Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5WPZKHSPPVQPB6EQ15KK

Run Details

Duration:
32.2s
Cost:
$0.030704
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park loomed like skeletal giants against the bruised-purple smear of the London night sky. Aurora Carter pushed aside a low-hanging branch, its wet leaves slapping against her cheek. The air, thick with the damp-earth smell of recent rain, shifted. It thinned, grew colder, and carried a new scent underneath the mulch and rot—the cloying perfume of night-blooming jasmine that had no business flowering in an English autumn. She had passed between the standing stones. The distant hum of the A307 vanished. Not faded. It was simply gone, snipped away like a thread. The world behind her ceased to exist. Here, in the Grove, the only sound was the soft crush of her boots on a carpet of wildflowers. Their colours were leached to ghost-white and silver under a moon that seemed too large, too close. A film of unnatural stillness coated everything. Rory’s hand went to her throat, her fingers finding the cool, smooth surface of the Heartstone Pendant. She ran her thumb over the crimson gem, a nervous habit. It remained inert, its temperature matching her own skin. No warmth. No pulse. The note in her pocket had been specific: *Richmond Grove. Midnight. When the moon is full. Come alone.* She was here for answers, for the person who had sent her this pendant, this key to a world she was only just beginning to comprehend. But the promised meeting place felt less like a sanctuary and more like a trap. She took a breath and stepped deeper into the clearing. The great oaks that marked the Grove’s boundary formed a jagged circle, their gnarled branches reaching for each other like the arthritic fingers of old men. Shadows clung to their bases, pools of absolute black that the moonlight could not penetrate. Her eyes scanned the clearing, searching for a figure, a sign. There was nothing. Just the flowers, the stones, and the oppressive silence. A rustle. It came from her left, from the deep darkness beneath one of the oaks. Rory froze, her head snapping towards the sound. Her knuckles were white where she gripped the pendant’s silver chain. Probably a fox. Or a badger. London was full of them. She forced her shoulders to relax, let out a slow, controlled breath. She was letting the place get to her. Cool head. That’s what got you through things. She took another step towards the centre of the clearing, her gaze sweeping the ring of trees. Then she heard it again. Not a rustle this time. A sharp *snap*. The distinct crack of a dry twig breaking under a heavy weight. It was loud. definitive. And it came from behind her. She spun around, her heart a frantic drum against her ribs. The spot she had just been looking at was empty. The same trees, the same pale flowers, the same impenetrable shadows. Nothing had moved. No animal scurried away into the undergrowth. There was no wind to stir the branches. The air was a dead weight, heavy and unmoving. “Hello?” Her voice was a fragile thing in the vast silence. It came out thin, hoarse. The sound was swallowed by the Grove before it could even echo. She waited. The silence that answered was a presence in itself. It felt watchful. Attentive. The tiny hairs on her arms stood on end. The crescent-scar on her wrist tingled with a phantom ache. She took a slow, deliberate step backwards, away from the tree line, positioning herself in the very centre of the clearing where the moonlight was brightest. Nowhere to hide, but nothing could sneak up on her either. It was a trade-off. She scanned the perimeter again, moving only her eyes. Left to right. Slow. Methodical. Oak. Shadow. Oak. Shadow. Flicker. Her eyes darted back. At the very edge of her vision, a flicker of movement. Something tall and thin had detached itself from the trunk of an oak, a sliver of deeper black against the blackness. When her focus landed squarely on the spot, there was nothing. Just the rough, time-worn bark of the ancient tree. She blinked, her eyes stinging from the strain. A trick of the light. An afterimage burned onto her retinas. It had to be. But the feeling persisted. It began as a prickle at the nape of her neck, the kind of awareness that signals another’s gaze. It intensified into a heavy pressure, a physical weight pushing down on her. She was being observed. Measured. She could feel the scrutiny like a spider crawling over her skin. She wrapped her arms around herself, rubbing her coat sleeves as if to wipe the sensation away. The sweet floral scent in the air was changing. It thickened, taking on a sickly, overripe quality, the smell of petals beginning to rot on the stem. A low hum started, a vibration she felt more in the bones of her jaw than heard with her ears. It was a sound without a source, a thrumming that seemed to emanate from the very soil beneath her feet. She knew she should leave. Turn around, walk back the way she came, push through the invisible barrier and run until the comforting, familiar drone of London traffic filled her ears. But her feet were lead. The promise of answers held her fast. And a deeper, more primal fear suggested that turning her back now would be a fatal mistake. A whisper slithered through the air. It was not the wind. It was shaped. Articulated. It coiled around the ancient oaks and slid across the moon-washed flowers, a sibilant breath that brushed against her ear. *Laila.* The name was a ghost on her tongue. A name she had not used, had not heard, in years. A name tied to Evan, to a past she had fled. Her blood ran cold. No one here could know that name. Her breath hitched, trapped in her throat. She squeezed her eyes shut, a desperate, childish denial. When she opened them, the Grove was the same. Unchanged. But the lie of her solitude was stripped away. The air was electric with presence. She was not alone. She had never been alone. The hum intensified, the rotten-sweet smell choked her, and the watching eyes—she felt them from all sides now, a ring of unseen predators closing in around her in the silent, silvered clearing. The silence that followed the whisper was the worst part. It was a hungry silence, a patient predator waiting for its prey to break.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
86.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count2
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"silence"
count5
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"methodical"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count2
11
word"measured"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count2
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"sanctuary"
4"scanned"
5"oppressive"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"echo"
9"methodical"
10"flicker"
11"measured"
12"could feel"
13"comforting"
14"familiar"
15"whisper"
16"electric"
17"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords12
totalWords1087
ratio0.011
matches
0"Richmond Grove. Midnight. When the moon is full. Come alone."
1"snap"
2"Laila."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1086
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
London3
Carter1
English1
Grove5
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"English"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1087
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"know that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean49.41
std32.08
cv0.649
sampleLengths
072
17
268
3100
474
52
689
735
859
928
1075
1119
1275
134
1470
1567
1660
176
1829
191
2048
2199
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences122
matches
0"were leached"
1"was swallowed"
2"was shaped"
3"was stripped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was letting"
1"was being"
96.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences122
ratio0.016
matches
0"It thinned, grew colder, and carried a new scent underneath the mulch and rot—the cloying perfume of night-blooming jasmine that had no business flowering in an English autumn."
1"The hum intensified, the rotten-sweet smell choked her, and the watching eyes—she felt them from all sides now, a ring of unseen predators closing in around her in the silent, silvered clearing."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1098
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"rough, time-worn bark"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.030965391621129327
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006375227686703097
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean8.91
std6.72
cv0.754
sampleLengths
019
114
211
328
47
57
62
79
87
919
1017
117
1217
1311
149
152
162
1710
181
195
2028
2115
2210
2326
2415
2511
263
279
282
2914
308
3111
323
333
345
3512
368
372
386
3917
405
415
423
4312
443
451
466
4711
4810
4911
51.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.36065573770491804
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences102
matches
0"Just the flowers, the stones,"
1"Probably a fox."
2"Then she heard it again."
3"Nowhere to hide, but nothing"
4"Just the rough, time-worn bark"
ratio0.049
59.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences102
matches
0"It thinned, grew colder, and"
1"She had passed between the"
2"It was simply gone, snipped"
3"Their colours were leached to"
4"She ran her thumb over"
5"It remained inert, its temperature"
6"She took a breath and"
7"Her eyes scanned the clearing,"
8"It came from her left,"
9"Her knuckles were white where"
10"She forced her shoulders to"
11"She was letting the place"
12"She took another step towards"
13"It was loud."
14"She spun around, her heart"
15"Her voice was a fragile"
16"It came out thin, hoarse."
17"It felt watchful."
18"She took a slow, deliberate"
19"It was a trade-off."
ratio0.402
77.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences102
matches
0"The ancient oaks of Richmond"
1"Aurora Carter pushed aside a"
2"The air, thick with the"
3"It thinned, grew colder, and"
4"She had passed between the"
5"The distant hum of the"
6"It was simply gone, snipped"
7"The world behind her ceased"
8"Here, in the Grove, the"
9"Their colours were leached to"
10"A film of unnatural stillness"
11"Rory’s hand went to her"
12"She ran her thumb over"
13"It remained inert, its temperature"
14"The note in her pocket"
15"She took a breath and"
16"The great oaks that marked"
17"Shadows clung to their bases,"
18"Her eyes scanned the clearing,"
19"It came from her left,"
ratio0.765
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"It thinned, grew colder, and carried a new scent underneath the mulch and rot—the cloying perfume of night-blooming jasmine that had no business flowering in an…"
1"Their colours were leached to ghost-white and silver under a moon that seemed too large, too close."
2"Come alone.* She was here for answers, for the person who had sent her this pendant, this key to a world she was only just beginning to comprehend."
3"The great oaks that marked the Grove’s boundary formed a jagged circle, their gnarled branches reaching for each other like the arthritic fingers of old men."
4"It began as a prickle at the nape of her neck, the kind of awareness that signals another’s gaze."
5"She wrapped her arms around herself, rubbing her coat sleeves as if to wipe the sensation away."
6"It coiled around the ancient oaks and slid across the moon-washed flowers, a sibilant breath that brushed against her ear."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.4355%