| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 910 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 910 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 898 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "Midnight. The standing stones. Bring the pendant." | | 1 | "They’re coming." | | 2 | "You’re being paranoid." | | 3 | "inside" | | 4 | "You shouldn’t be here." | | 5 | "moved" | | 6 | "ripped" | | 7 | "screamed" | | 8 | "ached" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 883 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.877 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 898 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 19.96 | | std | 18.05 | | cv | 0.904 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 50 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew." | | 1 | "Bring the pendant.* No signature, no explanation—just the same slanted handwriting that had slipped under her door three times before, each message more urgent than the last." | | 2 | "Even the usual hum of London traffic—distant but ever-present—had vanished, swallowed by the unnatural stillness." | | 3 | "The face—if it could be called a face—was a smooth, featureless oval, save for a vertical slit where a mouth should have been." | | 4 | "She kicked, her boot connecting with something solid—one of the standing stones." | | 5 | "The thing shrieked—a sound like tearing metal—and recoiled, its form flickering like a dying flame." | | 6 | "The edge of the grove came into view—a break in the trees, the faint glow of London’s streetlights beyond." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 870 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03908045977011494 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008045977011494253 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 8.55 | | std | 5.58 | | cv | 0.652 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 30.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.2571428571428571 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the usual hum of" | | 1 | "Then she heard it." | | 2 | "Just silence, thick and suffocating." | | 3 | "Then the ground beneath Rory’s" | | 4 | "Only then did she dare" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It pulsed once, a faint" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 3 | "She stepped closer, boots sinking" | | 4 | "*You’re being paranoid.*" | | 5 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 6 | "She took a step back," | | 7 | "*You shouldn’t be here.*" | | 8 | "She didn’t know if the" | | 9 | "Its limbs were elongated, joints" | | 10 | "It tilted its head, studying" | | 11 | "Its voice wasn’t a voice." | | 12 | "It was the sound of" | | 13 | "She didn’t move." | | 14 | "They coiled around her ankles," | | 15 | "She hit the ground hard," | | 16 | "She kicked, her boot connecting" | | 17 | "She grabbed the pendant." | | 18 | "She didn’t wait." | | 19 | "She didn’t look back." |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 35.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "It pulsed once, a faint" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 4 | "The standing stones." | | 5 | "The first had been a" | | 6 | "The second, a plea." | | 7 | "The third had simply read:" | | 8 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 9 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 10 | "The oaks were ancient, their" | | 11 | "She stepped closer, boots sinking" | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed again, stronger" | | 13 | "A twig snapped." | | 14 | "The trees stood silent, their" | | 15 | "The wind had died." | | 16 | "Rory turned slowly, scanning the" | | 17 | "The standing stones formed a" | | 18 | "Some looked like writing." | | 19 | "Others like wounds." |
| | ratio | 0.849 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew." | | 1 | "The oaks were ancient, their bark blackened as if scorched by something unseen." | | 2 | "The whispers grew louder, overlapping, a chorus of voices speaking in a language that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts." | | 3 | "Its limbs were elongated, joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "The thing shrieked—a sound like tearing metal—and recoiled, its form flickering like a dying flame." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |