Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5T8XFCDYGR1C8VPBWZ0H

Run Details

Duration:
18.0s
Cost:
$0.009166
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had slicked the cobbles of Richmond Park long before Rory pushed through the last line of bramble into the clearing. Her boots sank slightly in the black loam, the soles peeling free with a reluctant squelch. She paused, breath steaming in the cold, and wiped wet strands of hair from her face. The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like lilac soaked in iron. She shouldn’t have come at night. But Yu-Fei’s note had been clear: *Drop the parcel at the standing stones before moonrise. No delays.* Simple. Routine. She’d done odd deliveries to the Grove before—heroin vials wrapped in silk, ancient-looking coins sealed in wax—for clients Yu-Fei never named. Never asked about. The rules were simple: don’t open it, don’t look at it too long, and never stay past the stones. This time, though, the moon was already a smear of bone behind cloud, and the sky held its breath. Rory unzipped her jacket just enough to let the pendant fall free. The Heartstone Pendant. She hadn’t worn it since last winter, when it pulsed like a trapped heartbeat at the Underground station. Now, cradled against her collarbone, the crimson gem stirred—warmth blooming gently beneath her skin. She touched it, fingers trembling. *Pulse.* One beat. Then another. Slow. Patient. She scanned the grove. The standing stones stood sentinel in a broken ring, ancient oaks warped into gnarled pillars, bark split like dried leather. Moss clung to their northern sides, heavy and damp. Between them, the wildflowers—snowdrops, foxgloves, some with petals too deep, too dark in this light—nodded in a wind that didn’t touch her cheeks. Rory stepped forward. Her boot crunched on something brittle. She looked down. Not a twig. A feather. Long, black, barbs intact—but wrong. The shaft was ribbed, like a spine segmented under flesh. She kicked it aside, pulse ticking faster. “Just deliver it,” she muttered. “Drop it and go.” The parcel, wrapped in waxed paper and tied with red twine, felt heavier now. Hot. She could almost hear it—an echo beneath her ribs, a subharmonic hum. She reached the largest stone, its surface carved with symbols she didn’t recognize: spirals that looped too many times, angles that didn’t obey perspective. She bent, placed the package at its base. “Done,” she said. Silence swallowed the word. Then—laughter. Not loud. Not near. But unmistakably human. A child’s giggle, quick and breathless, from the far side of the circle. Rory froze. She turned, scanning the tree line. Nothing. The flowers swayed. “Eva?” she called, hating how thin her voice sounded. “Not funny.” No answer. Just the warmth of the pendant, now steady, insistent. She stepped back. Something moved in her periphery—left, beyond the third stone. She snapped her head toward it. Nothing. Only a shadow, stretched too long. The moonlight, if it was moonlight, bled through the trees in uneven patches, pooled on the ground like oil. She started for the bramble line—the way she’d come—when the giggle came again. Closer. And behind her now. She didn’t turn. “I know you’re there,” she said, louder. “If Yu-Fei sent you, I did it. It’s done.” Another sound. A rustle. Not wind. Too rhythmic. Like fingers dragging through undergrowth. Slow. Deliberate. She reached the edge of the clearing. The bramble snarled, thick and thorned, but she knew the gap—had used it before. She dropped to one knee, pushed at the vines. They recoiled. Not from her hand. From the pendant. The silver chain twitched as if tugged, the gem flaring crimson for a heartbeat—then dim again. And then, from the center of the clearing, a voice. “Rory?” Her breath caught. It sounded like Eva. Pitch-perfect. The same lilt, the same warmth. But Eva wasn’t here. Eva was in Camden. Eva didn’t even know this place existed. “Rory, wait.” She turned. Between the stones, a figure stood. Tall. Slender. Hair hanging in long, wet coils. Wearing Eva’s coat. Eva’s boots. But the face— —the face was too long. The eyes sat too wide. The smile stretched too far, revealing too many teeth. It took a step. Rory backed into the treeline. “No,” she said. The thing tilted its head. “You dropped something.” And in its hand—her parcel. Impossible. She’d left it at the stone. It raised the package, unwound the twine with fingers too slender, too jointed. Rory reached for her phone. Nothing. No signal. No light. Just the cold glass. The air thickened. The flowers—dozens of them—turned. Slowly. Petals parting like mouths. Stems twisting toward her. The thing smiled wider. Then it began to hum. A tuneless, sliding note, rising and falling like something drowning. Rory’s pendant flared again—red heat searing her skin. And in the hum, beneath it, she heard something else. Voices. Not one. Not two. Dozens. Muttering. Crying. Laughing. Screaming. All layered beneath that single, sliding note. She clapped her hands over her ears. It didn’t help. The sound wasn’t outside. It was *inside*. The creature dropped the parcel. It didn’t land. It hovered. Then split open. No ribbon. No paper. Just darkness unspooling like thread from a reel. From it, a cold breath exhaled—sour, ancient, wet with rot. One of the standing stones groaned. A crack split down its center. From within—something shifted. Something vast. Something *waiting*. The pendant pulsed like a heart on fire. Rory stumbled back, tripped on a root, fell. The thing in Eva’s shape stepped forward, gliding now, feet never touching the ground. “You shouldn’t have come at night,” it whispered. And now its voice wasn’t Eva’s at all. It was hers. Her own voice. But warped. Dragging. “You shouldn’t have come *back*.” Behind it, the crack in the stone widened. A sliver of violet light bled through. And Rory knew—suddenly, horribly—that this hadn’t been a delivery. It had been a key. And she had just turned it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount992
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount992
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"sentinel"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"lilt"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"scanned"
5"sentinel"
6"echo"
7"silence"
8"scanning"
9"rhythmic"
10"perfect"
11"lilt"
12"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences161
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords15
totalWords965
ratio0.016
matches
0"Drop the parcel at the standing stones before moonrise. No delays."
1"Pulse."
2"inside"
3"waiting"
4"back"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount923
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory9
Yu-Fei2
Simple1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Underground1
One2
Silence1
Eva8
Camden1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Simple"
3"Silence"
4"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Underground"
4"One"
5"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount965
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs99
mean9.75
std12.37
cv1.269
sampleLengths
063
16
262
319
452
51
62
72
82
94
1052
113
129
133
1424
159
1659
173
184
191
2020
212
226
231
243
2511
262
279
283
299
306
3126
3213
331
344
353
3616
3715
3830
392
404
413
4216
4310
441
453
4611
4715
482
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences161
matches
0"was ribbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount24
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences168
ratio0.113
matches
0"The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like lilac soaked in iron."
1"She’d done odd deliveries to the Grove before—heroin vials wrapped in silk, ancient-looking coins sealed in wax—for clients Yu-Fei never named."
2"Now, cradled against her collarbone, the crimson gem stirred—warmth blooming gently beneath her skin."
3"Between them, the wildflowers—snowdrops, foxgloves, some with petals too deep, too dark in this light—nodded in a wind that didn’t touch her cheeks."
4"Long, black, barbs intact—but wrong."
5"She could almost hear it—an echo beneath her ribs, a subharmonic hum."
6"Then—laughter."
7"Something moved in her periphery—left, beyond the third stone."
8"She started for the bramble line—the way she’d come—when the giggle came again."
9"The bramble snarled, thick and thorned, but she knew the gap—had used it before."
10"The silver chain twitched as if tugged, the gem flaring crimson for a heartbeat—then dim again."
11"But the face—"
12"—the face was too long."
13"And in its hand—her parcel."
14"The flowers—dozens of them—turned."
15"Rory’s pendant flared again—red heat searing her skin."
16"From it, a cold breath exhaled—sour, ancient, wet with rot."
17"From within—something shifted."
18"And Rory knew—suddenly, horribly—that this hadn’t been a delivery."
91.66% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount949
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.04952581664910432
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007376185458377239
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean5.74
std5.06
cv0.881
sampleLengths
021
116
216
310
46
515
63
71
821
93
1019
1119
1212
133
1418
1514
165
171
182
192
201
211
224
2320
249
2523
263
276
283
293
302
315
3210
337
345
354
3614
371
3812
3924
408
413
424
431
442
452
463
4713
482
496
52.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners60
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences109
matches
0"Just the warmth of the"
1"Only a shadow, stretched too"
2"Just the cold glass."
3"Then it began to hum."
4"All layered beneath that single,"
5"Then split open."
6"Just darkness unspooling like thread"
ratio0.064
95.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her boots sank slightly in"
1"She paused, breath steaming in"
2"She shouldn’t have come at"
3"She’d done odd deliveries to"
4"She hadn’t worn it since"
5"She touched it, fingers trembling."
6"She scanned the grove."
7"Her boot crunched on something"
8"She looked down."
9"She kicked it aside, pulse"
10"She could almost hear it—an"
11"She reached the largest stone,"
12"She bent, placed the package"
13"She turned, scanning the tree"
14"she called, hating how thin"
15"She stepped back."
16"She snapped her head toward"
17"She started for the bramble"
18"She didn’t turn."
19"she said, louder"
ratio0.312
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences109
matches
0"Rain had slicked the cobbles"
1"Her boots sank slightly in"
2"She paused, breath steaming in"
3"The air smelled wrong—too sweet,"
4"She shouldn’t have come at"
5"She’d done odd deliveries to"
6"The rules were simple: don’t"
7"This time, though, the moon"
8"Rory unzipped her jacket just"
9"The Heartstone Pendant."
10"She hadn’t worn it since"
11"She touched it, fingers trembling."
12"She scanned the grove."
13"The standing stones stood sentinel"
14"Moss clung to their northern"
15"Rory stepped forward."
16"Her boot crunched on something"
17"She looked down."
18"The shaft was ribbed, like"
19"She kicked it aside, pulse"
ratio0.697
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Now, cradled against her collarbone,"
ratio0.009
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Between them, the wildflowers—snowdrops, foxgloves, some with petals too deep, too dark in this light—nodded in a wind that didn’t touch her cheeks."
1"She reached the largest stone, its surface carved with symbols she didn’t recognize: spirals that looped too many times, angles that didn’t obey perspective."
2"The silver chain twitched as if tugged, the gem flaring crimson for a heartbeat—then dim again."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, louder"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.308
81.9687%