| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1174 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1174 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "footfall" | | 11 | "clenching" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "grave" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "rhythmic" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "raced" | | 20 | "pounding" | | 21 | "maw" | | 22 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 13 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1172 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1137 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 10 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "heat that seemed to come from somewhere beyond the grove" | | 1 | "mist that seemed to breathe" | | 2 | "felt like a blade" | | 3 | "stone that seemed to have moved, its surface slick with an unseen moisture" | | 4 | "as if binding her to the grove" | | 5 | "void that seemed to pulse with a faint, rhythmic light" | | 6 | "whispers that seemed to rise from the ground itself" | | 7 | "laugh that seemed to emanate from the earth itself, echoing through the oak roots" | | 8 | "blackness that seemed to stretch forever" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.853 | | wordCount | 1172 | | matches | | 0 | "not in words but in a sudden, cold gust" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.82% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 22.98 | | std | 9.22 | | cv | 0.401 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "were trying" | | 1 | "were pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "No mouth formed the words; the air itself seemed to speak." | | 1 | "The mist coalesced, forming a shape that hovered just beyond the standing stones—a silhouette of a woman, eyes void of colour, dress woven from shadows and moonlight." | | 2 | "The silhouette's mouth opened, but no words passed; instead, a ripple of darkness spread across the clearing, swallowing the light from the pendant." | | 3 | "She gasped, the sound swallowed by the night, her eyes catching a flash of something moving just beyond the edge of the clearing—a shape that darted between the stones, too fast to be seen clearly." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1139 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint inner light casting" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.02633889376646181 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007901668129938543 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 80.39% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 18.31 | | std | 6.43 | | cv | 0.351 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 43.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.265625 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, voice swallowed by" | | 1 | "It seemed to draw her" | | 2 | "she whispered, half to herself," | | 3 | "She turned, eyes scanning the" | | 4 | "She reached for the stone," | | 5 | "She stepped forward, the moss" | | 6 | "She paused at the centre" | | 7 | "she called, voice louder now," | | 8 | "She felt a pressure behind" | | 9 | "she whispered, clenching her jaw" | | 10 | "She could see, faintly, a" | | 11 | "She reached out, fingertips brushing" | | 12 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 13 | "she demanded, voice steadier than" | | 14 | "She felt the pendant cool" | | 15 | "She could see the outline" | | 16 | "She tried to pull away," | | 17 | "She felt the weight of" | | 18 | "She gasped, the sound swallowed" | | 19 | "she hissed, voice cracking" |
| | ratio | 0.344 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant throbbed against her" | | 1 | "she muttered, voice swallowed by" | | 2 | "The oak standing stones rose" | | 3 | "Aurora pressed the silver chain" | | 4 | "A low hum rose from" | | 5 | "It seemed to draw her" | | 6 | "she whispered, half to herself," | | 7 | "She turned, eyes scanning the" | | 8 | "The ancient oaks loomed, their" | | 9 | "A faint silver light glimmered" | | 10 | "The pendant's pulse quickened, a" | | 11 | "She reached for the stone," | | 12 | "a voice said, barely audible," | | 13 | "Aurora's breath hitched." | | 14 | "She stepped forward, the moss" | | 15 | "The standing stones seemed to" | | 16 | "She paused at the centre" | | 17 | "A sudden crack cut through" | | 18 | "she called, voice louder now," | | 19 | "The reply came not in" |
| | ratio | 0.953 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 24 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed, their branches intertwining above, forming a vaulted canopy that blocked any view of the sky." | | 1 | "The pendant's pulse quickened, a warm surge that made her skin tingle." | | 2 | "She reached for the stone, thumb grazing the deep crimson facet, feeling a whisper of heat that seemed to come from somewhere beyond the grove." | | 3 | "A sudden crack cut through the hush, a branch snapping far away, then another, as if something moved through the underbrush with purpose." | | 4 | "The reply came not in words but in a sudden, cold gust that brushed against her cheek, carrying the scent of iron and distant sea." | | 5 | "She felt a pressure behind her eyes, a tug pulling at the edge of her thoughts, as if the grove itself were trying to rewrite her memory." | | 6 | "The Heartstone pulsed, a rhythm that matched the thudding of her own heart." | | 7 | "She could see, faintly, a flickering doorway in the centre of the stones, a veil of shimmering mist that seemed to breathe." | | 8 | "She tightened her grip on the pendant, feeling the warmth surge, as if the stone were a heart beating against her skin." | | 9 | "The mist coalesced, forming a shape that hovered just beyond the standing stones—a silhouette of a woman, eyes void of colour, dress woven from shadows and moon…" | | 10 | "A scream rose from the earth itself, a sound of grief and hunger that made the wildflowers tremble." | | 11 | "Aurora stepped back, stumbling over a stone that seemed to have moved, its surface slick with an unseen moisture." | | 12 | "She tried to pull away, but the Heartstone clung to her wrist, its chain tightening as if binding her to the grove." | | 13 | "A sudden, sharp crack echoed as a stone split, revealing a dark cavity within, a void that seemed to pulse with a faint, rhythmic light." | | 14 | "A cold hand slipped around her throat, an invisible grip that tightened." | | 15 | "She gasped, the sound swallowed by the night, her eyes catching a flash of something moving just beyond the edge of the clearing—a shape that darted between the…" | | 16 | "The Heartstone's pulse faltered, a stuttering beat that threatened to die." | | 17 | "A sudden wind rose, scattering the wildflowers into a vortex that swirled around the standing stones, forming a wall of petals and leaves." | | 18 | "Aurora's mind raced, the pendant's warmth fighting the cold, her breath shallow, her heart pounding against her ribs like a drum." | | 19 | "A flash of light burst from the void, a blinding flash that blinded her, the Heartstone's crimson flame exploding into a surge of white heat." | | 20 | "The grove shuddered, the ancient stones cracking, the standing stones tilting as if the world were about to fall apart." | | 21 | "The void opened, a yawning maw of shadow, and Aurora felt a cold rush of water, as if the sea itself were pulling her down." | | 22 | "She fell, the world turning upside down, the Heartstone's glow fading, the ancient oak stones disappearing into a blackness that seemed to stretch forever." | | 23 | "A sudden, sharp breath cut through the void, a whisper that promised something beyond the end." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, voice swallowed by the night" | | 1 | "she whispered, half to herself, half to the unseen" | | 2 | "she called, voice louder now, echoing off the stone" | | 3 | "she demanded, voice steadier than she felt" | | 4 | "she hissed, voice cracking," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "the voice urged (urge)" | | 6 | "she hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.7 | | effectiveRatio | 0.7 | |