Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6ARPGN1P8Y90YG3Y3S0E

Run Details

Duration:
35.2s
Cost:
$0.030141
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and Rory's stomach dropped. Lucien stood in the hallway, platinum hair catching the flickering light from the curry house sign below. His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her throat tight. Three months. Three months since she'd walked away from him in the rain outside Silas' bar, and he looked exactly the same. Charcoal suit pressed to perfection, ivory-handled cane in one hand, mouth set in that infuriating line between amusement and something darker. "You have three deadbolts on this door." His accent wrapped around the words, familiar and wrong all at once. "Eva is paranoid as ever, I see." Rory blocked the doorway with her shoulder. "She's not here." "I know." "Then why are you here?" "Because you are." Lucien tilted his head, platinum strands falling across his forehead. "May I come in, or shall we have this conversation where your neighbours can listen?" Mrs. Kowalski's door clicked open down the hall. Rory bit back a curse and stepped aside. He moved past her into the cramped flat, cane tapping against the worn floorboards. Books cascaded across every surface—Eva's organised chaos that Rory had learned to navigate over the past three months of crashing here. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, raised his head from the armchair and promptly ignored their visitor. Rory closed the door. Didn't lock it. "How did you find me?" "I'm an information broker, ma chérie. Finding people is what I do." Lucien surveyed the flat, gaze lingering on her delivery bag slumped against the wall, then on the takeaway containers stacked by the sink. "Though I confess I'm surprised to discover you've been in London this entire time." "Eva needed help with research." "Eva." He turned that strange two-toned stare on her. "Always convenient, how Eva needs you precisely when you're running from something." Heat flashed through her chest. "I wasn't running." "No?" Lucien set his cane against the bookshelf with deliberate care. "Then what do you call disappearing without a word? Not answering your mobile? Avoiding every place you knew I'd look?" "Smart decision-making." His jaw tightened. For a moment neither of them moved, the air between them charged with everything they hadn't said that night in the rain. Rory's fingers found the small crescent scar on her left wrist, tracing its familiar curve. "You had Silas lie to me." Lucien's voice dropped lower, accent thickening. "For two weeks, I believed you'd left London entirely. Gone back to Cardiff, perhaps. Or found somewhere new to disappear into." "I didn't ask him to lie." "But you didn't correct him either." Rory crossed her arms. "What do you want, Lucien?" "What do I—" He laughed, sharp and bitter. "What I've wanted for three months. An explanation. A conversation. Anything other than silence." "We had our conversation." "We had you walking away mid-sentence." He closed the distance between them, and Rory's back hit the door. "We had you deciding for both of us what we could or couldn't handle." She met his eyes, refusing to flinch. "You're half-demon. Your father is some lord in Avaros. The supernatural underworld wants you dead or worse half the time, and the other half wants to use you. I'm not—I can't—" "Can't what?" His hand came up, palm flat against the door beside her head. "Can't handle it? Can't trust me? Can't admit you felt something?" "All of the above." The words came out quieter than she intended. Lucien's expression shifted. The anger melted into something raw, exposed. "I told you things I've never told anyone. About Marseille. About my mother. About why I came to London in the first place." "I know." "And you said you understood." "I did understand. I do." Rory pressed her shoulders against the door, needing the solid surface behind her. "That's the problem, Lucien. I understood exactly what it meant. What being close to you would cost." "So you decided to pay in advance by leaving?" "I decided not to become another casualty in your world." She pushed off the door, forcing him back a step. "You've got enemies who'd gut me just to make you feel something. Who'd use me against you without blinking. And maybe you're fine with that risk, but I've already done the whole 'loving someone who brings chaos into my life' routine. It didn't end well." "I'm not him." Ice crystallised in Lucien's voice. "I'm not your ex." "I know you're not Evan. But that doesn't change—" "Doesn't change what? That I'm dangerous?" He laughed again, uglier this time. "You knew what I was from the beginning, Rory. I never hid it. Never pretended to be anything other than exactly what I am." "And what are you, exactly?" She stepped closer, anger rising to match his. "Because some days you're the charming fixer who helps people navigate supernatural messes. Other days you're the cold-blooded broker who trades information and doesn't care who bleeds from it. Which one am I supposed to trust?" "Both." His amber eye caught the light, gold and fierce. "All of it. That's the point—I wanted you to see all of it and still—" He stopped. Swallowed. Rory's heart hammered against her ribs. "Still what?" "Still choose to stay." The confession came out rough, stripped of his usual polish. "Still look at me the way you did that night at Silas' before the job went wrong. Like I was worth something beyond my contacts and my blade." The air between them thickened. Ptolemy meowed from his perch, a long questioning sound that neither of them acknowledged. "Lucien." Rory's voice came out unsteady. "That's not fair." "None of this is fair." He reached for her, fingers ghosting along her jaw. "But I'm here anyway. I tracked you down across London, called in favours, had Silas finally crack after plying him with that awful Irish whiskey he hoards. I did all of that because three months without you has been—" His throat worked. Rory lifted her hand, fingers curling around his wrist. She could feel his pulse beneath her touch, quick and human despite everything else about him that wasn't. "Has been what?" "Unbearable." The word fell between them, confession and accusation both. "I keep seeing you in places you've never been. Turn around in my office expecting you to be cataloguing my files and making sarcastic comments about my organisational system. The other night I bought takeaway from Golden Empress just to—" He stopped himself, jaw clenched. "Just to what?" Her thumb pressed against his pulse point. "Just to smell jasmine rice and hear someone complain about traffic. Just to pretend for ten minutes that you might walk through my door with spring rolls and that sharp wit of yours." His free hand came up, cradling her face with unexpected gentleness. "I'm not asking you to dive into my world headfirst, ma chérie. I'm asking you to let me protect you while we figure out what this is. Was. Could be." Rory's eyes burned. "You can't protect me from everything." "No. But I can try." His forehead dropped to hers. "Let me try."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His accent wrapped around [around]"
1"He laughed again [again]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.063
95.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1195
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1195
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"navigate"
count2
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"intensity"
2"familiar"
3"navigate"
4"charged"
5"tracing"
6"silence"
7"could feel"
8"pulse"
9"jaw clenched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1184
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
20.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount501
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.59
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Charcoal1
Mrs1
Eva2
Heat1
Lucien7
Ice1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Mrs"
2"Eva"
3"Heat"
4"Lucien"
5"Ice"
places
0"Charcoal"
globalScore0.203
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1184
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"said that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean22.34
std19.32
cv0.865
sampleLengths
08
177
226
310
42
55
628
716
849
912
1049
115
1221
138
1431
152
1640
1733
186
196
209
2122
224
2332
2438
2525
2612
2733
282
295
3035
319
3265
3312
349
3536
3649
3725
383
398
4042
4119
429
4353
443
4527
463
4750
485
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs89
matches(empty)
83.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences97
ratio0.021
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her throat tight."
1"Books cascaded across every surface—Eva's organised chaos that Rory had learned to navigate over the past three months of crashing here."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount491
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.02240325865580448
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.006109979633401222
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.21
std9.89
cv0.81
sampleLengths
08
117
217
32
420
521
619
77
87
93
102
115
1213
1315
141
157
168
1714
1821
1914
204
213
225
2335
2414
255
269
2712
285
293
3011
3120
322
333
3422
3515
3612
3721
386
396
404
415
428
4314
444
4518
4614
477
4831
4914
60.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.44329896907216493
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences52
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
1"His accent wrapped around the"
2"He moved past her into"
3"He turned that strange two-toned"
4"His jaw tightened."
5"He laughed, sharp and bitter"
6"He closed the distance between"
7"She met his eyes, refusing"
8"His hand came up, palm"
9"She pushed off the door,"
10"He laughed again, uglier this"
11"She stepped closer, anger rising"
12"His amber eye caught the"
13"He reached for her, fingers"
14"His throat worked."
15"She could feel his pulse"
16"He stopped himself, jaw clenched."
17"Her thumb pressed against his"
18"His free hand came up,"
19"His forehead dropped to hers"
ratio0.385
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences52
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
2"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
3"Charcoal suit pressed to perfection,"
4"His accent wrapped around the"
5"Rory blocked the doorway with"
6"Lucien tilted his head, platinum"
7"Kowalski's door clicked open down"
8"Rory bit back a curse"
9"He moved past her into"
10"Books cascaded across every surface—Eva's"
11"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, raised his"
12"Rory closed the door."
13"Lucien surveyed the flat, gaze"
14"He turned that strange two-toned"
15"Heat flashed through her chest."
16"Lucien set his cane against"
17"His jaw tightened."
18"Rory's fingers found the small"
19"Lucien's voice dropped lower, accent"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her throat tight."
1"She could feel his pulse beneath her touch, quick and human despite everything else about him that wasn't."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He reached, fingers ghosting along her jaw"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"Rory pressed (press)"
2"He laughed again (laugh)"
3"Her thumb pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.125
78.6588%