| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1010 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.74% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1010 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "glistening" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 209 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 209 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 209 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 978 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Too close. Too open." | | 1 | "folding" | | 2 | "matching" | | 3 | "twitched" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "changed" | | 6 | "crackled" | | 7 | "absence" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 977 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Like" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Laughter | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Like | 7 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Earth" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Like" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite upright" | | 1 | "something like a coat, or maybe skin, dark a" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.045 | | wordCount | 978 | | matches | | 0 | "not with a crunch or a crackle, but a wet, sucking sigh" | | 1 | "not with power, but with *absence*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 209 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 91 | | mean | 10.75 | | std | 12.12 | | cv | 1.128 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 37 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 209 | | matches | | 0 | "was crouched" | | 1 | "being torn" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | 0 | "was *folding" | | 1 | "was forming" | | 2 | "were tasting" | | 3 | "was listening" | | 4 | "wasn’t following" | | 5 | "was *matching" | | 6 | "was dancing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 209 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boot sank into the moss, not with a crunch or a crackle, but a wet, sucking sigh—like the earth had been waiting." | | 1 | "Metallic, almost, like licking a nine-volt, but underneath it, something sweet and rotten—overripe blackberries left too long in sun-warmed glass." | | 2 | "The moon hung high—full, fat, too bright for late autumn—and yet the light didn’t reach the ground." | | 3 | "And then—" | | 4 | "The scar there—the crescent from when she’d fallen into the broken greenhouse pane at eight—throbbed, as if the glass were still lodged beneath the skin." | | 5 | "Just the giggle again—closer this time—cut short by a sharp inhale." | | 6 | "Crushed wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, star-of-Bethlehem—all blooming out of season, now torn and trampled into the mud." | | 7 | "It wasn’t just warm now—it burned, searing through the silver chain, branding her skin." | | 8 | "Between two of the standing stones—a gap just wide enough to step through—the air shimmered." | | 9 | "With none of the usual tell—a deep hum in the marrow, the taste of iron on the tongue." | | 10 | "Then—a sound." | | 11 | "Human-shaped, but wrong—limbs too long, fingers dragging through the petals like they were tasting them." | | 12 | "Behind her—movement." | | 13 | "And then—laughter." | | 14 | "She reached the boundary marker—a half-buried oak slab carved with Fae runes." | | 15 | "But she’d just been—" | | 16 | "The path she’d just taken—gone." | | 17 | "The slab—vanished." | | 18 | "The standing stones—rearranged." | | 19 | "Then—from the centre of the Grove—the portal flared." | | 20 | "And the figure—was there." |
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| 81.30% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1009 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thin, high-pitched whine" |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.05450941526263627 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005946481665014866 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 209 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 209 | | mean | 4.68 | | std | 4.54 | | cv | 0.97 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 52.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.37799043062200954 | | totalSentences | 209 | | uniqueOpeners | 79 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "Always at dusk." | | 1 | "Just the edge of the" | | 2 | "Just the giggle again—closer this" | | 3 | "Just the faint, flickering distortion," | | 4 | "Just a few more yards." | | 5 | "Suddenly, she was crouched." | | 6 | "Then—from the centre of the" |
| | ratio | 0.058 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "They formed a ragged ring" | | 1 | "She touched the pendant at" | | 2 | "She stepped forward." | | 3 | "It pooled on the treetops," | | 4 | "She unclipped the torch from" | | 5 | "Her wrist ached." | | 6 | "Her voice didn’t carry" | | 7 | "It vanished into the trees," | | 8 | "Her boots crunched on something" | | 9 | "She looked down." | | 10 | "They shouldn’t be here." | | 11 | "She stumbled, clutching it." | | 12 | "It wasn’t just warm now—it" | | 13 | "She looked up." | | 14 | "Its head tilted, not quite" | | 15 | "It wore something like a" | | 16 | "It didn’t look at her." | | 17 | "It was listening." | | 18 | "She ran parallel to the" | | 19 | "She risked a glance." |
| | ratio | 0.24 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boot sank into the" | | 1 | "Pulse a tight drum under" | | 2 | "The Grove had never greeted" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "They formed a ragged ring" | | 5 | "Rory had crossed it a" | | 6 | "The air tasted wrong." | | 7 | "She touched the pendant at" | | 8 | "The Heartstone glowed faintly, its" | | 9 | "She stepped forward." | | 10 | "The moon hung high—full, fat," | | 11 | "It pooled on the treetops," | | 12 | "She unclipped the torch from" | | 13 | "The beam cut through the" | | 14 | "A child’s voice." | | 15 | "The sound came from her" | | 16 | "A soft, breathless chuckle, like" | | 17 | "Her wrist ached." | | 18 | "The scar there—the crescent from" | | 19 | "Her voice didn’t carry" |
| | ratio | 0.595 | |
| 41.32% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A jagged line of violet light, vertical, humming now, a thin, high-pitched whine that made her molars ache." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |