Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX7K5HWF1B8DMZRHZ2DD5Y

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Duration:
11.0s
Cost:
$0.000304
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest’s green neon sign blinked a weary pulse against the Soho drizzle, casting long, distorted shadows across the rain-slicked pavement. Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of stale beer, aged wood, and something faintly metallic—like old coins or forgotten secrets. Silas Blackwood polished a glass behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the low light, the neat trim of his beard stark against his weathered face. A slight limp marked his movement as he slid the glass onto the worn oak surface with a soft *clink*. A figure paused in the doorway, hood pulled low against the rain. The hood slipped back, revealing bright blue eyes that scanned the dim interior. Not quite recognition, but a flicker of something sharp. She pushed the door open, the bell above it tinkling a brief, solitary note. Her gaze landed on Silas, and a ghost of a smile touched her lips—a smile that vanished as quickly as it appeared, replaced by guarded wariness. She didn’t move towards him, instead leaning against the doorframe, one shoulder hunched against the cold. Silas didn’t look up immediately. He wiped the glass again, his movements deliberate, unhurried. The bar was quiet tonight, save for the distant hum of the city outside. He knew most faces that drifted in, knew their stories, their secrets. But this one… this one felt different. The posture, the way she held herself, the intensity in those blue eyes… it stirred something deep in the quiet man behind the bar. He finally raised his head, meeting her gaze. “Rory?” His voice was low, gravelly, carrying the weight of years. The name hung in the air. Aurora Carter—Rory—felt the blood rush to her cheeks, a heat that had nothing to do with the chill outside. “Silas,” she said, her voice smoother than she felt, the old nickname tasting strange on her tongue. “Long time.” She didn’t step further into the bar, remaining framed in the doorway, a silhouette against the neon glow. “I didn’t expect to find you here. Running the nest, I mean.” Silas pushed himself away from the bar, his limp becoming more pronounced as he crossed the small space between them. He stopped a few feet away, his eyes never leaving hers. “Life’s funny that way, isn’t it? The nest keeps me busy, Rory. Keeps me grounded.” He gestured vaguely towards the bar, the signet ring on his right hand catching the light. “Delivery driver, huh? Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress. That’s a long way from Cardiff University, Pre-Law. What happened?” Aurora shifted her weight, the small crescent scar on her left wrist catching the light as she pulled her sleeve slightly. “Life happened,” she said, her voice tight. “Evan… he wasn’t what he seemed. Cardiff was… complicated.” She avoided his eyes, looking instead at the worn maps on the wall. “I needed out. Needed to disappear.” She took a step forward, into the bar’s dim light, but not towards him. “London’s different. Quieter, in its own way.” Silas nodded slowly, understanding dawning in his hazel eyes. The Rory he remembered was sharp, quick, always ready with a plan. This Rory… she was guarded, her movements measured, her eyes holding a depth of weariness he hadn’t seen before. “You look… different,” he said finally, his voice softer. “More… settled? Or less?” He gestured at her simple coat, the lack of the sharp suits she used to favor. “The delivery job. It suits you, Rory. Less…… flashy.” She flinched at the nickname, the old familiarity jarring. “Settled? Maybe. Less flashy? Definitely.” She took another step, closer now, but still not touching the space between them. “I’m not running anymore, Silas. Not like before. Just… trying to keep my head down.” She paused, the words feeling heavy. “How about you? Still spying for the old crowd? Or just running a bar?” Silas chuckled, a low, dry sound that didn’t reach his eyes. “Spying? No. The nest is my front. My network… it’s quieter now. Fewer fires to put out.” He leaned back against the bar, his gaze drifting to the hidden bookshelf behind him, a silent reminder of the world he’d left behind. “I miss the fire, Rory. Miss the…… the purpose. But some fires… they leave scars. Permanent ones.” He met her eyes again, the hazel reflecting the bar’s amber light. “You left a fire behind too, didn’t you?” Aurora’s breath hitched. The scar on her wrist pulsed, a phantom ache. “Evan… he was a fire,” she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. “A slow, consuming one. I left before it burned everything down.” She looked away, towards the rain-streaked window, watching the blurred lights of the city. “I thought I’d escaped it all. But some things… they follow you. Like shadows.” Silas nodded, understanding the unspoken weight. The years had changed them, but the core… the core still held. The quick mind, the sharp tongue, the hidden scars. “You look like you’re carrying a lot, Rory,” he said, his voice gentle but firm. “More than just the weight of a delivery bag.” He paused, choosing his words carefully. “You ever think about… going back? Cardiff? Evan?” She turned back to him, her blue eyes fierce in the dim light. “No,” she said, the word final. “Not Evan. Not Cardiff. Not the past.” She took a deep breath, the scent of old paper and beer filling her senses. “I’m building something new here. A quieter life.” She gestured vaguely around the bar. “This… this is mine now. In its own way.” Silas studied her, seeing the resilience beneath the weariness, the intelligence beneath the guardedness. The Rory he remembered was still there, buried under layers of caution and survival. “Building,” he echoed, a slow smile touching his lips. “That’s good, Rory. Really good.” He pushed himself away from the bar, his limp a familiar rhythm as he walked towards her. “Want a drink? On the house. Old times’ sake.” She hesitated, then nodded, a small, almost imperceptible movement. “Sure,” she said, her voice softer now. “Old times’ sake.” She followed him as he walked towards the bar, the weight of the years between them palpable but not insurmountable. The green neon sign outside blinked its weary pulse, a silent witness to the reunion of two old friends, forever changed by the paths they’d walked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"He leaned back [back]"
3"She looked away [away]"
4"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.676
leniency1
rawRatio0.217
effectiveRatio0.217
71.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"carefully"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"solitary"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"weight"
count5
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"palpable"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"stark"
2"scanned"
3"flicker"
4"solitary"
5"intensity"
6"weight"
7"chill"
8"measured"
9"reminder"
10"pulsed"
11"whisper"
12"unspoken"
13"echoed"
14"familiar"
15"palpable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1057
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount794
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Blackwood1
Silas8
Carter1
Rory4
Aurora3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Carter"
5"Rory"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.996
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Not quite recognition, but a flicker of something sharp"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.946
wordCount1057
matches
0"Not quite recognition, but a flicker of something sharp"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean75.5
std10.57
cv0.14
sampleLengths
091
190
290
374
479
577
678
763
889
964
1065
1164
1268
1365
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"was guarded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences75
ratio0.04
matches
0"Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of stale beer, aged wood, and something faintly metallic—like old coins or forgotten secrets."
1"Her gaze landed on Silas, and a ghost of a smile touched her lips—a smile that vanished as quickly as it appeared, replaced by guarded wariness."
2"Aurora Carter—Rory—felt the blood rush to her cheeks, a heat that had nothing to do with the chill outside."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount800
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.015
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean14.09
std7.38
cv0.524
sampleLengths
022
122
227
320
412
513
69
714
826
916
105
119
1214
1312
143
154
1613
1711
188
1911
206
2119
2217
2320
2412
2520
2611
2731
2817
2921
307
3122
3220
337
349
3512
362
3717
389
3920
409
419
4219
4321
4414
4511
4641
4729
488
493
62.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences64
matches
0"She pushed the door open,"
1"Her gaze landed on Silas,"
2"She didn’t move towards him,"
3"He wiped the glass again,"
4"He knew most faces that"
5"it stirred something deep in"
6"He finally raised his head,"
7"His voice was low, gravelly,"
8"she said, her voice smoother"
9"She didn’t step further into"
10"He stopped a few feet"
11"He gestured vaguely towards the"
12"she said, her voice tight"
13"She avoided his eyes, looking"
14"She took a step forward,"
15"she was guarded, her movements"
16"he said finally, his voice"
17"He gestured at her simple"
18"She flinched at the nickname,"
19"She took another step, closer"
ratio0.563
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences64
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest’s green neon"
1"Silas Blackwood polished a glass"
2"A slight limp marked his"
3"A figure paused in the"
4"The hood slipped back, revealing"
5"She pushed the door open,"
6"Her gaze landed on Silas,"
7"She didn’t move towards him,"
8"Silas didn’t look up immediately."
9"He wiped the glass again,"
10"The bar was quiet tonight,"
11"He knew most faces that"
12"this one felt different."
13"The posture, the way she"
14"it stirred something deep in"
15"He finally raised his head,"
16"His voice was low, gravelly,"
17"The name hung in the"
18"Aurora Carter—Rory—felt the blood rush"
19"she said, her voice smoother"
ratio0.953
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The hood slipped back, revealing bright blue eyes that scanned the dim interior."
1"He knew most faces that drifted in, knew their stories, their secrets."
2"Aurora Carter—Rory—felt the blood rush to her cheeks, a heat that had nothing to do with the chill outside."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she said, her voice tight"
1"he said finally, his voice softer"
2"He gestured, the lack of the sharp suits she used to favor"
3"She paused, the words feeling heavy"
4"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"he said, his voice gentle but firm"
6"She took, the scent of old paper and beer filling her senses"
7"he echoed, a slow smile touching his lips"
8"He pushed, his limp a familiar rhythm as he walked towards her"
9"she said, her voice softer now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.206
leniency0.412
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.059
67.2472%