Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX6YT0GEZ7VGVB21X4BY2Z

Run Details

Duration:
21.0s
Cost:
$0.010418
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain sliced down in silver needles, turning Soho’s cobbled lanes into slick veins of reflected neon. Harlow Quinn’s leather boots slipped once on the edge of a drain cover, but she caught herself with a grunt, breath bursting white in the cold. Her coat flapped behind her like the wings of some bedraggled bird of prey. Ahead, a shadow darted between two narrow alleys—just a flicker under the weak halo of a sodium lamp—but she knew it was him. The same figure she’d seen two nights ago at the perimeter of Silas’ bar, whispering into a mobile, eyes darting like a startled fox. She wasn’t sure what he had. Only that he’d left The Raven’s Nest too fast after seeing her walk in, that he hadn’t belonged there the way the regulars did—the ones who knew how to drink in silence, who didn’t ask questions about the bookshelf that never seemed to line up right with the others. Her wrist throbbed where the strap of her watch dug in. Eighteen years on the force, and she still felt it—the phantom weight of Morris’ hand on her shoulder the last time she saw him alive. Just before the fog swallowed him whole in that godforsaken warehouse in Deptford. No body. No explanation. Just a puddle of black oil on the floor and a single feather, too large to belong to any bird she knew. She rounded the corner, water sluicing off her collar. The figure was gone. The alley ended in a rusted iron gate, chained but bent at the base. Fresh scrape marks on the concrete. She dropped to one knee, fingers grazing the spot where someone—recently—had wrenched through. Her torch beam cut through the dark. Footprints. Small, narrow. Sneakers, soaked through. They led down. A set of broken steps, half-collapsed and slick with algae, disappeared beneath street level. The air here tasted stale, metallic—like old pennies and damp earth. She hesitated only a second. Then she was moving, one hand braced against the crumbling brick wall, the other gripping her service weapon. The beam flickered. She tapped it. It steadied. The steps spiraled into blackness. The sound of dripping water echoed below, layered with something else—muffled voices, a low thump of music, the clink of glass. Not police business. Not civilian. This was something else. At the bottom, a tunnel stretched ahead, arched brickwork slick with condensation. And there, ten feet ahead, stood a man—hood drawn low, shoulders tight. He faced a blank stretch of wall, then reached into his coat. Pulled out a small, yellowed object. A bone token. Pressed it into a recess Quinn hadn’t even seen. The wall slid open with a groan, revealing a cascade of dim, coloured light—amber, violet, crimson—spilling from within. Voices rose in a dozen languages, some guttural, some singing. The scent hit her next. Spices she couldn’t name, copper, incense, something sweet and rotten underneath. Her fingers tightened on the grip of her gun. She waited until the man disappeared, until the wall began to glide shut. Then she lunged, shoulder first, into the narrowing gap. She stumbled into a vast, cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, the kind they’d decommissioned in the ‘80s. But this was no relic. Lanterns dangled from rusted tracks above, casting swaying halos over stalls carved from stone and scrap metal. People—humans, mostly, though some weren’t quite right—bargained over vials of glowing liquid, bundles of dried roots, locks of hair sealed in jars. A woman with eyes like polished jet offered her a cracked mirror that whispered when touched. A man in a long coat bartered for a caged bird with too many wings. Quinn kept her head down, hand tucked in her coat, not touching the gun—not yet. But every instinct screamed at her to draw. She spotted him again, slipping toward a stall draped in black cloth. The vendor wore a mask of stitched leather, fingers long and unnaturally jointed. The man reached under the counter. Exchanged the bone token. Took something small, wrapped in waxed paper. Quinn moved closer, weaving through the crowd. The air thickened. Static prickled her scalp. Someone bumped her shoulder. She turned—too fast—and found herself staring into the face of a boy who had no reflection in the polished brass bowl beside him. She backed away. Breath steadied. Focused. Then, just ahead, the suspect turned. Saw her. His eyes widened. He bolted—ducking between two stalls, knocking over a basket of dried moths that burst into blue flame when they hit the ground. Quinn cursed, drawing her weapon as people scattered. She followed, vaulting over a low counter, boots skidding on scattered gravel and ash. He ran toward the far end of the platform, where the rails descended into deeper darkness. Another doorway there—half-collapsed, guarded by a figure in a long, hooded coat, arms crossed. Armed? Probably. But the man wasn’t stopping. He shoved past the guard, disappearing into the tunnel beyond. Quinn slowed. Her pulse hammered in her jaw. She holstered her weapon—visibility would only get her killed down there. Instead, she reached into her jacket, pulled out her own bone token. Found on Morris’ desk the day after he vanished. She’d kept it. Studied it. Never known what it meant—until now. The guard turned. Hood low. No face beneath. “You don’t belong here,” the figure said, voice like stone grating on stone. “I’m not looking for trouble,” Quinn said. “Just him.” “The detective always wants the one who runs,” the guard mused. “But the market sees your kind. It knows your hunger. You follow one rabbit, you’ll find a warren of things you can’t name.” “I’ve seen worse,” she said. “Not like this.” She stepped forward, holding up the token. “Morris gave me this.” The guard stilled. Then, slowly, the head tilted. “You’re the one he shielded.” She didn’t answer. Didn’t need to. After a long silence, the guard stepped aside. “Fifteen minutes. Then the passage seals. And you’re lost.” She didn’t thank him. Just passed through. The tunnel narrowed quickly, walls closing in, lights sparse and flickering. The air grew colder. Her breath fogged. She could hear him ahead—panting, stumbling—knowing he was trapped. Then a voice, not his. “You shouldn’t have come down here, Detective.” She stopped. From the shadows stepped a man—mid-thirties, curly dark hair, olive skin, a scar running down his forearm. He wore a leather satchel slung over one shoulder, and around his neck, a metal medallion. Saint Christopher. Protector of travelers. “You’re Herrera,” she said, hand drifting toward her gun. “The one who treated your partner,” he said. “Before they took his license. Before they erased his records.” “Where’s the suspect?” “Gone. Through the inner gate. You won’t catch him now.” Herrera studied her. “But I know why you’re here. It’s not him you’re chasing. It’s what Morris saw. What he couldn’t prove.” Her fingers curled. “You helped him.” “I warned him. Like I’m warning you. Some doors stay shut for a reason.” Behind him, a low hum rose from the dark—like the growl of something ancient, waking. Quinn took a step forward. “Then show me what’s behind it.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"silence"
2"throbbed"
3"weight"
4"flickered"
5"echoed"
6"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1185
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1007
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn8
Raven1
Nest1
Deptford1
Tube1
Christopher1
Herrera1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Christopher"
3"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"Deptford"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1185
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"in, that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean28.9
std25.06
cv0.867
sampleLengths
0103
155
275
362
456
535
654
753
883
954
1042
1141
126
138
1447
1547
1651
178
1813
199
2034
215
223
2311
2413
256
2617
277
2827
295
307
312
3238
339
3418
353
3632
376
3814
3915
4011
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs187
matches
0"wasn’t stopping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount27
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences133
ratio0.143
matches
0"Ahead, a shadow darted between two narrow alleys—just a flicker under the weak halo of a sodium lamp—but she knew it was him."
1"Only that he’d left The Raven’s Nest too fast after seeing her walk in, that he hadn’t belonged there the way the regulars did—the ones who knew how to drink in silence, who didn’t ask questions about the bookshelf that never seemed to line up right with the others."
2"Eighteen years on the force, and she still felt it—the phantom weight of Morris’ hand on her shoulder the last time she saw him alive."
3"She dropped to one knee, fingers grazing the spot where someone—recently—had wrenched through."
4"The air here tasted stale, metallic—like old pennies and damp earth."
5"The sound of dripping water echoed below, layered with something else—muffled voices, a low thump of music, the clink of glass."
6"And there, ten feet ahead, stood a man—hood drawn low, shoulders tight."
7"The wall slid open with a groan, revealing a cascade of dim, coloured light—amber, violet, crimson—spilling from within."
8"She stumbled into a vast, cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, the kind they’d decommissioned in the ‘80s."
9"People—humans, mostly, though some weren’t quite right—bargained over vials of glowing liquid, bundles of dried roots, locks of hair sealed in jars."
10"Quinn kept her head down, hand tucked in her coat, not touching the gun—not yet."
11"She turned—too fast—and found herself staring into the face of a boy who had no reflection in the polished brass bowl beside him."
12"He bolted—ducking between two stalls, knocking over a basket of dried moths that burst into blue flame when they hit the ground."
13"Another doorway there—half-collapsed, guarded by a figure in a long, hooded coat, arms crossed."
14"She holstered her weapon—visibility would only get her killed down there."
15"Never known what it meant—until now."
16"She could hear him ahead—panting, stumbling—knowing he was trapped."
17"From the shadows stepped a man—mid-thirties, curly dark hair, olive skin, a scar running down his forearm."
18"Behind him, a low hum rose from the dark—like the growl of something ancient, waking."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount199
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.02512562814070352
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean8.91
std7.17
cv0.804
sampleLengths
016
126
214
323
424
56
649
711
825
913
102
112
1222
139
144
1514
166
1713
187
191
202
213
223
2314
2411
255
2618
273
283
292
305
3121
323
332
344
3512
3612
3712
386
393
409
4118
4210
435
4411
459
4613
479
4817
495
69.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.45112781954887216
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners60
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount10
totalSentences100
matches
0"Only that he’d left The"
1"Just before the fog swallowed"
2"Just a puddle of black"
3"Then she was moving, one"
4"Then she lunged, shoulder first,"
5"Then, just ahead, the suspect"
6"Instead, she reached into her"
7"Then, slowly, the head tilted."
8"Just passed through."
9"Then a voice, not his."
ratio0.1
92.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences100
matches
0"Her coat flapped behind her"
1"She wasn’t sure what he"
2"Her wrist throbbed where the"
3"She rounded the corner, water"
4"She dropped to one knee,"
5"Her torch beam cut through"
6"They led down."
7"She hesitated only a second."
8"She tapped it."
9"He faced a blank stretch"
10"Her fingers tightened on the"
11"She waited until the man"
12"She stumbled into a vast,"
13"She spotted him again, slipping"
14"She turned—too fast—and found herself"
15"She backed away."
16"His eyes widened."
17"He bolted—ducking between two stalls,"
18"She followed, vaulting over a"
19"He ran toward the far"
ratio0.32
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences100
matches
0"Rain sliced down in silver"
1"Harlow Quinn’s leather boots slipped"
2"Her coat flapped behind her"
3"The same figure she’d seen"
4"She wasn’t sure what he"
5"Her wrist throbbed where the"
6"She rounded the corner, water"
7"The figure was gone."
8"The alley ended in a"
9"She dropped to one knee,"
10"Her torch beam cut through"
11"Sneakers, soaked through."
12"They led down."
13"A set of broken steps,"
14"The air here tasted stale,"
15"She hesitated only a second."
16"The beam flickered."
17"She tapped it."
18"The steps spiraled into blackness."
19"The sound of dripping water"
ratio0.7
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Only that he’d left The Raven’s Nest too fast after seeing her walk in, that he hadn’t belonged there the way the regulars did—the ones who knew how to drink in…"
1"A woman with eyes like polished jet offered her a cracked mirror that whispered when touched."
2"She turned—too fast—and found herself staring into the face of a boy who had no reflection in the polished brass bowl beside him."
3"He bolted—ducking between two stalls, knocking over a basket of dried moths that burst into blue flame when they hit the ground."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.7685%