| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He looked away [away]" | | 1 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 74.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flawless" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "efficient" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "shattered" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 186 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 14 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1181 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "celebrate" | | 1 | "not" | | 2 | "watched" | | 3 | "cared" | | 4 | "You don’t have to go back" | | 5 | "I have nowhere else" | | 6 | "You do" | | 7 | "collateral paid" | | 8 | "settled" | | 9 | "me" | | 10 | "wanted" | | 11 | "thunk, thunk, thunk" | | 12 | "hiss" | | 13 | "Melting" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.11% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 691 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.16 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 8 | | Evan | 1 | | Cold | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" | | 5 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Avaros" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 0.921 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 96 | | mean | 12.3 | | std | 10.22 | | cv | 0.831 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 4.61% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 186 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "The bottom one resisted—stiff from London damp—so she rocked it loose with her palm." | | 1 | "The scar on her wrist—a silver crescent beneath the sleeve of her hoodie—itched." | | 2 | "The night he’d killed a man for her—quiet, efficient, and never spoken of since." | | 3 | "Then—impossibly—rubbed his cheek against it." | | 4 | "Or—" | | 5 | "All three bolts slid into place—*thunk, thunk, thunk*—like prison gates." | | 6 | "One page displayed a crude sketch of a sigil—a spiral with jagged teeth." | | 7 | "Now, she was close enough to see the faint silver line across his collarbone—older than her scar." | | 8 | "Then—crash." |
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| 85.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 702 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.05698005698005698 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011396011396011397 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 186 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 186 | | mean | 6.35 | | std | 5.69 | | cv | 0.896 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 64.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3978494623655914 | | totalSentences | 186 | | uniqueOpeners | 74 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the middle." | | 1 | "Just his coat collar turned" | | 2 | "Slowly, he lowered the cane." | | 3 | "Then—impossibly—rubbed his cheek against it." | | 4 | "Then, slowly, he stepped over" |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 55.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She unhooked the top bolt." | | 1 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 2 | "She didn’t move." | | 3 | "It always did when the" | | 4 | "She exhaled sharply." | | 5 | "He tilted his head" | | 6 | "Her fingers curled into her" | | 7 | "He didn’t blink" | | 8 | "Her breath caught." | | 9 | "His voice dropped, smooth as" | | 10 | "Her pulse thudded in her" | | 11 | "It skittered around Lucien’s polished" | | 12 | "She remembered the last time." | | 13 | "Her cheek stinging from where" | | 14 | "*You don’t have to go" | | 15 | "*I have nowhere else*, she’d" | | 16 | "she said now, voice low" | | 17 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 18 | "He glanced at his cane" | | 19 | "Their eyes met." |
| | ratio | 0.411 | |
| 75.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain clattered like a" | | 1 | "Rory didn’t answer the first" | | 2 | "The third came harder, rattling" | | 3 | "Ptolemy hissed from under the" | | 4 | "She unhooked the top bolt." | | 5 | "The bottom one resisted—stiff from" | | 6 | "The man on the landing" | | 7 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 8 | "The ivory cane rested lightly" | | 9 | "Both locked on her." | | 10 | "She didn’t move." | | 11 | "The scar on her wrist—a" | | 12 | "It always did when the" | | 13 | "A fraction too tight." | | 14 | "The neon sign from the" | | 15 | "She exhaled sharply." | | 16 | "He tilted his head" | | 17 | "Her fingers curled into her" | | 18 | "He didn’t blink" | | 19 | "Her breath caught." |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "To close it?" | | 1 | "To keep him out?" | | 2 | "Now, she was close enough" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 20 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.176 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |