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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX67JQ0MX0F8QC58WCXVVF
Run Details
Model:
Stealth: Aurora Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
13.0s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.84%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
0.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
0.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
59.94%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
97.62%
Sentence length variance
(details)
35.22%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
30.03%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
32.61%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
61.7422%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora slipped the silver chain
over her head, the deep crimson of the Heartstone catching the faint moonlight that filtered through the oak canopy.
The pendant throbbed gently against
her chest, a
warmth
that rose when she stepped past the ancient standing stones.
She paused at the edge
of the clearing, the wildflowers swaying in a breeze she could not feel.
The night air smelled of
damp earth and something sweet, like fermenting fruit. She stared at the stones, their moss‑covered trunks rising like
sentinels
.
Her bright blue eyes traced
the carvings, half‑forgotten runes that glimmered faintly in the darkness.
A small crescent scar on
her left wrist twitched as she pressed the pendant harder against her skin.
The scar, a reminder of
a childhood accident,
seemed to
pulse
in rhythm with the stone.
The grove felt wrong the
instant she entered.
A low hum hung in
the air, a sound that should have been wind but carried a metallic edge.
She turned, expecting to see
leaves rustling, but the trees stood still, their branches rigid
as if holding their breath
. “Did I miss the bus?”
she muttered, half‑joking, half‑serious
.
Her voice cracked against the
stone, scattering a few moths that
fluttered
away.
A rustle whispered from the
periphery, a soft scrape that could have been a small animal.
The flowers, normally bright, seemed
to dim, their petals folding inward.
Aurora’s breath caught, but she
steadied herself, her mind already cataloguing possibilities.
She stepped deeper, the pendant’s
glow intensifying, a faint inner
light that seemed to react to something unseen
.
The ground beneath her boots
softened, the grass giving way to a carpet of moss that felt damp, almost clammy. “Who’s there?”
she whispered, her tone flat, as if challenging the night itself
.
She lifted her hand, fingertips
brushing a stone. The surface was cold, the cold that seeped into her bones. A faint chuckle drifted from nowhere, a sound that
hung in the air
like a breath. Aurora turned, eyes
scanning
the darkness. Shadows shifted at the edge of her vision, shapes that dissolved when she
tried to
focus.
She swallowed, feeling the scar
on her wrist tighten. The Heartstone thumped louder, a syncopated rhythm that matched the thudding of her own heart.
She lifted the pendant, holding
it up to the sky. The crimson gemstone glowed brighter, a soft
pulse
that
seemed to
draw the darkness toward it. “Fine,” she said, voice steadier now, “play your games.” She took a step forward, the moss yielding under her
weight
. The hum grew louder, now a low vibration that
resonated
through the soles of her shoes. A gust of wind brushed past, though no trees moved. The wildflowers swayed in a
synchronized
wave, as if an unseen hand conducted them. Aurora’s hair brushed against her shoulders, black strands catching the moonlight.
She bent to pick a
flower, the stem breaking with a soft snap. The sound
echoed
, startling in the stillness.
She stared at the broken
stem, then at the ground where tiny insects scurried away. “Not funny,”
she muttered, half‑laughing, half‑gritting
.
She pressed the pendant against
her chest, feeling the
warmth
seep deeper. A distant howl rose, not of any animal she knew.
It was high, thin, and
seemed to
come from both behind and ahead of her.
She spun, eyes wide, the
scar on her wrist throbbing as if the stone had a heartbeat of its own.
She clenched her fists, the
fingers digging into the moss. “You think you can hide,” she said, voice low, “but I’ve chased worse.” She remembered the night she left Evan, the anger that drove her out of a toxic relationship, the way she had learned to read people like open books. This was a different book, its pages blank and unsettling. A shape emerged from behind a stone, tall and slender, its outline flickering like a candle in a draft. It moved with a jerky, unnatural gait. Aurora’s breath hitched, but she held her ground, the pendant’s glow casting an eerie halo around her. “Are you a trick?”
she asked, her voice steadier now
. “A prank? A dream?” The figure did not answer. Instead, it raised a hand, fingers elongated, ending in what
looked like tiny claws
. The claws brushed the moss, leaving a faint, phosphorescent trail that faded within seconds. Aurora’s
eyes narrowed
. She felt the scar on her wrist flare, a sting that reminded her of the accident that left the crescent mark. She pressed the pendant harder, feeling the
warmth
surge, a
pulse
that
seemed to
push against the darkness. “Listen,” she said, addressing the night itself, “I’m not afraid of shadows.” She took another step, the ground beneath her feet humming with each
footfall
. A chorus of whispers rose, layered, incomprehensible, yet somehow
familiar
. Words slipped through the air like moths, landing on her ears before fluttering away. She tilted her head, trying to catch a fragment. “Help…,” a voice hissed, barely audible over the hum. Aurora’s jaw tightened. She took a breath, inhaling the scent of damp earth, wildflowers, and something metallic. She lifted the pendant again, its crimson heart beating against her chest. “Give me a sign,”
she said, voice firm
. “If you’re anything, show me something I can understand.” The stone responded, a surge of heat that traveled up her neck, down her arms, settling in her fingertips. The glow intensified, casting a red sheen over the moss. The standing stones
trembled
, ancient roots shuddering as if awakened. A low, guttural laugh rolled from the darkness, resonating through the stones. The laughter was
not human, nor animal, but something
that
seemed to
echo
from a place beyond the grove. Aurora steadied herself, her mind
racing
. She remembered the stories of the Fae, of pockets where time bent, where reality thinned. She had come here because the Heartstone had
pulsed
near a Hel portal, a place of passage between worlds. She had hoped to retrieve a missing fragment, a piece of a larger puzzle. She felt the
pulse
of the pendant align with the hum, a rhythm that matched the beating of her own heart. The scar on her wrist glowed faintly, a crescent of
light that seemed to mirror the stone’s glow
. “Enough,”
she whispered, voice barely more than a breath
. “I’m not leaving until I know what you want.” The darkness shifted, the shadows coalescing into a shape that resembled a figure, but its edges were fluid, like smoke caught in a wind. Its eyes—if they could be called that—were twin pits of black, reflecting the moonlight in a way that made Aurora’s skin crawl. She stepped forward, the pendant’s glow flaring, a
beacon
in the
gloom
. The figure recoiled, its form rippling. “Why are you here?”
she demanded, voice echoing off the stones
. The figure’s answer was a chorus of whispers, each syllable a fragment of a forgotten language. The Heartstone
pulsed
, a rapid
beat that seemed to sync with the figure’s murmurs
. Aurora pressed the pendant to her chest, feeling the
warmth
spread, a heat that chased away the
chill
that clung to her bones. She closed her eyes, letting the sensation guide her. The
warmth
rose, a tide that surged through her veins, illuminating the darkness within the grove. When she opened them, the figure had dissolved, leaving only a faint scent of ozone and a lingering
echo
of the guttural laugh. Aurora exhaled, the scar on her wrist fading to its usual faint line. She felt the pendant’s glow dim, the heat retreating to a gentle
pulse
. The wildflowers opened fully, their petals shimmering with dew that reflected the moon. She turned toward the standing stones, the ancient oaks
looming
like guardians. The hum that had filled the night softened, becoming a low, steady
thrum that seemed to settle into the ground
. She reached into her pocket, pulling out a small notebook she kept for field notes. She flipped to a blank page, the pen poised. “It’s not a portal,”
she wrote, the words flowing without hesitation
. “It’s a crossing. The Heartstone reacts, but the Fae’s edge is thin. Something watches.” She paused, listening to the night’s breath. The rustle of leaves returned, softer now, like a sigh. The air felt lighter, as if the
tension
had
been released
. She slipped the pendant back onto her neck, the silver chain settling against her skin. The scar on her wrist tingled one last time, a
reminder
of the accident that had left its mark. She turned, stepping away from the stones, her boots crunching on the moss. The grove
seemed to
close behind her, the ancient oaks retreating into shadow. The night sky stretched above, stars glimmering like distant eyes. She walked without looking back, the Heartstone’s glow a steady,
comforting
rhythm against her chest. The grove’s whispers faded, leaving only the sound of her own breathing and the distant call of an owl. She emerged at the edge of Richmond Park, the city lights far beyond the trees. The air smelled of rain, and the night felt ordinary again. She lifted her head, the moon reflected in her bright blue eyes. She smiled, a thin line on her lips, the scar on her wrist hidden beneath the shirt. She tucked the notebook into her bag, the pen clicking shut. She walked toward the streetlights, the Heartstone’s faint glow the her path, her mind already turning over the next steps. The night held no more secrets for her, at least for now.
created_at
"2026-02-19T12:14:56.094Z"
2/19/2026, 12:14:56 PM
model
"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
2960
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
12739
tokens_prompt
1038
tokens_completion
2447
native_tokens_prompt
877
native_tokens_completion
1956
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0
router
(null)
provider_responses
(null)
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771503296-ubmVic6nEedEK93omgYY"
upstream_id
"gen-1771503296-ubmVic6nEedEK93omgYY"
total_cost
0
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Stealth"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
16
tagDensity
0.75
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
96.84%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1584
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
highlights
0
"gently"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1584
totalAiIsms
36
found
0
word
"throbbed"
count
1
1
word
"warmth"
count
5
2
word
"sentinels"
count
1
3
word
"traced"
count
1
4
word
"reminder"
count
2
5
word
"pulse"
count
5
6
word
"fluttered"
count
1
7
word
"scanning"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
1
9
word
"resonated"
count
1
10
word
"synchronized"
count
1
11
word
"echoed"
count
1
12
word
"footfall"
count
1
13
word
"familiar"
count
1
14
word
"trembled"
count
1
15
word
"echo"
count
2
16
word
"racing"
count
1
17
word
"pulsed"
count
2
18
word
"beacon"
count
1
19
word
"gloom"
count
1
20
word
"echoing"
count
1
21
word
"chill"
count
1
22
word
"looming"
count
1
23
word
"tension"
count
1
24
word
"comforting"
count
1
highlights
0
"throbbed"
1
"warmth"
2
"sentinels"
3
"traced"
4
"reminder"
5
"pulse"
6
"fluttered"
7
"scanning"
8
"weight"
9
"resonated"
10
"synchronized"
11
"echoed"
12
"footfall"
13
"familiar"
14
"trembled"
15
"echo"
16
"racing"
17
"pulsed"
18
"beacon"
19
"gloom"
20
"echoing"
21
"chill"
22
"looming"
23
"tension"
24
"comforting"
0.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
4
maxInWindow
4
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
1
2
label
"hung in the air"
count
2
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"clenched her fists"
2
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
111
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
12
narrationSentences
111
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
115
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
41
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1582
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
22
wordCount
1500
uniqueNames
7
maxNameDensity
0.73
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone
6
Evan
1
Aurora
11
Fae
1
Hel
1
Richmond
1
Park
1
persons
0
"Heartstone"
1
"Evan"
2
"Aurora"
places
0
"Hel"
1
"Richmond"
2
"Park"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
105
glossingSentenceCount
10
matches
0
"as if holding their breath"
1
"light that seemed to react to something unseen"
2
"as if challenging the night itself"
3
"pulse that seemed to draw the darkness toward it"
4
"looked like tiny claws"
5
"pulse that seemed to push against the darkness"
6
"something that seemed to echo from a place beyond the grove"
7
"light that seemed to mirror the stone’s glow"
8
"beat that seemed to sync with the figure’s murmurs"
9
"thrum that seemed to settle into the ground"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.632
wordCount
1582
matches
0
"not human, nor animal, but something"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
115
matches
(empty)
59.94%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
45
mean
35.16
std
12.65
cv
0.36
sampleLengths
0
74
1
60
2
47
3
22
4
39
5
38
6
32
7
38
8
50
9
36
10
35
11
35
12
18
13
45
14
61
15
43
16
14
17
33
18
42
19
25
20
33
21
9
22
29
23
17
24
39
25
31
26
54
27
39
28
18
29
46
30
18
31
27
32
37
33
48
34
39
35
32
36
24
37
25
38
28
39
34
40
36
41
34
42
38
43
28
44
32
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"been released"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
270
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
2
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
115
ratio
0.009
matches
0
"Its eyes—if they could be called that—were twin pits of black, reflecting the moonlight in a way that made Aurora’s skin crawl."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1502
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.02330226364846871
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.005992010652463382
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
115
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
97.62%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
115
mean
13.76
std
5.42
cv
0.394
sampleLengths
0
24
1
19
2
18
3
13
4
11
5
15
6
18
7
16
8
8
9
19
10
20
11
9
12
13
13
16
14
11
15
12
16
18
17
20
18
13
19
8
20
11
21
16
22
6
23
16
24
9
25
15
26
10
27
16
28
20
29
16
30
10
31
14
32
11
33
13
34
7
35
15
36
6
37
12
38
10
39
15
40
20
41
10
42
41
43
10
44
19
45
7
46
17
47
10
48
4
49
5
35.22%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
17
diversityRatio
0.21739130434782608
totalSentences
115
uniqueOpeners
25
30.03%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"Instead, it raised a hand,"
ratio
0.009
32.61%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
52
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"She paused at the edge"
1
"She stared at the stones,"
2
"Her bright blue eyes traced"
3
"She turned, expecting to see"
4
"she muttered, half‑joking, half‑serious"
5
"Her voice cracked against the"
6
"She stepped deeper, the pendant’s"
7
"she whispered, her tone flat,"
8
"She lifted her hand, fingertips"
9
"She swallowed, feeling the scar"
10
"She lifted the pendant, holding"
11
"she said, voice steadier now,"
12
"She bent to pick a"
13
"She stared at the broken"
14
"she muttered, half‑laughing, half‑gritting"
15
"She pressed the pendant against"
16
"It was high, thin, and"
17
"She spun, eyes wide, the"
18
"She clenched her fists, the"
19
"she said, voice low, She"
ratio
0.468
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
109
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"Aurora slipped the silver chain"
1
"The pendant throbbed gently against"
2
"She paused at the edge"
3
"The night air smelled of"
4
"She stared at the stones,"
5
"Her bright blue eyes traced"
6
"A small crescent scar on"
7
"The scar, a reminder of"
8
"The grove felt wrong the"
9
"A low hum hung in"
10
"She turned, expecting to see"
11
"she muttered, half‑joking, half‑serious"
12
"Her voice cracked against the"
13
"A rustle whispered from the"
14
"The flowers, normally bright, seemed"
15
"Aurora’s breath caught, but she"
16
"She stepped deeper, the pendant’s"
17
"The ground beneath her boots"
18
"she whispered, her tone flat,"
19
"She lifted her hand, fingertips"
ratio
0.982
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
111
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
0.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
84
technicalSentenceCount
19
matches
0
"Aurora slipped the silver chain over her head, the deep crimson of the Heartstone catching the faint moonlight that filtered through the oak canopy."
1
"She turned, expecting to see leaves rustling, but the trees stood still, their branches rigid as if holding their breath."
2
"Her voice cracked against the stone, scattering a few moths that fluttered away."
3
"A rustle whispered from the periphery, a soft scrape that could have been a small animal."
4
"She stepped deeper, the pendant’s glow intensifying, a faint inner light that seemed to react to something unseen."
5
"The ground beneath her boots softened, the grass giving way to a carpet of moss that felt damp, almost clammy."
6
"The Heartstone thumped louder, a syncopated rhythm that matched the thudding of her own heart."
7
"The hum grew louder, now a low vibration that resonated through the soles of her shoes."
8
"The wildflowers swayed in a synchronized wave, as if an unseen hand conducted them."
9
"She spun, eyes wide, the scar on her wrist throbbing as if the stone had a heartbeat of its own."
10
"She felt the scar on her wrist flare, a sting that reminded her of the accident that left the crescent mark."
11
"The stone responded, a surge of heat that traveled up her neck, down her arms, settling in her fingertips."
12
"The standing stones trembled, ancient roots shuddering as if awakened."
13
"The Heartstone pulsed, a rapid beat that seemed to sync with the figure’s murmurs."
14
"Aurora pressed the pendant to her chest, feeling the warmth spread, a heat that chased away the chill that clung to her bones."
15
"The warmth rose, a tide that surged through her veins, illuminating the darkness within the grove."
16
"The wildflowers opened fully, their petals shimmering with dew that reflected the moon."
17
"The scar on her wrist tingled one last time, a reminder of the accident that had left its mark."
18
"She turned, stepping away from the stones, her boots crunching on the moss."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
12
uselessAdditionCount
8
matches
0
"she whispered, her tone flat, as if challenging the night itself"
1
"she said, voice steadier now,"
2
"she said, voice low,"
3
"she asked, her voice steadier now"
4
"she said, voice firm"
5
"she whispered, voice barely more than a breath"
6
"she demanded, voice echoing off the stones"
7
"she wrote, the words flowing without hesitation"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she muttered (mutter)"
1
"she whispered (whisper)"
2
"she muttered (mutter)"
3
"a voice hissed (hiss)"
4
"she whispered (whisper)"
5
"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences
16
tagDensity
0.688
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.545
effectiveRatio
0.545
61.7422%