| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1382 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1382 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "searing" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "looming" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "lurch" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "pulsed" | | 17 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 163 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 163 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.30% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 59 | | markdownWords | 92 | | totalWords | 1366 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "Like a heartbeat." | | 1 | "Isolde’s grove" | | 2 | "One hour. In and out." | | 3 | "shifted." | | 4 | "Time moves differently here." | | 5 | "An hour inside can be minutes or days outside." | | 6 | "Wrong. This is wrong." | | 7 | "crack." | | 8 | "alive." | | 9 | "rotten." | | 10 | "wet." | | 11 | "pulled." | | 12 | "flowed," | | 13 | "feel" | | 14 | "Don’t move. Don’t move. Don’t—" | | 15 | "eager." | | 16 | "moved." | | 17 | "laughed." | | 18 | "feeling," | | 19 | "tugged." | | 20 | "breathed." | | 21 | "screamed." | | 22 | "sensation," | | 23 | "inside" | | 24 | "inside" | | 25 | "inside" | | 26 | "earth." | | 27 | "stretch" | | 28 | "happy." | | 29 | "spoke." | | 30 | "pressure," | | 31 | "push" | | 32 | "You shouldn’t be here." | | 33 | "laughed" | | 34 | "moved." | | 35 | "glowed," | | 36 | "vibrated." | | 37 | "Hel." | | 38 | "You know." | | 39 | "screamed." | | 40 | "ran." | | 41 | "shifted" | | 42 | "laughed." | | 43 | "gave way." | | 44 | "light." | | 45 | "wrong." | | 46 | "exploded" | | 47 | "room." | | 48 | "not" | | 49 | "chamber." | | 50 | "older," | | 51 | "door." | | 52 | "gate." | | 53 | "breathing," | | 54 | "darkness." | | 55 | "Hunger." | | 56 | "feel" | | 57 | "You shouldn’t be here," | | 58 | "opened." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1366 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | October | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Like | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Branches | 1 | | Blinding | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Branches" | | 4 | "Blinding" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 86.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like eyes" | | 1 | "smelled like honey and something older, so" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1366 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 80 | | mean | 17.08 | | std | 18.55 | | cv | 1.086 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 65 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 64 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 49 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "being *pulled" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 232 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 163 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the usual faint warmth—this was a searing pulse, like a brand pressed into her skin." | | 1 | "Richmond Park stretched behind her, silent and empty at this hour, but the Grove—*Isolde’s grove*—was something else entirely." | | 2 | "The moment her boot crossed the threshold, the world *shifted.* Not a sound, not a movement—just a sudden, sickening lurch, like the ground had tilted beneath her." | | 3 | "No rustling leaves, no distant traffic, no owl’s cry—just a heavy, suffocating silence, like the world had pressed pause." | | 4 | "The standing stones formed a rough circle around her, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognize—spirals, jagged lines, things that looked like eyes." | | 5 | "She strained her ears, but there was nothing else—no footsteps, no breathing, no rustle of leaves." | | 6 | "Not a voice—no, it was too soft for that, too *wet.* Like fabric dragging against skin." | | 7 | "A shape—tall, too tall, its limbs too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 8 | "For a heartbeat, she thought she saw a face—pale, featureless, with eyes like black pits—but then it was gone, swallowed by the shadows." | | 9 | "Don’t—*" | | 10 | "Not a sound—no, it was worse than that." | | 11 | "Not a sound—no, it was worse." | | 12 | "She’d seen it before—in the margins of Evan’s notebooks, scribbled in the dark when he thought she was asleep." | | 13 | "No—*not* a room." | | 14 | "And beyond it—" |
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| 98.28% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1382 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.041968162083936326 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005788712011577424 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 163 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 163 | | mean | 8.38 | | std | 6.97 | | cv | 0.831 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 38 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 36.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.25153374233128833 | | totalSentences | 163 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that single, deliberate *crack.*" | | 1 | "Slowly, she crouched, her boots" | | 2 | "Then she saw it." | | 3 | "Just those black pits where" | | 4 | "Then it *spoke.*" | | 5 | "Just a *pressure,* a *push*" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "She hissed, fingers flying to" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "She stepped forward." | | 3 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 4 | "She stumbled, catching herself against" | | 5 | "She forced herself to straighten," | | 6 | "She swallowed hard and reached" | | 7 | "She turned in a slow" | | 8 | "She strained her ears, but" | | 9 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 10 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 11 | "She needed to see." | | 12 | "She turned her head just" | | 13 | "It didn’t walk." | | 14 | "It *flowed,* like smoke given" | | 15 | "She didn’t breathe." | | 16 | "It was watching her." | | 17 | "She could *feel* it, the" | | 18 | "Her fingers curled into the" | | 19 | "She hadn’t touched that tree." |
| | ratio | 0.299 | |
| 98.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory’s" | | 1 | "She hissed, fingers flying to" | | 2 | "The Heartstone’s crimson glow flickered" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 4 | "The thought slithered through her" | | 5 | "Richmond Park stretched behind her," | | 6 | "The air here was thicker," | | 7 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 8 | "Rory exhaled, her breath curling" | | 9 | "She stepped forward." | | 10 | "The moment her boot crossed" | | 11 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 12 | "The pendant flared, hot enough" | | 13 | "She stumbled, catching herself against" | | 14 | "The words echoed in her" | | 15 | "*An hour inside can be" | | 16 | "She forced herself to straighten," | | 17 | "The grove was quiet." | | 18 | "The trees stood unnaturally still," | | 19 | "She swallowed hard and reached" |
| | ratio | 0.723 | |
| 36.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, her pulse hammered in" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 19.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was thicker, sweet with the scent of wildflowers that had no business blooming in October." | | 1 | "She stumbled, catching herself against the rough bark of an oak, her fingers digging into the grooves of its ancient skin." | | 2 | "The trees stood unnaturally still, their branches twisted into shapes that made her skin prickle." | | 3 | "The standing stones formed a rough circle around her, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognize—spirals, jagged lines, things that looked like eye…" | | 4 | "The flowers beneath her fingers were warm, almost *alive.* She plucked one, and the stem oozed a thick, golden sap that smelled like honey and something older, …" | | 5 | "A shape—tall, too tall, its limbs too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 6 | "Rory gasped, her hand flying to her chest, but the pain was already fading, replaced by a cold, creeping dread." | | 7 | "It was a *sensation,* a high, keening wail that tore through her mind, that made her teeth ache and her eyes water." | | 8 | "The pendant *exploded* against her skin, a white-hot pain that made her scream." | | 9 | "The air smelled of copper and something *older,* something that made her stomach heave." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |