Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX60794WZYR39064YB0B81

Run Details

Duration:
4m 51s
Cost:
$0.024076
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven's Nest crackled against the Soho night, bathing the wet pavement in sickly emerald light. Inside, the air hung thick with the ghosts of a thousand cigarettes and the yeast-sweet promise of spilled ale. Aurora Carter stood behind the zinc bar, her thumb tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a habit older than memory, older than the bicycle spill that had put it there. She wiped a tumbler that needed no wiping, watching condensation pearl and die against the glass. Silas Blackwood limped past, his bad knee stiff from the afternoon's rain. His silver signet ring clicked against the three empty pint glasses he collected, a rhythmic counterpoint to the muted jazz seeping from the speakers. He said nothing, but his hazel eyes tracked the room with the vigilant passivity of a man who had once counted exits for a living. The door opened. A wedge of street noise—traffic snarl, distant sirens, the eternal rain of London—cut through the hush. Then silence again as the door swung shut. Rory looked up. The woman stood silhouetted against the fogged window, her form distorted by the condensation. She wore a camel coat that swallowed the dim light, tailored so precisely that the shoulders seemed carved from something harder than wool. She scanned the room, gaze skating over the walls plastered with ordnance survey maps and yellowing photographs of Prague, Karachi, cities that no longer bore the names printed beneath them. The woman's eyes found Rory and stopped. "Aurora Carter." The voice carried the precise articulation of their shared Welsh schooling, but stripped of the softness Rory remembered. Fiona Llywellyn stepped forward, and the light caught her face. The copper curls that had once tumbled to her waist during their interminable constitutional law seminars had vanished, replaced by a severe black crop that exposed the skull beneath the skin. Her cheekbones jutted, sharp as blades, and twin bruises of exhaustion painted the hollows beneath her eyes. "Fiona." Rory set down the cloth. Her hand moved involuntarily to her own hair—straight, black, unchanged since they were twenty-one, falling to her shoulders in the same style she'd worn the day she fled Cardiff. "I didn't know you were in London." "Clifford Chance. Financial crime." Fiona approached the bar, each footfall exact, her heels striking the sticky floorboards with metronomic precision. She didn't remove her coat. "Six months. They transferred me from the Cardiff office." Silas had retreated to the far end of the bar, his limp barely perceptible now, giving them the space near the window where the light was worst. Rory reached for the Talisker. "Drink?" "Large one." Rory poured two fingers into a heavy-bottomed glass. The amber liquid caught the green neon and turned poison-coloured. Fiona took it, her manicure perfect—shell pink, immaculate—and her knuckles white as bone china. "You work here?" Fiona asked. "Live above it. I help Silas sometimes." "Silas." Fiona's gaze drifted to the landlord, who was studiously rearranging bottles he had already arranged. "The retired spook." "He prefers 'resting.'" "Heard you left law." Fiona stated it, no inquiry in her tone. She shed the coat at last, revealing a silk blouse the colour of dried blood, and draped it over the stool. The fabric hung loose on her frame, suggesting recent weight loss, rapid and unkind. "Third year, you were first in cohort. Your father’s protégé. Editing the law review. Then you vanished." Rory's thumb found the scar again, tracing the raised crescent. Childhood. A rusty chain on a bicycle. Nothing to do with what came later, though Evan had known exactly where to press. "I didn't vanish. I relocated." "Evan told everyone you'd suffered a nervous collapse. That you'd gone to your aunt in Abergavenny to recuperate." Fiona drank. The whisky disappeared too quickly, harsh and burning. "I didn't believe him. Not entirely." "No aunt," Rory said. "Just Eva. And a train ticket." Fiona set the glass down with a click that was almost violent. Outside, the rain intensified, drumming the pavement in frantic bursts. "You were going to specialise in human rights defence. Do you remember? Third year moot court, the simulated case concerning the detained asylum seeker. You shredded my argument on the fifth point of law—judicial review limitations—and I was so furious I stormed out of the library. Then you found me three hours later at the Oak, bought me three pints of Brains, and explained exactly where my logic had failed. You were luminous, Rory. You were going to set the world on fire." "I remember the Brains," Rory said. She watched condensation slide down her own untouched glass. "I remember believing that if I just mastered the right precedents, I could construct a life that made sense. A fortress of logic." Fiona's fingers tightened on the glass. The silk at her throat trembled. "He hurt you." "Don't." "I saw the marks. That last term. The high collars in May. The way you stopped answering your door after midnight." "Fiona." "I'm sorry I didn't kick it down." Fiona's voice dropped to a whisper that scraped like gravel. "I'm sorry I let you disappear because I was afraid of getting involved, afraid of the drama, afraid that if I acknowledged what was happening I might have to do something about it. I stayed in Cardiff. I took the pupillage. I wore the wig while you were... where? Delivering noodles?" "Pad thai. Sometimes dumplings." Rory kept her voice level. "I work for the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei pays cash. I live in a room where the radiator sounds like a dying cow. I haven't cited a statute in four years." Fiona laughed, a sound like breaking glass. She reached into her handbag—a leather thing that cost more than Rory earned in a month—and withdrew a silver cigarette case. She didn't open it, just held it, her thumb caressing the latch. "I prosecute now. Financial corruption. I wear the suits. I drink the wine at chambers functions. I wake up at three in the morning with my heart hammering against my ribs, wondering when I became the bureaucrat crushing the vulnerable under the weight of procedure. I wake up knowing I chose the safe path while you took the leap into the dark." "You don't know where I landed." "I can see." Fiona gestured at the room, at the maps showing borders drawn and redrawn by war and treaty, at the photographs of strangers in distant streets. "You're hiding." "I'm surviving." "Is there a difference?" The question hung between them, heavy as the smoke that curled toward the ceiling, though no one had lit a cigarette in the bar for years. Rory thought of the scar on her wrist, the permanent mark of a childhood accident, and of the invisible scars that Evan had left, which had finally driven her to Eva's spare room and the train north. She thought of the law books boxed beneath her bed, untouched but not discarded, the pages yellowing like the photographs on Silas's walls. "Mother's dying," Fiona said suddenly. "Pancreatic. Fast. I'm only in London until Tuesday to close this case, then back to Llandaff to watch her fade." Rory felt something shift in her chest, a tectonic grinding. "I'm sorry." "Don't be. We carry what we're given." Fiona stood, pulling on the coat with sudden clumsiness, her elegant fingers fumbling with the buttons. She placed the untouched cigarette case on the counter beside her empty glass. Then she withdrew a business card—heavy linen, embossed, Clifford Chance in stern black type—and set it atop the silver case. "My mobile. New number. In case you ever want to... finish the conversation. Or not." She moved toward the door. The green neon bathed her exit, transforming her into a silhouette again, smaller than when she entered, diminished by the weight of confessions spoken aloud. "Fiona." She stopped. Her hand on the door handle. She didn't turn, but her shoulder blades sharpened beneath the expensive wool, defensive and waiting. Rory touched the scar on her wrist, the old crescent, the mark of before. "I kept your notes. The moot court prep. You wrote in the margins—'justice is a verb, not a noun.' I still have them." Fiona's head bowed. The neon flickered, and for a moment she was twenty-one again, copper-haired and laughing, holding three pints in the Oak's garden while the Welsh rain fell soft around them. Then the moment passed. Fiona pushed through the door into the London night, and the green light swallowed her whole. Rory picked up the card. Then the cigarette case. She ran her thumb over the embossed lettering, feeling the texture of success and sorrow pressed into paper. Silas limped back, his signet ring tapping the zinc counter, and began collecting Fiona's glass without comment. "Friend?" he asked, his voice gravel and smoke. "Archaeology," Rory said. She slipped the card into her back pocket, not discarding it, not yet, and reached for the next glass to polish, her thumb finding the crescent scar like a talisman against the dark.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:14:48.561Z" 2/19/2026, 12:14:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Fiona said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.044
90.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"quickly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tracing"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"footfall"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"silk"
count2
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"rhythmic"
2"silence"
3"scanned"
4"footfall"
5"perfect"
6"silk"
7"weight"
8"trembled"
9"whisper"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen85
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1508
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1028
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Fiona"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Fiona"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Blackwood1
London2
Prague1
Karachi1
Rory16
Welsh2
Llywellyn1
Cardiff1
Talisker1
Fiona17
Evan2
Eva1
Silas4
Clifford1
Chance1
Oak1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
5"Llywellyn"
6"Fiona"
7"Evan"
8"Eva"
9"Silas"
10"Clifford"
11"Chance"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Prague"
3"Karachi"
4"Cardiff"
5"Oak"
globalScore0.673
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed carved from something harder than wool"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1508
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean32.78
std28.86
cv0.88
sampleLengths
086
161
227
33
474
52
676
742
834
933
102
1132
125
137
1419
153
1664
1737
1834
1910
20105
2138
2215
231
2421
251
2668
2739
28102
296
3030
312
324
3386
3425
3512
3671
3730
381
3923
4037
4152
4244
438
443
4533
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences107
ratio0.056
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood behind the zinc bar, her thumb tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a habit older than memory, older than the bicycle spill that had put it there."
1"A wedge of street noise—traffic snarl, distant sirens, the eternal rain of London—cut through the hush."
2"Her hand moved involuntarily to her own hair—straight, black, unchanged since they were twenty-one, falling to her shoulders in the same style she'd worn the day she fled Cardiff."
3"Fiona took it, her manicure perfect—shell pink, immaculate—and her knuckles white as bone china."
4"She reached into her handbag—a leather thing that cost more than Rory earned in a month—and withdrew a silver cigarette case."
5"Then she withdrew a business card—heavy linen, embossed, Clifford Chance in stern black type—and set it atop the silver case."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1044
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.028735632183908046
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008620689655172414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean14.09
std12.67
cv0.899
sampleLengths
020
119
231
316
412
524
625
73
816
98
103
1114
1223
1330
147
152
1618
1710
1831
1917
206
2129
227
2320
245
259
2627
275
281
292
308
3110
3214
335
347
3516
363
373
3812
3921
4014
4117
4210
431
446
4515
465
4720
488
496
51.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.32710280373831774
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then silence again as the"
1"Then she withdrew a business"
2"Then the moment passed."
3"Then the cigarette case."
ratio0.057
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences70
matches
0"She wiped a tumbler that"
1"His silver signet ring clicked"
2"He said nothing, but his"
3"She wore a camel coat"
4"She scanned the room, gaze"
5"Her cheekbones jutted, sharp as"
6"Her hand moved involuntarily to"
7"She didn't remove her coat."
8"She shed the coat at"
9"She watched condensation slide down"
10"She reached into her handbag—a"
11"She didn't open it, just"
12"She thought of the law"
13"She placed the untouched cigarette"
14"She moved toward the door."
15"Her hand on the door"
16"She didn't turn, but her"
17"She ran her thumb over"
18"he asked, his voice gravel"
19"She slipped the card into"
ratio0.286
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Aurora Carter stood behind the"
2"She wiped a tumbler that"
3"Silas Blackwood limped past, his"
4"His silver signet ring clicked"
5"He said nothing, but his"
6"The door opened."
7"A wedge of street noise—traffic"
8"Rory looked up."
9"The woman stood silhouetted against"
10"She wore a camel coat"
11"She scanned the room, gaze"
12"The woman's eyes found Rory"
13"The voice carried the precise"
14"Fiona Llywellyn stepped forward, and"
15"The copper curls that had"
16"Her cheekbones jutted, sharp as"
17"Rory set down the cloth"
18"Her hand moved involuntarily to"
19"Fiona approached the bar, each"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood behind the zinc bar, her thumb tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a habit older than memory, older than the bicycle spill that had …"
1"She wore a camel coat that swallowed the dim light, tailored so precisely that the shoulders seemed carved from something harder than wool."
2"The copper curls that had once tumbled to her waist during their interminable constitutional law seminars had vanished, replaced by a severe black crop that exp…"
3"She slipped the card into her back pocket, not discarding it, not yet, and reached for the next glass to polish, her thumb finding the crescent scar like a tali…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Fiona stated (state)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.311
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.044
82.8490%