Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX767C9WFVHQ62DX94FNWV

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Duration:
6.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant throbbed against her wrist, a crimson heartbeat echoing in the silence. "I shouldn't have come," she muttered, voice swallowed by the night. The oak standing stones rose like silent sentinels, ancient bark etched into the stone, their shadows stretching across the wildflowers that never seemed to wilt. Aurora pressed the silver chain tighter, feeling the faint inner glow pulse as she stepped between the stones. A low hum rose from the earth, a vibration that matched the rhythm of the Heartstone. It seemed to draw her deeper into the clearing, where the air grew cooler, the scent of damp moss thickening. "Do you hear that?" she whispered, half to herself, half to the unseen. No answer came, only the rustle of leaves that sounded too deliberate. She turned, eyes scanning the perimeter. The ancient oaks loomed, their branches intertwining above, forming a vaulted canopy that blocked any view of the sky. A faint silver light glimmered at the edge of her vision, darting like a moth against the darkness. The pendant's pulse quickened, a warm surge that made her skin tingle. She reached for the stone, thumb grazing the deep crimson facet, feeling a whisper of heat that seemed to come from somewhere beyond the grove. "Hel's whisper," a voice said, barely audible, as if carried on the wind. No mouth formed the words; the air itself seemed to speak. Aurora's breath hitched. She stepped forward, the moss slick beneath her boots, each footfall muffled by a soft, almost metallic rustling. The standing stones seemed to shift subtly, their positions altering by a fraction, enough to make her head spin. She paused at the centre of the circle, the Heartstone Pendant now glowing brighter, its faint inner light casting a thin, scarlet halo around her wrist. A sudden crack cut through the hush, a branch snapping far away, then another, as if something moved through the underbrush with purpose. "Who's there?" she called, voice louder now, echoing off the stone. The reply came not in words but in a sudden, cold gust that brushed against her cheek, carrying the scent of iron and distant sea. The wind swirled around the stones, lifting a spray of pollen that settled on the pendant, making it sparkle like a dropped star. She felt a pressure behind her eyes, a tug pulling at the edge of her thoughts, as if the grove itself were trying to rewrite her memory. "Enough," she whispered, clenching her jaw, "I know why I'm here." The Heartstone pulsed, a rhythm that matched the thudding of her own heart. She could see, faintly, a flickering doorway in the centre of the stones, a veil of shimmering mist that seemed to breathe. She reached out, fingertips brushing the mist, and the chill that shot through her hand felt like a blade. A low chuckle slipped from the darkness, a sound that could not belong to any creature she knew. "Bold," the voice said, "to seek the dead's doorway." Aurora's eyes narrowed. She tightened her grip on the pendant, feeling the warmth surge, as if the stone were a heart beating against her skin. "Show yourself," she demanded, voice steadier than she felt. The mist coalesced, forming a shape that hovered just beyond the standing stones—a silhouette of a woman, eyes void of colour, dress woven from shadows and moonlight. The figure lifted a hand, palm open, and the Heartstone's glow flared, illuminating the grove in a blood‑red wash. A scream rose from the earth itself, a sound of grief and hunger that made the wildflowers tremble. Aurora stepped back, stumbling over a stone that seemed to have moved, its surface slick with an unseen moisture. The silhouette's mouth opened, but no words passed; instead, a ripple of darkness spread across the clearing, swallowing the light from the pendant. She felt the pendant cool suddenly, the warmth draining as if the very life was being siphoned away. "You're too late," the voice whispered, now right beside her ear, breath cold as the grave. A hand brushed her cheek, a touch that was both tender and terrifying, as if a lover's caress had turned to ash. Aurora's breath fogged, her breath like a plume of white smoke in the sudden cold. She could see the outline of the standing stones bending, their ancient oak shapes warping like a mirage. She tried to pull away, but the Heartstone clung to her wrist, its chain tightening as if binding her to the grove. A sudden, sharp crack echoed as a stone split, revealing a dark cavity within, a void that seemed to pulse with a faint, rhythmic light. "Enter," the voice urged, now a chorus of whispers that seemed to rise from the ground itself. Aurora stared into the abyss, the crimson glow of the Heartstone reflecting off the void, casting eerie shadows across her face. She felt the weight of centuries pressing on her, the oak standing stones watching, their ancient bark seeming to whisper in a language older than words. A cold hand slipped around her throat, an invisible grip that tightened. She gasped, the sound swallowed by the night, her eyes catching a flash of something moving just beyond the edge of the clearing—a shape that darted between the stones, too fast to be seen clearly. The Heartstone's pulse faltered, a stuttering beat that threatened to die. A sudden wind rose, scattering the wildflowers into a vortex that swirled around the standing stones, forming a wall of petals and leaves. Aurora's mind raced, the pendant's warmth fighting the cold, her breath shallow, her heart pounding against her ribs like a drum. "Why?" she hissed, voice cracking, "What do you want?" The reply came as a low, guttural laugh that seemed to emanate from the earth itself, echoing through the oak roots. A flash of light burst from the void, a blinding flash that blinded her, the Heartstone's crimson flame exploding into a surge of white heat. The grove shuddered, the ancient stones cracking, the standing stones tilting as if the world were about to fall apart. Aurora felt herself pulled forward, the invisible hand dragging her toward the void, the Heartstone clattering against her wrist, the silver chain snapping like a rope. She tried to scream, but no sound escaped, the darkness swallowing her voice. In the final instant, she saw the silhouette's face, an expression of both sorrow and triumph, eyes reflecting the deep crimson of the pendant. The void opened, a yawning maw of shadow, and Aurora felt a cold rush of water, as if the sea itself were pulling her down. She fell, the world turning upside down, the Heartstone's glow fading, the ancient oak stones disappearing into a blackness that seemed to stretch forever. A sudden, sharp breath cut through the void, a whisper that promised something beyond the end. Aurora's eyes snapped open, but the darkness remained, and the only thing she could feel was the cold pressure of unseen hands pulling her deeper into the night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1174
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1174
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count3
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count4
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count4
10
word"footfall"
count1
11
word"clenching"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count3
15
word"grave"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"rhythmic"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"raced"
count1
20
word"pounding"
count1
21
word"maw"
count1
22
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"echoing"
2"silence"
3"sentinels"
4"etched"
5"pulse"
6"scanning"
7"loomed"
8"quickened"
9"whisper"
10"footfall"
11"clenching"
12"pulsed"
13"chill"
14"warmth"
15"grave"
16"echoed"
17"rhythmic"
18"weight"
19"raced"
20"pounding"
21"maw"
22"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount13
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1137
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Heartstone10
Pendant1
Aurora10
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount9
matches
0"heat that seemed to come from somewhere beyond the grove"
1"mist that seemed to breathe"
2"felt like a blade"
3"stone that seemed to have moved, its surface slick with an unseen moisture"
4"as if binding her to the grove"
5"void that seemed to pulse with a faint, rhythmic light"
6"whispers that seemed to rise from the ground itself"
7"laugh that seemed to emanate from the earth itself, echoing through the oak roots"
8"blackness that seemed to stretch forever"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.853
wordCount1172
matches
0"not in words but in a sudden, cold gust"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
71.82% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean22.98
std9.22
cv0.401
sampleLengths
013
111
243
336
425
543
637
724
840
926
1023
1111
1248
1327
1411
1535
1619
1718
189
1925
209
2127
2219
2318
2419
2523
2618
2716
2822
2933
3022
3125
3217
3321
3426
3512
3635
3711
3823
3921
409
4121
4225
4320
4426
4513
4624
4725
4824
4916
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"being siphoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs190
matches
0"were trying"
1"were pulling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences64
ratio0.063
matches
0"No mouth formed the words; the air itself seemed to speak."
1"The mist coalesced, forming a shape that hovered just beyond the standing stones—a silhouette of a woman, eyes void of colour, dress woven from shadows and moonlight."
2"The silhouette's mouth opened, but no words passed; instead, a ripple of darkness spread across the clearing, swallowing the light from the pendant."
3"She gasped, the sound swallowed by the night, her eyes catching a flash of something moving just beyond the edge of the clearing—a shape that darted between the stones, too fast to be seen clearly."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1139
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint inner light casting"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02633889376646181
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007901668129938543
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
80.39% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean18.31
std6.43
cv0.351
sampleLengths
013
111
225
318
416
520
613
712
86
919
1018
1112
1225
1313
1411
153
1618
1719
1826
1923
2011
2125
2223
2327
2411
2513
2622
2719
2818
299
303
3122
329
3327
3419
3518
3619
3723
3818
3916
4022
4115
4218
4322
4425
4517
4621
4726
4812
4935
43.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.265625
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences64
matches
0"she muttered, voice swallowed by"
1"It seemed to draw her"
2"she whispered, half to herself,"
3"She turned, eyes scanning the"
4"She reached for the stone,"
5"She stepped forward, the moss"
6"She paused at the centre"
7"she called, voice louder now,"
8"She felt a pressure behind"
9"she whispered, clenching her jaw"
10"She could see, faintly, a"
11"She reached out, fingertips brushing"
12"She tightened her grip on"
13"she demanded, voice steadier than"
14"She felt the pendant cool"
15"She could see the outline"
16"She tried to pull away,"
17"She felt the weight of"
18"She gasped, the sound swallowed"
19"she hissed, voice cracking"
ratio0.344
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences64
matches
0"The pendant throbbed against her"
1"she muttered, voice swallowed by"
2"The oak standing stones rose"
3"Aurora pressed the silver chain"
4"A low hum rose from"
5"It seemed to draw her"
6"she whispered, half to herself,"
7"She turned, eyes scanning the"
8"The ancient oaks loomed, their"
9"A faint silver light glimmered"
10"The pendant's pulse quickened, a"
11"She reached for the stone,"
12"a voice said, barely audible,"
13"Aurora's breath hitched."
14"She stepped forward, the moss"
15"The standing stones seemed to"
16"She paused at the centre"
17"A sudden crack cut through"
18"she called, voice louder now,"
19"The reply came not in"
ratio0.953
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount24
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed, their branches intertwining above, forming a vaulted canopy that blocked any view of the sky."
1"The pendant's pulse quickened, a warm surge that made her skin tingle."
2"She reached for the stone, thumb grazing the deep crimson facet, feeling a whisper of heat that seemed to come from somewhere beyond the grove."
3"A sudden crack cut through the hush, a branch snapping far away, then another, as if something moved through the underbrush with purpose."
4"The reply came not in words but in a sudden, cold gust that brushed against her cheek, carrying the scent of iron and distant sea."
5"She felt a pressure behind her eyes, a tug pulling at the edge of her thoughts, as if the grove itself were trying to rewrite her memory."
6"The Heartstone pulsed, a rhythm that matched the thudding of her own heart."
7"She could see, faintly, a flickering doorway in the centre of the stones, a veil of shimmering mist that seemed to breathe."
8"She tightened her grip on the pendant, feeling the warmth surge, as if the stone were a heart beating against her skin."
9"The mist coalesced, forming a shape that hovered just beyond the standing stones—a silhouette of a woman, eyes void of colour, dress woven from shadows and moon…"
10"A scream rose from the earth itself, a sound of grief and hunger that made the wildflowers tremble."
11"Aurora stepped back, stumbling over a stone that seemed to have moved, its surface slick with an unseen moisture."
12"She tried to pull away, but the Heartstone clung to her wrist, its chain tightening as if binding her to the grove."
13"A sudden, sharp crack echoed as a stone split, revealing a dark cavity within, a void that seemed to pulse with a faint, rhythmic light."
14"A cold hand slipped around her throat, an invisible grip that tightened."
15"She gasped, the sound swallowed by the night, her eyes catching a flash of something moving just beyond the edge of the clearing—a shape that darted between the…"
16"The Heartstone's pulse faltered, a stuttering beat that threatened to die."
17"A sudden wind rose, scattering the wildflowers into a vortex that swirled around the standing stones, forming a wall of petals and leaves."
18"Aurora's mind raced, the pendant's warmth fighting the cold, her breath shallow, her heart pounding against her ribs like a drum."
19"A flash of light burst from the void, a blinding flash that blinded her, the Heartstone's crimson flame exploding into a surge of white heat."
20"The grove shuddered, the ancient stones cracking, the standing stones tilting as if the world were about to fall apart."
21"The void opened, a yawning maw of shadow, and Aurora felt a cold rush of water, as if the sea itself were pulling her down."
22"She fell, the world turning upside down, the Heartstone's glow fading, the ancient oak stones disappearing into a blackness that seemed to stretch forever."
23"A sudden, sharp breath cut through the void, a whisper that promised something beyond the end."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she muttered, voice swallowed by the night"
1"she whispered, half to herself, half to the unseen"
2"she called, voice louder now, echoing off the stone"
3"she demanded, voice steadier than she felt"
4"she hissed, voice cracking,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"the voice whispered (whisper)"
5"the voice urged (urge)"
6"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.7
effectiveRatio0.7
62.1241%