Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6XK85Y7K9BACBN7EZ47W

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.000460
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her shirt. It pulsed once, a faint warmth against her skin, like a warning. She shouldn’t have come at night. But the note had been clear: *Midnight. The standing stones. Bring the pendant.* No signature, no explanation—just the same slanted handwriting that had slipped under her door three times before, each message more urgent than the last. The first had been a warning. The second, a plea. The third had simply read: *They’re coming.* Rory exhaled through her nose, her breath curling in the cold. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled roots twisting like skeletal fingers into the earth. The oaks were ancient, their bark blackened as if scorched by something unseen. She stepped closer, boots sinking slightly into the damp moss. The pendant pulsed again, stronger this time, its glow seeping through the fabric of her shirt. A twig snapped. She froze. Nothing moved. The trees stood silent, their branches knitting together overhead like a cage. The wind had died. Even the usual hum of London traffic—distant but ever-present—had vanished, swallowed by the unnatural stillness. Rory turned slowly, scanning the grove. The standing stones formed a rough circle, their surfaces etched with symbols she didn’t recognise. Some looked like writing. Others like wounds. *You’re being paranoid.* She reached for the pendant, pulling it free. The crimson gemstone throbbed in her palm, its glow casting jagged shadows across the ground. The warmth spread up her arm, prickling like static. Then she heard it. A whisper. Not from the trees. Not from the wind. From *inside* the stones. Rory’s pulse spiked. She took a step back, her heel catching on a root. The pendant’s light flickered, dimming for a heartbeat before flaring brighter. The whispers grew louder, overlapping, a chorus of voices speaking in a language that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts. *You shouldn’t be here.* She didn’t know if the words were in her head or in the air. The standing stones seemed to lean inward, their shadows stretching unnaturally long. The moss beneath her boots darkened, spreading like ink. A figure stepped out from behind the nearest oak. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs were elongated, joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench. The face—if it could be called a face—was a smooth, featureless oval, save for a vertical slit where a mouth should have been. It tilted its head, studying her. Rory’s breath came in shallow bursts. The pendant burned against her skin. The thing took a step forward. The ground didn’t so much as tremble beneath it. No sound. No rustle of leaves. Just silence, thick and suffocating. “You have something that doesn’t belong to you,” it said. Its voice wasn’t a voice. It was the sound of dry leaves skittering across pavement, of a needle scraping against vinyl, of a breath held too long. The words wrapped around her skull, pressing inward. Rory clenched her fists. The pendant’s glow intensified, casting the grove in a sickly red hue. The thing’s slit of a mouth twitched. “Give it to me,” it said. She didn’t move. The whispers from the stones grew louder, more insistent. The air thickened, pressing against her skin like wet cloth. The figure took another step. Then another. The space between them shrank. Rory’s fingers tightened around the pendant. The warmth seared her palm, but she didn’t let go. “No,” she said. The thing stopped. The slit in its face stretched into something resembling a smile. Then the ground beneath Rory’s feet *moved*. Not an earthquake. Not a shift. The moss *ripped* itself from the earth, tendrils lashing upward like serpents. They coiled around her ankles, yanking her off balance. She hit the ground hard, the impact knocking the breath from her lungs. The pendant flew from her grip, skittering across the damp earth. The thing lunged. Rory rolled, her fingers scrambling for the pendant. The moss tightened, dragging her backward. She kicked, her boot connecting with something solid—one of the standing stones. Pain shot up her leg, but the moss loosened just enough for her to twist free. She grabbed the pendant. The moment her fingers closed around it, the world *screamed*. A blast of crimson light erupted from the gemstone, searing through the grove. The thing shrieked—a sound like tearing metal—and recoiled, its form flickering like a dying flame. The moss withered, crumbling to dust. The whispers from the stones cut off abruptly, leaving only the ragged sound of Rory’s breathing. She didn’t wait. She ran. Branches whipped at her arms as she crashed through the undergrowth, the pendant’s glow lighting her path. The grove seemed to twist behind her, the standing stones shifting, the path narrowing. She didn’t look back. The edge of the grove came into view—a break in the trees, the faint glow of London’s streetlights beyond. She burst through, her boots pounding against pavement. The cold night air hit her like a slap, sharp and real. Rory didn’t stop running until she reached the flat above Silas’ bar. Only then did she dare to look down at the pendant. It was dark. Lifeless. And the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist *ached*.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount910
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount910
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"loomed"
3"scanning"
4"etched"
5"throbbed"
6"whisper"
7"pulse"
8"flickered"
9"stomach"
10"silence"
11"searing"
12"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords21
totalWords898
ratio0.023
matches
0"Midnight. The standing stones. Bring the pendant."
1"They’re coming."
2"You’re being paranoid."
3"inside"
4"You shouldn’t be here."
5"moved"
6"ripped"
7"screamed"
8"ached"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount883
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory11
Heartstone1
London2
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.877
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount898
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean19.96
std18.05
cv0.904
sampleLengths
052
16
254
365
43
52
633
728
83
932
104
112
128
134
1448
154
1635
179
1845
1912
2026
2110
2235
2323
246
253
2631
2716
283
2914
307
316
3245
333
3442
354
3610
3750
383
392
4035
4139
4223
434
449
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"were elongated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences105
ratio0.067
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew."
1"Bring the pendant.* No signature, no explanation—just the same slanted handwriting that had slipped under her door three times before, each message more urgent than the last."
2"Even the usual hum of London traffic—distant but ever-present—had vanished, swallowed by the unnatural stillness."
3"The face—if it could be called a face—was a smooth, featureless oval, save for a vertical slit where a mouth should have been."
4"She kicked, her boot connecting with something solid—one of the standing stones."
5"The thing shrieked—a sound like tearing metal—and recoiled, its form flickering like a dying flame."
6"The edge of the grove came into view—a break in the trees, the faint glow of London’s streetlights beyond."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount870
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03908045977011494
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008045977011494253
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean8.55
std5.58
cv0.652
sampleLengths
024
116
212
36
47
53
627
76
84
97
1011
1115
1213
1310
1416
153
162
172
1812
194
2015
216
2215
234
243
253
268
2715
289
294
302
314
324
334
343
3511
3611
3723
384
3914
4012
419
429
431
442
4513
4623
476
486
496
30.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2571428571428571
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences93
matches
0"Even the usual hum of"
1"Then she heard it."
2"Just silence, thick and suffocating."
3"Then the ground beneath Rory’s"
4"Only then did she dare"
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences93
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"It pulsed once, a faint"
2"She shouldn’t have come at"
3"She stepped closer, boots sinking"
4"*You’re being paranoid.*"
5"She reached for the pendant,"
6"She took a step back,"
7"*You shouldn’t be here.*"
8"She didn’t know if the"
9"Its limbs were elongated, joints"
10"It tilted its head, studying"
11"Its voice wasn’t a voice."
12"It was the sound of"
13"She didn’t move."
14"They coiled around her ankles,"
15"She hit the ground hard,"
16"She kicked, her boot connecting"
17"She grabbed the pendant."
18"She didn’t wait."
19"She didn’t look back."
ratio0.237
35.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences93
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"It pulsed once, a faint"
3"She shouldn’t have come at"
4"The standing stones."
5"The first had been a"
6"The second, a plea."
7"The third had simply read:"
8"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
9"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
10"The oaks were ancient, their"
11"She stepped closer, boots sinking"
12"The pendant pulsed again, stronger"
13"A twig snapped."
14"The trees stood silent, their"
15"The wind had died."
16"Rory turned slowly, scanning the"
17"The standing stones formed a"
18"Some looked like writing."
19"Others like wounds."
ratio0.849
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew."
1"The oaks were ancient, their bark blackened as if scorched by something unseen."
2"The whispers grew louder, overlapping, a chorus of voices speaking in a language that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts."
3"Its limbs were elongated, joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench."
4"The thing shrieked—a sound like tearing metal—and recoiled, its form flickering like a dying flame."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.6201%