| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s form flickered again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.433 | | leniency | 0.867 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 83.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "nervously" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "tinged" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "wavering" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "intricate" | | 14 | "crystalline" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "d with warmth" | | 1 | "d with unease" |
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| 70.52% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1225 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.41% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1026 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.85 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 19 | | Heartstone | 3 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Half-Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.574 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "melody that seemed to shift and change with every note" | | 1 | "colors that seemed to deepen and brighten as she approached" | | 2 | "colors that seemed to deepen and brighten as she watched" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.816 | | wordCount | 1225 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the pale gray of London’s usual overcast, but a deep, shifting lavender, threaded with streaks of gold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 27.84 | | std | 21 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 87 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 64 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 55 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled rich and earthy, tinged with something sweet and unfamiliar—like honey and damp stone." | | 1 | "The air grew cooler as they moved deeper, the scent of wildflowers mingling with the tang of something metallic—like copper and iron." | | 2 | "The water rippled, its surface breaking as something rose from its depths—a small, translucent fish, its body glowing faintly with the same light that suffused the grove." | | 3 | "The world spun, the grotto dissolving around her as visions flooded her mind—images of places she’d never seen, faces she didn’t recognize, paths branching and twisting in endless directions." | | 4 | "She didn’t know what lay ahead, but she knew one thing—this was just the beginning." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1032 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03972868217054264 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018410852713178296 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 12.89 | | std | 6.08 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 42.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3263157894736842 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 87.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, faintly, a sound like" | | 1 | "Instead, she knelt by the" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at the" | | 1 | "They came upon a clearing," | | 2 | "Its trunk was wider than" | | 3 | "She murmured something in a" | | 4 | "It led them around the" | | 5 | "They came upon a grotto" | | 6 | "She stepped inside, the darkness" | | 7 | "Her fingertips brushed its surface," | | 8 | "She gasped, pulling her hand" | | 9 | "she asked, her voice shaking" | | 10 | "She didn’t know what lay" |
| | ratio | 0.145 | |
| 12.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered, a faint" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant around her" | | 2 | "Nyx flowed beside her, their" | | 3 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver" | | 4 | "The grove stretched out before" | | 5 | "The trees were taller than" | | 6 | "The air smelled rich and" | | 7 | "The sky above was wrong," | | 8 | "Aurora’s voice felt small in" | | 9 | "Isolde turned, her lavender eyes" | | 10 | "Nyx’s form shifted, solidifying slightly" | | 11 | "Isolde said, her words cryptic" | | 12 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed against the" | | 13 | "The blade glinted faintly, catching" | | 14 | "She glanced back at the" | | 15 | "The path ahead was overgrown," | | 16 | "Aurora followed, her boots sinking" | | 17 | "The air grew cooler as" | | 18 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper," | | 19 | "Aurora paused, listening." |
| | ratio | 0.895 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant around her neck pulsed with warmth, a steady rhythm that matched the quickening of her pulse." | | 1 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver hair catching the strange light that filtered through the ancient oaks, her footsteps leaving no trace in the soft moss underfoo…" | | 2 | "Not the pale gray of London’s usual overcast, but a deep, shifting lavender, threaded with streaks of gold that twisted and coiled like living ribbons." | | 3 | "Then, faintly, a sound like distant bells, their tones echoing and overlapping in a melody that seemed to shift and change with every note." | | 4 | "Aurora withdrew her hand, her fingers tingling as if the air itself had warned her against it." | | 5 | "The water rippled, its surface breaking as something rose from its depths—a small, translucent fish, its body glowing faintly with the same light that suffused …" | | 6 | "Resting atop it was a small, crystalline orb, its surface shifting and swirling with colors that seemed to deepen and brighten as she approached." | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her chest, a steady rhythm that mirrored her heartbeat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her words cryptic" | | 1 | "Aurora asked, her voice hushed" | | 2 | "Nyx countered, their form flickering nervously" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her voice reverent" | | 4 | "Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice shaking" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |