Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5NCPA810J3ZHV5G1Y88K

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7.4s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked, and the door swung open. Aurora’s hand froze on the latch, the faint scent of sandalwood drifting from the hallway. She turned, eyes narrowing as a silhouette stepped into the cramped room. “Lucien,” she said, voice low, “you’re late.” The half‑demon smirked, his ivory‑handled cane tapping against the floorboards. “Fashionably late, my dear Rory. I heard you were staying at Eva’s flat.” She pressed a palm against the scar on her left wrist, the crescent‑shaped mark catching the dim light. “I could ask the same. What brings a man in charcoal suits to a cluttered bedroom on Brick Lane?” “Business,” he replied, slipping his cane aside to reveal the hidden blade, its edge glinting like a promise. “And a reminder that some debts do not dissolve with distance.” The cat Ptolemy flicked his tail, eyes glinting as he perched on a stack of old law books. “Debt?” Aurora echoed, stepping back toward the narrow window that overlooked the street below. “You left me with a broken heart and a broken case. I thought that was the end.” Lucien’s gaze drifted to the scar, then to the shadows where the city’s sirens whispered. “Heart? I never promised a heart. I offered a bargain.” “Bargains with demons rarely end well.” She crossed her arms, the scar’s skin tightening. “You know why I’m angry.” He chuckled, a low sound that reverberated against the plaster. “Because you never understood the terms. You thought I was a monster, not a man with a purpose.” Aurora took a breath, the air tasting of tea and incense from the neighbour’s shop. “Your purpose is to profit from chaos. My purpose is to survive.” “Survive,” Lucien repeated, his amber eye flashing. “And what of love? You taught me that it exists for mortals.” She stared at the floorboards, the wooden planks creaking under his weight. “Love is a weapon you wielded without consent.” “Consent?” He tilted his head, the black eye catching the light. “We both signed the contract—spoken, unspoken, blood‑stained.” A sudden knock echoed from the hallway, muffled by the thick door. The cat hissed, ears flattening. “Eva?” Aurora whispered, her mind racing. “She’m not supposed to be here tonight.” Lucien moved forward, his coat swishing, the faint scent of his cologne mingling with the incense. “I came for the ledger. The one you stole from Silas’ bar last week.” Aurora’s eyes widened, the scar throbbing as if reminded of old pain. “You think I’d keep something that could ruin us both?” He placed a gloved hand on the table, the polished wood reflecting his silhouette. “You think I’d trust a human to hide a demon’s secret?” “Neither of us is human now,” she muttered, her voice barely above a whisper. “We’re both... something else.” “Exactly,” he said, leaning in, his breath warm against her cheek. “That’s why I’m here.” The door behind them creaked open again, revealing Eva, her dark hair a halo of curls, a tray of steaming dim sum balanced on a tray. “Evening, boys,” she said, voice bright, “I thought I’d bring a snack. Lucien, you’re early.” Lucien straightened, the cane now resting against his leg. “Eva, my dear, you always bring the right food for the right occasion.” Aurora stared at the tray, the steam curling like ghosts. “You always manage to turn a simple dinner into a battlefield.” Eva set the tray down, the clink of porcelain echoing. “You two seem to have a lot to discuss. I’ll leave you to it.” She turned, but her shadow lingered on the wall, a silent witness. Lucien’s hand found the edge of the table, his fingers brushing the scar’s bandage. “You still carry that mark, Rory. It’s a reminder of the night you fell.” She flinched, the memory surfacing like a tide. “I fell because I trusted you.” “Trust is a double‑edged sword,” he replied, his voice softening. “I never meant to break you.” The cat leapt onto the windowsill, its paws silent on the glass. “You think I’m the only one who can hurt you?” Aurora’s breath hitched, the scar’s pain pulsing. “You think I can forgive you?” He shrugged, the cane’s blade catching a sliver of light. “Forgiveness is a luxury we can’t afford.” “Then what do we have?” she asked, the question hanging like a blade over a throat. “The night is still young,” Lucien said, his tone playful yet edged. “Shall we see where it leads?” She hesitated, the scar’s pressure mirroring the weight of his words. “You always loved the night.” “Only when it hides us.” He stepped closer, the distance between them shrinking to a breath. “Ever the romantic,” Aurora muttered, a wry smile tugging at her lips. “Romance is a battlefield,” he answered, his hand hovering over the scar, fingertips tingling. The cat’s tail twitched, a silent alarm. “Ptolemy,” Aurora whispered, “keep an eye on him.” The half‑demon chuckled, a sound that seemed to echo from a distant cathedral. “I’m not afraid of a cat.” She felt a sudden rush of adrenaline, the scar’s sting turning into a pulse of fire. “You should be.” He lifted his cane, the hidden blade glinting. “Then let’s cut through the lies.” A sudden crash sounded from the hallway, a vase shattering against the wall. “Someone’s here,” Lucien warned, his eyes flashing amber. Aurora spun, heart hammering, the scar throbbing like a drum. “What do you want?” He lowered his cane, the blade retracting with a soft click. “I want you to survive this.” She stared at him, the tension between them crackling like static. “Then prove it.” He extended a hand, the ivory grip warm despite the chill in the air. Aurora hesitated, the scar’s memory flashing—blood, fire, a child’s scream. The cat hissed again, ears pinned back, eyes darting toward the hallway. “Lucien,” she whispered, “you still have a choice.” He nodded, the amber eye softening. “And you still have a chance.” The door behind them burst open, a figure cloaked in black slamming into the room, a dagger glinting in the dim light. “Stay back,” Lucien growled, his cane flashing as he stepped forward, the blade humming. Aurora’s breath caught, the scar’s pain now a scream. The intruder lunged, the dagger aimed at Lucien’s throat. “Not today,” Lucien snarled, his half‑demon strength rippling under his tailored suit. The cat leapt onto the intruder’s shoulder, claws unsheathing, a fierce growl rising. Aurora seized the moment, grabbing the tray of dim sum, hurling it toward the attacker. The heat of the soup splashed, searing the intruder’s skin, his grip faltering. Lucien seized the blade, thrusting it into the attacker’s chest, the hidden knife singing as it pierced. A gasp escaped Aurora’s lips, the scar’s pain exploding into a flash of light. The intruder collapsed, the dagger clattering onto the floor. Silence fell, broken only by the cat’s purr and the distant hum of the city. Lucien stood over the fallen figure, his coat darkened by blood, his eyes still amber. “Looks like we’re still alive,” he said, wiping the blade with a swift motion. Aurora stared at the scene, her heart pounding, the scar throbbing like a drumbeat. “What now?” she asked, voice trembling. He brushed a strand of hair from her face, his touch electric. “Now,” he whispered, “we finish what we started.” A sudden siren wailed in the distance, a reminder that the night was far from over. The cat darted away, disappearing into the shadows. Aurora’s breath came in short gasps, the scar’s sting turning into a fierce fire. Lucien’s hand rested on her wrist, the blade’s tip hovering just above the scar. “Trust me,” he said, his voice a low promise. She stared at the hidden blade, the scar’s memory a wild storm. “Do you think we can survive this?” she asked, the question hanging heavy. He smiled, a flash of teeth in the low light. “Together,” he replied, “we’ll make the night ours.” The door behind them creaked again, a figure silhouetted, the night’s darkness swallowing them whole. Aurora’s eyes widened, the scar’s pain pulsing like a heartbeat. “Who’s there?” she whispered, the words barely audible. Lucien’s hand tightened around the cane, the blade ready. “The night has a way of delivering guests,” he murmured, his voice a warning. A cold wind slipped through the cracked door, carrying a scent of iron and rain. The figure stepped forward, a glint of steel in their hand. “Ready?” Aurora shouted, the scar’s sting now a roar. Lucien’s amber eye met hers, a spark of something fierce and tender. “Always,” he answered, as the night erupted into chaos.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.485
leniency0.97
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"glinting"
count4
1
word"reminder"
count3
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"reverberated"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"porcelain"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"searing"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
19
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"reminder"
2"flicked"
3"echoed"
4"reverberated"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"racing"
8"whisper"
9"porcelain"
10"echoing"
11"echo"
12"pulse"
13"tension"
14"chill"
15"searing"
16"silence"
17"pounding"
18"electric"
19"glint"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1434
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1003
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy1
Lucien15
Eva2
Aurora18
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.603
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sound that seemed to echo from a distant cathedral"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1434
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
77.09% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean15.76
std6.62
cv0.42
sampleLengths
08
127
27
323
437
529
618
731
825
919
1028
1127
1219
1320
1418
1517
1613
1730
1822
1925
2018
2115
2226
2315
2422
2521
2636
2728
2814
2916
3022
3113
3217
3316
3418
3516
3616
3712
3814
397
408
4119
4219
4314
4413
458
4614
4717
4814
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences128
ratio0.008
matches
0"Aurora hesitated, the scar’s memory flashing—blood, fire, a child’s scream."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1004
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02091633466135458
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00298804780876494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
90.25% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean11.2
std4.21
cv0.376
sampleLengths
08
115
212
37
410
513
618
719
818
911
1018
1114
1217
1315
1410
1514
165
1710
1818
1915
2012
217
2212
2312
248
2511
267
2712
285
296
307
3116
3214
3312
3410
3514
3611
3714
384
3911
404
4126
4215
439
4413
4510
4611
4710
4826
4914
58.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.3515625
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences90
matches
0"She turned, eyes narrowing as"
1"she said, voice low"
2"She pressed a palm against"
3"he replied, slipping his cane"
4"She crossed her arms, the"
5"He chuckled, a low sound"
6"She stared at the floorboards,"
7"He tilted his head, the"
8"He placed a gloved hand"
9"she muttered, her voice barely"
10"he said, leaning in, his"
11"she said, voice bright"
12"She turned, but her shadow"
13"She flinched, the memory surfacing"
14"he replied, his voice softening"
15"He shrugged, the cane’s blade"
16"she asked, the question hanging"
17"She hesitated, the scar’s pressure"
18"He stepped closer, the distance"
19"he answered, his hand hovering"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences90
matches
0"The lock clicked, and the"
1"Aurora’s hand froze on the"
2"She turned, eyes narrowing as"
3"she said, voice low"
4"The half‑demon smirked, his ivory‑handled"
5"She pressed a palm against"
6"he replied, slipping his cane"
7"The cat Ptolemy flicked his"
8"Aurora echoed, stepping back toward"
9"Lucien’s gaze drifted to the"
10"She crossed her arms, the"
11"He chuckled, a low sound"
12"Aurora took a breath, the"
13"Lucien repeated, his amber eye"
14"She stared at the floorboards,"
15"He tilted his head, the"
16"A sudden knock echoed from"
17"The cat hissed, ears flattening."
18"Aurora whispered, her mind racing"
19"Lucien moved forward, his coat"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien moved forward, his coat swishing, the faint scent of his cologne mingling with the incense."
1"The heat of the soup splashed, searing the intruder’s skin, his grip faltering."
2"Aurora stared at the scene, her heart pounding, the scar throbbing like a drumbeat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount21
matches
0"she said, voice low,"
1"She crossed, the scar’s skin tightening"
2"Lucien repeated, his amber eye flashing"
3"He tilted, the black eye catching the light"
4"Aurora whispered, her mind racing"
5"she muttered, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"she said, voice bright,"
7"She turned, but her shadow lingered on the wall, a silent witness"
8"he replied, his voice softening"
9"she asked, the question hanging like a blade over a throat"
10"Lucien said, his tone playful yet edged"
11"Aurora muttered, a wry smile tugging at her lips"
12"he answered, his hand hovering over the scar, fingertips tingling"
13"Lucien warned, his eyes flashing amber"
14"Lucien growled, his cane flashing as he stepped forward, the blade humming"
15"Lucien snarled, his half‑demon strength rippling under his tailored suit"
16"she asked, voice trembling"
17"he said, his voice a low promise"
18"she asked, the question hanging heavy"
19"she whispered, the words barely audible"
20"he murmured, his voice a warning"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags27
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Lucien repeated (repeat)"
1"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
4"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
5"Lucien warned (warn)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"Lucien growled (growl)"
8"Lucien snarled (snarl)"
9"he whispered (whisper)"
10"she whispered (whisper)"
11"he murmured (murmur)"
12"Aurora shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.481
effectiveRatio0.394
73.8167%