Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5QW2DSWQQHWDMJJ7F7E6

Run Details

Duration:
26.8s
Cost:
$0.010196
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rainwater turned the asphalt of Camden High Street into a slick, obsidian mirror. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered against the pavement, each stride kicking up a spray of oily grit. Ahead, the suspect—a lean shadow in a fraying duster—threaded through the late-night crowd with the fluidity of a ghost. He didn't look back. He didn't need to. The frantic rhythm of Quinn's breathing and the rhythmic slap of her holster against her hip announced her presence better than any siren. "Police! Halt!" Her voice cracked through the thunder like a whip. The suspect vaulted over a row of rusted trash cans. He moved with a sickening grace that bypassed the limits of human joints. Quinn didn't hesitate. She threw herself over the bins, the metal screeching against her belt buckle. Her lungs burned with the metallic tang of urban rain and old exhaust. The man veered hard right, diving into a narrow alleyway where the brick walls bled damp moss. He bypassed a stack of splintered pallets and made for a chain-link fence. Quinn gripped the wire. The cold metal bit into her palms. She hauled herself over, dropping into the mud on the other side. Her salt-and-pepper hair, usually cropped with military precision, clung to her forehead in wet spikes. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Three minutes. He’d led her on a three-minute sprint that should have winded a marathon runner, yet he hadn't broken pace. They reached the perimeter of an abandoned Tube station. The entrance was a yawning concrete maw, choked with dead weeds and jagged graffiti. The man didn't slow. He produced a small, pale object from his pocket—a disc that caught the flicker of a distant streetlamp—and tapped it against the rusted gate. The chains didn't just rattle; they dissolved. The heavy iron swung inward with a groan of yielding metal. Quinn slowed to a rhythmic trot, her hand hovering over the grip of her sidearm. This wasn't right. The blueprints for this sector marked this station as sealed since the late eighties. "Don't do it, Quinn," she muttered to the empty air. The phantom of DS Morris flickered in her mind—the way he’d looked three years ago, staring into a darkness just like this one before the shadows swallowed him whole. She pushed the memory back into its cage. Her sharp jaw tightened. She couldn't let another one slip into the grey. She stepped through the gate. The temperature plummeted. The air inside smelled of ozone, wet earth, and something cloying—like lilies rotting in a vase. The suspect's footsteps echoed ahead, descending into the belly of the earth. Quinn followed the sound down a spiral of moss-slicked stairs. The deeper she went, the more the silence changed. It wasn't the absence of sound, but a heavy, pressurized hum that vibrated in her teeth. At the bottom of the flight, the darkness broke. Not with electricity, but with the phosphor-glow of glass jars lining a cavernous tunnel. She turned a corner and the Veil Market unfolded. What should have been a derelict platform was a bustling artery of the impossible. Stalls draped in heavy velvet and hammered copper lined the tracks. Merchants with eyes the color of hammered tin bartered over jars of shimmering dust and bundles of dried, translucent roots. The air tasted of spice and old copper. Quinn's hand tightened on her holster. Her presence was a jarring note in a dark symphony. A man with skin like scorched parchment paused from sharpening a bone-handled knife to watch her pass. "You're a long way from the precinct, Detective." The voice came from her left. She spun, her eyes narrowing as she scanned the crowd. She found him leaning against a support pillar near a stall selling jars of human teeth. Tomás Herrera looked exactly as he did in the grainy surveillance photos tucked in her desk drawer. His dark, curly hair was matted with rain, and his olive skin looked sallow under the green glow of a nearby lantern. He wore a Saint Christopher medallion over a grease-stained Henley shirt. The jagged scar on his left forearm stood out in sharp relief. "Herrera," Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low, dangerous register. "I'm looking for the man in the grey duster. He came through here. Ten seconds ago." Tomás adjusted the medallion, his warm brown eyes lacking the malice she expected. Instead, they held a weary sort of pity. "You should turn around, Harlow. Go back to the Raven's Nest. Get a drink. Forget you saw the gate." "I don't forget. And I don't take advice from struck-off medics who patch up monsters in basement clinics." Quinn stepped into his space, her height giving her an inch of leverage. "Where did he go?" Tomás gestured with a subtle tilt of his chin toward a darkened tunnel where the tracks vanished into a thick, swirling fog. "He went to see a broker. Someone who doesn't like unexpected guests. Especially guests with badges and a sense of duty." "He's a suspect in a homicide," Quinn snapped. "I track him, or I track you. Choose." Tomás let out a sharp, cynical laugh. He stepped away from the pillar, the movement revealing the glint of a bone token tucked into his palm—the entry requirement for this hellscape. "You track me, you end up in a cell. You track him, you end up in a jar," Tomás said. He didn't wait for her rebuttal. He started walking toward the fog, his pace casual, though his shoulders remained tense. Quinn watched him. The market buzzed around her, a hive of things that shouldn't exist. She looked back at the stairs—the way out, the way back to gravity and laws and the smell of rain that was just water. Then she looked at the fog. The man in the duster was the only lead she had to what happened to Morris. The only bridge between her world and the one that had stolen her partner. She checked the safety on her pistol. A hollow click echoed against the vaulted ceiling. "Herrera!" she called out. Tomás stopped but didn't turn around. "Move and I'll shoot. Lead the way and I might forget you were here." Tomás turned then, his expression unreadable. He looked at the worn leather watch on her wrist, then up at her sharp, defiant face. "The rain hasn't washed the stubbornness out of you yet," Tomás noted. He held out a hand toward the dark tunnel. "Step into the red, Detective. Just don't say I didn't warn you when the shadows start biting back." Quinn stepped past him, her boots crunching on the soot-covered gravel of the tracks. The air grew thicker, smelling of scorched iron. "Whatever is down there," Quinn whispered, more to herself than him, "it has a name. And I'm going to put it in a report." "Reports require witnesses who survive the night," Tomás countered. He fell into step beside her, his presence a reluctant shield as they drifted away from the flickering lanterns of the stalls. The light of the Veil Market faded behind them, replaced by a low, rhythmic thumping that sounded like the heartbeat of the city itself. The suspect's duster flickered at the edge of the fog—a grey shroud disappearing into a side-chamber marked with symbols drawn in drying salt. Quinn didn't slow down. She felt the weight of the underground pressing on her, the sheer tonnage of London’s history and secrets sitting on her chest. "If he turns," Quinn said, her voice a ghost of a command. "You drop." "I've been dropping for years, Quinn," Tomás replied. "Try to keep up." They crossed the threshold of the salt-stained archway. The fog didn't dissipate; it curdled. On the other side, the tunnel widened into a circular vaulted chamber. The suspect stood in the center, his back to them. He wasn't running anymore. He stood perfectly still before a table carved from a single block of black obsidian. "Drop the weapon," Quinn shouted, her gun leveled at the center of the man's back. The man didn't move. He didn't reach for a gun. He reached for a heavy, leather-bound ledger sitting on the stone. "He's not listening to you," Tomás whispered, his hand reaching for the medallion at his throat. "He's not even here anymore." "I said hands up!" Quinn took three steps forward. The suspect turned. His face wasn't flesh. It was a shifting mosaic of grey smoke and silver wire, his eyes two voids that drank the little light remaining in the room. He smiled, and the sound was like glass grinding against glass. "Detective Quinn," the thing said, the voice echoing not from its mouth, but from the walls themselves. "We've been waiting for a reason to invite you downstairs." Quinn’s finger tightened on the trigger. The military precision of her stance didn't waver, but the air in the chamber began to scream. "Tomás," she said, her eyes locked on the smoke-faced man. "Tell me you brought more than a medallion." "I brought a shovel," Tomás said, his voice tight. "Because we're either digging our way out or we're staying forever." The man in the duster raised a hand, and the salt symbols on the archway began to glow with a sickly, bruised purple light. The exit didn't just vanish; it folded. Quinn felt the sudden shift in pressure, the way the world tilted on its axis. "The Market moves every full moon, Quinn," the suspect said. "And the moon just reached its zenith." Quinn lunged forward, not away. She didn't retreat. She drove her shoulder into the suspect, the impact feeling like hitting a wall of pressurized ice. They spiraled onto the obsidian table, the ledger sliding across the floor. Tomás scrambled for the book, his fingers brushing the cold leather just as the floor beneath them began to dissolve into a slurry of shadows and silver sand. "Grab the light!" Tomás yelled, pointing to a single lantern hanging from a chain above the table. Quinn reached. Her fingers clamped around the hot iron of the lantern. The world went white. The sound of the underground—the hum, the heartbeat, the screaming salt—erupted into a single, deafening roar. When the spots cleared from her eyes, the chamber was gone. The smell of rotting lilies was gone. She was standing on a rusted maintenance platform, thirty feet above a bypass she didn't recognize. The rain was still falling, but it felt different now—cold, mindless, and ordinary. Tomás sat on the edge of the platform, clutching the leather ledger to his chest. He was shaking. He looked at the scar on his arm, then at her. "Where are we?" Quinn asked, her voice rasping. She looked at her watch. The glass was cracked. The hands were spinning backward. "Far enough," Tomás said. He stood up, sliding the book under his arm. "But he knows your face now, Harlow. He knows the way you smell when you're afraid." "I wasn't afraid," she lied. Tomás looked at her, his warm brown eyes filled with a terrifying clarity. He didn't say a word. He just pointed at her hand. Quinn looked down. She was still gripping the lantern. But it wasn't iron anymore. It was a human skull, bleached white, with a candle burning inside the cranial cavity—a flame that pulsed with the same salt-purple light as the gate. She didn't drop it. She couldn't. Her fingers were fused to the bone. "Welcome to the investigation," Tomás whispered. The sound of a siren wailed in the distance, but it sounded thin and tinny, like a recording played from another room. Quinn looked out over the city. The lights of London looked like embers in a dying fire. "We need to find a doctor," Quinn said, her voice steadying. She forced her gaze away from the bone in her hand. "A real one." "The real ones can't help you with that," Tomás said. He started walking toward a ladder leading down to the street. "Come on. We have to move before the smell of that candle brings the rest of them up." Quinn followed. She kept her gun drawn in her free hand, the muzzle pointed at the shadows that suddenly seemed much deeper than they had ten minutes ago. She didn't look back at the platform. She didn't look at the sky. She watched the way the purple light from the skull danced off the wet pavement, carving a path through the dark. "Herrera," she called out as they hit the sidewalk. He stopped, his hand on the strap of his bag. "This doesn't mean you're off the hook for the unauthorized treatments." Tomás gave a small, grim smile. "Detective, by the time the sun comes up, that's going to be the least of our problems." They moved into the rain, two silhouettes against the flickering neon of a city that had no idea what was crawling beneath its skin. Quinn felt the weight of the leather watch on her wrist, a reminder of the time she was losing, and the heavy, cold pulse of the bone in her grip. She didn't know where they were going, but for the first time in three years, she wasn't chasing a ghost. She was carrying one. The rain thickened, turning the world into a blur of grey and silver. Every alleyway looked like a mouth. Every shadow looked like a duster. Quinn tightened her hold on the skull, the heat of the purple flame beginning to seep into her marrow. "Which way?" she asked. Tomás pointed toward Soho. "To the Nest. Silas has a cellar that doesn't exist on any map. We start there." They crossed the street, their footsteps lost in the roar of the downpour. Behind them, the maintenance platform stood empty, the gate to the Veil Market closed tight, leaving nothing but the smell of burnt ozone and the lingering taste of salt in the air. Quinn didn't look back. She kept her eyes on the road ahead, watching for the green neon glow of the Raven's Nest, her mind already cataloging the impossible things she’d seen. She needed a pen. She needed a drink. But mostly, she needed to know why the thing with the smoke face had known her name. The darkness didn't answer. It just waited for them to step further into its reach.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.531
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2429
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2429
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count3
1
word"maw"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"symphony"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"glint"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"mosaic"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"maw"
2"flicker"
3"flickered"
4"footsteps"
5"echoed"
6"silence"
7"vibrated"
8"velvet"
9"symphony"
10"scanned"
11"sense of"
12"glint"
13"unreadable"
14"weight"
15"mosaic"
16"echoing"
17"pulsed"
18"reminder"
19"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences189
matches(empty)
82.39% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences189
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences211
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2401
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount2014
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn29
Tube1
Morris2
Veil3
Market3
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Henley1
Tomás21
London2
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
8"Raven"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Veil"
4"London"
5"Soho"
globalScore0.78
windowScore0.667
58.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences137
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"sounded like the heartbeat of the city its"
1"looked like embers in a dying fire"
2"seemed much deeper than they had ten minutes ago"
3"looked like a mouth"
4"looked like a duster"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.833
wordCount2401
matches
0"Not with electricity, but with the phosphor-glow of glass jars lining a cavernous tunn"
1"not from its mouth, but from the walls themselves"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean29.64
std18.86
cv0.636
sampleLengths
080
12
261
399
469
532
610
750
824
947
1023
119
1253
1333
148
1532
1662
1727
1840
1935
2043
2116
2231
2320
2459
2536
2615
274
286
2914
3023
3139
3222
3324
349
3546
3649
3714
3812
3955
4015
4121
4221
439
4442
4527
4623
4718
4820
4946
97.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences189
matches
0"was matted"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
3"were fused"
12.50% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs320
matches
0"wasn't running"
1"was standing"
2"was shaking"
3"were spinning"
4"was crawling"
5"was losing"
6"were going"
7"was carrying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences211
ratio0.062
matches
0"Ahead, the suspect—a lean shadow in a fraying duster—threaded through the late-night crowd with the fluidity of a ghost."
1"He produced a small, pale object from his pocket—a disc that caught the flicker of a distant streetlamp—and tapped it against the rusted gate."
2"The chains didn't just rattle; they dissolved."
3"The phantom of DS Morris flickered in her mind—the way he’d looked three years ago, staring into a darkness just like this one before the shadows swallowed him whole."
4"The air inside smelled of ozone, wet earth, and something cloying—like lilies rotting in a vase."
5"He stepped away from the pillar, the movement revealing the glint of a bone token tucked into his palm—the entry requirement for this hellscape."
6"She looked back at the stairs—the way out, the way back to gravity and laws and the smell of rain that was just water."
7"The suspect's duster flickered at the edge of the fog—a grey shroud disappearing into a side-chamber marked with symbols drawn in drying salt."
8"The fog didn't dissipate; it curdled."
9"The exit didn't just vanish; it folded."
10"The sound of the underground—the hum, the heartbeat, the screaming salt—erupted into a single, deafening roar."
11"The rain was still falling, but it felt different now—cold, mindless, and ordinary."
12"It was a human skull, bleached white, with a candle burning inside the cranial cavity—a flame that pulsed with the same salt-purple light as the gate."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2041
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"heavy, leather-bound ledger"
1"sickly, bruised purple light."
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.020088192062714356
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.005389514943655071
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences211
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences211
mean11.38
std6.75
cv0.593
sampleLengths
013
117
219
34
44
523
62
79
810
913
103
1113
1213
1317
1413
154
167
1712
1815
1910
202
2119
229
2314
244
2524
267
2711
2815
293
3014
3110
3229
338
344
359
365
373
3816
3912
4010
419
4216
439
4414
459
4614
4711
4820
498
36.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.23696682464454977
totalSentences211
uniqueOpeners50
38.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences175
matches
0"Instead, they held a weary"
1"Then she looked at the"
ratio0.011
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount75
totalSentences175
matches
0"He didn't look back."
1"He didn't need to."
2"Her voice cracked through the"
3"He moved with a sickening"
4"She threw herself over the"
5"Her lungs burned with the"
6"He bypassed a stack of"
7"She hauled herself over, dropping"
8"Her salt-and-pepper hair, usually cropped"
9"She checked the worn leather"
10"He’d led her on a"
11"They reached the perimeter of"
12"He produced a small, pale"
13"she muttered to the empty"
14"She pushed the memory back"
15"Her sharp jaw tightened."
16"She couldn't let another one"
17"She stepped through the gate."
18"It wasn't the absence of"
19"She turned a corner and"
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount164
totalSentences175
matches
0"Rainwater turned the asphalt of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered"
2"He didn't look back."
3"He didn't need to."
4"The frantic rhythm of Quinn's"
5"Her voice cracked through the"
6"The suspect vaulted over a"
7"He moved with a sickening"
8"Quinn didn't hesitate."
9"She threw herself over the"
10"Her lungs burned with the"
11"The man veered hard right,"
12"He bypassed a stack of"
13"Quinn gripped the wire."
14"The cold metal bit into"
15"She hauled herself over, dropping"
16"Her salt-and-pepper hair, usually cropped"
17"She checked the worn leather"
18"He’d led her on a"
19"They reached the perimeter of"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences175
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences88
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He produced a small, pale object from his pocket—a disc that caught the flicker of a distant streetlamp—and tapped it against the rusted gate."
1"It was a shifting mosaic of grey smoke and silver wire, his eyes two voids that drank the little light remaining in the room."
2"They moved into the rain, two silhouettes against the flickering neon of a city that had no idea what was crawling beneath its skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low, dangerous register"
1"Quinn stepped, her height giving her an inch of leverage"
2"Quinn whispered, more to herself than him,"
3"Quinn said, her voice a ghost of a command"
4"Tomás whispered, his hand reaching for the medallion at his throat"
5"Tomás said, his voice tight"
6"Quinn asked, her voice rasping"
7"Quinn said, her voice steadying"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn snapped (snap)"
2"Tomás noted (note)"
3"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
4"Quinn shouted (shout)"
5"Tomás whispered (whisper)"
6"Tomás yelled (yell)"
7"she lied (lie)"
8"Tomás whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.367
69.0479%