| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.326 | | leniency | 0.652 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 81.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1370 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1370 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "gleaming" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "streaming" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "familiar" | | 16 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 147 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 29 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 1352 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "old" | | 1 | "care" | | 2 | "flow" | | 3 | "is" | | 4 | "actually" | | 5 | "empty" | | 6 | "waiting" | | 7 | "asleep" | | 8 | "shapes" | | 9 | "where" | | 10 | "door" | | 11 | "ah" | | 12 | "Now." | | 13 | "wrong" | | 14 | "look at me" | | 15 | "leaving" | | 16 | "boiled" | | 17 | "movement" | | 18 | "wrong" | | 19 | "screamed" | | 20 | "reacted" | | 21 | "ran" | | 22 | "changing" | | 23 | "ended" | | 24 | "thing" | | 25 | "hell" | | 26 | "gone" | | 27 | "killed" | | 28 | "let" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 68 | | wordCount | 1093 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 24 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Ahead | 1 | | Isolde | 16 | | London | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.402 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when she blinked" | | 1 | "as if stretching after a long sleep" | | 2 | "looked like a slice of night had fallen t" | | 3 | "not quite matching her movements" | | 4 | "something between a whisper and a sigh" | | 5 | "smelled like copper and burnt sugar" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.219 | | wordCount | 1352 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the quiet of an empty forest, but something deeper, as if the world itself had paused to liste" | | 1 | "not in chains, but in contracts, their punishment an eternity of feasting on th" | | 2 | "Not with heat, but with *movement*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 21.81 | | std | 20.31 | | cv | 0.931 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 81 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 74 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 50 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 42 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 96.19% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "was surrounded" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "was *waiting" | | 1 | "was stumbling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 147 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, she’d been pushing through the damp undergrowth of Richmond Park, the next—silence." | | 1 | "The trees here weren’t just trees—they were *old*." | | 2 | "Rory had seen her do this before—glide over ground that should’ve been damp, leave no prints—but it still unnerved her." | | 3 | "She’d been in eerie places before—back alleys in London at 3 AM, the basement of Silas’ bar after last call—but this was different." | | 4 | "And in the center of that clearing—" | | 5 | "The air above it shimmered, warping like heat haze, and when she squinted, she could see *shapes* moving beneath the surface—figures, half-formed, their edges blurring as if seen through a fogged window." | | 6 | "She’d heard the stories—everyone had." | | 7 | "A sound cut through the grove—something between a whisper and a sigh." | | 8 | "Not with heat, but with *movement*—something rising, something *wrong*, its shape twisting as it broke the surface." | | 9 | "Behind her, the thing from the pool *screamed*—a sound like tearing silk, like a thousand voices speaking at once." | | 10 | "Nyx was ahead, their shadow-form stretching, twisting, *changing*—" | | 11 | "Nyx coalesced beside her, their form solidifying into something resembling a person—tall, slender, their violet eyes burning." | | 12 | "Rory opened her mouth—then snapped it shut." |
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| 92.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 432 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.04861111111111111 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013888888888888888 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 147 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 147 | | mean | 9.2 | | std | 6.92 | | cv | 0.752 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 45.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.30612244897959184 | | totalSentences | 147 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, her breath curling" | | 1 | "Their bark blackened like charred" | | 2 | "they murmured, voice weaving through" | | 3 | "It pulsed once, a faint" | | 4 | "She didn’t like that." | | 5 | "she said, keeping her voice" | | 6 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 7 | "she said, not unkindly" | | 8 | "She tapped the Heartstone through" | | 9 | "She’d been in eerie places" | | 10 | "It was *waiting*." | | 11 | "She didn’t have one." | | 12 | "They pressed deeper, the ground" | | 13 | "She already knew." | | 14 | "She’d heard the stories—everyone had." | | 15 | "It burned now, a steady," | | 16 | "She yanked it free, the" | | 17 | "She bolted, her boots pounding" | | 18 | "Her lungs burned, her legs" | | 19 | "She skidded to a halt," |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 48.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "She exhaled, her breath curling" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed around" | | 3 | "The trees here weren’t just" | | 4 | "Their bark blackened like charred" | | 5 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 6 | "they murmured, voice weaving through" | | 7 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "It pulsed once, a faint" | | 9 | "She didn’t like that." | | 10 | "she said, keeping her voice" | | 11 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 12 | "Rory had seen her do" | | 13 | "The half-Fae turned, her pale" | | 14 | "she said, not unkindly" | | 15 | "Isolde’s lips curved, just slightly." | | 16 | "Nyx chuckled, the sound like" | | 17 | "Rory shot them a look." | | 18 | "She tapped the Heartstone through" | | 19 | "A gust of wind cut" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 98.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Where souls were bound not" | | 1 | "Because Isolde was right." |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 6.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the quiet of an empty forest, but something deeper, as if the world itself had paused to listen." | | 1 | "Their bark blackened like charred bone, their branches twisting into shapes that made her think of hands reaching for something just out of grasp." | | 2 | "Above, the sky wasn’t sky at all, but a canopy of leaves so dense it blotted out the sun, leaving only a dim, silvered light that made everything feel underwate…" | | 3 | "The trees groaned, their branches creaking as if stretching after a long sleep." | | 4 | "The air above it shimmered, warping like heat haze, and when she squinted, she could see *shapes* moving beneath the surface—figures, half-formed, their edges b…" | | 5 | "She bolted, her boots pounding against the moss, the trees blurring past her." | | 6 | "The grove *reacted*, the standing stones groaning as if in pain, the branches above her lashing like whips." | | 7 | "Isolde stood a few paces away, her chest rising and falling in slow, measured breaths." | | 8 | "Nyx coalesced beside her, their form solidifying into something resembling a person—tall, slender, their violet eyes burning." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, voice weaving through the stillness" | | 1 | "she said, not unkindly" | | 2 | "Isolde turned, her silver hair swaying like a curtain" | | 3 | "Isolde agreed, her voice quiet" |
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| 19.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" | | 3 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 4 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 5 | "Rory snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.217 | | leniency | 0.435 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.261 | |