| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Fiona said suddenly [suddenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |
| 90.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1527 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1527 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tracing" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "footfall" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 85 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1508 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1028 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Fiona" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Fiona" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | London | 2 | | Prague | 1 | | Karachi | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Welsh | 2 | | Llywellyn | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Talisker | 1 | | Fiona | 17 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Clifford | 1 | | Chance | 1 | | Oak | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Llywellyn" | | 6 | "Fiona" | | 7 | "Evan" | | 8 | "Eva" | | 9 | "Silas" | | 10 | "Clifford" | | 11 | "Chance" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Prague" | | 3 | "Karachi" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Oak" |
| | globalScore | 0.673 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed carved from something harder than wool" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1508 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 32.78 | | std | 28.86 | | cv | 0.88 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 105 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 68 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 102 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 86 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 71 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 52 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood behind the zinc bar, her thumb tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a habit older than memory, older than the bicycle spill that had put it there." | | 1 | "A wedge of street noise—traffic snarl, distant sirens, the eternal rain of London—cut through the hush." | | 2 | "Her hand moved involuntarily to her own hair—straight, black, unchanged since they were twenty-one, falling to her shoulders in the same style she'd worn the day she fled Cardiff." | | 3 | "Fiona took it, her manicure perfect—shell pink, immaculate—and her knuckles white as bone china." | | 4 | "She reached into her handbag—a leather thing that cost more than Rory earned in a month—and withdrew a silver cigarette case." | | 5 | "Then she withdrew a business card—heavy linen, embossed, Clifford Chance in stern black type—and set it atop the silver case." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1044 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.028735632183908046 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008620689655172414 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 14.09 | | std | 12.67 | | cv | 0.899 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 51.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.32710280373831774 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Then silence again as the" | | 1 | "Then she withdrew a business" | | 2 | "Then the moment passed." | | 3 | "Then the cigarette case." |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She wiped a tumbler that" | | 1 | "His silver signet ring clicked" | | 2 | "He said nothing, but his" | | 3 | "She wore a camel coat" | | 4 | "She scanned the room, gaze" | | 5 | "Her cheekbones jutted, sharp as" | | 6 | "Her hand moved involuntarily to" | | 7 | "She didn't remove her coat." | | 8 | "She shed the coat at" | | 9 | "She watched condensation slide down" | | 10 | "She reached into her handbag—a" | | 11 | "She didn't open it, just" | | 12 | "She thought of the law" | | 13 | "She placed the untouched cigarette" | | 14 | "She moved toward the door." | | 15 | "Her hand on the door" | | 16 | "She didn't turn, but her" | | 17 | "She ran her thumb over" | | 18 | "he asked, his voice gravel" | | 19 | "She slipped the card into" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 2.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon above The" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stood behind the" | | 2 | "She wiped a tumbler that" | | 3 | "Silas Blackwood limped past, his" | | 4 | "His silver signet ring clicked" | | 5 | "He said nothing, but his" | | 6 | "The door opened." | | 7 | "A wedge of street noise—traffic" | | 8 | "Rory looked up." | | 9 | "The woman stood silhouetted against" | | 10 | "She wore a camel coat" | | 11 | "She scanned the room, gaze" | | 12 | "The woman's eyes found Rory" | | 13 | "The voice carried the precise" | | 14 | "Fiona Llywellyn stepped forward, and" | | 15 | "The copper curls that had" | | 16 | "Her cheekbones jutted, sharp as" | | 17 | "Rory set down the cloth" | | 18 | "Her hand moved involuntarily to" | | 19 | "Fiona approached the bar, each" |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood behind the zinc bar, her thumb tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a habit older than memory, older than the bicycle spill that had …" | | 1 | "She wore a camel coat that swallowed the dim light, tailored so precisely that the shoulders seemed carved from something harder than wool." | | 2 | "The copper curls that had once tumbled to her waist during their interminable constitutional law seminars had vanished, replaced by a severe black crop that exp…" | | 3 | "She slipped the card into her back pocket, not discarding it, not yet, and reached for the next glass to polish, her thumb finding the crescent scar like a tali…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.156 | | leniency | 0.311 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |