Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5ZX2XD5A294STN3DDQZE

Run Details

Duration:
7.5s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the city’s neon veins into slick ribbons of light. Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her coat tighter, the leather watch on her left wrist ticking against the rhythm of the storm. She chased a silhouette that darted between shadowed doorways, the suspect’s coat flapping like a dark flag. Each step splashed through puddles, sending spray up to cling to her boots. The suspect—tall, wiry, a hood pulled low over his face—veered into a narrow alley off The Street of the City. Quinn’s boots thudded on the cobblestones, echoing off the grimy walls. She heard a muffled cough, a low chuckle, then the sound of a door slamming shut. The alley narrowed into a dead end, a wall of brick plastered with faded posters. A faint green glow flickered above a doorway—a neon sign that read “The Raven’s Nest” in trembling letters. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. She slipped her hand into the pocket of her coat, feeling the worn leather of her watch. She pushed the door open, rain spilling in like a sudden tide. The interior was dim, the air thick with the scent of stale beer and old paper. Maps and black‑and‑white photographs lined the walls, each frame a silent witness to forgotten wars. A low hum of conversation buzzed from a back corner where a jukebox spun an old jazz record. The suspect slipped past the bar, heading toward a bookshelf that seemed out of place among the maps. It was a low, battered case of hardcovers, the spines cracked and dust‑caked. Quinn watched as the suspect’s hand brushed a particular volume, a thin panel giving way with a soft click. A narrow gap opened, revealing a hidden doorway that led into darkness. Quinn hesitated, the rain’s rhythm still pounding against the windows. She remembered the night DS Morris vanished, the scream that rose from the darkness, the empty coat that fluttered in the wind. The memory flickered like a candle in a storm. She tightened her grip on the leather watch, feeling the cold metal against her palm. “Ladies and gentlemen, we have a late night special,” a voice called from the bar. It was Tomás Herrera, his olive skin glistening under the neon sign, a Saint Christopher medallion swinging around his neck. He leaned against the bar, a scar on his left forearm catching the light. “You look like you’re chasing ghosts.” Quinn’s jaw clenched. She stepped past the bar, her boots echoing on the worn floorboards. “You know why I’m here,” she said, voice low, eyes fixed on the hidden doorway. The bar’s patrons fell silent, the jazz record sputtering. Tomás lifted his medallion, the metal catching a glint of the green sign. “The market’s not a place for the city police. You’ll find more than just shadows down there.” He gestured toward the bookshelf. “You think you can handle it?” Quinn’s stare hardened. “I’m not here for a tour. I’m here for a man who stole a piece of the city’s soul.” She stepped closer to the bookshelf, feeling the cool draft of the underground air brush her cheek. The rain’s percussion faded, replaced by a low hum that seemed to vibrate through the floor. The hidden doorway opened onto a narrow stairwell, lined with copper pipes that hissed with steam. The stairs descended into a black maw, the light from the bar swallowed by darkness. Quinn paused at the top, listening to the distant clatter of rain outside and the faint thrum of something deeper below. Tomás followed, his steps silent. “You can’t go alone. The Veil Market doesn’t like outsiders.” He placed a hand on Quinn’s elbow, the scarred forearm pressing against her coat. “I know the routes. I can get us in and out.” Quinn glanced back at the bar, at the neon sign, at the faces that turned away. She thought of the case files stacked on her desk, the reports of missing people, the rumors of supernatural dealings. She thought of the night she lost Morris, the inexplicable lights that had danced in the alley, the feeling of something watching from the shadows. She turned back to the stairwell. “I’m not turning back now.” She descended, the stairs creaking under her weight. The air grew colder, smelling of damp earth and metallic tang. The sound of water dripping echoed off stone walls, the rhythm now a slow, steady drip. At the bottom, a vaulted chamber opened before them, lit by low lanterns that cast amber glows on walls lined with stalls. The stalls were draped in dark fabrics, each bearing exotic wares: jars of glowing liquid, sigils etched into copper plates, crystal vials humming faintly. A crowd moved among the stalls, faces half‑hidden beneath hoods, eyes glinting with curiosity and caution. A vendor in a tattered coat gestured at a glass case. “You want the bone token?” he asked, his voice a rasp that sounded like dry leaves. “It’s the only way in. You’ll have to pay the price.” Tomás stepped forward, his medallion catching the lamp light. “We have a token.” He produced a small, polished bone from his pocket, its surface etched with runes. The vendor’s eyes widened, a flicker of recognition crossing his face. Quinn watched the exchange, her gaze darting to a shadowed corner where a figure lingered near a stall of cursed mirrors. The suspect’s silhouette was there, hood pulled low, a hand clutching a small, blackened object. He turned, his eyes meeting hers for a heartbeat before slipping back into the crowd. The vendor handed the bone token to Tomás, who placed it on the stall’s counter. The token glowed briefly, then dissolved into a puff of silver dust. The crowd shifted, and a hidden door at the far end of the market swung open, revealing a passage lined with ancient symbols. Quinn moved forward, her boots echoing on the stone floor. She felt the pulse of the market, the unspoken rules humming beneath the chatter. She caught a whisper of a name—“Raven”—and a chill brushed her spine. “Keep your head low,” Tomás murmured, his voice barely audible over the market’s hum. He gestured toward a narrow alley between stalls, a passage that led deeper into the labyrinth. “He’s heading toward the secret room. The one behind the bookshelf at the Raven’s Nest. That’s where the real business happens.” Quinn’s eyes flicked to the alley, then to the suspect, who vanished into a crowd of cloaked figures. She inhaled the damp, metallic air, feeling the weight of the leather watch against her wrist, each tick a reminder of time slipping away. She turned to Tomás, his scarred forearm resting on a crate of alchemical powders. “What’s the risk?” she asked, voice steady. Tomás lifted his medallion, the Saint Christopher charm glinting. “The market trades in things that aren’t meant for the living. You could walk out with more than a case file.” He glanced at the crowd, where a figure in a red coat watched them, eyes gleaming like polished stone. Quinn wiped rain from her cheek, the water sliding off like a river. She tightened the grip on her coat, the leather watch feeling heavier now. “I’m not here for a stroll. I’m here for answers.” She stepped into the narrow passage, the market’s sounds fading behind her. The passage narrowed, walls closing in, the lantern light flickering. The floor was slick with rain that had seeped in from above, each step sending tiny ripples across the stone. She could hear the faint clink of glass, the rustle of fabric, the low thrum of a drum beating somewhere deeper. Tomás followed, his stride matching hers, the Saint Christopher medallion swinging with each step. He stopped near a wall covered in fresh symbols, his fingers tracing a rune. “This is a binding,” he whispered, voice hushed. “It keeps the market hidden from the uninitiated. If you break it, you’ll bring the whole place down on you.” Quinn’s eyes flicked to the rune, then to the darkness beyond. She could feel the pull of the suspect’s presence, a magnetic tug that urged her forward. The rain outside seemed to echo in the stone, a distant drumbeat matching her heart. She reached a vaulted archway, the doorway to the secret room hidden behind a false wall of books. The wood was worn, the hinges rusted, but the outline of a lock glimmered with a faint blue hue. She placed her hand on the lock, feeling the cold metal seep into her skin. Tomás stepped forward, his scarred forearm brushing the lock. “You’re sure about this?” he asked, his voice low, eyes scanning the darkness. Quinn’s jaw set, the sharp line of her jaw visible even in the dim light. “I’m not turning back. He went this way for a reason.” She pulled the lock open, the mechanism clicking with a sound that seemed too loud in the hushed market. The door swung inward, revealing a room lit by a single lantern hanging from a low ceiling. The walls were lined with shelves filled with jars of strange substances—some pulsing, some emitting faint whispers. In the center, a table stood, its surface covered in a map of the city, inked in a strange, glowing fluid. The suspect stood beside it, his hood lowered, a dagger glinting in his hand. Quinn stepped inside, the rain’s echo fading behind her, replaced by the silence of the underground. The suspect turned, his eyes catching hers, a flash of recognition passing through the darkness. “Detective Quinn,” he said, voice smooth, “you finally made it.” Tomás moved to the side, his medallion catching the lantern’s light, the stone glinting. He placed a hand on a nearby shelf, his fingers brushing a vial that emitted a soft, green glow. “You’re in over your head,” he muttered, but his tone held a hint of respect. The suspect’s gaze shifted to the map, his finger tracing a line that led from the Raven’s Nest to the Veil Market, then to an unknown point beyond the city’s limits. “You think you can stop this?” he asked, the dagger’s edge catching the lantern’s glow. Quinn’s eyes narrowed, the rain’s memory still clinging to her coat. “I’m taking you in,” she said, voice steady, the leather watch ticking against her wrist. She stepped forward, the floorboards creaking under her weight. The suspect raised the dagger, the blade humming with an unseen energy. Tomás moved, his hand reaching for a vial, the green light flaring briefly. “There’s a way out,” he whispered, his eyes scanning the room for an exit. Quinn’s mind raced, the weight of the case, the loss of Morris, the strange pull of the underground. She felt a cold draft sweep through the room, the lantern flickering, shadows dancing on the walls. The suspect’s smile widened, his eyes glittering like polished stone. She made a decision, the rain outside a distant memory. She stepped toward the suspect, the dagger humming, the map glowing, the lantern’s light casting long shadows. The underground market thrummed around them, the hidden world alive with whispers and secrets. The chase had led her here, into the heart of a place where the ordinary met the uncanny. She lowered her hand, the leather watch ticking, the sound a metronome to the moment. The doorway to the secret room loomed, the suspect’s dagger poised, Tomás’s medallion glinting. The rain continued to fall above, a steady rhythm that seemed to pulse in time with the detective’s heartbeat. She stood at the threshold, the decision hanging in the air, the underground market waiting for her next move.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:14:48.234Z" 2/19/2026, 12:14:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1940
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1940
totalAiIsms48
found
0
word"echoing"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"pounding"
count1
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"glistening"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"maw"
count1
8
word"weight"
count4
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"etched"
count2
11
word"crystal"
count1
12
word"glinting"
count5
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count2
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"flicked"
count2
19
word"reminder"
count1
20
word"charm"
count1
21
word"gleaming"
count1
22
word"tracing"
count2
23
word"could feel"
count1
24
word"magnetic"
count1
25
word"echo"
count2
26
word"scanning"
count2
27
word"silence"
count1
28
word"raced"
count1
29
word"dancing"
count1
30
word"uncanny"
count1
31
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"flickered"
2"pounding"
3"fluttered"
4"glistening"
5"jaw clenched"
6"glint"
7"maw"
8"weight"
9"echoed"
10"etched"
11"crystal"
12"glinting"
13"flicker"
14"pulse"
15"unspoken"
16"whisper"
17"chill"
18"flicked"
19"reminder"
20"charm"
21"gleaming"
22"tracing"
23"could feel"
24"magnetic"
25"echo"
26"scanning"
27"silence"
28"raced"
29"dancing"
30"uncanny"
31"loomed"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches6
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"jaw clenched"
3"a flicker of recognition"
4"a flash of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
11.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount7
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1936
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1702
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn19
Street1
City1
Morris3
Tomás13
Herrera1
Saint3
Christopher3
Raven2
Nest1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Market"
places
0"Street"
1"Raven"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.942
windowScore0.833
83.04% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"hum that seemed to vibrate through the floor"
1"sounded like dry leaves"
2"rhythm that seemed to pulse in time with the detective’s heartbeat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1936
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
32.14% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean49.64
std13.03
cv0.262
sampleLengths
065
180
281
362
456
555
639
741
855
952
1040
1161
1246
1362
1438
1538
1651
1750
1836
1951
2042
2121
2249
2348
2451
2556
2642
2752
2822
2945
3069
3141
3248
3346
3435
3539
3645
3774
3852
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"were draped"
1"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs283
matches(empty)
52.15% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences126
ratio0.032
matches
0"The suspect—tall, wiry, a hood pulled low over his face—veered into a narrow alley off The Street of the City."
1"A faint green glow flickered above a doorway—a neon sign that read “The Raven’s Nest” in trembling letters."
2"She caught a whisper of a name—“Raven”—and a chill brushed her spine."
3"The walls were lined with shelves filled with jars of strange substances—some pulsing, some emitting faint whispers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1706
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.015826494724501757
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0023446658851113715
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
89.25% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean15.37
std5.73
cv0.373
sampleLengths
014
121
217
313
420
511
616
715
818
93
1017
1112
1216
1315
1418
1518
1613
1719
1812
1910
2022
219
2215
2315
2420
2514
266
273
2812
2915
309
3113
3222
336
343
3536
3616
3716
3815
3921
405
4124
4211
4316
4420
4525
466
4713
4811
4916
36.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.16666666666666666
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences120
matches
0"She chased a silhouette that"
1"She heard a muffled cough,"
2"She slipped her hand into"
3"She pushed the door open,"
4"It was a low, battered"
5"She remembered the night DS"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"It was Tomás Herrera, his"
8"He leaned against the bar,"
9"She stepped past the bar,"
10"she said, voice low, eyes"
11"He gestured toward the bookshelf"
12"She stepped closer to the"
13"He placed a hand on"
14"She thought of the case"
15"She thought of the night"
16"She turned back to the"
17"She descended, the stairs creaking"
18"he asked, his voice a"
19"He produced a small, polished"
ratio0.417
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences120
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her"
1"She chased a silhouette that"
2"Each step splashed through puddles,"
3"The suspect—tall, wiry, a hood"
4"Quinn’s boots thudded on the"
5"She heard a muffled cough,"
6"The alley narrowed into a"
7"A faint green glow flickered"
8"Quinn’s eyes narrowed."
9"She slipped her hand into"
10"She pushed the door open,"
11"The interior was dim, the"
12"Maps and black‑and‑white photographs lined"
13"A low hum of conversation"
14"The suspect slipped past the"
15"It was a low, battered"
16"Quinn watched as the suspect’s"
17"A narrow gap opened, revealing"
18"Quinn hesitated, the rain’s rhythm"
19"She remembered the night DS"
ratio0.975
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences88
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"She chased a silhouette that darted between shadowed doorways, the suspect’s coat flapping like a dark flag."
1"A narrow gap opened, revealing a hidden doorway that led into darkness."
2"The vendor handed the bone token to Tomás, who placed it on the stall’s counter."
3"Tomás followed, his stride matching hers, the Saint Christopher medallion swinging with each step."
4"She could feel the pull of the suspect’s presence, a magnetic tug that urged her forward."
5"The suspect turned, his eyes catching hers, a flash of recognition passing through the darkness."
6"Tomás moved to the side, his medallion catching the lantern’s light, the stone glinting."
7"The suspect’s gaze shifted to the map, his finger tracing a line that led from the Raven’s Nest to the Veil Market, then to an unknown point beyond the city’s l…"
8"Tomás moved, his hand reaching for a vial, the green light flaring briefly."
9"The rain continued to fall above, a steady rhythm that seemed to pulse in time with the detective’s heartbeat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she said, voice low, eyes fixed on the hidden doorway"
1"She descended, the stairs creaking under her weight"
2"he asked, his voice a rasp that sounded like dry leaves"
3"Tomás murmured, his voice barely audible over the market’s hum"
4"she asked, voice steady"
5"he whispered, voice hushed"
6"he asked, his voice low, eyes scanning the darkness"
7"he said, voice smooth,"
8"he muttered, but his tone held a hint of respect"
9"he asked, the dagger’s edge catching the lantern’s glow"
10"she said, voice steady, the leather watch ticking against her wrist"
11"he whispered, his eyes scanning the room for an exit"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Tomás murmured (murmur)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"he muttered (mutter)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.286
63.6633%