Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6AXWMKWRV8M77AYWTSFX

Run Details

Duration:
8.7s
Cost:
$0.000586
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just after midnight, sharp and insistent, like someone had pressed their knuckles against the wood and refused to lift them. Rory froze mid-sip, the lukewarm tea sloshing over the rim of her mug. Ptolemy’s ears twitched, his tail flicking once before he slunk under the sofa. No one visited at this hour—not unless they were lost, drunk, or carrying bad news. She set the mug down with a quiet *clink* and wiped her palms on her thighs. The flat smelled of old paper and the faint, lingering spice of the curry house below. Three deadbolts. She’d installed them herself after the last time Evan had shown up unannounced, his voice slurring apologies through the door. But this wasn’t Evan’s rhythm. This was someone who expected to be let in. The knock came again, harder this time. “Rory. Open up.” Her breath hitched. That voice—smooth as aged whiskey, laced with something darker. She hadn’t heard it in over a year, not since the night she’d walked out of his office in Soho without looking back. Not since the argument that had left her wrist throbbing where his fingers had dug in, not in anger, but in desperation. She crossed the room in three strides and pressed her eye to the peephole. The fish-eye lens warped him, but there was no mistaking the slicked-back platinum hair, the sharp line of his jaw, the way he stood like he owned the hallway. Lucien Moreau. The Frenchman. Her ex-business partner. Her ex-*something else*, too, though neither of them had ever given it a name. His amber-and-black gaze flicked up, as if he could see her through the door. “I know you’re there.” She exhaled through her nose and undid the deadbolts one by one. The last one stuck, and she had to jiggle it before it gave with a metallic groan. The door swung open just enough to reveal him in full—tailored charcoal suit, ivory-handled cane tapping against the scuffed linoleum, the faintest scent of bergamot and something smoky clinging to him. “You look like hell,” he said. She didn’t bother with a greeting. “What do you want, Lucien?” His lips quirked, not quite a smile. “Charming as ever.” He tilted his head, taking in the flat behind her—the stacks of books, the half-empty takeaway containers, the way her fingers still hovered near the doorframe, ready to slam it shut. “May I come in?” “No.” A beat of silence. Then, quieter: “Please.” That word, from *him*, sent a jolt through her. Lucien Moreau didn’t beg. He didn’t *ask*. He *took*. Or he paid. Or he manipulated. But he didn’t stand in doorways at midnight with his heterochromatic eyes dark and his voice rough around the edges, saying *please* like it cost him something. She stepped back. He didn’t move at first, as if he expected a trap. Then he crossed the threshold, his cane clicking against the floor. The door swung shut behind him with a finality that made her stomach twist. The flat suddenly felt smaller, the air thicker. Ptolemy chose that moment to emerge from under the sofa, tail puffed, and let out a low, warning growl. Lucien’s gaze flicked to the cat. “Still haven’t house-trained that thing, I see.” “He’s not a thing.” She folded her arms. “And you didn’t answer my question. What are you doing here?” He set his cane against the armchair and unbuttoned his jacket with deliberate slowness. The movement drew her eye to the way his shirt clung to his shoulders, the faint outline of something dark and inked beneath the fabric. A new tattoo, maybe. Or an old one she’d never seen. “Business,” he said. “At midnight?” “You used to keep later hours.” “That was before.” Before *you*. Before the job in Prague that had gone sideways. Before the night in his office when he’d pressed her against the desk and whispered things in French that had made her skin burn, only to pull away like she’d scalded him. Before she’d realised that whatever they were doing, it wasn’t just business, and that terrified him more than any demon contract ever could. She turned away, busying herself with the kettle. “Tea?” “No.” “Whiskey, then.” “No.” She paused, her back still to him. “Then what do you want, Lucien?” The silence that followed was heavy, the kind that pressed against her ribs. She could hear him breathing, slow and controlled, like he was measuring his words. When he finally spoke, his voice was low, almost careful. “I need your help.” She turned, leaning against the counter. “With what?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he reached into his jacket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. Not paper—parchment, yellowed and brittle at the edges. He held it out between two fingers. She didn’t take it. “What is it?” “A ledger.” “For?” “A job.” She exhaled through her nose. “I’m not in the business anymore.” “You’re delivering takeaway for a Chinese restaurant.” “It’s honest work.” “It’s beneath you.” Her fingers twitched. “You don’t get to decide what’s beneath me.” His jaw tightened, just for a second. Then he set the parchment on the counter between them, smoothing it flat with his palm. The ink was faded, the handwriting looping and precise. Names. Dates. Amounts. And at the bottom, a symbol she recognised—the same one that had been carved into the doorframe of the safe house in Prague. Her stomach dropped. “You’re still working for them,” she said. “Not by choice.” “Bullshit.” His eyes flashed, the black one swallowing the amber for a second. “You think I *want* to be tangled up with the Avarosian syndicate again? After what happened last time?” She remembered the blood on his cuffs. The way his hands had shaken when he’d pressed them to her face, his voice raw. *Run.* She pushed the memory away. “Then why are you here?” “Because you’re the only one who can get me out.” The kettle whistled, sharp and shrill. She turned off the heat and poured the water into her mug, her movements deliberate. “I’m not your get-out-of-jail-free card, Lucien.” “No.” His voice was quieter now. “But you’re the only one who knows how they think. How *I* think.” She looked at him then, really looked. The shadows under his eyes. The way his fingers drummed once against the counter before he stilled them. The tension in his shoulders, like he was holding himself together by sheer force of will. “You’re scared,” she realised. His laugh was humourless. “Terrified.” The word hung between them, raw and honest. Lucien Moreau, half-demon fixer, man who’d once told her he didn’t know the meaning of fear, was standing in her flat at midnight admitting he was terrified. And god help her, she believed him. She picked up the parchment, her fingers brushing his. A spark. A memory. His hand on her wrist, his thumb tracing the crescent scar there. *You’re bleeding.* She dropped the ledger like it burned her. “Tell me everything,” she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.326
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flicked"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count2
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"silence"
2"stomach"
3"tension"
4"tracing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences101
matches
0"t in anger"
1"was terrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords13
totalWords1170
ratio0.011
matches
0"clink"
1"something else"
2"him"
3"ask"
4"took"
5"please"
6"you"
7"want"
8"Run."
9"I"
10"You’re bleeding."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount991
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Evan2
Soho1
Moreau3
Frenchman1
Prague2
French1
Lucien4
persons
0"Evan"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.855
wordCount1170
matches
0"not in anger, but in desperation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences135
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"realised that whatever"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean19.5
std21.12
cv1.083
sampleLengths
064
168
210
357
464
518
660
76
811
945
101
117
1251
133
1463
1513
1619
1750
183
192
206
213
2266
239
241
252
261
2713
2837
294
308
3134
327
332
341
352
3611
377
383
393
4011
4158
423
437
443
451
4630
4724
4810
4910
94.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"was faded"
1"been carved"
2"was terrified"
44.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs172
matches
0"were doing"
1"was measuring"
2"was holding"
3"was standing"
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences135
ratio0.044
matches
0"No one visited at this hour—not unless they were lost, drunk, or carrying bad news."
1"That voice—smooth as aged whiskey, laced with something darker."
2"The door swung open just enough to reveal him in full—tailored charcoal suit, ivory-handled cane tapping against the scuffed linoleum, the faintest scent of bergamot and something smoky clinging to him."
3"“Charming as ever.” He tilted his head, taking in the flat behind her—the stacks of books, the half-empty takeaway containers, the way her fingers still hovered near the doorframe, ready to slam it shut."
4"Not paper—parchment, yellowed and brittle at the edges."
5"And at the bottom, a symbol she recognised—the same one that had been carved into the doorframe of the safe house in Prague."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1005
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03383084577114428
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003980099502487562
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean8.67
std7.34
cv0.847
sampleLengths
023
113
213
315
416
516
62
720
85
99
107
113
123
139
1423
1522
1614
1729
182
192
203
2114
2214
234
2412
2517
2631
276
286
295
307
3134
324
331
344
353
369
374
383
392
403
413
4227
433
4411
4511
4614
478
4819
496
42.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3111111111111111
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then he crossed the threshold,"
1"Instead, he reached into his"
2"Then he set the parchment"
ratio0.036
36.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences83
matches
0"She set the mug down"
1"She’d installed them herself after"
2"Her breath hitched."
3"She hadn’t heard it in"
4"She crossed the room in"
5"Her ex-business partner."
6"Her ex-*something else*, too, though"
7"His amber-and-black gaze flicked up,"
8"She exhaled through her nose"
9"She didn’t bother with a"
10"His lips quirked, not quite"
11"He tilted his head, taking"
12"He didn’t *ask*."
13"She stepped back."
14"He didn’t move at first,"
15"She folded her arms"
16"He set his cane against"
17"She turned away, busying herself"
18"She paused, her back still"
19"She could hear him breathing,"
ratio0.458
62.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences83
matches
0"The knock came just after"
1"Rory froze mid-sip, the lukewarm"
2"Ptolemy’s ears twitched, his tail"
3"She set the mug down"
4"The flat smelled of old"
5"She’d installed them herself after"
6"This was someone who expected"
7"The knock came again, harder"
8"Her breath hitched."
9"That voice—smooth as aged whiskey,"
10"She hadn’t heard it in"
11"She crossed the room in"
12"The fish-eye lens warped him,"
13"Her ex-business partner."
14"Her ex-*something else*, too, though"
15"His amber-and-black gaze flicked up,"
16"She exhaled through her nose"
17"The last one stuck, and"
18"The door swung open just"
19"She didn’t bother with a"
ratio0.795
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Before the job in Prague"
1"Before the night in his"
2"Before she’d realised that whatever"
ratio0.036
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His amber-and-black gaze flicked up, as if he could see her through the door."
1"The door swung shut behind him with a finality that made her stomach twist."
2"Lucien Moreau, half-demon fixer, man who’d once told her he didn’t know the meaning of fear, was standing in her flat at midnight admitting he was terrified."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.0147%