Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX7KM2F9ZDHJCFK7SR2JJ2

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Duration:
33.1s
Cost:
$0.003835
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the crumbling concrete steps into the abandoned Tube station, her footsteps echoing in the cavernous space. The air hung thick with damp and something else—something metallic and wrong. She adjusted her leather watch strap, a habit from eighteen years on the force, military precision bleeding into civilian life. "Down here, Quinn." Sergeant Mills waved from the far platform, his torch beam cutting through the gloom. "Bit of a mess." Harlow crossed the tracks, her boots crunching on broken glass. The scene unfolded under harsh emergency lighting, casting long shadows across graffiti-covered walls. A body lay contorted near the ticket barriers, limbs at angles that screamed of violence, not accident. Mills crouched beside the victim, notebook in hand. "Male, late forties. No wallet, no phone. Looks like a robbery gone wrong. Found him this morning when maintenance crews came down to check the wiring." Harlow circled the perimeter, her gaze sweeping every detail. She stopped at the victim's outstretched hand. Something small and brass glinted between his fingers. "What's that?" Mills leaned closer. "Dunno. Some trinket maybe? Part of a pocket watch?" Harlow knelt, her fingers hovering above the object without touching it. A small brass compass with a face etched in protective sigils, its casing covered in verdigris. The needle spun erratically, pointing first north, then east, then south, as if searching for something. "Robbery victims don't usually die clutching their valuables, Sergeant. They either drop them or the perpetrators take them." "Maybe he grabbed it off them?" Mills suggested. "Fought back?" Harlow stood, her sharp jaw tightening as she scanned the station. "Where are the signs of struggle? No scuff marks beyond where he fell. No defensive wounds on his hands. Nothing." She moved toward the ticket barriers, her attention drawn to faint markings on the wall—symbols that looked like they'd been scratched there recently, yet somehow seemed ancient. She ran her fingers over them, finding a residue that smelled faintly of ozone. "Someone was performing a ritual here," she murmured. Mills laughed, short and sharp. "Come on, Quinn. Not with that supernatural nonsense again. You've been different since Morris died." Harlow's gaze hardened. "Evidence doesn't lie, Mills. This man wasn't robbed. He was sacrificed." "Right. And I suppose the compass is magic too?" "The needle isn't reacting to magnetic north." Harlow pulled out her own compass, its needle steady. "It's pointing toward the wall behind you." Mills turned, shining his torch on the seemingly solid brickwork. "It's a wall, Quinn. Just a wall." Harlow approached, pressing her palm against the bricks. The air shimmered slightly, like heat rising from asphalt. "There's something here. Something hidden." She found a loose brick and pressed. With a grinding sound, a section of the wall recessed inward, revealing a narrow passage beyond. Mills stepped back, his face pale. "How did you—" "Three years ago, Morris and I investigated similar symbols at a warehouse in Docklands. He disappeared chasing something through what looked like a solid wall." Harlow's voice remained steady, but her fingers tightened around her compass. "I never understood what happened. Until now." She pulled a small bone token from her pocket, a memento from that old case she'd kept as a reminder of unfinished business. As she held it up, the symbols on the walls seemed to glow faintly in response. "This isn't just an abandoned Tube station, Mills. It's an entrance." "Entrance to what?" "The Veil Market." Harlow stepped into the passage, the air growing colder with each step. "And whoever our victim is, he died protecting something important." Mills followed reluctantly, his torch beam trembling slightly. "You're telling me there's some kind of... underground market down here?" "Not just underground. Hidden." Harlow pointed to markings that appeared only when viewed from a certain angle. "It moves locations every full moon. Only accessible with the right token." The passage opened into a vast cavern, transformed into a bustling marketplace despite its subterranean location. Stalls lined the walls, selling everything from glowing potions to books bound in what looked suspiciously like human skin. Beings of various descriptions—some almost human, others distinctly not—went about their business, occasionally glancing toward the newcomers with wary eyes. Harlow's compass needle stopped spinning, pointing directly toward a stall at the far end, operated by a woman with curly red hair and round glasses, her freckled complexion visible even in the dim light. "Stay close," Harlow whispered to Mills. "And don't touch anything." As they approached, the woman looked up, her green eyes widening slightly behind her glasses. She nervously tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear. "Detective Quinn," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I wondered when you'd find us." Harlow stopped at her stall, filled with ancient books and artifacts. "Eva Kowalski? Research assistant at the British Museum by day, occult information broker by night?" Eva shrugged, adjusting her worn leather satchel. "Everyone needs a hobby. The museum pays poorly, and rare texts aren't cheap." "The victim," Harlow said, getting straight to the point. "The man in the station. He was carrying one of these." She held up the compass. Eva's expression darkened. "Thomas. He was a friend. A collector of supernatural artifacts." "He died protecting your entrance," Mills interjected. "Not just mine." Eva lowered her voice further. "The Veil Market serves many purposes, Detective. It's a neutral ground where different factions can trade, gather information, sometimes even negotiate peace." "Who would want him dead?" Eva glanced around nervously. "Thomas discovered something. A pattern of disappearances, all connected to ritual sites like this one. He believed someone was harvesting supernatural energy, opening rifts between worlds." Harlow's compass began to spin again, faster this time. "Like the one that opened when Morris disappeared." Eva nodded. "Exactly. Thomas thought he'd found the person responsible. Someone powerful enough to walk between worlds unseen." "Who?" Mills demanded. Eva hesitated, then reached beneath her counter and pulled out a leather-bound book. "Thomas gave me this for safekeeping. It's his research. He was supposed to meet me last night, but he never showed." Harlow took the book, opening it to reveal pages filled with notes, diagrams, and photographs. One showed a symbol identical to those in the Tube station, carved into a different location. "He was close to identifying them," Eva said. "Close enough that they silenced him permanently." Harlow closed the book, her expression grim. "They made a mistake. Killing him only drew my attention." "Your attention is exactly what they've been avoiding, Detective." Eva gestured around the market. "Most people here want to remain hidden. They won't thank you for shining a light in their dark corners." "Sometimes the dark needs light, Miss Kowalski." Harlow tucked the book under her arm. "Even if it burns a few eyes in the process." As they turned to leave, a commotion erupted at the market entrance. Figures scattered, whispering in urgent tones. Something was coming—something that had followed them or perhaps had been waiting all along.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.654
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.038
70.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
2
adverb"nervously"
count2
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"reluctantly"
2"nervously"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"gloom"
3"etched"
4"scanned"
5"magnetic"
6"shimmered"
7"reminder"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
9.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount677
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.81
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow19
Quinn1
Tube2
Mills11
Eva8
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Mills"
3"Eva"
places
0"Tube"
globalScore0.097
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if searching for something"
1"seemed ancient"
2"looked like they'd been scratched there r"
3"s torch on the seemingly solid brickwork"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1163
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean22.8
std12.44
cv0.546
sampleLengths
052
121
240
334
424
52
612
743
818
910
1031
1141
128
1320
1414
159
1623
1717
1822
1923
209
2143
2239
2311
243
2525
2619
2729
2855
2934
3010
3126
3216
3326
3420
3525
3613
377
3830
395
4030
4117
4218
433
4434
4531
4615
4717
4833
4924
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"been scratched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was coming"
27.42% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences99
ratio0.04
matches
0"The air hung thick with damp and something else—something metallic and wrong."
1"She moved toward the ticket barriers, her attention drawn to faint markings on the wall—symbols that looked like they'd been scratched there recently, yet somehow seemed ancient."
2"Beings of various descriptions—some almost human, others distinctly not—went about their business, occasionally glancing toward the newcomers with wary eyes."
3"Something was coming—something that had followed them or perhaps had been waiting all along."
90.08% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount684
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04532163742690058
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.02631578947368421
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.75
std6.65
cv0.566
sampleLengths
020
112
220
317
44
510
613
717
88
926
109
117
128
132
143
159
1611
1716
1816
1918
208
212
2211
2320
2427
2514
268
275
2815
293
3011
319
3216
337
3410
357
368
379
385
397
4016
416
423
4336
447
4523
4616
4711
483
4915
81.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5050505050505051
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences58
matches
0"She adjusted her leather watch"
1"She stopped at the victim's"
2"She moved toward the ticket"
3"She ran her fingers over"
4"She found a loose brick"
5"She pulled a small bone"
6"She nervously tucked a strand"
7"she said, her voice barely"
8"She held up the compass"
ratio0.155
3.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences58
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"She adjusted her leather watch"
3"Sergeant Mills waved from the"
4"Harlow crossed the tracks, her"
5"The scene unfolded under harsh"
6"A body lay contorted near"
7"Mills crouched beside the victim,"
8"Harlow circled the perimeter, her"
9"She stopped at the victim's"
10"Something small and brass glinted"
11"Mills leaned closer."
12"Harlow knelt, her fingers hovering"
13"A small brass compass with"
14"The needle spun erratically, pointing"
15"Harlow stood, her sharp jaw"
16"She moved toward the ticket"
17"She ran her fingers over"
18"Mills laughed, short and sharp."
19"Harlow's gaze hardened."
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Harlow knelt, her fingers hovering above the object without touching it."
1"The needle spun erratically, pointing first north, then east, then south, as if searching for something."
2"She ran her fingers over them, finding a residue that smelled faintly of ozone."
3"Something was coming—something that had followed them or perhaps had been waiting all along."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Sergeant Mills waved, his torch beam cutting through the gloom"
1"Harlow pulled out, its needle steady"
2"Harlow's voice remained, but her fingers tightened around her compass"
3"Harlow stepped, the air growing colder with each step"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
53.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Mills suggested (suggest)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
3"Mills interjected (interject)"
4"Mills demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.192
70.4460%