Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6D8RGKWSWJBCXTCD3ZWX

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Duration:
23.1s
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$0.004773
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Novita

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's fingers traced the ancient oak standing stone, its rough surface cold beneath her touch. The Fae Grove. She'd found it. Or rather, it had found her. The Heartstone pendant beneath her jumper pulsed faintly, a warm rhythm against her skin that matched the quickening beat of her heart. She pushed through the invisible barrier between worlds. The air shifted, grew thicker, sweeter. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours under the moonlight, their petals shimmering with an otherworldly glow. Beautiful. Wrong. Nothing natural should look like this at midnight. Rory knelt in the centre of the clearing, pulling out the map Eva had given her before disappearing. Coordinates sketched in careful handwriting, warnings scribbled in the margins. *Don't stay long. Time moves differently. Don't eat anything. Don't accept gifts.* A twig snapped to her left. Rory's head snapped up. Nothing there. Just the swaying grass and impossible flowers. Her fingers tightened around the map's edge. *Paranoia. That's all.* The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger this time. Almost urgent. Another sound. Laughter. Faint and distant, like wind chimes in a breeze that wasn't blowing. Rory's breath caught in her throat. She scanned the tree line at the grove's edge. Still nothing. Just shadows that seemed deeper than they should be, darker than the night demanded. She needed to focus. The reason she'd come. The reason she'd risked this place. Answers. About her mother. About the dreams that had plagued her since moving to London. About the pendant that shouldn't exist but hung around her neck regardless. Rory unfolded the map completely, her torch beam cutting through the darkness. The symbols matched the ones she'd seen in her mother's old journals. A gateway. Or so Eva had claimed before vanishing three days ago. The ground beneath her knees felt suddenly damp, though the air was dry. Rory shifted, her torch beam catching movement at the edge of the clearing. A figure? No. Just the swaying branches of an ancient oak. But they were bending in the wrong direction, moving against the nonexistent wind. The laughter came again, closer this time. Childlike. Playful. Chilling. Rory scrambled to her feet, stuffing the map into her jacket pocket. The Heartstone burned against her skin now, its warmth spreading through her chest like liquid fire. A warning. "You're not supposed to be here." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere at once. Soft. Musical. Inhuman. Rory spun around, torch beam cutting through the darkness. Nothing. Just the wildflowers and the standing stones and the increasingly oppressive silence that followed the voice. "Who's there?" Her own voice sounded small, pathetic in the vastness of the grove. A figure stepped out from behind the nearest standing stone. Tall. Slender. Beautiful beyond measure, with features too perfect to be human. Eyes that reflected the moonlight like polished obsidian. A Fae. And not the friendly sort from children's stories. "You wear the Heartstone." The Fae's head tilted, its expression curious, dangerous. "Dymas sent you?" "Dymas?" Rory backed away, her hand instinctively closing around the pendant. "I don't know anyone named Dymas." "Liar." The Fae smiled, revealing teeth too sharp, too white. "Only Dymas could have given you that. Only a fool would accept it." It took a step closer, the wildflowers bending away from its feet as if in fear. "What do you seek, little human?" Rory's mind raced. Truth or lie? Which would save her? "I'm looking for someone. A friend. She came here three days ago." The Fae's laughter echoed through the clearing, cold and cruel. "Your friend? Oh, she's still here. In a manner of speaking." Another step closer. "Time moves differently here, little human. Three days for you. Three eternities for her." The implications crashed over Rory like icy water. Eva wasn't missing. She was trapped. Or worse. "What do you want?" The question trembled on Rory's lips. The Fae's smile widened. "The pendant. Give it to me, and I might let you leave with your sanity intact." Rory's hand tightened around the Heartstone. It pulsed protectively, its warmth spreading through her veins like liquid courage. "No." The Fae's beautiful face contorted into something monstrous. "Then you will stay with your friend. Forever." The ground beneath Rory's feet trembled. The standing stones began to glow with an eerie green light. Shadows detached themselves from the trees, forming into shapes that had once been human but were now something else entirely. The Fae's court. And they were hungry. Rory turned and ran, the Heartstone burning against her skin as it pulsed faster and faster, a desperate heartbeat in the terrifying silence of the Fae Grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount766
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount766
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"chilling"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count2
highlights
0"traced"
1"pulsed"
2"otherworldly"
3"scanned"
4"chilling"
5"warmth"
6"oppressive"
7"silence"
8"perfect"
9"raced"
10"echoed"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences96
matches
0"f in fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords15
totalWords766
ratio0.02
matches
0"Don't stay long. Time moves differently. Don't eat anything. Don't accept gifts."
1"Paranoia. That's all."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount658
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
Fae9
Grove2
Heartstone5
Eva3
London1
Rory14
persons
0"Fae"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Grove"
1"London"
globalScore0.436
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed deeper than they should be, darker than the night demanded"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount766
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean27.36
std14.12
cv0.516
sampleLengths
049
139
240
36
423
59
646
741
836
950
1010
1130
126
1338
1414
1540
1615
1717
1845
1922
2038
2116
2210
2320
2419
2516
2644
2727
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
69.28% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs102
matches
0"wasn't blowing"
1"were bending"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences105
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.78% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount658
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04711246200607903
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.015197568389057751
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean7.3
std5.77
cv0.791
sampleLengths
015
13
23
36
422
58
66
715
81
91
108
1118
1210
133
143
153
163
176
184
192
207
217
221
232
247
252
262
271
2812
296
309
312
3214
334
344
356
361
373
3811
3912
4012
4112
422
4310
4413
4513
462
471
488
4913
72.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.47619047619047616
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences71
matches
0"Just the swaying grass and"
1"Just shadows that seemed deeper"
2"Just the swaying branches of"
3"Just the wildflowers and the"
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences71
matches
0"She'd found it."
1"She pushed through the invisible"
2"Her fingers tightened around the"
3"She scanned the tree line"
4"She needed to focus."
5"Her own voice sounded small,"
6"It took a step closer,"
7"She was trapped."
8"It pulsed protectively, its warmth"
ratio0.127
93.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences71
matches
0"Aurora's fingers traced the ancient"
1"The Fae Grove."
2"She'd found it."
3"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
4"She pushed through the invisible"
5"The air shifted, grew thicker,"
6"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours"
7"Nothing natural should look like"
8"Rory knelt in the centre"
9"Coordinates sketched in careful handwriting,"
10"A twig snapped to her"
11"Rory's head snapped up."
12"Her fingers tightened around the"
13"The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger"
14"Rory's breath caught in her"
15"She scanned the tree line"
16"She needed to focus."
17"The reason she'd come."
18"The reason she'd risked this"
19"Rory unfolded the map completely,"
ratio0.732
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant beneath her jumper pulsed faintly, a warm rhythm against her skin that matched the quickening beat of her heart."
1"Just the wildflowers and the standing stones and the increasingly oppressive silence that followed the voice."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"The Fae's head tilted, its expression curious, dangerous"
1"Rory backed away, her hand instinctively closing around the pendant"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5184%