| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 978 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 978 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "standard" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 161 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 163 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 955 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde’s Grove: Closed for Restoration" | | 1 | "aware" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "listened" | | 4 | "thump" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 920 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | Deerleap | 2 | | Walk | 2 | | Plenty | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Closed | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | November | 1 | | English | 1 | | Voice | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Yu-Fei | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Closed" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something between wood and stone" | | 1 | "quite recall" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 955 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 17.69 | | std | 17.84 | | cv | 1.009 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 51 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 36 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "been torn" | | 1 | "were blackened" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 163 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "The streets had gone quiet ten minutes back—no cars, no voices, not even the distant hum of the South Circular." | | 1 | "A cold breeze slipped through, carrying the scent of wet moss and something older—like parchment left too long in a damp cellar." | | 2 | "She passed a signpost—*Isolde’s Grove: Closed for Restoration*—but the tape across it had been torn and trampled." | | 3 | "The canopy above wasn’t right—too high, too green for November." | | 4 | "Her torchlight bounced ahead, catching flashes of white—mushrooms, clustered in rings, their caps split open like mouths frozen mid-scream." | | 5 | "Then—movement." | | 6 | "The whispers came again—louder, layered now, like a chorus of breaths sliding across glass." | | 7 | "Knots formed faces—twisted, silent, mouths drawn in thin lines." | | 8 | "They rose without warning—massive, ancient oaks turned to something between wood and stone." | | 9 | "Her scar itched—the crescent on her wrist, old as childhood, a kettle-tip memory she couldn’t quite recall." | | 10 | "Its face—she couldn’t tell if it had one." | | 11 | "Yu-Fei had handed her the bag himself, sealed with wax stamped with a sigil—a serpent eating its tail." | | 12 | "The standing stones lit from within—veins of red fire tracing the carvings." |
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| 99.70% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 942 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.040339702760084924 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0031847133757961785 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 163 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 163 | | mean | 5.86 | | std | 4.83 | | cv | 0.825 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 72.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4662576687116564 | | totalSentences | 163 | | uniqueOpeners | 76 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the dry scrape of" | | 1 | "Too soon, the city vanished" | | 2 | "Then the pendant warmed." | | 3 | "Just a pulse, faint beneath" | | 4 | "Only silk-wrapped stone and a" | | 5 | "Just shadow between oaks." | | 6 | "Then a sound." | | 7 | "Too fast for a fox." | | 8 | "Then the standing stones." | | 9 | "Then she saw." | | 10 | "Just shadow beneath a hood." | | 11 | "Then it raised its free" | | 12 | "Then the wax seal cracked." |
| | ratio | 0.115 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t even reached the" | | 1 | "She checked the address again." | | 2 | "She shrugged the bag higher," | | 3 | "She passed a signpost—*Isolde’s Grove:" | | 4 | "She’d worn it every day" | | 5 | "he’d said, stirring noodles like" | | 6 | "She touched it." | | 7 | "She walked faster." | | 8 | "Her torchlight bounced ahead, catching" | | 9 | "She stepped back." | | 10 | "Her heel hit something soft." | | 11 | "She looked down." | | 12 | "She didn’t scream." | | 13 | "She stepped around it, slow," | | 14 | "Their bark darkened, split with" | | 15 | "They rose without warning—massive, ancient" | | 16 | "She was inside the grove." | | 17 | "Her scar itched—the crescent on" | | 18 | "She flexed her fingers, rubbed" | | 19 | "Its face—she couldn’t tell if" |
| | ratio | 0.195 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The bike chain snapped mid-pedal." | | 1 | "Rory’s front wheel wobbled, skidding" | | 2 | "She hadn’t even reached the" | | 3 | "The streets had gone quiet" | | 4 | "She checked the address again." | | 5 | "Yu-Fei had handed it to" | | 6 | "The clock on her handlebars" | | 7 | "Plenty of time." | | 8 | "Rusty iron bars hung crooked," | | 9 | "A cold breeze slipped through," | | 10 | "Rory pulled her phone." | | 11 | "She shrugged the bag higher," | | 12 | "The path curved too sharply" | | 13 | "Streetlights choked out." | | 14 | "The air thickened, pressing against" | | 15 | "She passed a signpost—*Isolde’s Grove:" | | 16 | "The mud held deep boot" | | 17 | "The Heartstone glowed, its crimson" | | 18 | "She’d worn it every day" | | 19 | "Yu-Fei had gone quiet when" |
| | ratio | 0.673 | |
| 44.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |