Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6HF4ZM2G2G45S90D31AR

Run Details

Duration:
51.0s
Cost:
$0.005652
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, revealing Rory standing there, her straight shoulder-length black hair slightly disheveled from the London wind. She hadn't been expecting anyone, especially not him. Her bright blue eyes widened in surprise as they landed on Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe with his ivory-handled cane. "Lucien. What are you doing here?" The half-demon offered a half-smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—studying her face. "Is that any way to greet an old friend, Aurora?" Rory's jaw tightened at the use of her full name. "We're not friends. Not anymore." Lucien stepped forward without invitation, his tailored charcoal suit seeming out of place in the cramped hallway. "You left without saying goodbye. That stung." "I seem to recall our last conversation ending with you telling me I was too human to understand your world." Rory crossed her arms, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist visible. "Seemed like a pretty clear ending to me." Lucien's expression softened. "I said things I regret." Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, rubbed against Rory's legs, sensing the tension. She bent down to stroke him, using the moment to collect her thoughts. "You can't just show up here after six months. Eva's not even home." "I know. I came to see you." Rory straightened up, her cool-headed intelligence warring with the emotions his sudden appearance stirred. "How did you find me?" Lucien tapped his cane lightly on the floor. "I'm an information broker. Finding people is what I do." He paused, his eyes tracing the lines of her face. "You look well." "I'm managing." Rory stepped aside, gesturing for him to enter the flat. "Might as well come in rather than block the hallway." The flat was exactly as Lucien remembered—books, scrolls, and research notes covering every available surface. The smell of curry from the restaurant below mixed with the scent of old paper and magic. "Still living above Silas' bar?" Rory closed the door, sliding all three deadbolts into place. "Some things haven't changed." Lucien moved toward the window, looking out at Brick Lane. "I heard about what happened with Evan. I'm sorry I wasn't there." "I didn't need you to swoop in and save me." Rory's voice was sharp. "I handled it." "I never said you didn't." Lucien turned to face her. "But that doesn't mean I can't wish I'd been there to help." The silence stretched between them, heavy with all the words they'd left unsaid. Rory could feel the old attraction stirring, the chemistry that had complicated everything between them from the beginning. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" He leaned against the windowsill, his amber eye catching the light. "There's something happening. Something that concerns both our worlds." Rory raised an eyebrow. "Define 'our worlds.'" "The supernatural and the human." Lucien's expression grew serious. "There's a group collecting artifacts. Powerful ones. They're getting bolder, crossing lines that shouldn't be crossed." "And this concerns me how?" "Because one of the artifacts they're after is connected to you." Lucien pulled a folded piece of paper from his inner jacket pocket and handed it to her. Rory unfolded it, revealing a sketch of an amulet she hadn't seen in years—one she'd worn as a child before her mother had hidden it away. "How do you know about this?" "Your mother showed it to me. Before she disappeared." Rory's head snapped up. "What? When did you talk to my mother?" "Last month. In Cardiff. She was worried, Aurora. She said she'd been followed, that someone was asking questions about you." Rory felt the blood drain from her face. "My mother never mentioned this to me." "She was trying to protect you." Lucien moved closer, his voice softening. "That's why I'm here. That's why we need to work together." Rory laughed, a harsh sound in the cramped flat. "You want me to trust you again? After everything?" "I never stopped caring about you." Lucien's voice was low, intense. "Even when I pushed you away, it was because I cared. My world is dangerous, Aurora. I saw what happened to Evan—what he did to you—and I couldn't bear the thought of you getting hurt because of me." "Pushing me away hurt me more than any demon ever could." Rory's voice cracked, revealing the pain she'd tried so hard to bury. "I loved you, Lucien. And you just walked away." The confession hung between them, raw and honest. Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing against her cheek. "I know. And I've regretted it every day since." Rory closed her eyes, leaning into his touch despite herself. "Don't do this. Don't come here and say these things and expect everything to be okay." "I don't." Lucien's thumb stroked her cheekbone. "But I'm asking for a chance to make things right. And I'm asking for your help. Your mother needs you. There are things happening—things bigger than either of us."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.409
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.045
81.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount826
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount826
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"tracing"
2"silence"
3"could feel"
4"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences37
matches
0"d in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences37
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords813
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount400
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
London1
Lucien13
Moreau1
Eva1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount813
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean20.33
std11.24
cv0.553
sampleLengths
048
16
223
315
424
541
68
724
813
97
1019
1131
1222
1332
145
1514
1622
1717
1822
1931
206
2120
227
2325
245
2528
2626
276
289
2912
3020
3115
3223
3318
3449
3532
3617
379
3826
3936
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs73
matches(empty)
20.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences70
ratio0.043
matches
0"The half-demon offered a half-smile, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—studying her face."
1"The flat was exactly as Lucien remembered—books, scrolls, and research notes covering every available surface."
2"Rory unfolded it, revealing a sketch of an amulet she hadn't seen in years—one she'd worn as a child before her mother had hidden it away."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount410
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.01951219512195122
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00975609756097561
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean11.61
std7.11
cv0.612
sampleLengths
019
18
221
36
413
510
610
75
817
97
1033
118
123
135
1411
1513
1613
177
1814
195
208
2120
223
2312
2410
2515
2617
275
2810
294
3010
3112
3214
333
3410
3512
3613
3718
386
3911
409
414
423
439
4416
455
4628
4726
486
499
65.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences37
matches
0"She hadn't been expecting anyone,"
1"Her bright blue eyes widened"
2"She bent down to stroke"
3"He paused, his eyes tracing"
4"He leaned against the windowsill,"
ratio0.135
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences37
matches
0"The door swung open, revealing"
1"She hadn't been expecting anyone,"
2"Her bright blue eyes widened"
3"The half-demon offered a half-smile,"
4"Rory's jaw tightened at the"
5"Lucien stepped forward without invitation,"
6"Rory crossed her arms, the"
7"Lucien's expression softened."
8"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, rubbed"
9"She bent down to stroke"
10"Rory straightened up, her cool-headed"
11"Lucien tapped his cane lightly"
12"He paused, his eyes tracing"
13"Rory stepped aside, gesturing for"
14"The flat was exactly as"
15"The smell of curry from"
16"Rory closed the door, sliding"
17"Lucien moved toward the window,"
18"Rory's voice was sharp"
19"Lucien turned to face her"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory could feel the old attraction stirring, the chemistry that had complicated everything between them from the beginning."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He paused, his eyes tracing the lines of her face"
1"Lucien moved, his voice softening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory's voice (rory voice)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.045
78.1862%