| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1218 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1218 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurched" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "practiced ease" | | 11 | "fluttered" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "quickened" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "weight" | | 18 | "structure" | | 19 | "potential" | | 20 | "unspoken" | | 21 | "electric" | | 22 | "trembled" | | 23 | "could feel" | | 24 | "enigmatic" | | 25 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1199 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1038 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | Richmond | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 11 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Hel" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.777 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to emanate from the very air" | | 1 | "felt like walking on clouds" | | 2 | "Not quite building, not quite growth, it seemed carved from a single enormous pearl, its surface rippling with opalescent waves" | | 3 | "not quite growth, it seemed carved from a single enormous pearl, its surface rippling with opalescent waves" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 4.17 | | wordCount | 1199 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither torn nor" | | 1 | "neither her heartbeat nor" | | 2 | "not alarm, but recognition" | | 3 | "not their faces but other times, other possibilities" | | 4 | "not a room but a forest of silver trees under a scarlet sky" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.31% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 35.26 | | std | 16.93 | | cv | 0.48 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd grown used to its warnings near Hel portals, but this felt different—not alarm, but recognition." | | 1 | "Colors bled into sounds—she could taste the violet of twilight, hear the scent of honeysuckle." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—spring daffodils blooming beside autumn chrysanthemums, summer roses entwined with winter hellebores." | | 3 | "Somewhere in the distance—or perhaps just out of sight—water babbled over stones, though the sound came from above rather than below." | | 4 | "Doorways—if they were doorways—appeared at random intervals, some at ground level, others floating twenty feet in the air." | | 5 | "Each breath Rory took seemed to fill her lungs with potential—she could taste choices unmade, words unspoken, paths untaken." | | 6 | "The nearest doorway—an arch of woven moonbeams—trembled as they drew close." | | 7 | "Rory understood now why Isolde spoke in riddles—how else to translate thoughts formed in a place where metaphor had mass and meaning could be touched?" | | 8 | "She could feel connections she'd never noticed before—threads linking her to this place, to her companions, to possibilities spread across time like a vast web." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1056 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03977272727272727 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004734848484848485 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 14.11 | | std | 6.68 | | cv | 0.474 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 92.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5529411764705883 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Then everything snapped back into" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance—or perhaps" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "She'd grown used to its" | | 2 | "They passed between the stones." | | 3 | "Her delivery bike, left leaning" | | 4 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 5 | "Their trunks twisted upward in" | | 6 | "They tilted their head, listening." | | 7 | "She stepped back." | | 8 | "She paused, a slight smile" | | 9 | "They moved deeper, though direction" | | 10 | "They pointed with one shadowy" | | 11 | "Her skin tingled with the" | | 12 | "Her fingers found the Heartstone" | | 13 | "Its warmth had spread through" | | 14 | "She could feel connections she'd" | | 15 | "They moved toward the pearl" |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 34.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before" | | 1 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "Isolde's voice carried on a" | | 3 | "The Half-Fae's silver hair caught" | | 4 | "Nyx's form flickered between solid" | | 5 | "Rory touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 6 | "The crimson gem pulsed warm" | | 7 | "She'd grown used to its" | | 8 | "Isolde stepped forward without leaving" | | 9 | "They passed between the stones." | | 10 | "The world turned inside out." | | 11 | "Rory's stomach lurched as up" | | 12 | "Colors bled into sounds—she could" | | 13 | "Her delivery bike, left leaning" | | 14 | "The words escaped before she" | | 15 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 16 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 17 | "The air itself shimmered with" | | 18 | "Patches of midnight blue studded" | | 19 | "Isolde moved with practiced ease" |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their bark-covered surfaces pulsing with an otherworldly energy that made Rory's teeth ache." | | 1 | "The crimson gem pulsed warm against her skin, a steady rhythm that matched neither her heartbeat nor her breathing." | | 2 | "Rory glimpsed herself with shorter hair, with a scar across her cheek, with eyes that weren't bright blue." | | 3 | "Not quite building, not quite growth, it seemed carved from a single enormous pearl, its surface rippling with opalescent waves." | | 4 | "Stairs that might have been branches or might have been frozen waterfalls connected different levels in ways that made Rory's eyes water." | | 5 | "Every flower that bloomed, every impossible angle, every shift of light and shadow felt deliberate, like words in a language too ancient for human tongues." | | 6 | "Its warmth had spread through her entire body now, a gentle fire that didn't burn but illuminated." | | 7 | "They moved toward the pearl structure, toward doorways that led to anywhere and nowhere, while overhead the patchwork sky continued its eternal dance between da…" |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's form had, as if the strange physics of this place gave them substance" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her smile enigmatic as always," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.038 | | leniency | 0.077 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |