Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX7F7KXDCYFGMGETQKHEMA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.058836
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Steel grated against steel as the third deadbolt slid back. My grip tightened on the handle of the cast-iron skillet I’d snatched from the drying rack. It wasn't exactly a magical weapon, but cast iron had a reputation against the fey, and if the intruder turned out to be human, a solid swing to the temple would still do the job. I didn't ask who was there. Anyone I wanted to see had a key. I yanked the door open, swinging the heavy pan up, ready to bring it down on a skull. An ivory-handled cane blocked the descent effortlessly. The iron rang out, a dull, heavy clanking sound that vibrated down my arm and rattled my teeth. "Violent. I missed that." The voice was smooth, dark, and wrapped in a boredom that cost more than my tuition. My heart hammered a frantic rhythm against my ribs, but my hand didn't tremble. I knew that cane. I knew the hand holding it—pale, manicured, lethal. "Lucien." "Aurora." He lowered the cane, effectively pushing the skillet down with it. He didn't wait for an invite. He stepped past me, the sharp scent of ozone and expensive sandalwood sweeping into the stale air of Eva’s flat. "You look... exhausted. The dark circles are not an aesthetic improvement." I slammed the door and threw the bolts back into place. One. Two. Three. "Get out." "No." He stood in the center of the cramped living room, a diamond amidst the coal dust. Eva’s flat was a disaster zone of occult research. Stacks of leather-bound grimoires teetered on the floor, and parchment scrolls covered the moth-eaten sofa. Lucien, in his tailored charcoal three-piece suit, looked like he’d been cut from a different reality and pasted onto a background of poverty. "This is Eva’s place," I snapped, lowering the skillet but keeping it within striking distance. "You have no business here." "Eva is currently in Morocco chasing a djinn rumor. We both know that." He surveyed the room, his heterochromatic eyes—one endless black, one piercing amber—scanning the clutter with disdain. "And you have been hiding here for three weeks. Poorly." "I’m not hiding. I’m living." "You are rotting." He turned, the silver tip of his cane clicking sharply against the peeling linoleum. "And you are doing it in a neighborhood that smells of cumin and desperation." "I like cumin." "You like stubbornness." He took a step toward me. The air in the room grew heavier, charged with that static electricity that always hummed around him. "Why did you run, Rory?" "I moved." "You fled in the middle of the night. You left your keys. You left your phone." His jaw tightened, a rare crack in the porcelain mask of his composure. "You left me dealing with the Council regarding the mess you made at the docks." "I cleaned up my own mess." I moved to the kitchenette, putting the table between us. It felt safer. Flimsy, but safer. "And I didn't want to owe you anything else. The price is always too high." "I never asked for payment." "You don't ask. You collect." Lucien laughed, a low sound that lacked humor. He trailed a finger along the spine of a dusty book on the table. "Is that what you think? That I viewed you as a transaction?" "I think you view everyone as a transaction. It’s what you do. You’re the Fixer." I crossed my arms, inadvertently covering the crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist. "And I’m done being fixed." "A difficult stance to take when you are currently being hunted." The temperature in the room plummeted. The silence that followed was suffocating. Ptolemy, Eva’s massive tabby, jumped down from the top of the bookshelf. Instead of hissing, the traitorous beast wound himself around Lucien’s polished dress shoes, purring loud enough to be heard over the traffic on Brick Lane. I griped the edge of the counter. "What are you talking about?" "Did you think Evan was merely a bad boyfriend with a temper?" Lucien scratched the cat behind the ears, his gaze never leaving mine. "Did you think a human man could survive what you did to him without... assistance?" "He's in prison." "He was released forty-eight hours ago due to a clerical error." Lucien’s voice dropped an octave. "An error purchased with gold that originated from the Second Circle of Avaros." The blood drained from my face. The skillet felt suddenly heavy in my hand, useless. "That’s impossible. He’s... he’s just a man." "He made a deal. Desperate men often do." Lucien moved. Fast. One second he was by the bookshelf, the next he was across the divide, gripping the edge of the table, leaning in until his face was inches from mine. Up close, the black eye was a void, but the amber one burned. "He wants you back, Aurora. He wants to finish what he started on your wrist." I flinched. I hated that I did, but the body remembers fear even when the mind tries to bury it. "How do you know?" "Because I intercepted the tracker he paid a warlock to place on you." He reached into his breast pocket and pulled out a small, crumpled object. He tossed it onto the table. It was a receipt from the Golden Empress. My delivery receipt from yesterday. A distinct, glowing sigil had been burned into the paper, right over my signature. "You signed for a package," Lucien said, his voice hard. "You assumed it was mundane. You made a mistake." "I check everything," I whispered, staring at the sigil. It looked like a reverse Greek sigma, twisting in on itself. "I checked for hexes." "Blood magic leaves no trace until it activates." He straightened, adjusting his cuffs. "He knows you are in East London. He is narrowing down the street. It is only a matter of time before he finds the door with three locks." "So you came to warn me? To gloat?" "I came to collect." "I told you—" "Not a debt," he cut in, his voice rasping with suppressed anger. "You. I came to collect *you*." "I can handle Evan." "With a frying pan?" Lucien sneered, gesturing to the iron skillet I was still white-knuckling. "If he has Avaros backing, he will tear through these wards like tissue paper. You need protection. Real protection." "Yours, I suppose?" "Is there any other kind worth having?" "And what’s the cost, Lucien? What happens when the danger is gone? Do I go back to being a bird in your gilded cage?" He walked around the table. I didn't retreat. I wouldn't give him the satisfaction. He stopped a breath away, his presence overwhelming. He smelled of power and secrets. "You were never a prisoner," he said softly, his hand raising as if to touch my cheek, before stopping mid-air. He curled his fingers into a fist and dropped his hand. "You were a guest who forgot how to leave until she decided to break the windows." "I needed air." "You need to breathe to have air. You won't be doing much breathing if Evan finds you." He checked his watch—a platinum piece that likely cost more than this entire building. "We have five minutes. My car is downstairs." "I'm not going with you." "Aurora, stop being a child." "I'm not being a child, I'm being careful! You show up here, scare me with ghost stories about my ex, and expect me to hop into your car? I need proof." Lucien’s head snapped toward the window. The heavy velvet curtains Eva insisted on keeping drawn twitched. Not from a draft. The windows were sealed shut with paint. "Proof," Lucien muttered. He grabbed my arm. His grip was iron, but his thumb brushed gently over the pulse point. "Get down." "What?" "Down!" He yanked me to the floor just as the window exploded. Shards of glass sprayed across the room, embedding themselves in the spines of the books and the plaster of the far wall. A rush of cold, unnatural wind howled into the flat, scattering papers like dead leaves. I scrambled on the carpet, coughing as dust and drywall choked the air. Lucien was already moving, his cane flicking out. A dark shape pulled itself over the windowsill—something that looked like a man, but whose limbs were too long, too disjointed. The eyes glowed a sickly, pale green. Evan. But wrong. Twisted. "Rory..." The voice was a wet gurgle, but the cadence was terrifyingly familiar. "Found you." Lucien stepped between us. He didn't look at me. He twisted the handle of his cane, and with a metallic *shing*, the ivory parted to reveal a gleaming, silver blade etched with runes. "Run," Lucien commanded, his voice devoid of all boredom now. "The car. Black Jaguar. Engine running." "I'm not leaving you!" The thing that used to be Evan lunged, claws tearing through the back of Eva’s sofa. Lucien parried, the sound of steel meeting unnatural bone ringing like a church bell. "Go!" Lucien roared, magic crackling off his shoulders in waves of shadow. "Now, Aurora!" I scrambled to my feet, the skillet forgotten on the floor. I grabbed my bag and bolted for the door, my fingers fumbling with the first deadbolt. Behind me, the sound of furniture shattering mixed with a demonic snarl. "One," I gasped. The bolt slid back. "Two." The wood splintered near my head as a heavy book was thrown across the room. "Three." I yanked the door open and sprinted into the hallway, the screams of my past and the fury of the half-demon echoing down the stairwell behind me.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.299
leniency0.597
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.026
87.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1615
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"suddenly"
2"softly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1615
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"amidst"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"porcelain"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"amidst"
2"scanning"
3"charged"
4"porcelain"
5"silence"
6"velvet"
7"pulse"
8"familiar"
9"gleaming"
10"etched"
11"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tries to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1600
ratio0.001
matches
0"you"
1"shing"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1045
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Lucien15
Brick1
Lane1
Fast1
Golden1
Empress1
Greek1
Evan2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.782
windowScore0.833
51.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like he’d been cut from a differen"
1"looked like a reverse Greek sigma, twisti"
2"looked like a man, but whose limbs were t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1600
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences154
matches
0"knew that cane"
1"hated that I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean21.92
std16.47
cv0.751
sampleLengths
061
114
218
325
44
542
61
749
816
91
1063
1120
1239
135
1431
153
1631
172
1844
1937
205
215
2234
2333
2411
2549
2612
2739
283
2929
3022
3111
3257
3324
3413
3546
3619
3724
3841
398
404
413
4218
434
4434
453
467
4724
4828
4947
98.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"been burned"
1"was thrown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was suffocating"
68.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences154
ratio0.026
matches
0"I knew the hand holding it—pale, manicured, lethal."
1"\"Eva is currently in Morocco chasing a djinn rumor. We both know that.\" He surveyed the room, his heterochromatic eyes—one endless black, one piercing amber—scanning the clutter with disdain."
2"\"You need to breathe to have air. You won't be doing much breathing if Evan finds you.\" He checked his watch—a platinum piece that likely cost more than this entire building."
3"A dark shape pulled itself over the windowsill—something that looked like a man, but whose limbs were too long, too disjointed."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1059
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.028328611898016998
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010387157695939566
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean10.39
std7.57
cv0.728
sampleLengths
010
116
235
36
48
518
67
718
84
916
1014
114
128
131
1412
156
1620
1711
1811
191
201
211
222
231
2416
259
2615
2723
2815
295
3029
3110
325
3317
3414
353
369
3717
385
392
4029
4115
4216
433
443
4515
465
475
488
4914
48.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.35064935064935066
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners54
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Instead of hissing, the traitorous"
ratio0.011
6.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences90
matches
0"My grip tightened on the"
1"It wasn't exactly a magical"
2"I didn't ask who was"
3"I yanked the door open,"
4"My heart hammered a frantic"
5"I knew that cane."
6"I knew the hand holding"
7"He lowered the cane, effectively"
8"He didn't wait for an"
9"He stepped past me, the"
10"I slammed the door and"
11"He stood in the center"
12"I snapped, lowering the skillet"
13"He surveyed the room, his"
14"He turned, the silver tip"
15"He took a step toward"
16"His jaw tightened, a rare"
17"I moved to the kitchenette,"
18"It felt safer."
19"He trailed a finger along"
ratio0.533
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences90
matches
0"Steel grated against steel as"
1"My grip tightened on the"
2"It wasn't exactly a magical"
3"I didn't ask who was"
4"Anyone I wanted to see"
5"I yanked the door open,"
6"An ivory-handled cane blocked the"
7"The iron rang out, a"
8"The voice was smooth, dark,"
9"My heart hammered a frantic"
10"I knew that cane."
11"I knew the hand holding"
12"He lowered the cane, effectively"
13"He didn't wait for an"
14"He stepped past me, the"
15"I slammed the door and"
16"He stood in the center"
17"Eva’s flat was a disaster"
18"Stacks of leather-bound grimoires teetered"
19"Lucien, in his tailored charcoal"
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A dark shape pulled itself over the windowsill—something that looked like a man, but whose limbs were too long, too disjointed."
38.04% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Lucien said, his voice hard"
1"he cut in, his voice rasping with suppressed anger"
2"Lucien commanded, his voice devoid of all boredom now"
3"Lucien roared, magic crackling off his shoulders in waves of shadow"
72.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"I snapped (snap)"
1"I whispered (whisper)"
2"Lucien sneered (sneer)"
3"Lucien muttered (mutter)"
4"Lucien roared (roar)"
5"I gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.104
leniency0.208
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.156
78.3166%