Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6QSB1PFM929JVVHF6T4M

Run Details

Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.011981
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain tapped a dull rhythm against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the green neon glow into smears of emerald across the wet pavement. Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of aged oak, whisky, and the faintest trace of cigar smoke clinging to coat hangers near the door. A jazz trio played low and smoky on the stereo—Chet Baker, something slow, something aching. The kind of night that made people confess things they’d rather forget. Aurora Carter stepped inside, shaking water from her coat. Her black hair clung damply to her neck, strands curling at the ends. She pulled off her gloves, rubbed warmth back into her fingers. The delivery bag slumped against her hip like a tired animal. Ten stops tonight. Three of them cancellations. Rain, cold, traffic—the city was punishing anyone still stupid enough to ride through it. She spotted Silas behind the bar, polishing a glass with the same methodical patience he used for everything. His signet ring glinted under the low light, catching on the rim of the tumbler. He glanced up. A flicker in his hazel eyes. Not surprise, never that with Silas—more like confirmation. “You’re late,” he said. “Bike chain snapped on Dean Street,” she said, dropping into her usual corner booth. “Took twenty minutes to fix it with a zip tie and a prayer.” Silas brought her a hot ginger tea with honey, no asking. He knew her too well. Knew the way she’d rub that crescent scar on her wrist when she was thinking. Knew how she always sat with her back to the wall. Knew she hadn’t been back to Cardiff in three years. Knew the name Evan still made her flinch, even now. She stirred the tea, steam curling into her face. “Quiet tonight.” “Not for long.” And then the door opened. A gust of cold air, rain-laced and sharp, swept in with him. Tall. Lean. A tailored coat, worn just enough to suggest he didn’t care about being seen, though he probably did. Dark hair streaked with silver at the temples, longer than it used to be, brushing the collar. A scar—thin, pale—ran along his jawline, something new. Something earned. Aurora’s spoon clinked against the cup. Then fell silent. He didn’t see her at first. Not until he turned, and his eyes skimmed the room like he was looking for someone—or avoiding. He froze. “Rory.” Her name on his tongue was like gravel and sugar. Familiar. Wrong. She didn’t move. Her hands curled around the warm mug. “Ethan.” Ethan Vale. Not Evan. Never Evan. That was the other man. The one who’d broken things. The one who’d made her run. This was different. Ethan slid into the seat across from her, shrugging off his coat. There was a weight to his movements now, a deliberation—the kind you picked up carrying things no one talked about. “You work here now?” he asked. “Don’t,” she said softly. “Don’t pretend you don’t know what I do.” He exhaled. A half-smile. “Fair.” Silas appeared, silent, offering a glass of bourbon. Ethan nodded. No ice. “Still drinking it like medicine?” Aurora asked. “Still avoiding the hard questions?” She looked at him—really looked. The easy charm was gone. The boy who used to toss pebbles at her window at midnight, who’d sneak her out to the cliffs above Barry Island to watch the sun rise, who’d kissed her for the first time behind the library and called her *Laila* like it was a secret only he knew—that boy was buried somewhere beneath the lines around his eyes. “You cut your hair,” he said. “I cut more than that.” He leaned forward. “I looked for you, you know.” “Oh, after five years?” “I didn’t know where you—” “You had my number. Eva’s number. Mum called me for *months* asking if I’d heard from you.” “I wasn’t in a place—” “What, to answer? To explain? You just vanished, Ethan. One day we’re talking every night, and the next—nothing. Not even a note.” “I was deployed.” “You joined *MI6*,” she said, voice flat. “You didn’t go backpacking through Nepal. You lied.” “I couldn’t tell you.” “Why not? I wasn’t some fling. I wasn’t—” “I was trying to protect you.” “From what?” She laughed, brittle. “Another man who thought I needed saving?” Ethan stiffened. “That’s not what I—” “I left one of those, Ethan. Do you know how long it took me to stop checking the locks twice before bed? To stop freezing when someone raised their voice? I didn’t need *another* protector. I needed a friend.” The silence between them thickened. The music faded into the background, muffled by the weight of years. Ethan looked down at his hands. “I heard about Evan. I wanted to come. But by the time I found out—” “You were saving the world,” she said, quieter now. “I was following orders. Buried in Prague. By the time I surfaced…” He trailed off. Then, “I got injured. Knees. Nearly lost the left one. They pulled me out.” That explained the careful way he’d moved when he came in. The slight dip on one side. Aurora studied him. The scar. The weariness. The way his fingers trembled just slightly around the glass. And then, softer, “Were you even looking, after?” He met her eyes. “Every damn day.” She looked away. Outside, a taxi hissed through a puddle, lights streaking across the glass. “You used to write poems,” she said. “Remember? You’d leave them in my textbooks. Bad ones. Full of moons and oceans and terrible metaphors.” He smiled, real this time. “You kept them.” “You left them behind.” “I thought you’d throw them out.” “I didn’t.” She paused. “I burned them, eventually. After the last call. When I realised you weren’t coming back.” Ethan swallowed. “I didn’t know I *could*.” Silas moved behind the bar, refilling a glass without being asked. His limp more pronounced tonight, like the cold brought the old injury back to life. Ethan turned. “You’re Silas Blackwood.” Silas nodded. “And you’re the reason Aurora stopped believing in ghosts.” Ethan blinked. Aurora didn’t correct him. “She told me once,” Silas said, “that some people leave like storms—loud, destructive, gone in an hour. Others… they seep out slowly. Like air from a tire. You don’t notice the absence until you’re dragging on the ground.” Ethan stared into his drink. “I didn’t mean to.” “No,” Silas said. “But you did.” Aurora placed her mug down. The warmth had seeped into her bones, but it didn’t reach the rest of her. “I’m not who I was when you left, Ethan.” “I can see that.” “I deliver food on a broken-down bike. I live above a bar. I don’t go home for Christmas. I don’t answer my father’s calls unless he texts first. I see shadows in doorways. I don’t trust easy smiles.” He looked stricken. “But I’m not broken,” she said. “And I didn’t wait.” He nodded slowly. “I see that too.” Another silence. Not empty this time. Full. Heavy with what was and what couldn’t be. Ethan reached into his coat. Pulled out a small notebook. Tattered edges, water-stained. He slid it across the table. “Found it,” he said. “In an old flat in Prague. Belonged to someone who… didn’t make it out. Thought I lost it years ago.” She opened it. Her breath caught. Inside, in his messy script: > *For Laila, who walks like the sea rolls—quiet, but never still.* > *If I forget your face, let this be the map back.* She closed it. Slid it back. Didn’t touch it again. “You can’t just show up,” she said. “You can’t just say *sorry* and expect the years to melt.” “I’m not asking for that.” “Then what are you asking for?” “I’m asking if I can sit here. For tonight. In the same room as you. And remember what it felt like to not be alone.” She stared at him. The boy. The ghost. The man who’d loved her badly, left worse. And then, just once, she let her fingers brush the crescent on her wrist. “Stay,” she said. But she didn’t smile.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.277
leniency0.554
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.031
81.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1371
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1371
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"charm"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"methodical"
2"flicker"
3"familiar"
4"weight"
5"charm"
6"silence"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords28
totalWords1355
ratio0.021
matches
0"Laila"
1"months"
2"MI6"
3"another"
4"could"
5"For Laila, who walks like the sea rolls—quiet, but never still."
6"If I forget your face, let this be the map back."
7"sorry"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount847
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Ethan"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Ethan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Chet1
Baker1
Carter1
Silas8
Cardiff1
Evan3
Vale1
Barry1
Island1
Ethan10
Aurora6
Laila2
Knew4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Chet"
3"Baker"
4"Carter"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
7"Vale"
8"Ethan"
9"Aurora"
10"Laila"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Barry"
2"Island"
globalScore0.91
windowScore0.5
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared, silent offering a glass of bourbon"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1355
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences172
matches
0"knew—that boy"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean15.76
std16.07
cv1.02
sampleLengths
078
165
250
34
427
562
611
73
85
959
109
1123
122
131
1412
1511
1622
173
1832
196
2012
215
2212
237
245
2569
266
275
289
294
305
3117
325
3322
343
3515
364
378
386
3912
406
4139
4217
4321
449
4529
4617
4717
488
497
94.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences127
matches
0"being seen"
1"was gone"
2"was buried"
3"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was thinking"
1"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences172
ratio0.052
matches
0"A jazz trio played low and smoky on the stereo—Chet Baker, something slow, something aching."
1"Rain, cold, traffic—the city was punishing anyone still stupid enough to ride through it."
2"Not surprise, never that with Silas—more like confirmation."
3"A scar—thin, pale—ran along his jawline, something new."
4"Not until he turned, and his eyes skimmed the room like he was looking for someone—or avoiding."
5"There was a weight to his movements now, a deliberation—the kind you picked up carrying things no one talked about."
6"She looked at him—really looked."
7"The boy who used to toss pebbles at her window at midnight, who’d sneak her out to the cliffs above Barry Island to watch the sun rise, who’d kissed her for the first time behind the library and called her *Laila* like it was a secret only he knew—that boy was buried somewhere beneath the lines around his eyes."
8"> *For Laila, who walks like the sea rolls—quiet, but never still.*"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount860
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.037209302325581395
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009302325581395349
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean7.88
std7.73
cv0.982
sampleLengths
025
126
215
312
49
513
611
711
83
94
1014
1118
1215
133
146
158
164
1714
1813
1911
205
2115
2211
2310
2410
259
262
273
285
2912
301
311
3218
3317
348
352
366
373
386
3917
402
411
4210
431
441
453
467
471
482
492
43.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.3313953488372093
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners57
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then fell silent."
ratio0.011
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences90
matches
0"Her black hair clung damply"
1"She pulled off her gloves,"
2"She spotted Silas behind the"
3"His signet ring glinted under"
4"He glanced up."
5"she said, dropping into her"
6"He knew her too well."
7"She stirred the tea, steam"
8"He didn’t see her at"
9"Her name on his tongue"
10"She didn’t move."
11"Her hands curled around the"
12"she said softly"
13"She looked at him—really looked."
14"He leaned forward."
15"she said, voice flat"
16"She laughed, brittle"
17"she said, quieter now"
18"He trailed off"
19"He met her eyes."
ratio0.333
98.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences90
matches
0"Rain tapped a dull rhythm"
1"A jazz trio played low"
2"The kind of night that"
3"Aurora Carter stepped inside, shaking"
4"Her black hair clung damply"
5"She pulled off her gloves,"
6"The delivery bag slumped against"
7"She spotted Silas behind the"
8"His signet ring glinted under"
9"He glanced up."
10"A flicker in his hazel"
11"she said, dropping into her"
12"Silas brought her a hot"
13"He knew her too well."
14"She stirred the tea, steam"
15"A gust of cold air,"
16"A tailored coat, worn just"
17"A scar—thin, pale—ran along his"
18"Aurora’s spoon clinked against the"
19"He didn’t see her at"
ratio0.722
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The boy who used to toss pebbles at her window at midnight, who’d sneak her out to the cliffs above Barry Island to watch the sun rise, who’d kissed her for the…"
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.492
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.031
84.9420%