"she said, using the name"
18"He straightened, shoulders stiff, the"
19"He looked at her with"
ratio0.257
14.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount156
totalSentences175
matches
0"The city breathed in gas"
1"A siren curled in the"
2"A camera-glow hung on a"
3"Detective Harlow Quinn kept to"
4"The night arranged itself around"
5"Brown eyes flicked from one"
6"The figure ahead moved with"
7"A Saint Christopher medallion swung"
8"A scar ran along his"
9"Quinn’s breath fogged in her"
10"The chase wasn’t a dance"
11"Tomás turned a corner into"
12"He slid against a wall"
13"The Saint Christopher swung as"
14"Quinn closed the distance, every"
15"The alley spit out a"
16"A single streetlight hummed a"
17"The Raven’s Nest, the sign"
18"The nest thrummed with a"
19"Quinn slid through the door"
ratio0.891
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences175
matches
0"If he spoke, he might"
1"If he ran, he would"
2"If she stayed, if she"
3"If she went back to"
4"If the moon rose, the"
ratio0.029
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences137
technicalSentenceCount38
matches
0"A camera-glow hung on a doorway, catching a silhouette that moved too quickly, too sure of its own steps."
1"The figure ahead moved with the loose-limbed economy of someone who knew the city could be trusted to spit him out at the end of the block."
2"Quinn closed the distance, every footfall measured, the rain soaking through her jacket, soaking through her hair, soaking into the questions she carried."
3"The alley spit out a cat and a stray plastic bag; Herrera moved again, shoulders hunched, a burst of speed that sent him skidding along slick bricks."
4"A single streetlight hummed a tired yellow as Herrera dashed through a doorway that looked more like a page torn from a map than a door."
5"A barback nodded at her in a half-acknowledgment; the bartender gave a quick, practiced glance that didn’t pretend to know her business."
6"Herrera threaded between tables, moving with a practitioner’s ease, as if the room knew his name and forgave him for it."
7"He pressed a hand to the back of a shelf and the bookshelf conceded, letting a gap reveal a narrow passage hidden behind it—something that looked exactly like a…"
8"The passage behind the shelf opened to a stairwell, and the stairwell opened onto a tunnel that smelled of damp stone and something faintly metallic, something …"
9"The stairs opened onto a glass-and-iron platform, a station that hadn’t hummed with life in years but remembered what it used to be."
10"The hum of distant trains was gone, replaced by a muffled, persistent whisper that hinted at secrets better left buried."
11"Herrera pulled free of the dim corridor and pressed through a low arch, which opened into a cavernous underground space."
12"The place beyond the arch—The Veil Market—lay like a secret waiting for someone who believed in it enough to walk through the door."
13"There were things here that breathed in the dark, moved with a confidence that came from being unseen, unaccountable."
14"Quinn eyed the stall fronts, where vendors offered jars with shimmering liquids, small pouches with powders that gleamed like crushed stars, and old-fashioned t…"
15"A stall keeper, hooded and pale, weighed out a handful of something that smelled of rain and rainwater and something else she couldn’t name."
16"She studied Herrera’s body language—the way his weight shifted when he leaned a fraction toward the door, the way his hand trembled at his side, the way the Sai…"
17"The memory pressed at the edges of her vision: a corridor, a flare of light, a sudden pain that wasn’t physical, something like a door slamming shut on a possib…"
18"The stalls became more crowded, or it felt that way due to the way bodies moved with practiced precision, as if they’d done this a thousand times in a thousand …"
19"He drifted closer to a crate stacked with copper canisters that rattled with sound when a ghost-wind passed by."
20"The Market had a second mouth, a hidden entrance tucked away behind a stall of shimmering powders, a path that led deeper into the earth where what you paid for…"
21"She stepped into the space between them, the air colder there, the darkness thicker, almost a protective shroud around him—and yet a trap for anyone who did not…"
22"He straightened, shoulders stiff, the Saint Christopher pendulum of metal resting on his chest as if it had its own life force."
23"He glanced at her, a rough half-smile that told her this wasn’t his first choice."
24"Quinn scanned the market again, counted the subtle signs of entry: a vendor who cataloged stories instead of goods, a child who watched the adults with eyes too…"
25"Then the corner of his mouth quirked, a glimpse of relief that looked like fear wearing a mask."
26"The pad of Herrera’s fingers brushed the Saint Christopher and settled there as if he’d found a place to anchor himself."
27"He looked away from her, toward the passage that waited, whispering an invitation to step inside and never return."
28"Quinn followed, the Hollow Market’s memories brushing against her skin as if she’d already trespassed long ago and forgotten the pain of it."
29"The tunnel’s air grew colder still, and the distant murmur of the Market thickened into a near-chant, as if all the voices of its corners had rehearsed their ta…"
30"The bone token’s absence gnawed at Quinn’s mind—the missing key that could shift the balance of power here, turn a careful pursuit into something elemental and …"
31"She caught Herrera’s eye, saw the tremor there, the stubborn, brave thing that kept him upright even as the ground drifted beneath him."
32"The Market’s center came into view: stalls that breathed with a life all their own, vendors who spoke in whispers and traded in favors, items that shimmered wit…"
33"A merchant’s stall offered a vial of liquid star, a powder that sang when moved, a glass bead that carried some memory from someone else’s life."
34"Another offered a map, not drawn on parchment but etched into water, which shifted and re-formed as you watched, revealing routes you could neither navigate nor…"
35"He stopped a pace from Herrera, looked him up and down as if cataloging him the way a collector catalogues a rare coin."
36"He reached for a small box beside him, not opening it, not lifting it, merely letting it rest between his palms as if weighing a decision that would alter not j…"
37"Then a single, crisp sentence, spoken with the same calm resolve that had carried her through three dozen dangerous nights:"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he whispered, almost to himself"
1"Quinn asked, her voice echoing faintly against the damp stone"
2"he said, voice dropping to a rough whisper"
3"The word came out, a line drawn in rainwater and stone"
4"she said, voice controlled, eyes unblinking"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn snapped back (snap)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"she pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.167
73.6930%