Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6DRPFN0X7VRRVKXFHVR3

Run Details

Duration:
10.7s
Cost:
$0.000776
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove hit Rory like a held breath finally released. One moment, she’d been pushing through the damp undergrowth of Richmond Park, the next—silence. Not the quiet of an empty forest, but something deeper, as if the world itself had paused to listen. She exhaled, her breath curling in the cold. The standing stones loomed around them, their surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to shift when she blinked. The trees here weren’t just trees—they were *old*. Their bark blackened like charred bone, their branches twisting into shapes that made her think of hands reaching for something just out of grasp. Above, the sky wasn’t sky at all, but a canopy of leaves so dense it blotted out the sun, leaving only a dim, silvered light that made everything feel underwater. Nyx drifted beside her, their shadow-form rippling like smoke caught in a draft. “This place remembers,” they murmured, voice weaving through the stillness. “It knows we’re here.” Rory adjusted the strap of her backpack, fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her shirt. It pulsed once, a faint warmth against her skin. She didn’t like that. Not one bit. “Remembering’s one thing,” she said, keeping her voice low. “But does it *care*?” Ahead, Isolde moved like a ghost between the trees, her silver hair catching the strange light. She didn’t walk so much as *flow*, her bare feet making no sound against the moss. Rory had seen her do this before—glide over ground that should’ve been damp, leave no prints—but it still unnerved her. The half-Fae turned, her pale lavender eyes gleaming. “Care is a mortal concern,” she said, not unkindly. “The grove does not hate. It does not love. It simply *is*.” “Great,” Rory muttered. “So we’re trespassing in a place that doesn’t give a damn whether we live or die.” Isolde’s lips curved, just slightly. “Precisely.” Nyx chuckled, the sound like dry leaves skittering. “You’re taking this better than I expected, Carter.” Rory shot them a look. “I’m not taking it at all. I’m just here because you two insisted this was the only way to find out what’s *actually* happening with that damn pendant.” She tapped the Heartstone through her shirt. “And because I’m sick of being the only one who doesn’t know what the hell is going on.” A gust of wind cut through the grove, carrying the scent of something sweet and rotten, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun. The trees groaned, their branches creaking as if stretching after a long sleep. Rory’s skin prickled. She’d been in eerie places before—back alleys in London at 3 AM, the basement of Silas’ bar after last call—but this was different. This wasn’t just *empty*. It was *waiting*. Isolde tilted her head, listening to something Rory couldn’t hear. “We should move,” she said. “The grove is waking.” “Waking?” Rory repeated. “You mean it was *asleep*?” “Of course.” Isolde turned, her silver hair swaying like a curtain. “Did you think it would greet you with open arms?” Rory didn’t answer. She didn’t have one. They pressed deeper, the ground sloping downward into a hollow where the trees parted just enough to reveal a clearing. And in the center of that clearing— Rory stopped. A pool of water lay there, perfectly still, its surface so dark it looked like a slice of night had fallen to earth. But it wasn’t water. Not really. The air above it shimmered, warping like heat haze, and when she squinted, she could see *shapes* moving beneath the surface—figures, half-formed, their edges blurring as if seen through a fogged window. Nyx hissed, their form flickering like a candle in a draft. “That’s not natural.” “No,” Isolde agreed, her voice quiet. “It’s a threshold.” Rory’s fingers twitched toward the Fae-forged dagger at her hip. The metal was colder than it should’ve been, the faint luminescence along its edge pulsing in time with her heartbeat. “A threshold to *where*?” Isolde crouched at the pool’s edge, her reflection not quite matching her movements. “Where do you think?” Rory didn’t need to ask. She already knew. Hel. The word settled in her chest like a stone. She’d heard the stories—everyone had. The nine realms of Hel, each ruled by a prince, each a twisted reflection of human sin. And Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, where the air smelled of roasting meat and the rivers ran thick with wine. Where souls were bound not in chains, but in contracts, their punishment an eternity of feasting on things they could never keep down. She swallowed. “You’re telling me this is a *door*?” “A weak point,” Isolde corrected. “The Veil is thin here. Thinner than it should be.” Nyx drifted closer, their violet eyes fixed on the pool. “Someone’s been tampering.” Rory’s stomach twisted. “Tampering how?” “Opening doors that shouldn’t be opened.” Nyx’s voice was a blade wrapped in silk. “And leaving things behind.” Rory’s hand closed around the Heartstone. It burned now, a steady, insistent heat against her skin. She yanked it free, the silver chain biting into her fingers. The gemstone glowed, its deep crimson light casting jagged shadows across her face. Isolde’s breath hitched. “Ah.” “Ah?” Rory snapped. “What the hell does *ah* mean?” The half-Fae’s gaze locked onto the pendant. “It means you were right to come. And it means we are not the only ones who have been here.” A sound cut through the grove—something between a whisper and a sigh. The trees trembled. The pool’s surface rippled, once, twice, like something beneath it had stirred. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. “We need to go. *Now.*” Isolde didn’t move. “We cannot.” “Like hell we can’t.” Rory grabbed the half-Fae’s arm, her fingers sinking into fabric that felt too thin, too *wrong*. “Isolde, *look at me*. We are *leaving*.” Isolde’s lavender eyes met hers, unblinking. “It’s too late for that.” The water in the pool *boiled*. Not with heat, but with *movement*—something rising, something *wrong*, its shape twisting as it broke the surface. Rory’s breath locked in her lungs. The air smelled like copper and burnt sugar. Nyx snarled, their form flaring like a shadow caught in a storm. “Run.” Rory didn’t need to be told twice. She bolted, her boots pounding against the moss, the trees blurring past her. Behind her, the thing from the pool *screamed*—a sound like tearing silk, like a thousand voices speaking at once. The grove *reacted*, the standing stones groaning as if in pain, the branches above her lashing like whips. Isolde was beside her, her silver hair streaming behind her like a banner. “Faster!” Rory didn’t answer. She couldn’t. Her lungs burned, her legs ached, but she *ran*, the Heartstone searing against her palm, the Fae dagger a cold weight at her hip. Nyx was ahead, their shadow-form stretching, twisting, *changing*— And then the grove *ended*. One moment, Rory was surrounded by blackened trees and silver light. The next, she was stumbling onto damp grass, the familiar scent of London rain filling her nose. She skidded to a halt, her chest heaving, her hands braced on her knees. Silence. No screaming. No boiling water. No *thing* clawing its way out of the dark. She straightened, her fingers trembling as she tucked the Heartstone back beneath her shirt. The gemstone had gone dark, its heat fading like a dying ember. Isolde stood a few paces away, her chest rising and falling in slow, measured breaths. Nyx coalesced beside her, their form solidifying into something resembling a person—tall, slender, their violet eyes burning. Rory wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. “What the *hell* was that?” Isolde turned, her gaze flicking to the trees behind them. The standing stones were gone. The grove was gone. Just… *gone*, as if it had never been there at all. “That,” Isolde said softly, “was a warning.” Rory’s laugh was sharp, humorless. “A warning? That thing nearly *killed* us!” “No.” Isolde’s voice was quiet. “It did not.” Rory opened her mouth—then snapped it shut. Because Isolde was right. It hadn’t. It had *let* them go. And that was worse.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.652
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.043
81.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1370
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"precisely"
2"perfectly"
3"really"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1370
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"silk"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"streaming"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"familiar"
count1
16
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"loomed"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"gleaming"
5"shimmered"
6"stomach"
7"silk"
8"whisper"
9"trembled"
10"pulse"
11"pounding"
12"streaming"
13"searing"
14"weight"
15"familiar"
16"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"think"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans29
markdownWords31
totalWords1352
ratio0.023
matches
0"old"
1"care"
2"flow"
3"is"
4"actually"
5"empty"
6"waiting"
7"asleep"
8"shapes"
9"where"
10"door"
11"ah"
12"Now."
13"wrong"
14"look at me"
15"leaving"
16"boiled"
17"movement"
18"wrong"
19"screamed"
20"reacted"
21"ran"
22"changing"
23"ended"
24"thing"
25"hell"
26"gone"
27"killed"
28"let"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1093
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory24
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone5
Ahead1
Isolde16
London2
Fae-forged1
Hel2
Dymas1
Gluttony1
Nyx8
Fae5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Fae"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae-forged"
globalScore0.402
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"spirals that seemed to shift when she blinked"
1"as if stretching after a long sleep"
2"looked like a slice of night had fallen t"
3"not quite matching her movements"
4"something between a whisper and a sigh"
5"smelled like copper and burnt sugar"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.219
wordCount1352
matches
0"Not the quiet of an empty forest, but something deeper, as if the world itself had paused to liste"
1"not in chains, but in contracts, their punishment an eternity of feasting on th"
2"Not with heat, but with *movement*"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean21.81
std20.31
cv0.931
sampleLengths
046
188
227
332
413
581
619
76
816
958
1071
1119
128
1321
147
1527
162
1761
1814
199
2034
2117
228
231
2474
259
2615
2713
285
2918
3040
314
329
3327
3427
3511
365
3727
3811
396
4031
4113
427
4350
4414
4529
468
475
4842
491
96.19% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"was surrounded"
1"were gone"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was *waiting"
1"was stumbling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences147
ratio0.088
matches
0"One moment, she’d been pushing through the damp undergrowth of Richmond Park, the next—silence."
1"The trees here weren’t just trees—they were *old*."
2"Rory had seen her do this before—glide over ground that should’ve been damp, leave no prints—but it still unnerved her."
3"She’d been in eerie places before—back alleys in London at 3 AM, the basement of Silas’ bar after last call—but this was different."
4"And in the center of that clearing—"
5"The air above it shimmered, warping like heat haze, and when she squinted, she could see *shapes* moving beneath the surface—figures, half-formed, their edges blurring as if seen through a fogged window."
6"She’d heard the stories—everyone had."
7"A sound cut through the grove—something between a whisper and a sigh."
8"Not with heat, but with *movement*—something rising, something *wrong*, its shape twisting as it broke the surface."
9"Behind her, the thing from the pool *screamed*—a sound like tearing silk, like a thousand voices speaking at once."
10"Nyx was ahead, their shadow-form stretching, twisting, *changing*—"
11"Nyx coalesced beside her, their form solidifying into something resembling a person—tall, slender, their violet eyes burning."
12"Rory opened her mouth—then snapped it shut."
92.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount432
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.04861111111111111
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.013888888888888888
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean9.2
std6.92
cv0.752
sampleLengths
013
114
219
38
418
58
624
730
813
910
104
1116
129
134
143
159
164
1716
1816
1920
208
219
2212
233
2416
255
261
278
288
295
3035
3118
3225
3313
343
3523
364
373
3810
395
404
413
425
4311
4410
453
464
4720
487
492
45.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.30612244897959184
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences102
matches
0"She exhaled, her breath curling"
1"Their bark blackened like charred"
2"they murmured, voice weaving through"
3"It pulsed once, a faint"
4"She didn’t like that."
5"she said, keeping her voice"
6"She didn’t walk so much"
7"she said, not unkindly"
8"She tapped the Heartstone through"
9"She’d been in eerie places"
10"It was *waiting*."
11"She didn’t have one."
12"They pressed deeper, the ground"
13"She already knew."
14"She’d heard the stories—everyone had."
15"It burned now, a steady,"
16"She yanked it free, the"
17"She bolted, her boots pounding"
18"Her lungs burned, her legs"
19"She skidded to a halt,"
ratio0.216
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences102
matches
0"The air inside the grove"
1"She exhaled, her breath curling"
2"The standing stones loomed around"
3"The trees here weren’t just"
4"Their bark blackened like charred"
5"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
6"they murmured, voice weaving through"
7"Rory adjusted the strap of"
8"It pulsed once, a faint"
9"She didn’t like that."
10"she said, keeping her voice"
11"She didn’t walk so much"
12"Rory had seen her do"
13"The half-Fae turned, her pale"
14"she said, not unkindly"
15"Isolde’s lips curved, just slightly."
16"Nyx chuckled, the sound like"
17"Rory shot them a look."
18"She tapped the Heartstone through"
19"A gust of wind cut"
ratio0.824
98.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"Where souls were bound not"
1"Because Isolde was right."
ratio0.02
6.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Not the quiet of an empty forest, but something deeper, as if the world itself had paused to listen."
1"Their bark blackened like charred bone, their branches twisting into shapes that made her think of hands reaching for something just out of grasp."
2"Above, the sky wasn’t sky at all, but a canopy of leaves so dense it blotted out the sun, leaving only a dim, silvered light that made everything feel underwate…"
3"The trees groaned, their branches creaking as if stretching after a long sleep."
4"The air above it shimmered, warping like heat haze, and when she squinted, she could see *shapes* moving beneath the surface—figures, half-formed, their edges b…"
5"She bolted, her boots pounding against the moss, the trees blurring past her."
6"The grove *reacted*, the standing stones groaning as if in pain, the branches above her lashing like whips."
7"Isolde stood a few paces away, her chest rising and falling in slow, measured breaths."
8"Nyx coalesced beside her, their form solidifying into something resembling a person—tall, slender, their violet eyes burning."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"they murmured, voice weaving through the stillness"
1"she said, not unkindly"
2"Isolde turned, her silver hair swaying like a curtain"
3"Isolde agreed, her voice quiet"
19.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Rory repeated (repeat)"
3"Isolde agreed (agree)"
4"Isolde corrected (correct)"
5"Rory snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.261
68.3964%