Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6MH6CXSDYJRNJD4DM443

Run Details

Duration:
8.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the doorway sputtered, casting a thin line of phosphorescent light onto the rain‑slick pavement. Inside, the air smelled of stale whiskey and polished oak, the walls crowded with faded maps and black‑and‑white photographs of distant battles and forgotten streets. A low hum of conversation floated beneath the hiss of a bartender’s shaker, and the soft clink of glasses marked the rhythm of the night. Rory pushed the heavy wooden door open, the bell above it ringing in a note that seemed to echo from a past she could almost hear. Her black hair fell straight past her shoulders, catching a stray strand of neon light as she stepped into the dim interior. The bright blue of her eyes scanned the room, landing on a familiar silhouette hunched over a bar stool, a silver signet ring glinting on the right hand of a man whose hazel eyes stared into the distance. She paused, the small crescent scar on her left wrist catching a flicker of the bar’s amber glow. The scar had been a reminder of a childhood accident, a line of healed skin that whispered of a time when she hadn’t yet learned to hide behind a cool exterior. Silas lifted his head, his gaze locking onto hers. The limp in his left leg shifted its weight as he straightened, a faint grunt escaping his throat. He brushed a stray lock of grey‑streaked auburn hair from his forehead, the movement deliberate, as if he were measuring each moment before he spoke. Rory slipped onto the bar stool opposite him, the worn leather sighing under her weight. She rested her forearm on the polished wood, the scar at discreetly visible, and let a sigh slip out. The sound was more a release than a complaint. “Never thought I’d find you here,” she said, her voice low, the words landing like a stone in a quiet pond. Silas’s eyes narrowed just enough to suggest surprise, then softened. “The city has a way of pulling old threads together.” He tapped the rim of his glass with a fingertip, the ring catching the light, a silent metronome. Rory’s gaze lingered on the silver band. “You still wear that,” she remarked, the words tinged with curiosity rather than judgment. He let out a short laugh, the sound dry, almost barked. “It’s a habit.” He lifted his glass, the amber liquid catching the green neon glow, and took a measured sip. “You’ve changed,” he observed, the statement hanging between them like a heavy curtain. Rory’s smile flickered, a brief flash that didn’t reach her eyes. “People do.” She tapped the scar on her wrist, the movement deliberate, almost as if she were marking a timeline. “You’re still here, in the same place. The bar, the sign, the maps. They’ve all stayed the same.” Silas’s fingers tightened around the glass, the silver ring catching a glint of the neon sign. He glanced at the rows of photographs lining the wall—faces frozen in black and white, eyes that seemed to stare past the present. “I’ve kept the Nest for a reason,” he said, his voice a low hum. “It’s a place for conversations that don’t belong anywhere else.” Rory leaned forward, the edge of her sleeve brushing the bar. “You always liked secret rooms.” She gestured toward the bookshelf that stood against the far wall, its spines worn from countless hands. “You still have that hidden back room?” Silas’s eyes narrowed, a flash of his former operative instincts surfacing. He glanced at the bookshelf, the wood dark with age. “Some doors are better left unopened.” He tapped the signet ring on his hand, the metal ringing softly. “But you know where it is, don’t you?” Rory’s fingers curled around the scar, a subtle pressure that seemed to anchor her. “There was a night, months ago, when we were kids, and you showed me a passage behind the books. You said it was for ‘the things that mattered.’” Silas’s lips twitched, a hint of a smile forming. “You were always the one who believed in that kind of magic.” He let out a breath, the sound barely audible. “I thought I could keep the world at bay with a few secrets.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the green neon sign, the light reflecting off the scar as if marking a new memory. “I left Cardiff because I thought I could outrun my past. I thought I could hide behind a delivery bag, a restaurant name, a flat above a bar. I thought I could forget.” Silas’s gaze softened, the hazel depth revealing a hint of sorrow. “You never really left, Rory. You carried it with you, tucked into the corners of your mind, like a hidden compartment.” He placed the glass down, the clink resonating on the wood. “You’ve become someone else—sharp, quick, always thinking three steps ahead.” Rory’s jaw tightened, her breath shallow. “I learned to think that way because I had to. It’s not a choice; it’s a survival mechanism.” She brushed a stray lock of hair from her face, the gesture automatic. “You taught me that once.” Silas chuckled, a sound that seemed to echo from a far horizon. “I taught you to read between the lines, to see the spaces where others saw only walls.” He lifted his hand, the signet ring glinting, and placed it on the bar, a silent punctuation. Rory stared at the ring, the metal cold under her gaze. “I’ve been trying to move forward, but the past pulls me back, like a tide.” Her voice trembled, not from fear but from the weight of unsaid words. Silas’s eyes shifted, scanning the room, the old maps on the walls, the photographs that seemed to watch them. “You remember the night we ran away from the house after the argument with your dad?” He leaned in, the scent of whiskey mingling with the faint perfume of old leather. “You said we’d never look back.” Rory lowered her eyes, the scar catching the dim light, a reminder of a childhood accident that had left a small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. “I thought I could erase that night. I thought I could rewrite it.” She let out a soft laugh, the sound brittle. “I was wrong.” Silas’s hand hovered over his own wrist, the scar from a different past—an old knee injury that left a limp in his left leg—visible beneath his shirt. “We both carried wounds,” he said, his voice a low murmur. “Some are visible, some are hidden.” Rory’s gaze rose, meeting his hazel eyes. “You still own this place, Silas. You’ve turned it into a sanctuary for strangers. You’re the spymaster of the night, the keeper of secrets.” Silas’s lips moved, forming a half‑smile. “I’m the one who knows when to listen and when to speak.” He lifted his glass again, the amber liquid catching the neon glow. “You’ve become a delivery person, but you still deliver more than food.” Rory let out a breath, the sound like a sigh of relief. “I deliver messages for people who can’t speak for themselves.” She glanced toward the back of the bar, where a bookshelf stood like a silent sentinel. “You still have that secret room.” Silas’s fingers brushed the edge of the bookshelf, the wood warm under his touch. “It’s still there,” he said, his voice barely above a whisper. “It’s a place for those who need to disappear for a while.” He turned his head, eyes flickering to the door as a new patron entered, the bell ringing again. Rory’s shoulders relaxed, the tension in her jaw easing. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong.” She looked at his signet ring again, the metal catching the light. “I thought I could find it in the city, in a flat above a bar, in a delivery route. I thought I could find it in the noise.” Silas’s gaze lingered on the scar, the crescent shape a tiny crescent moon on her skin. “Sometimes the place we look for is right in front of us, hidden in plain sight.” He tapped his ring against the bar, a soft echo. “You can’t outrun the past, but you can learn to walk with it.” Rory’s eyes softened, the bright blue reflecting the neon glow, a quiet storm beneath. “I’ve missed you, Silas.” She whispered, the words a fragile thread. “I’ve missed the way you could read a room like a map.” Silas’s hand rested on the bar, the metal ring pressing into his palm. “I missed you too, Rory.” His voice held a weight that seemed to stretch across the years. “I missed the way you could see the cracks in the world and still find a way to patch them.” The bar’s ambient chatter swelled, a muffled tide of voices that seemed to recede as the two old friends sat across from each other. The neon sign flickered, casting a green hue over the scar on Rory’s wrist and the silver ring on Silas’s hand. Rory lifted her glass, the amber liquid catching the light, and took a sip, the taste of whiskey mingling with the memory of a time when they had been reckless youth. “We’re not the same people we were,” she said, her tone steady. “We’re not the same.” Silas’s eyes narrowed, a flicker of the old operative mind resurfacing. “No, we’re not.” He placed his hand on the bar, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist as if to feel its pulse. “But maybe that’s okay.” Rory’s gaze lingered on the signet ring, the metal cool against her skin. “Maybe we can find a new map,” she whispered, the words a promise and a question. “A map that includes both of us.” Silas’s smile widened, the faint line at the corner of his mouth barely visible. “We can start with a conversation.” He lifted his glass, the amber reflecting the green neon, and set it down with a soft clink. Rory mirrored the motion, the glass meeting the bar with a resonant tone. Their eyes held each other’s, the unspoken regret hanging like a thin veil, ready to be lifted by the next spoken word. The bell above the door rang again, a newcomer stepping into the dim light, but the world seemed to pause for a heartbeat as the two friends sat in a quiet storm of memory and possibility. The neon sign continued to flicker, casting a faint green glow over the scar and the ring, a silent witness to the weight of time and the promise of a new, uncharted path.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:15:09.357Z" 2/19/2026, 12:15:09 PM
model"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency2324
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time7711
tokens_prompt1094
tokens_completion2647
native_tokens_prompt945
native_tokens_completion2192
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0
router(null)
provider_responses(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771503309-Cs9u6KCZMSSkCxhDsonS"
upstream_id"gen-1771503309-Cs9u6KCZMSSkCxhDsonS"
total_cost0
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Stealth"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.569
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1779
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1779
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"echo"
count3
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count2
4
word"flicker"
count3
5
word"reminder"
count2
6
word"weight"
count5
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count2
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"scanning"
count1
14
word"sanctuary"
count1
15
word"sentinel"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"pulse"
count1
19
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"glinting"
4"flicker"
5"reminder"
6"weight"
7"tinged"
8"measured"
9"flickered"
10"glint"
11"flicked"
12"trembled"
13"scanning"
14"sanctuary"
15"sentinel"
16"whisper"
17"tension"
18"pulse"
19"unspoken"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches6
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count2
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"the weight of unsaid words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1774
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1241
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas16
Rory18
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.775
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"note that seemed to echo from a past she could almost hear"
1"eyes that seemed to stare past the present"
2"pressure that seemed to anchor her"
3"as if marking a new memory"
4"sound that seemed to echo from a far horizon"
5"photographs that seemed to watch them"
6"weight that seemed to stretch across the years"
7"voices that seemed to recede as the two old friends sat across from each other"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.564
wordCount1774
matches
0"not from fear but from the weight of unsaid words"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
32.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean46.68
std12.23
cv0.262
sampleLengths
069
186
249
352
443
521
638
721
844
949
1063
1140
1247
1342
1443
1553
1653
1742
1846
1939
2056
2152
2244
2331
2442
2544
2655
2759
2855
2937
3050
3145
3247
3339
3436
3538
3635
3769
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"were measuring"
1"were marking"
58.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences102
ratio0.029
matches
0"He glanced at the rows of photographs lining the wall—faces frozen in black and white, eyes that seemed to stare past the present."
1"“I learned to think that way because I had to. It’s not a choice; it’s a survival mechanism.” She brushed a stray lock of hair from her face, the gesture automatic."
2"Silas’s hand hovered over his own wrist, the scar from a different past—an old knee injury that left a limp in his left leg—visible beneath his shirt."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1245
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.018473895582329317
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004016064257028112
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean17.39
std8.43
cv0.485
sampleLengths
019
125
225
326
422
538
618
731
89
918
1025
1115
1219
139
1421
1510
1628
177
1814
1911
2020
2113
2211
2320
2418
2516
2623
2714
2810
2911
3022
317
3211
3310
3418
358
3614
3728
389
3921
4013
4120
4233
4311
4432
4510
466
4731
485
4912
39.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.20588235294117646
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her black hair fell straight"
1"She paused, the small crescent"
2"He brushed a stray lock"
3"She rested her forearm on"
4"she said, her voice low,"
5"He tapped the rim of"
6"she remarked, the words tinged"
7"He let out a short"
8"He lifted his glass, the"
9"he observed, the statement hanging"
10"She tapped the scar on"
11"He glanced at the rows"
12"he said, his voice a"
13"She gestured toward the bookshelf"
14"He glanced at the bookshelf,"
15"He tapped the signet ring"
16"He let out a breath,"
17"He placed the glass down,"
18"She brushed a stray lock"
19"He lifted his hand, the"
ratio0.463
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences80
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"A low hum of conversation"
2"Rory pushed the heavy wooden"
3"Her black hair fell straight"
4"The bright blue of her"
5"She paused, the small crescent"
6"The scar had been a"
7"Silas lifted his head, his"
8"The limp in his left"
9"He brushed a stray lock"
10"Rory slipped onto the bar"
11"She rested her forearm on"
12"The sound was more a"
13"she said, her voice low,"
14"Silas’s eyes narrowed just enough"
15"He tapped the rim of"
16"Rory’s gaze lingered on the"
17"she remarked, the words tinged"
18"He let out a short"
19"He lifted his glass, the"
ratio0.988
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rory pushed the heavy wooden door open, the bell above it ringing in a note that seemed to echo from a past she could almost hear."
1"The scar had been a reminder of a childhood accident, a line of healed skin that whispered of a time when she hadn’t yet learned to hide behind a cool exterior."
2"He brushed a stray lock of grey‑streaked auburn hair from his forehead, the movement deliberate, as if he were measuring each moment before he spoke."
3"Rory’s smile flickered, a brief flash that didn’t reach her eyes."
4"He glanced at the rows of photographs lining the wall—faces frozen in black and white, eyes that seemed to stare past the present."
5"Rory’s eyes flicked to the green neon sign, the light reflecting off the scar as if marking a new memory."
6"Rory lowered her eyes, the scar catching the dim light, a reminder of a childhood accident that had left a small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"He tapped, the ring catching the light, a silent metronome"
1"she remarked, the words tinged with curiosity rather than judgment"
2"he observed, the statement hanging between them like a heavy curtain"
3"he said, his voice a low hum"
4"He tapped, the metal ringing softly"
5"He let out, the sound barely audible"
6"He placed, the clink resonating on the wood"
7"he said, his voice a low murmur"
8"He lifted, the amber liquid catching the neon glow"
9"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
10"She looked, the metal catching the light"
11"she said, her tone steady"
12"she whispered, the words a promise and a question"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"She whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.157
leniency0.314
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.118
61.9569%