| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.204 | | leniency | 0.408 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1519 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1519 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "firmly" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "ensure" | | 3 | "predator" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "ensuring" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "thundered" | | 13 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.04% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1506 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 947 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.74 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Benson | 1 | | Hedges | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | East | 1 | | End | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | London | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Lucien | 7 | | France | 1 | | Sumerian | 1 | | Audi | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Highland | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Laila" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "East" | | 3 | "End" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "France" | | 6 | "Highland" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like a coming storm" | | 1 | "smelled like a memory I had tried to drown" | | 2 | "felt like a surrender" | | 3 | "ck, the oxygen seemingly sucked out by the s" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1506 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 24.69 | | std | 19.43 | | cv | 0.787 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 70 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 63 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 36 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 49 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one honey-bright amber, the other a void of pure black—tracked the movement of my hand as I instinctively clutched the doorframe." | | 1 | "He smelled like a memory I had tried to drown in cheap gin—of a balcony in France and a kiss that had felt like a surrender." | | 2 | "My ex didn't just have a temper; he had connections to things that didn't stay dead." | | 3 | "The black eye—the demon side—seemed to swallow the light of the room." | | 4 | "The Audi, the hunters, the shadow of Evan—it all faded into the heat of Lucien’s breath on my lips." | | 5 | "It wasn't a reunion; it was a collision." | | 6 | "He didn't look startled; he looked ready." |
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| 99.57% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 741 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.04048582995951417 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014844804318488529 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 13.82 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.539 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 38.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.28440366972477066 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 49.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, I leaned into the" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "My shoulder was already braced" | | 1 | "It smelled of expensive sandalwood," | | 2 | "He looked entirely too polished" | | 3 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one honey-bright amber," | | 4 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 5 | "He stepped forward, the silver" | | 6 | "I had to choose between" | | 7 | "We’d lived here for six" | | 8 | "he remarked, his gaze sweeping" | | 9 | "He turned back to the" | | 10 | "I felt the crescent-shaped scar" | | 11 | "I walked to the window," | | 12 | "My stomach dropped." | | 13 | "I’d been careful." | | 14 | "I’d used the name Laila." | | 15 | "I’d stayed off the ley" | | 16 | "I whispered, my back to" | | 17 | "He smelled like a memory" | | 18 | "He reached out, his gloved" | | 19 | "He leaned in, the amber" |
| | ratio | 0.612 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt groaned as" | | 1 | "My shoulder was already braced" | | 2 | "It smelled of expensive sandalwood," | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 4 | "He looked entirely too polished" | | 5 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one honey-bright amber," | | 6 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 7 | "He stepped forward, the silver" | | 8 | "I had to choose between" | | 9 | "Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, hissed" | | 10 | "The flat was a labyrinth" | | 11 | "We’d lived here for six" | | 12 | "Lucien’s presence made the ceiling" | | 13 | "he remarked, his gaze sweeping" | | 14 | "He turned back to the" | | 15 | "The finality of the sound" | | 16 | "I felt the crescent-shaped scar" | | 17 | "I walked to the window," | | 18 | "A sleek car sat idling" | | 19 | "My stomach dropped." |
| | ratio | 0.955 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He bridged the gap, his mouth crashing against mine with a desperation that bypassed any pretense of elegance." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I asked, my voice cracking" |
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| 88.78% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "I snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.102 | | leniency | 0.204 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.122 | |