Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX74H3HJG233V6XEZ77BAQ

Run Details

Duration:
40.2s
Cost:
$0.025695

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement like machine-gun fire, turning London's streets into rivers of reflected neon. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she pursued her target down the narrow alleyway behind The Raven's Nest. The distinctive green glow of Silas' bar faded behind her, swallowed by the maze of Soho's back streets. Her suspect—a wiry man in a dark coat—glanced over his shoulder before vaulting over a chain-link fence with practiced ease. Quinn cursed under her breath, water streaming down her face as she grabbed the wet metal links and hauled herself up. Her worn leather watch caught on the wire, but she yanked it free without breaking stride. "Metropolitan Police! Stop running!" The man ignored her command, disappearing around the corner of a Victorian warehouse. Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as she landed hard on the other side, her military bearing keeping her upright despite the slick pavement. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that runners usually had good reason to flee, and this particular runner had been spotted leaving The Raven's Nest just moments before she'd arrived to question the bartender about Morris. Always came back to Morris. The alley opened onto Camden High Street, where late-night revellers huddled under shop awnings and bus stops, their faces pale in the streetlight. Her suspect wove between them, knocking aside a group of tourists who scattered with shouts of protest. Quinn followed, her brown eyes scanning the crowd for movement. "Which way did he go?" she called to a girl with purple hair smoking under a doorway. "Down there, toward the market." The girl pointed north with her cigarette. "Mental running in this weather, innit?" Quinn nodded her thanks and sprinted in the indicated direction, her breath forming clouds in the cold air. The rain had driven most people indoors, leaving the streets eerily quiet except for the constant drumming of water on concrete and the distant rumble of the Underground. She caught sight of her quarry again as he ducked down a side street lined with shuttered shops and graffitied walls. This part of Camden felt different after midnight—older somehow, as if the modern city had peeled back to reveal something more ancient underneath. The feeling reminded her uncomfortably of the night Morris had vanished, when reality seemed to bend at the edges. The man ahead stumbled, his coat catching on a rusted fire escape ladder. Quinn gained ground, close enough now to see the panic in his movements. He freed himself and continued running, but his breathing had grown laboured. She was closing the distance. "Enough games! I just want to talk!" He reached what appeared to be a dead end—a brick wall covered in layers of flyposters and street art. Quinn slowed, thinking she had him cornered. Then he did something that made her blood run cold. He pressed his hand against a seemingly random section of the wall and whispered something she couldn't hear over the rain. A section of the bricks swung inward like a door. The man disappeared into the darkness beyond, and the wall began to swing closed. Quinn sprinted forward, diving through the gap just as it sealed shut behind her with a grinding sound like stone on stone. She found herself in a narrow tunnel that sloped downward into the earth. The walls were old London brick, slick with moisture and age. Emergency lighting strips cast sickly yellow pools every few metres, but between them stretched patches of absolute darkness. The air smelled of rust and something else—something organic that made her think of old bones. Her suspect's footsteps echoed ahead, growing fainter with each second. Quinn drew her torch and followed, one hand trailing along the tunnel wall for guidance. The passage curved and branched, leading deeper underground. She passed rusted pipes and cables that disappeared into the darkness, remnants of the city's hidden infrastructure. After what felt like hours but could only have been minutes, she emerged into a vast circular space that took her breath away. It was an abandoned Tube station, but like nothing she'd seen before. The platforms had been converted into a sprawling market, lit by hundreds of mismatched lanterns and candles that cast dancing shadows on the curved ceiling. Stalls filled every available space, their wares glinting in the flickering light. She saw bottles filled with luminescent liquids, books bound in leather that looked suspiciously like skin, and jewelry that seemed to move on its own. The vendors were as strange as their merchandise—some appeared human enough, while others made her eyes water to look at directly. The air thrummed with whispered conversations in languages she didn't recognise, punctuated by the clink of coins and the rustle of paper money changing hands. The organic smell from the tunnel had grown stronger here, mixed with incense and something that reminded her of ozone before a thunderstorm. Her suspect stood at a stall near the platform's edge, speaking rapidly to a vendor whose face was hidden beneath a deep hood. Money changed hands, along with a small package wrapped in black cloth. The man tucked it inside his coat and melted back into the crowd. Quinn stepped forward, her police instincts warring with a growing sense that she had stumbled into something far beyond her understanding. The other market-goers seemed to notice her now, conversations dying as brown eyes and others turned in her direction. She felt like a fox that had wandered into a den of wolves. A woman approached from her left—elderly, wearing layers of shawls despite the underground warmth. When she smiled, Quinn saw that her teeth were filed to points. "Lost, dearie? The surface is that way." She pointed back toward the tunnel entrance with one gnarled finger. "Though I wonder how you got past the door without a token." Quinn's hand moved instinctively toward her warrant card, then stopped. Something told her that Metropolitan Police credentials would carry little weight in this place. "I'm pursuing a suspect. Criminal investigation." The woman's laugh sounded like grinding glass. "Oh, we're all criminals down here, love. Question is, what kind of criminal are you?" The crowd pressed closer, forming a loose circle around Quinn. She counted exits—three tunnels leading deeper into the station complex, plus the way she'd come. Her suspect had vanished somewhere in the maze of stalls, and every second she delayed gave him more time to escape. But this place, whatever it was, represented something bigger than one fleeing suspect. The package he'd purchased, the strange vendors, the impossible door in the wall—it all connected to the world she'd been trying to understand since Morris disappeared. The world that existed just beneath the surface of ordinary London, feeding off its shadows.
total_cost0.025695

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She pointed back [back]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.222
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"streaming"
count1
2
word"jaw clenched"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"complex"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"streaming"
2"jaw clenched"
3"scanning"
4"footsteps"
5"echoed"
6"dancing"
7"glinting"
8"warmth"
9"weight"
10"complex"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1122
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1042
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London3
Harlow1
Quinn13
Raven2
Nest2
Victorian1
Morris4
Camden2
High1
Street1
Underground1
Tube1
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
globalScore0.876
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"hand against a seemingly random section of t"
1"felt like hours but could only have bee"
2"jewelry that seemed to move on its own"
3"felt like a fox that had wandered into"
4"sounded like grinding glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1122
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"saw that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean38.69
std20.09
cv0.519
sampleLengths
053
157
24
373
45
550
617
718
846
963
1043
117
1257
1310
1436
1558
1650
1760
1858
1948
2048
2153
2226
2330
2424
256
2622
2746
2854
78.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences65
matches
0"been spotted"
1"been converted"
2"was hidden"
3"were filed"
4"was, represented"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was closing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences71
ratio0.113
matches
0"Her suspect—a wiry man in a dark coat—glanced over his shoulder before vaulting over a chain-link fence with practiced ease."
1"This part of Camden felt different after midnight—older somehow, as if the modern city had peeled back to reveal something more ancient underneath."
2"He reached what appeared to be a dead end—a brick wall covered in layers of flyposters and street art."
3"The air smelled of rust and something else—something organic that made her think of old bones."
4"The vendors were as strange as their merchandise—some appeared human enough, while others made her eyes water to look at directly."
5"A woman approached from her left—elderly, wearing layers of shawls despite the underground warmth."
6"She counted exits—three tunnels leading deeper into the station complex, plus the way she'd come."
7"The package he'd purchased, the strange vendors, the impossible door in the wall—it all connected to the world she'd been trying to understand since Morris disappeared."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount90
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.011111111111111112
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean15.8
std6.32
cv0.4
sampleLengths
015
120
218
320
421
516
64
713
822
938
105
1123
1217
1310
1417
1512
166
1718
1828
1921
2023
2119
2213
2313
2412
255
267
2719
287
2910
3021
3110
3214
3322
3413
3511
3618
3716
3810
3915
408
4117
4223
4312
4425
4512
4625
4721
4825
4923
62.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4084507042253521
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Always came back to Morris."
1"Then he did something that"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her suspect—a wiry man in"
1"Her worn leather watch caught"
2"Her suspect wove between them,"
3"she called to a girl"
4"She caught sight of her"
5"He freed himself and continued"
6"She was closing the distance."
7"He reached what appeared to"
8"He pressed his hand against"
9"She found herself in a"
10"Her suspect's footsteps echoed ahead,"
11"She passed rusted pipes and"
12"It was an abandoned Tube"
13"She saw bottles filled with"
14"Her suspect stood at a"
15"She felt like a fox"
16"She pointed back toward the"
17"She counted exits—three tunnels leading"
18"Her suspect had vanished somewhere"
ratio0.292
13.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences65
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
1"The distinctive green glow of"
2"Her suspect—a wiry man in"
3"Quinn cursed under her breath,"
4"Her worn leather watch caught"
5"The man ignored her command,"
6"Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as"
7"The alley opened onto Camden"
8"Her suspect wove between them,"
9"Quinn followed, her brown eyes"
10"she called to a girl"
11"The girl pointed north with"
12"Quinn nodded her thanks and"
13"The rain had driven most"
14"She caught sight of her"
15"This part of Camden felt"
16"The feeling reminded her uncomfortably"
17"The man ahead stumbled, his"
18"Quinn gained ground, close enough"
19"He freed himself and continued"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her suspect wove between them, knocking aside a group of tourists who scattered with shouts of protest."
1"This part of Camden felt different after midnight—older somehow, as if the modern city had peeled back to reveal something more ancient underneath."
2"Then he did something that made her blood run cold."
3"The platforms had been converted into a sprawling market, lit by hundreds of mismatched lanterns and candles that cast dancing shadows on the curved ceiling."
4"The organic smell from the tunnel had grown stronger here, mixed with incense and something that reminded her of ozone before a thunderstorm."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.7601%