Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX75WC29FESWGG2PH95PDH

Run Details

Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.005539
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside The Fae Grove tasted of copper and wet earth, thick enough to coat the back of Aurora's throat. She stepped past the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary, her boots sinking into soil that felt too soft, like flesh waiting to be bruised. Richmond Park outside these borders slept under a blanket of London fog, but here, the wildflowers bloomed in aggressive bursts of colour that hurt her eyes. Petals the size of dinner plates unfurled in shades of violet and sickly yellow, releasing a scent so sweet it bordered on rotting fruit. Aurora clutched the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant against her collarbone. The deep crimson gem pulsed against her skin, a frantic, rhythmic heat that had nothing to do with her own body temperature. It glowed with a faint inner light, casting long, dancing shadows across the clearing. She came here because the stone dragged her, a physical tug at her sternum that grew unbearable the moment she left her flat above Silas' bar. Now that she stood within the pocket realm, the pulling stopped, replaced by a silence so absolute it rang in her ears. No crickets chirped. No wind rustled the leaves of the surrounding trees. The usual night sounds of Earth vanished the instant she crossed the threshold of the oaks. She checked her watch. The hands spun counter-clockwise, a blur of metal. Time behaved badly here. An hour inside could mean minutes or days outside. The thought tightened her chest. She needed to find what the stone wanted and leave before the temporal distortion locked her in forever. A twig snapped. The sound came from behind a cluster of ferns that stood taller than a man. Aurora froze, her breath hitching in her throat. She turned slowly, her bright blue eyes scanning the dense undergrowth. Nothing moved. The oversized flowers remained still, their stems rigid as iron rods. "Hello?" Her voice sounded flat, stripped of echo, as if the air itself swallowed the vibration. Silence answered. Not the peaceful quiet of an empty room, but the heavy, expectant hush of a predator holding its breath. She took a step forward, the mud squelching beneath her sole. The sound was obscenely loud in the stillness. As she moved, a flicker of motion caught the edge of her vision to the left. She whipped her head around. A shadow detached itself from the trunk of an oak tree, elongating and stretching towards her before snapping back into place when she looked directly at it. Her hand went to her left wrist, fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there. A childhood accident, harmless and mundane. Here, the scar throbbed in sync with the Heartstone. The wrongness settled over her like a wet sheet. It started in her gut, a cold knot of certainty that she was not the only conscious thing in the clearing. The air pressure dropped, popping her ears. The wildflowers seemed to lean inward, their heavy heads turning to track her progress. She forced her legs to move. "Just get the read and go," she muttered. Another sound drifted through the grove. A whisper. It wasn't words, but the friction of dry leaves rubbing together, mimicking the cadence of speech. It came from everywhere at once, surrounding her. The hair on her arms stood up, prickling against the fabric of her jacket. Aurora stopped walking. The Heartstone burned hotter, searing her skin through her shirt. The crimson glow intensified, painting the nearby flora in hues of blood. In the sudden flare of light, she saw them. Shapes stood between the trees. Tall, impossibly thin figures composed of tangled branches and shadows. They did not breathe. They did not shift their weight. They simply existed, facing her. When she blinked, they vanished. When she opened her eyes, they stood closer. She spun in a circle, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. The figures环 encircled her now, a perimeter of darkness tightening with every second. The sweet smell of the flowers turned rancid, the odour of open graves filling her nose. "Show yourselves," she demanded, her voice trembling despite her effort to keep it steady. The whispering grew louder, coalescing into a hiss that sounded like steam escaping a vent. The ground beneath her feet vibrated, a low hum that traveled up her legs and rattled her teeth. The wildflowers began to wilt before her eyes, their vibrant colours draining to grey, their petals curling into blackened claws. Something brushed against her shoulder. She jerked away, stumbling backward into the mud. Nothing stood there, yet the sensation of cold, dry fingers lingered on her jacket. She looked down at her sleeve. A patch of frost spread across the fabric, creeping toward her hand. The shadows between the trees deepened, pooling on the ground like spilled ink. These pools began to move, flowing uphill against gravity, converging on her position. The Heartstone pulsed so violently it felt like a second heart beating inside her chest, erratic and desperate. Aurora backed away from the encroaching darkness, her boots slipping on the slick mud. She reached for the pendant, intending to rip it from her neck, but the chain felt fused to her skin. The metal bit into her fingers, hot as a branding iron. The whispering stopped. The silence returned, heavier than before. It pressed against her eardrums, threatening to burst them. In the centre of the clearing, the air shimmered, distorting the view of the standing stones. The distortion grew, twisting the reality of the grove until the trees looked like skeletal hands reaching for the sky. A single flower, grey and withered, drifted down from above. It landed on her boot. As she watched, the petals dissolved into ash, leaving behind a tiny, blackened seed that pulsed with a faint, red light identical to the Heartstone. She looked up. The canopy of leaves had vanished. Above her stretched not the night sky of Richmond Park, but a churning vortex of grey clouds and jagged lightning that made no sound. The lightning flashed, illuminating the figures again. They were no longer at the edge of the grove. They stood ten feet away. Five feet. Their faces were blank smooth wood, featureless save for a single vertical slit where a mouth should be. The slits opened in unison. No sound came out, but the pressure in the clearing spiked, forcing Aurora to her knees. Her lungs burned as the air grew thin, devoid of oxygen. She gasped, clawing at her throat. The Heartstone glowed blindingly bright, turning the world into a wash of crimson and black. The figures took a step forward. Their movement was jerky, unnatural, like stop-motion animation stripped of its frames. One moment they stood still; the next, they loomed over her. Aurora scrambled backward, her hands tearing at the mud, searching for purchase. Her fingers brushed against the cold bark of an oak root. She pulled herself up, legs shaking, and turned to run toward the boundary stones. The path she had taken minutes ago was gone. Where the gap between the oaks had been, a solid wall of thorns now blocked her exit. The thorns were thick as her arm, black and glistening with sap that looked suspiciously like blood. She spun around. The figures had closed the distance. They stood in a tight circle now, boxing her in. The vertical slits on their faces widened, stretching the wood until it cracked. From the darkness within the slits, a pale, grey mist poured out, rolling across the ground like fog. The mist touched her boots. The leather hissed, smoking as if dipped in acid. Aurora jumped back, kicking her feet to dislodge the fog. The smell of burning plastic filled her nose. The Heartstone screamed. Not a sound, but a psychic shriek that drove a spike of pain through her skull. She dropped to her knees again, clutching her head. Blood trickled from her nose, dripping onto the grey, dead flowers. Through the blur of pain, she saw the figures raise their arms. Their limbs elongated, stretching impossible lengths, the branches that formed their bodies interlocking to form a cage above her. The canopy of limbs blocked out the churning sky, plunging the grove into total darkness save for the crimson glow of the pendant. In the dark, the whispering started again. This time, it formed words. "Stay." The voice came from the ground, from the trees, from the stone around her neck. It vibrated in her bones. Aurora squeezed her eyes shut, trying to block out the sensation, the smell, the crushing weight of the presence surrounding her. She focused on the scar on her wrist, on the memory of Cardiff, on the feel of rain on her face in the real world. Something cold and hard wrapped around her ankle. She screamed, kicking out wildly. Her boot connected with solid wood, but the grip tightened. The thing holding her dragged her backward, sliding her across the mud toward the centre of the circle. Her fingers scrabbled in the dirt, nails breaking as she tried to anchor herself. The mud gave way. A hole opened beneath her, dark and bottomless. The cold grip on her ankle pulled harder, inexorable. The crimson light of the Heartstone flared one last time, illuminating the face of the figure closest to her. The vertical slit in its wooden face pulsed with the same red light as the stone. Aurora's hand slipped from the root she clung to. She slid inches closer to the void. The air rushing up from the hole smelled of ancient dust and forgotten things. The figures leaned in, their branch-limbs creaking as they bent toward her. The whispering became a roar, a cacophony of voices demanding she remain in the space between seconds. She stared into the red slit of the creature's face, her breath coming in ragged gasps, the cold hand on her ankle tightening until she felt the bone grind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1674
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1674
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"pulsed"
count4
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"vibrated"
count2
14
word"shimmered"
count1
15
word"churning"
count2
16
word"loomed"
count1
17
word"glistening"
count1
18
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"dancing"
3"silence"
4"scanning"
5"echo"
6"predator"
7"flicker"
8"tracing"
9"throbbed"
10"whisper"
11"searing"
12"weight"
13"vibrated"
14"shimmered"
15"churning"
16"loomed"
17"glistening"
18"cacophony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
92.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences143
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
98.66% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0.007
matches
0"The figures环 encircled her now, a perimeter of darkness tightening with every second."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1670
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1658
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Aurora10
Park2
London1
Heartstone8
Earth1
Silence1
Richmond2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Earth"
3"Silence"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Park"
3"London"
4"Richmond"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like steam escaping a vent"
1"felt like a second heart beating inside"
2"looked like skeletal hands reaching for t"
20.36% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.796
wordCount1670
matches
0"Not the peaceful quiet of an empty room, but the heavy, expectant hush of a predator holding its breath"
1"not the night sky of Richmond Park, but a churning vortex of grey clouds"
2"Not a sound, but a psychic shriek"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean39.76
std21.86
cv0.55
sampleLengths
098
196
228
348
43
547
616
721
867
929
1051
1114
1246
1334
1443
1544
1614
1753
185
1940
2044
2145
223
2351
2440
2557
2650
2750
2837
2943
3050
3132
3239
3354
3412
351
3666
378
3847
3956
4059
4129
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs278
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences144
ratio0.007
matches
0"One moment they stood still; the next, they loomed over her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount174
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.022988505747126436
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.005747126436781609
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean11.6
std6.4
cv0.552
sampleLengths
021
127
226
324
412
522
614
726
822
93
109
1116
124
138
144
159
165
1718
183
1915
208
2111
222
2311
2416
252
2619
2711
288
2916
305
3127
3214
336
349
359
3621
377
3814
396
408
416
422
4316
448
4514
463
4710
4812
499
36.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2638888888888889
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences138
matches
0"She stepped past the ancient"
1"It glowed with a faint"
2"She came here because the"
3"She checked her watch."
4"She needed to find what"
5"She turned slowly, her bright"
6"Her voice sounded flat, stripped"
7"She took a step forward,"
8"She whipped her head around."
9"Her hand went to her"
10"It started in her gut,"
11"She forced her legs to"
12"It wasn't words, but the"
13"It came from everywhere at"
14"They did not breathe."
15"They did not shift their"
16"They simply existed, facing her."
17"She spun in a circle,"
18"she demanded, her voice trembling"
19"She jerked away, stumbling backward"
ratio0.319
28.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences138
matches
0"The air inside The Fae"
1"She stepped past the ancient"
2"Richmond Park outside these borders"
3"Petals the size of dinner"
4"Aurora clutched the silver chain"
5"The deep crimson gem pulsed"
6"It glowed with a faint"
7"She came here because the"
8"The usual night sounds of"
9"She checked her watch."
10"The hands spun counter-clockwise, a"
11"Time behaved badly here."
12"An hour inside could mean"
13"The thought tightened her chest."
14"She needed to find what"
15"A twig snapped."
16"The sound came from behind"
17"Aurora froze, her breath hitching"
18"She turned slowly, her bright"
19"The oversized flowers remained still,"
ratio0.862
36.23% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"Now that she stood within"
ratio0.007
59.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences77
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She stepped past the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary, her boots sinking into soil that felt too soft, like flesh waiting to be bruised."
1"Richmond Park outside these borders slept under a blanket of London fog, but here, the wildflowers bloomed in aggressive bursts of colour that hurt her eyes."
2"The deep crimson gem pulsed against her skin, a frantic, rhythmic heat that had nothing to do with her own body temperature."
3"The ground beneath her feet vibrated, a low hum that traveled up her legs and rattled her teeth."
4"Above her stretched not the night sky of Richmond Park, but a churning vortex of grey clouds and jagged lightning that made no sound."
5"Aurora scrambled backward, her hands tearing at the mud, searching for purchase."
6"The thorns were thick as her arm, black and glistening with sap that looked suspiciously like blood."
7"Their limbs elongated, stretching impossible lengths, the branches that formed their bodies interlocking to form a cage above her."
8"She stared into the red slit of the creature's face, her breath coming in ragged gasps, the cold hand on her ankle tightening until she felt the bone grind."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she demanded, her voice trembling despite her effort to keep it steady"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
75.5173%