Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6SZFK36AQZG857C710WK

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Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.160800

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their bark-covered surfaces pulsing with an otherworldly energy that made Rory's teeth ache. She pressed her palm against the nearest oak, feeling the rough texture beneath her fingertips as reality seemed to ripple at the edges of her vision. "This is it." Isolde's voice carried on a breeze that shouldn't exist in the still Richmond morning. The Half-Fae's silver hair caught light from no visible source, creating a halo effect around her ageless face. "Step through quickly. The boundary doesn't like hesitation." Nyx's form flickered between solid and shadow, their violet eyes scanning the space between the stones. "The Veil is... strange here. Neither torn nor whole. Folded." "Like origami made of reality itself." Rory touched the Heartstone pendant at her throat. The crimson gem pulsed warm against her skin, a steady rhythm that matched neither her heartbeat nor her breathing. She'd grown used to its warnings near Hel portals, but this felt different—not alarm, but recognition. "Together then." Isolde stepped forward without leaving footprints on the frost-covered grass. "The Grove chooses who enters. Be respectful." They passed between the stones. The world turned inside out. Rory's stomach lurched as up became down, left became right, and time stretched like taffy. Colors bled into sounds—she could taste the violet of twilight, hear the scent of honeysuckle. Her delivery bike, left leaning against a normal Richmond Park tree, now seemed a thousand miles and a heartbeat away. Then everything snapped back into focus. "Bloody hell." The words escaped before she could stop them. They stood in a clearing that defied every natural law she knew. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—spring daffodils blooming beside autumn chrysanthemums, summer roses entwined with winter hellebores. The air itself shimmered with threads of gold and silver, like spider silk caught in sunbeams that fell from no visible sun. Above them, the sky couldn't decide what it wanted to be. Patches of midnight blue studded with stars existed alongside sections of noon-bright azure, dawn pink bleeding into dusk purple at the edges where they met. No sun, no moon, just ambient light that seemed to emanate from the very air. "Don't stare too long at the sky." Isolde moved with practiced ease through the flower carpet. "Mortals who try to map it tend to lose pieces of themselves." Rory tore her gaze away, focusing instead on the trees ringing the Grove. If trees they were. Their trunks twisted upward in spirals that hurt to follow, branches reaching out at angles that geometry insisted couldn't exist. Leaves of copper, silver, and gold chimed softly in a breeze she couldn't feel. "The trees are singing." Nyx's form had solidified more than usual, as if the strange physics of this place gave them substance. They tilted their head, listening. "No... remembering. They're remembering." "Everything here remembers." Isolde paused beside a pool of water that Rory could have sworn wasn't there a moment ago. The surface reflected not their faces but other times, other possibilities. Rory glimpsed herself with shorter hair, with a scar across her cheek, with eyes that weren't bright blue. She stepped back. The Grove responded to their movement. Paths appeared and disappeared like suggestions rather than fixed routes. A butterfly with wings of literal stained glass fluttered past, leaving a trail of musical notes in its wake. Somewhere in the distance—or perhaps just out of sight—water babbled over stones, though the sound came from above rather than below. "Why does it feel like we're being watched?" Rory's hand drifted to where she'd secured the Fae blade Isolde had given her. The moonsilver weapon hummed against her hip, cold even through its sheath. "Because we are." Isolde's lavender eyes tracked something invisible. "The Grove remembers every visitor. Past, present, and..." She paused, a slight smile playing at her lips. "Well. Time isn't linear here." They moved deeper, though direction seemed a negotiable concept. The flower carpet gave way to moss so soft it felt like walking on clouds. Mushrooms grew in perfect circles, their caps shifting through prismatic colors with each step the group took. One ring they passed glowed with foxfire, the blue-green light painting their faces in ethereal hues. "Don't step in the circles." Isolde's warning came almost too late as Rory's foot hovered over a particularly inviting ring of red-capped toadstools. "Some lead elsewhere. Some lead nowhere. Some lead to when you've never been." The Heartstone's pulse quickened. Rory pressed her hand over it, feeling the warmth spread up her arm. Strange that a demon artifact would react so strongly to a Fae place. Unless... "There." Nyx's whisper carried unusual weight. They pointed with one shadowy finger toward what Rory's eyes had been sliding past, unable or unwilling to focus. A structure stood between two impossible trees. Not quite building, not quite growth, it seemed carved from a single enormous pearl, its surface rippling with opalescent waves. Doorways—if they were doorways—appeared at random intervals, some at ground level, others floating twenty feet in the air. Stairs that might have been branches or might have been frozen waterfalls connected different levels in ways that made Rory's eyes water. "The Heart of the Grove." Isolde's voice held reverence. "Where future touches past, where maybe meets certain." As they approached, the air grew thick with possibility. Each breath Rory took seemed to fill her lungs with potential—she could taste choices unmade, words unspoken, paths untaken. Her skin tingled with the electric sensation of standing at a crossroads where every direction led somewhere significant. The nearest doorway—an arch of woven moonbeams—trembled as they drew close. Through it, Rory glimpsed not a room but a forest of silver trees under a scarlet sky. The image shifted, showing the same trees under bright sun, then withered and dead beneath starless dark. "It shows what might be." Isolde's hand on her shoulder kept Rory from stepping forward. "But might-be is a dangerous country for mortals to visit." The Grove pulsed around them, alive and aware. Every flower that bloomed, every impossible angle, every shift of light and shadow felt deliberate, like words in a language too ancient for human tongues. Rory understood now why Isolde spoke in riddles—how else to translate thoughts formed in a place where metaphor had mass and meaning could be touched? Her fingers found the Heartstone again. Its warmth had spread through her entire body now, a gentle fire that didn't burn but illuminated. She could feel connections she'd never noticed before—threads linking her to this place, to her companions, to possibilities spread across time like a vast web. "We should go deeper." The words surprised her as they left her mouth. But the Grove had accepted them, and somehow she knew there was more to see, more to understand. Nyx's form rippled. "The shadows here... they remember things that haven't happened yet." "Then perhaps," Isolde said, her smile enigmatic as always, "we should let them show us." They moved toward the pearl structure, toward doorways that led to anywhere and nowhere, while overhead the patchwork sky continued its eternal dance between day and night, and the trees sang their memories into the spaces between moments.
total_cost0.1608

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"lurched"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"practiced ease"
count1
11
word"fluttered"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"quickened"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count2
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"structure"
count2
19
word"potential"
count1
20
word"unspoken"
count1
21
word"electric"
count1
22
word"trembled"
count1
23
word"could feel"
count1
24
word"enigmatic"
count1
25
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"otherworldly"
3"flickered"
4"scanning"
5"pulsed"
6"stomach"
7"lurched"
8"shimmered"
9"silk"
10"practiced ease"
11"fluttered"
12"perfect"
13"pulse"
14"quickened"
15"warmth"
16"whisper"
17"weight"
18"structure"
19"potential"
20"unspoken"
21"electric"
22"trembled"
23"could feel"
24"enigmatic"
25"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
66.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1199
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1038
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Richmond2
Half-Fae1
Heartstone3
Hel1
Park1
Grove4
Fae3
Isolde11
Nyx4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Half-Fae"
2"Heartstone"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Hel"
2"Park"
3"Grove"
4"Fae"
globalScore0.777
windowScore0.667
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"light that seemed to emanate from the very air"
1"felt like walking on clouds"
2"Not quite building, not quite growth, it seemed carved from a single enormous pearl, its surface rippling with opalescent waves"
3"not quite growth, it seemed carved from a single enormous pearl, its surface rippling with opalescent waves"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords4.17
wordCount1199
matches
0"Neither torn nor"
1"neither her heartbeat nor"
2"not alarm, but recognition"
3"not their faces but other times, other possibilities"
4"not a room but a forest of silver trees under a scarlet sky"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
94.31% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean35.26
std16.93
cv0.48
sampleLengths
048
143
226
349
419
55
65
750
86
910
1052
1151
1228
1351
1431
1552
1656
1734
1831
1957
2036
2131
2225
2367
2417
2546
2645
2725
2858
2948
3031
3113
3215
3338
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"been frozen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs179
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences85
ratio0.106
matches
0"She'd grown used to its warnings near Hel portals, but this felt different—not alarm, but recognition."
1"Colors bled into sounds—she could taste the violet of twilight, hear the scent of honeysuckle."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—spring daffodils blooming beside autumn chrysanthemums, summer roses entwined with winter hellebores."
3"Somewhere in the distance—or perhaps just out of sight—water babbled over stones, though the sound came from above rather than below."
4"Doorways—if they were doorways—appeared at random intervals, some at ground level, others floating twenty feet in the air."
5"Each breath Rory took seemed to fill her lungs with potential—she could taste choices unmade, words unspoken, paths untaken."
6"The nearest doorway—an arch of woven moonbeams—trembled as they drew close."
7"Rory understood now why Isolde spoke in riddles—how else to translate thoughts formed in a place where metaphor had mass and meaning could be touched?"
8"She could feel connections she'd never noticed before—threads linking her to this place, to her companions, to possibilities spread across time like a vast web."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1056
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03977272727272727
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004734848484848485
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean14.11
std6.68
cv0.474
sampleLengths
022
126
217
318
48
516
610
714
819
916
1012
117
125
135
1415
1515
1620
176
1810
1912
2018
2122
2211
2325
2415
2516
2612
2713
284
2920
3014
3122
325
334
3420
3511
3618
373
386
3910
4019
4121
4222
4312
449
4517
465
479
4815
4917
92.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5529411764705883
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners47
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then everything snapped back into"
1"Somewhere in the distance—or perhaps"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences74
matches
0"She pressed her palm against"
1"She'd grown used to its"
2"They passed between the stones."
3"Her delivery bike, left leaning"
4"They stood in a clearing"
5"Their trunks twisted upward in"
6"They tilted their head, listening."
7"She stepped back."
8"She paused, a slight smile"
9"They moved deeper, though direction"
10"They pointed with one shadowy"
11"Her skin tingled with the"
12"Her fingers found the Heartstone"
13"Its warmth had spread through"
14"She could feel connections she'd"
15"They moved toward the pearl"
ratio0.216
34.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences74
matches
0"The standing stones loomed before"
1"She pressed her palm against"
2"Isolde's voice carried on a"
3"The Half-Fae's silver hair caught"
4"Nyx's form flickered between solid"
5"Rory touched the Heartstone pendant"
6"The crimson gem pulsed warm"
7"She'd grown used to its"
8"Isolde stepped forward without leaving"
9"They passed between the stones."
10"The world turned inside out."
11"Rory's stomach lurched as up"
12"Colors bled into sounds—she could"
13"Her delivery bike, left leaning"
14"The words escaped before she"
15"They stood in a clearing"
16"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
17"The air itself shimmered with"
18"Patches of midnight blue studded"
19"Isolde moved with practiced ease"
ratio0.851
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"If trees they were."
ratio0.014
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their bark-covered surfaces pulsing with an otherworldly energy that made Rory's teeth ache."
1"The crimson gem pulsed warm against her skin, a steady rhythm that matched neither her heartbeat nor her breathing."
2"Rory glimpsed herself with shorter hair, with a scar across her cheek, with eyes that weren't bright blue."
3"Not quite building, not quite growth, it seemed carved from a single enormous pearl, its surface rippling with opalescent waves."
4"Stairs that might have been branches or might have been frozen waterfalls connected different levels in ways that made Rory's eyes water."
5"Every flower that bloomed, every impossible angle, every shift of light and shadow felt deliberate, like words in a language too ancient for human tongues."
6"Its warmth had spread through her entire body now, a gentle fire that didn't burn but illuminated."
7"They moved toward the pearl structure, toward doorways that led to anywhere and nowhere, while overhead the patchwork sky continued its eternal dance between da…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx's form had, as if the strange physics of this place gave them substance"
1"Isolde said, her smile enigmatic as always,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.9855%