Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5NHFHDEA1PSWMH8TFG46

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.003964
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the neon into blurred swords. The city smelled of damp wool and iron, and the wind pressed hard against the suspect’s coat as he cut across the cobbles, boots sluicing through every puddle. Harlow Quinn followed in a spray of spray, the rain snapping back against her shoulders like a hand tugging at a coat sleeve. The streetlights smeared into halos, and the distant rumble of traffic sounded hollow, rehearsed, like a chorus of unseen witnesses. A shadow slipped beneath a shopfront canopied in black plastic. He paused, head low, hands tucked into the pockets of his coat, as if the rain could swallow him whole if he pretended it wasn’t there. Quinn slowed, counted to three, let the rhythm of her breath settle. The street smelled of wet tar and coffee steam from a late-night vendor, the sort of place that kept a low lamp lit for lost hours and careless truths. “You’re far from the river, detective,” his voice came, just loud enough to ride the rain. It carried an edge of amusement, like someone who knew the city’s good angles better than the city did. “Not far enough,” she said, moving with that measured pace that never looked rushed. Her left wrist wore a worn leather watch, the kind that understood weather better than most people did. She studied the narrow alley he slipped into, a crease of steam weaving up from a grate. The Nest’s sign—a distinctive green neon—blinked somewhere down the street, a warning light for those who knew where to look. “Nice shoes,” he called out, a note of scorn in his voice. The words drew a corner of his mouth into a smirk that wasn’t quite a smile. He stepped into a doorway that reeked of oil and old beer, the kind of doorway you only found after midnight in a city that forgot to sleep. Quinn paused at the threshold, listening. The rain shifted, poured heavier, as if the sky itself leaned closer to hear what happened next. The doorway opened onto a narrow stairwell that disappeared into darkness, a ladder into another world. The air up ahead smelled faintly of citrus and something metallic—danger, maybe, or a memory that wouldn’t stay buried. “Don’t you want to keep your seat warm, Quinn?” the suspect called, stepping back into the rain for a breath of air before he vanished into the stair. “Turn around,” she ordered the night, stepping after him, boot heels sinking into the water with every measured stride. Her body moved with a quiet certainty: every footfall precise, every breath a calculated instrument. They traded a long, lean block of city before the chase tilted into the city’s heart. The stairwell exhaled damp air and a metallic tang, the kind that clung to your tongue and pressed at the back of your teeth. He moved with a kind of practiced fear, weaving through the stair’s switchback like someone who’d memorized every step during a quiet life of evasions. She kept a half-step behind, letting the city’s echo compress the distance. A door at the bottom opened into a room that didn’t belong to any building permit, a place where the city’s shadows traded hands. The walls were rough with damp, and the floor bore the imprint of countless feet whose stories never saw a courtroom. The lanterns along the low ceiling cast a greenish glow, the color of old pennies left too long in a jar. The quiet in this room pressed on Quinn’s ears as if the rain had followed them down and stayed to listen. The suspect stopped, pressed a palm against the wall, and listened to the city in the walls—pipes singing, a distant train’s sigh, the quick breathing of someone who knew there was no way out but forward. He turned to face her, coat flaring with a sudden, almost theatrical movement, eyes bright with a dangerous light. “Missed your chance to quit while you could,” he said, voice low, almost friendly. “This isn’t a chase anymore. It’s a tour.” “A tour?” Quinn replied, stepping closer. The echo of her boot on the stone sounded deliberate, a drumbeat matching the pace she allowed herself. The police training in her bones told her to push, to press, to press again. “What are you after?” she asked, keeping her tone even, letting the question hang like a blade’s edge. “Information,” he said, and then, with a tilt of his head toward a corner where the wall had a seam, “and something someone is very tired of losing. You know what I mean.” The room was a hinge, turning them toward an aperture in the wall that looked like a shelf. The shelf wasn’t a shelf at all but a disguised passage—a bookshelf that slid on concealed rollers, a secret door that opened into a corridor beyond. The detective’s jaw tightened. The Veil Market wasn’t just a rumor in the tabloids; it wasn’t a gutter tale told to frighten children into bed. It existed, and it moved, and it traded in things you could not touch without consequences. “Not tonight,” she said, though the words sounded clipped, as if she were cutting through the rain in midair. The suspect’s eyes flicked toward the hidden door, a flicker of calculation passing over his features. “You’ll lose more than a partner if you stay out here,” he taunted, and the line carried a weight that wasn’t bravado. He stepped through the door into the hidden passage, and the bookshelf slid back into place with a slow, stubborn sigh of gears. Quinn paused only a heartbeat, listening to the bookshelf whisper close behind her as if clapping shut a secret away again. The air grew cooler and heavier, and the corridor beneath the building carried a damp hush that pressed against her eardrums. She moved after him, not hurrying, not following too slowly, letting the city’s storm do the heavy lifting. The passage opened onto a stone tunnel—low, narrow, and slick with damp. There was a tunnel smell here, something old and earthy, like a cave that had stored rain for centuries. The beam of her flashlight cut a swath through the darkness, catching flecks of dust that rose like pale snow in the lamp’s glare. Far away, a muffled sound—voices, a low murmur, a lull of footsteps—suggested the place was alive with someone else’s purpose. The suspect pressed on, the sound of his footsteps faint but stubborn. Quinn kept him in her light, the beam mapping the uneven stones and the rusted pipes that stitched the tunnel to the city’s underbelly. The Veil Market lived down here in the rumor between the city’s bones, wedged under Camden, under the Tube, under every ordinary thing London called respectable. They moved past a vent that breathed a cold wind, then a grate that trembled with a current of air like a startled animal. The corridor opened into a cavern of sounds, the market’s murmur rising like surf over stone. The scent of copper and ozone filled the space, mixed with something organic—something that reminded her of rain on rust and the sting of a distant garden during a flood. “Thought you could outrun a memory,” a voice hissed from the crowd, and Quinn’s eyes narrowed. A figure, half-hidden behind a vendor’s stall, watched with unsettling calm. The suspect flashed a quick look, as if to decide whether this new presence was a help or a hindrance. “Move,” Quinn said, her voice low and exact. It cut across the market’s noises, a blade being drawn. She stepped through a ribbon of bodies, their cloaks and coats and scarves wrapping around her like a living wall. The market’s stalls offered a panoply of illegalities—enchanted charms tucked into cracked ceramic bowls, banned alchemical substances cinched in palm-sized packages, whispers of information traded like currency. The suspect threaded through the stalls and into a corridor that opened into something larger—a cavern of rusted railings and stairwells that spiraled downward in a rough, unpolished chorus. The crowd swelled on either side, a living backdrop in which the chase could become anything. A vendor shouted a price for something Quinn couldn’t name, and a gloved hand surfaced from the crowd, dropping a knife into a bucket with a dull clunk. Quinn skimmed the crowd with her flashlight, her breath steady as a metronome. In the distance, a figure broke away from the mass and headed toward a far door marked by a patient, unnatural light. A woman’s voice lifted above the others, soft, almost musical. “Careful where you tread,” she sang, and a man answered with a bitter laugh, the sound scraping along the market’s rough walls. The suspect moved with a practiced ease that suggested years of dodging law, years of moving through places where sleep never reached. He turned a corner and disappeared behind a lattice of draped fabrics, the kind that turned every light moment into a silhouette. Quinn pressed forward, catching a glimpse of a Saint Christopher medallion catching a glint of something metallic in the glow. The sight paused her for a fractional moment—enough to remind her of a life she hadn’t wanted and the code she refused to abandon. She pressed her lips together and went after him, ignoring the ache in her right knee from an old injury, the memory of a partner torn away three years ago by something impossible to name. The market’s crowd shifted, giving the detective a narrow lane toward a smaller, more intimate section of stalls. It looked less like a marketplace and more like a lair: a curio corner where the supernatural met the practical, where people bought and sold what had no name. Lanterns swung gently from hooks, casting green halos on leather and bone and glass. The air hummed with a soft, constant buzz, as if the room itself was listening to every breath and awaiting a moment to intervene. A tall figure stepped from behind a stall, blocking the way with the casual confidence of someone who belonged here. The figure wore dark clothes that absorbed light, with a scarf wrapped around the lower half of their face. Quinn recognized the silhouette instantly. Tomás Herrera. The former paramedic’s eyes gleamed warm brown in the market’s dim glow. A Saint Christopher medallion hung from a chain around his neck, glinting faintly as he tilted his head toward the suspect, then back to Quinn. “Quinn,” Tomás said, a note of caution threading through his voice, careful not to sound like an accusation. “You’re not here for a social call.” “Move,” Quinn replied, the order clipped, the word a command she didn’t ask for permission to utter twice. The suspect, sensing new attention, pressed against the crowd’s flow and slipped into a side corridor that looked as if it had no end. Tomás’s gaze flicked to the back room behind the stall, where a pale face peered out, measuring risk like a trader at a high-stakes exchange. The face vanished as quickly as it appeared. Tomás’s expression didn’t change; it remained smooth, easy, as if he had learned to fold into shadows the way other people folded into jackets. “The market moves every full moon,” Tomás said softly, as if to remind the night itself of its own rules. “Bone tokens are required for entry at most doors. You remember that, right?” Quinn didn’t answer. She studied the crowd, the way the market’s life law leaned on fear and curiosity in equal measure. The suspect had vanished again, swallowed by the market’s labyrinth, his trail turning from concrete to rumor to a whisper that could vanish if you looked away. “Why here?” she asked, glancing at Tomás without turning her head. The question wasn’t just about the present chase; it asked about a future she didn’t want to imagine. The clique’s shadow stretched across every room she walked into, every bar she visited, every stairway she climbed into the underground. The memory of DS Morris surfaced, brief and bright, a flare in a pit of darkness. She snapped it back down with a breath she refused to release, refusing to let the past become the present’s leverage. Tomás shrugged, as if the truth needed no explanation, only patience. “The clique uses you all the time,” he said, his voice lowered, almost affectionate, as if offering a cigarette to a cigarette partner. “They’re not here for you or me. They’re here for what you don’t want them to have.” A vendor hissed from a stall, a string of tiny bells chiming whenever someone brushed past. The bells sounded like a warning clanging in Quinn’s head. The suspect’s taunt echoed through the market’s cavernous interior, a taunt wrapped in rain and neon. “Where is he?” she demanded, stepping through a narrow archway that led deeper into the market. The path opened into a subterranean gallery lined with shelves that bore trinkets and charms, the sort of items that gave people courage and took their sense of reality to the edge. The crowd’s murmur swelled and then pooled, a living tide that could wash a person away. Tomás drifted closer, careful not to crowd her. “If you want him, you’ll have to go deeper. He’s not the sort who hides in plain sight for long. He wants something there’s none of us allowed to name aloud.” He spoke as if giving directions to a difficult patient, not to a fellow pursuer. The detective’s jaw tightened. The market’s pathways twisted, a maze built to keep the curious from returning. The suspect’s footprints—half erased by the crowd’s swishing robes and the market’s own refuse—took a turn that led toward a stairwell rumored to descend into a sub-market’s heart. The Veil Market’s heartbeat. The place where a bone token could pass you through a door like another breath. A boy with a chipped tooth and eyes too old for his face peddled small glass vials filled with strange shadows. A woman with a copper-colored scarf whispered to a man in a cloak, her lips pursed in glare as if weighing a debt she might never repay. The market’s life pressed in from all sides, and the ceiling’s lanterns trembled with the weight of it all. Quinn’s mind ran through checklists—flashlight, cuff key, memory of the partner she’d lost, the city’s suspicions about the clique, the hollow ache behind her ribs that refused to be silenced. The suspect turned into a corridor that dipped downward, a stairwell that disappeared into the earth like a truth someone had buried too late. The stair smelled of rain and old metal, and the air grew cooler, more compact, as if the market’s volume could be turned down if you walked far enough away from the main room. The distant murmur grew fainter, until all that remained was the soft clack of boots on stone and the rain’s remnant echo in the market’s far corners. Quinn paused, listening to the crowd’s breath. She could feel the city’s press on her skin, a pressure that grew with every step she took. If she descended, she would be stepping into something she hadn’t prepared for, into a space where the rules wouldn’t always apply and where the unknown could bite. Yet the thought of losing him here, among the market’s secrets, stretched out before her like a cold horizon she could not circle. “The choice isn’t just about a chase,” she finally told herself, though the sentence hovered in the air without air quotes, a private reckoning kept to the edge of the alley’s rain. The choice rested on a single breath of resolve. If she didn’t go down, the suspect would vanish into a myth, and with him would vanish the chance to pierce the market’s deeper current—the current that ran beneath the city’s lawful surface. Tomás watched her with a calm that could have been mistaken for indifference. “If you go down, you’ll see what the city hides in its teeth,” he said softly, as if warning a child who might bite the bait too eagerly. His eyes held no fear, only a measured clarity that made her own certainty feel brittle in comparison. “Tell me what you know,” she said, the words a blunt instrument aimed at a possible weakness in the market’s armor. The suspect’s figure flickered in the distance, a shadow slipping between stalls, then vanishing again into the market’s throat. Quinn’s breath coiled in her chest, a visible reminder that any choice carried heat. “He’s not alone,” Tomás said, stepping closer, the Saint Christopher medallion catching the lantern light again and again, a small, patient signal of protection or promise or both. “There are people who help him down here. People who know what’s traded in this place and why.” Quinn surveyed the cavern’s edges, where shadows pooled and moved like living ink. She could hear the market’s breath, a wheeze of sort, the way an old engine would sigh when starting on a cold morning. The weight of the decision settled on her shoulders—the decision to descend into the unknown, to chase truth to a place where the city’s rules didn’t apply the same way, where the line between law and corruption blurred into a single gray seam. She spoke without looking away from the suspect’s last known course. “If he’s there, I’ll know what’s driving him. If not, I’ll still know what this market wants and what it costs to take a breath inside it.” Tomás nodded, almost as if he could hear the unspoken conditions she placed upon herself. The market hummed louder, the crowd’s murmur rising in a chorus of hidden futures. A door at the corridor’s end opened onto the stair’s first step, a weathered rung slick with years and rain. Quinn checked the gun at her hip, checked the flashlight, checked her own nerve and found it still steady. The question wasn’t whether she could handle what lay below; it was whether she could bear the memory of what it would cost to illuminate the market’s deepest secret if it proved too heavy to carry. “Down,” she said, not to the crowd but to the decision she had made in that moment. The suspect’s outline flickered, then vanished into the stairwell’s mouth, swallowed by the downward pull of the unknown. Quinn took a breath, felt the rain inside her lungs as a cold, ghostly companion, and stepped forward. The stair’s first rung met her boot with a dull, clean sound, an exhale of air from the earth itself. The market’s lower chambers opened like a throat. Water dripped from the stone ceiling, lying in thin threads that met the steps with a soft hiss. The passage wound downward, each turn revealing a new hint of what the underground hid: a cavernous space where the air tasted coppery and old, where echoes carried the weight of countless stories and the city’s sins. The Raven’s Nest’s upstairs world had given her a map—maps of rain-soaked streets, tunnels, back rooms, the woven histories of a city that never stopped playing with fire. Tonight, that map twisted into something else: a route into a market that moved with the moon, a hallway that refused to pretend it wasn’t a doorway to consequence. She kept the flashlight angled low, the beam catching glints of metal and bone worn smooth by hands that treated them as talismans rather than trash. The footsteps behind her belonged to the suspect, though she slowed not a step, letting him think the chase remained a straight line when in truth it curved, dipped, and sank into the earth. A figure stepped from the shadows to her left—the silhouette of a person who knew more than the surface would ever tell. It wasn’t Tomás this time. The figure wore a cloak, its hood drawn tight, eyes catching the flashlight’s glow and turning it into a question mark on a wall. The voice that came next belonged to someone else, a voice that wasn’t afraid of the shadows it walked through. “You’re following a thread that isn’t yours to pull,” the voice warned, the tone calm, almost courteous. The market’s underbelly recognized no allies beyond its own logic. Quinn’s lips pressed into a line, and she answered with a brisk, practiced calm. “I’m not looking for a friend. I’m looking for a truth you don’t want to see. Step aside or I’ll step through you.” Her words evoked a sense of inevitability, an order of consequences that would follow if anyone tried to stop her. The cloaked figure moved closer, and Quinn could see the faint line of a scar along a forearm—the same scar she’d noticed before, a knife’s wound from a life spent in hospitals and alleys, a life that wouldn’t stay quiet. Tomás’s medallion flashed again, something almost ceremonial in a market where life’s currency ran hot and quick. The suspect’s voice rose from somewhere down the hall, a thread of sound that pulled taut between the tunnel’s walls. It sounded almost like a whisper to the floor, a promise to anyone listening that this chase would not end in a simple interrogation. “Quinn, you don’t want to be here,” a voice said from behind her, not loud but clear, a soft warning or perhaps a confession. It was the sound of a choice she had already made pressing against the possibility of retreat. Her reply came in a quiet, deliberate breath. “I want answers more than safety,” she said, and the sentence carried weight, a pledge she accepted without flinching. The market’s heart beat louder as she pressed on, the stairs thinning into a tunnel that widened into a chamber lined with iron rails and crates. The observer’s eyes watched from the shadows, the crowd’s murmur swelling into a language only the underground understood. The air tasted of rain and old money, a blend that never dried, always keeping something alive in the corners of the room. The chase found its next hinge, a doorway whose arch bore the marks of repeated use and a hint of something ancient in its stonework. The suspect paused just beyond it, listening to the market’s hum, a sound Quinn could identify as the market’s own set of nerves, its own way of counting on the night to tell its lies and truths apart. “We’re almost at the edge,” the suspect whispered, not to Quinn but to the market itself, as if the space could understand a confession. Quinn stepped closer, felt the world tilt slightly as the stair’s downward pull increased. Her mind skated along a line of reasoning, a route of investigation that had grown heavy with implication. The market required a token of passage, a bone token, to be exact, a gatekeeper of sorts in a place where gates could open to either danger or revelation. “Show me the gate,” she said, half to the suspect and half to the city that had sent her here with its rain and its secrets and its dangers. The crowd’s murmur rose again, a chorus that urged her onward, that whispered the price of stepping deeper into a world where law lost its daylight. Behind the suspect, a doorway, near to where Tomás had last stood in the market’s bones and breath, presented a stair that curled down and down, revealing a corridor that smelled of damp stone and something sweet and wrong, the kind of scent that curls around a memory and refuses to let go. The scent tugged at Quinn’s resolve, tugged at the clear line she liked to keep between right and wrong, between fear and duty. “Here,” Tomás’s voice drifted in from somewhere, as if he knew the exact moment when a decision would tilt. The Saint Christopher medallion flashed in the lantern’s green, a small beacon of stubborn faith in a place that preferred ambiguity to clarity. The detective’s eyes found the suspect again, a glint of something dangerous and necessary in the man’s gaze. The chase’s rhythm rose, a drumbeat in a cave, a pulse that didn’t require air to keep time. Quinn stepped forward, every move a vote in favor of descending, of entering a world where the line between order and disorder blurred to a single point. If she could learn the market’s true purpose for this chase, she could decide what came after—whether to pull the chain that would ring down a door or to let the door remain shut and take the long way back to the surface, where she could re-enter the rain-washed streets with a different kind of knowledge. The suspect moved again, a blur of movement that vanished into the market’s deeper corridors. Quinn pressed after him, her breath steady, her mind a list of potential revelations. The cavern opened into a wider hall, and the hall opened into a room where the market’s most dangerous bargains gathered, where the past’s ghosts traded futures with living debt. She didn’t look back to see if Tomás followed or stayed behind. The decision wasn’t about loyalty or betrayal; it was about whether she could bear the truth the market would offer if she followed the suspect down into its depths. The question wasn’t whether the night could swallow her whole. It was whether she would let the city swallow another truth to spare herself from its consequences. The stair’s descent quickened, and Quinn’s boots found a rhythm with the market’s own pulse. She read the air the way she read a crime scene’s chalk lines: the patterns, the stains, the faint odors that didn’t belong, all telling a story of what had happened here and what would happen if she kept going. The rain’s memory, the partner’s memory, the city’s memory—all pressed in on her from every side, demanding an answer, not a refusal. And with that demand resting on her shoulders, she stepped into the deeper dark, drew a full breath, and moved after the suspect into the Veil Market’s heart, where the bones of the city lay bare and truth waited with a patient, unblinking gaze. The underground claimed its names, and she claimed hers in return. The market’s whisper slid along the stone like a living thing, and she walked toward it, into it, letting the damp air cool the heat of the decision she’d just made. The staircase closed behind her, not with finality but with a deliberate certainty. Somewhere above, rain continued to fall, but here, it was a different rain—the rain of secrets and choices and the price of following a trail into a place the city kept secret for a reason. And Quinn stepped forward, guiding her fate with the steady, unyielding pace that had kept her alive all these years.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"his voice came just [just]"
1"Tomás said softly [softly]"
2"she finally told herself [finally]"
3"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.846
leniency1
rawRatio0.121
effectiveRatio0.121
91.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4496
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"eagerly"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
3"quickly"
4"softly"
5"eagerly"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4496
totalAiIsms47
found
0
word"measured"
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1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"echo"
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4
word"flicked"
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5
word"flicker"
count1
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word"weight"
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word"whisper"
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word"footsteps"
count3
9
word"trembled"
count2
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word"practiced ease"
count1
11
word"glint"
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word"glinting"
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word"echoed"
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word"sense of"
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15
word"could feel"
count1
16
word"resolve"
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word"flickered"
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18
word"reminder"
count1
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word"unspoken"
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20
word"echoes"
count1
21
word"carried the weight"
count1
22
word"implication"
count1
23
word"beacon"
count1
24
word"pulse"
count2
25
word"potential"
count1
26
word"depths"
count1
27
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"footfall"
2"calculated"
3"echo"
4"flicked"
5"flicker"
6"weight"
7"whisper"
8"footsteps"
9"trembled"
10"practiced ease"
11"glint"
12"glinting"
13"echoed"
14"sense of"
15"could feel"
16"resolve"
17"flickered"
18"reminder"
19"unspoken"
20"echoes"
21"carried the weight"
22"implication"
23"beacon"
24"pulse"
25"potential"
26"depths"
27"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences213
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences213
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences219
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4465
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions51
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount4166
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Quinn33
Nest2
Veil4
Market4
Camden1
Tube1
London1
Saint4
Christopher4
Herrera1
Tomás16
Morris1
Raven1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Nest"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Herrera"
5"Tomás"
6"Morris"
7"Raven"
places
0"Veil"
1"Market"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
52.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences205
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"quite a smile"
1"looked like a shelf"
2"as if clapping shut a secret away again"
3"as if offering a cigarette to a cigarette partner"
4"sounded like a warning clanging in Quinn’s"
5"as if giving directions to a difficult patient, not to a fellow pursuer"
6"as if weighing a debt she might never repay"
7"as if warning a child who might bite the bait too eagerly"
88.02% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords1.12
wordCount4465
matches
0"no way out but"
1"not to the crowd but to the decision she had made in"
2"not loud but clear, a soft warning"
3"not to Quinn but to the market itself, as if the space could understand a con"
4"not with finality but with a deliberate certainty"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences219
matches
0"listening that this"
59.35% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean56.52
std20.22
cv0.358
sampleLengths
081
177
235
369
456
558
628
734
877
987
1055
1122
1239
1318
1433
1585
1619
1761
1860
1975
2062
2170
2247
2365
2473
2545
2622
2744
2879
2985
3044
3139
3225
3342
3457
3533
3648
3787
3851
3942
4064
4154
4264
4397
4485
4576
4674
4759
4854
4946
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences213
matches
0"being drawn"
1"been mistaken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs677
matches
0"were cutting"
1"was listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences25
totalSentences219
ratio0.114
matches
0"The Nest’s sign—a distinctive green neon—blinked somewhere down the street, a warning light for those who knew where to look."
1"The air up ahead smelled faintly of citrus and something metallic—danger, maybe, or a memory that wouldn’t stay buried."
2"The suspect stopped, pressed a palm against the wall, and listened to the city in the walls—pipes singing, a distant train’s sigh, the quick breathing of someone who knew there was no way out but forward."
3"The shelf wasn’t a shelf at all but a disguised passage—a bookshelf that slid on concealed rollers, a secret door that opened into a corridor beyond."
4"The Veil Market wasn’t just a rumor in the tabloids; it wasn’t a gutter tale told to frighten children into bed."
5"The passage opened onto a stone tunnel—low, narrow, and slick with damp."
6"Far away, a muffled sound—voices, a low murmur, a lull of footsteps—suggested the place was alive with someone else’s purpose."
7"The scent of copper and ozone filled the space, mixed with something organic—something that reminded her of rain on rust and the sting of a distant garden during a flood."
8"The market’s stalls offered a panoply of illegalities—enchanted charms tucked into cracked ceramic bowls, banned alchemical substances cinched in palm-sized packages, whispers of information traded like currency."
9"The suspect threaded through the stalls and into a corridor that opened into something larger—a cavern of rusted railings and stairwells that spiraled downward in a rough, unpolished chorus."
10"The sight paused her for a fractional moment—enough to remind her of a life she hadn’t wanted and the code she refused to abandon."
11"Tomás’s expression didn’t change; it remained smooth, easy, as if he had learned to fold into shadows the way other people folded into jackets."
12"The question wasn’t just about the present chase; it asked about a future she didn’t want to imagine."
13"The suspect’s footprints—half erased by the crowd’s swishing robes and the market’s own refuse—took a turn that led toward a stairwell rumored to descend into a sub-market’s heart."
14"Quinn’s mind ran through checklists—flashlight, cuff key, memory of the partner she’d lost, the city’s suspicions about the clique, the hollow ache behind her ribs that refused to be silenced."
15"If she didn’t go down, the suspect would vanish into a myth, and with him would vanish the chance to pierce the market’s deeper current—the current that ran beneath the city’s lawful surface."
16"The weight of the decision settled on her shoulders—the decision to descend into the unknown, to chase truth to a place where the city’s rules didn’t apply the same way, where the line between law and corruption blurred into a single gray seam."
17"The question wasn’t whether she could handle what lay below; it was whether she could bear the memory of what it would cost to illuminate the market’s deepest secret if it proved too heavy to carry."
18"The Raven’s Nest’s upstairs world had given her a map—maps of rain-soaked streets, tunnels, back rooms, the woven histories of a city that never stopped playing with fire."
19"A figure stepped from the shadows to her left—the silhouette of a person who knew more than the surface would ever tell."
20"The cloaked figure moved closer, and Quinn could see the faint line of a scar along a forearm—the same scar she’d noticed before, a knife’s wound from a life spent in hospitals and alleys, a life that wouldn’t stay quiet."
21"If she could learn the market’s true purpose for this chase, she could decide what came after—whether to pull the chain that would ring down a door or to let the door remain shut and take the long way back to the surface, where she could re-enter the rain-washed streets with a different kind of knowledge."
22"The decision wasn’t about loyalty or betrayal; it was about whether she could bear the truth the market would offer if she followed the suspect down into its depths."
23"The rain’s memory, the partner’s memory, the city’s memory—all pressed in on her from every side, demanding an answer, not a refusal."
24"Somewhere above, rain continued to fall, but here, it was a different rain—the rain of secrets and choices and the price of following a trail into a place the city kept secret for a reason."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4197
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount112
adverbRatio0.02668572790088158
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.005718370264474625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences219
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences219
mean20.39
std8.75
cv0.429
sampleLengths
010
128
223
320
410
526
612
729
816
919
1014
1118
1217
1320
1412
1516
1628
176
1817
1916
2019
2128
2219
2315
2416
2524
2625
2712
2824
2921
3021
3121
3236
3319
3414
358
366
3718
3815
3918
4033
4118
4226
434
4421
4516
4619
4716
4822
4923
33.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats36
diversityRatio0.2009132420091324
totalSentences219
uniqueOpeners44
15.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences212
matches
0"Somewhere above, rain continued to"
ratio0.005
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences212
matches
0"He paused, head low, hands"
1"his voice came, just loud"
2"It carried an edge of"
3"she said, moving with that"
4"Her left wrist wore a"
5"She studied the narrow alley"
6"he called out, a note"
7"He stepped into a doorway"
8"she ordered the night, stepping"
9"Her body moved with a"
10"They traded a long, lean"
11"He moved with a kind"
12"She kept a half-step behind,"
13"He turned to face her,"
14"he said, voice low, almost"
15"she asked, keeping her tone"
16"he said, and then, with"
17"It existed, and it moved,"
18"she said, though the words"
19"he taunted, and the line"
ratio0.259
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount200
totalSentences212
matches
0"The city smelled of damp"
1"Harlow Quinn followed in a"
2"The streetlights smeared into halos,"
3"A shadow slipped beneath a"
4"He paused, head low, hands"
5"Quinn slowed, counted to three,"
6"The street smelled of wet"
7"his voice came, just loud"
8"It carried an edge of"
9"she said, moving with that"
10"Her left wrist wore a"
11"She studied the narrow alley"
12"The Nest’s sign—a distinctive green"
13"he called out, a note"
14"The words drew a corner"
15"He stepped into a doorway"
16"Quinn paused at the threshold,"
17"The rain shifted, poured heavier,"
18"The doorway opened onto a"
19"The air up ahead smelled"
ratio0.943
70.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences212
matches
0"If she descended, she would"
1"If she didn’t go down,"
2"If she could learn the"
ratio0.014
9.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences166
technicalSentenceCount31
matches
0"The street smelled of wet tar and coffee steam from a late-night vendor, the sort of place that kept a low lamp lit for lost hours and careless truths."
1"He moved with a kind of practiced fear, weaving through the stair’s switchback like someone who’d memorized every step during a quiet life of evasions."
2"The suspect stopped, pressed a palm against the wall, and listened to the city in the walls—pipes singing, a distant train’s sigh, the quick breathing of someon…"
3"The shelf wasn’t a shelf at all but a disguised passage—a bookshelf that slid on concealed rollers, a secret door that opened into a corridor beyond."
4"Quinn paused only a heartbeat, listening to the bookshelf whisper close behind her as if clapping shut a secret away again."
5"There was a tunnel smell here, something old and earthy, like a cave that had stored rain for centuries."
6"Quinn kept him in her light, the beam mapping the uneven stones and the rusted pipes that stitched the tunnel to the city’s underbelly."
7"The scent of copper and ozone filled the space, mixed with something organic—something that reminded her of rain on rust and the sting of a distant garden durin…"
8"The suspect flashed a quick look, as if to decide whether this new presence was a help or a hindrance."
9"The suspect threaded through the stalls and into a corridor that opened into something larger—a cavern of rusted railings and stairwells that spiraled downward …"
10"The air hummed with a soft, constant buzz, as if the room itself was listening to every breath and awaiting a moment to intervene."
11"A tall figure stepped from behind a stall, blocking the way with the casual confidence of someone who belonged here."
12"The suspect, sensing new attention, pressed against the crowd’s flow and slipped into a side corridor that looked as if it had no end."
13"Tomás’s expression didn’t change; it remained smooth, easy, as if he had learned to fold into shadows the way other people folded into jackets."
14"The suspect had vanished again, swallowed by the market’s labyrinth, his trail turning from concrete to rumor to a whisper that could vanish if you looked away."
15"The suspect’s footprints—half erased by the crowd’s swishing robes and the market’s own refuse—took a turn that led toward a stairwell rumored to descend into a…"
16"A woman with a copper-colored scarf whispered to a man in a cloak, her lips pursed in glare as if weighing a debt she might never repay."
17"Quinn’s mind ran through checklists—flashlight, cuff key, memory of the partner she’d lost, the city’s suspicions about the clique, the hollow ache behind her r…"
18"The suspect turned into a corridor that dipped downward, a stairwell that disappeared into the earth like a truth someone had buried too late."
19"The stair smelled of rain and old metal, and the air grew cooler, more compact, as if the market’s volume could be turned down if you walked far enough away fro…"
20"She could feel the city’s press on her skin, a pressure that grew with every step she took."
21"If she didn’t go down, the suspect would vanish into a myth, and with him would vanish the chance to pierce the market’s deeper current—the current that ran ben…"
22"His eyes held no fear, only a measured clarity that made her own certainty feel brittle in comparison."
23"The cloaked figure moved closer, and Quinn could see the faint line of a scar along a forearm—the same scar she’d noticed before, a knife’s wound from a life sp…"
24"The suspect’s voice rose from somewhere down the hall, a thread of sound that pulled taut between the tunnel’s walls."
25"Her mind skated along a line of reasoning, a route of investigation that had grown heavy with implication."
26"The crowd’s murmur rose again, a chorus that urged her onward, that whispered the price of stepping deeper into a world where law lost its daylight."
27"Behind the suspect, a doorway, near to where Tomás had last stood in the market’s bones and breath, presented a stair that curled down and down, revealing a cor…"
28"The chase’s rhythm rose, a drumbeat in a cave, a pulse that didn’t require air to keep time."
29"If she could learn the market’s true purpose for this chase, she could decide what came after—whether to pull the chain that would ring down a door or to let th…"
30"And Quinn stepped forward, guiding her fate with the steady, unyielding pace that had kept her alive all these years."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"he called out, a note of scorn in his voice"
1"he said, voice low, almost friendly"
2"she said, though the words sounded clipped, as if she were cutting through the rain in midair"
3"he taunted, and the line carried a weight that wasn’t bravado"
4"Quinn said, her voice low and exact"
5"she sang, and a man answered with a bitter laugh, the sound scraping along the market’s rough walls"
6"Tomás said softly, as if to remind the night itself of its own rules"
7"she finally told herself, though the sentence hovered in the air without air quotes, a private reckoning kept to the edge of the alley’s rain"
8"he said softly, as if warning a child who might bite the bait too eagerly"
9"she said, and the sentence carried weight, a pledge she accepted without flinching"
10"Tomás’s voice drifted, as if he knew the exact moment when a decision would tilt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags30
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"he called out (call out)"
1"she ordered (order)"
2"he taunted (taunt)"
3"a voice hissed (hiss)"
4"she sang (sing)"
5"she demanded (demand)"
6"He spoke (speak)"
7"the voice warned (warn)"
8"the suspect whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.769
leniency1
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.3
71.0091%