Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX7TXEGKX4DNNPNDAZCFGD

Run Details

Duration:
55.3s
Cost:
$0.051234
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Gravel crunched beneath the tires of the bicycle as Aurora skidded to a halt near the treeline. The rhythmic whir of the chain died, replaced by the imposing silence of Richmond Park. It was technically closed, the gates locked to vehicles hours ago, but the pedestrian turnstiles offered less resistance to someone desperate enough to trespass. She swung her leg over the frame and leaned the bike against a moss-slicked fence post. Her breath plumed in the frigid air, white ghosts escaping her lips to vanish into the dark. It was colder than a London October had any right to be. A profound, bone-deep chill that ignored the layers of denim and wool she wore. Aurora tugged the collar of her jacket up, fingers brushing the silver chain around her neck. The Heartstone Pendant sat against her sternum, no longer just a piece of jewelry. It thrummed. A erratic, feverish vibration against her skin, like a trapped insect beating its wings against glass. It had started an hour ago at the flat above Silas’s bar, waking her from a dead sleep, pulling her south across the river. "Alright. I'm here." Her voice sounded thin, swallowed instantly by the vast acreage of the park. She clicked on a small torch. The beam cut a pale tunnel through the gloom, illuminating wet grass and the gnarled roots of ancient oaks. The beam swung left, catching the reflection of eyes. Aurora froze. A herd of deer stood fifty yards away in the bracken. Usually, the fallow deer were skittish, bolting at the snap of a twig. Tonight, they stood like statues carved from grey stone. A dozen pairs of eyes fixed on her, unblinking in the harsh LED light. They didn't graze. They didn't shift. They watched. She lowered the light, breaking the staredown, and stepped off the path. The tall grass brushed against her thighs, soaking her jeans instantly. The map in her head—or rather, the magnetic pull of the crimson stone against her chest—led her toward the dense cluster of woodland that locals avoided after dusk. The transition was subtle at first. The wind, which had been biting at her cheeks near the path, died completely. The ambient hum of the city—the distant roar of Heathrow planes, the low murmur of traffic on the A3—faded into a suffocating vacuum. She reached the boundary. Massive oak standing stones, planted centuries ago or grown by design, formed a rough circle. This was the threshold of the Fae Grove. In the daylight, with Isolde, it was a place of vibrant, chaotic life. Now, under a sliver of moon, it looked like a graveyard. Aurora stepped between the marker trees. The air pressure dropped. Her ears popped, a sharp crack inside her skull. The smell hit her next—not the earthy decay of autumn leaves, but something sickly sweet. Overripe fruit left to rot in the sun. Perfume masking gangrene. "Isolde?" The name hung in the stagnant air, refusing to travel. She swept the torch beam across the clearing. The wildflowers were wrong. In the human world, flowers closed at night. Here, poppies and foxgloves stood wide open, their petals stretched back as if screaming. The colors were muted, drained of vibrancy, appearing as shades of bruised purple and clot-black in the artificial light. The pendant scorched her skin. She gasped, grabbing the stone through her shirt, pulling it away from her flesh. The red gem pulsed with a violent, jagged rhythm. It wasn't guiding her anymore; it was warning her. She wasn't alone. Aurora killed the torch. The darkness rushed in, absolute and heavy. If she was hunting, light made her a target. If she was being hunted, it made her prey. She stood perfectly still, controlling her breathing, forcing her heart rate down. *Cool-headed. Think.* A sound came from the left. *Click.* It was wet, like a tongue snapping against the roof of a dry mouth. Aurora crouched, her boots sinking into the unnaturally soft earth. Her hand went to her pocket, gripping her keys. A pathetic weapon against magic, but the serrated edge of a house key was better than nothing. *Click.* It came from the right this time. Closer. She pivoted, eyes straining to adjust to the low light. The shadows between the trees weren't empty. They possessed density. Shapes elongated and retracted, defying the laws of optics. "Who's there?" Her voice was harder this time, edge honed by adrenaline. "I know this place. You don't want to mess with the guardian." A lie. Isolde wasn't here. The Grove felt abandoned, or worse, usurped. A laugh drifted through the clearing. It didn't come from a throat. It sounded like dry leaves skittering over pavement. Aurora backed away, her heel catching on a root. She stumbled but caught herself, her hand slapping against the rough bark of a tree. The bark felt warm. It pulsed under her palm, syncing with the rhythm of the pendant. Flesh disguised as wood. She jerked her hand back, wiping the residue on her jeans. A viscous, dark fluid stained her palm. *Movement.* At the edge of her peripheral vision, barely ten feet away. A figure stood by the foxgloves. Tall. Too tall. Limbs lengthened like pulled taffy. Aurora turned her head slowly, refusing to make sudden movement. The figure was gone. The wildflowers where it had stood were crushed, the stems broken, bleeding a milky sap that glowed faintly. She needed to leave. The pull that brought her here had dissolved into a trap. This wasn't a summoning; it was a lure. She took a step back toward the standing stones, visualizing the exit. *Crack.* A branch snapped directly behind her neck. She spun, keys raised, the jagged metal glinting in the faint moonlight. Nothing. Just the oppressive wall of trees. But the smell was stronger now. The rotting fruit scent was mixed with something metallic. Copper. Old blood. "Rory..." The voice doused her in ice water. It wasn't a Fae whisper or a demonic growl. It was familiar. It belonged to Cardiff. To a small, damp flat and bruised ribs. "Evan?" The name slipped out before she could stop it. Her logic brain screamed *impossible*. Evan was in Wales, or Hell, or anywhere but a magical pocket in Richmond Park. But the cadence was perfect. The slight slur on the vowels. "You look tired, Rory. Always running." The voice came from everywhere. It leaked from the canopy above and seeped up from the roots below. "Show yourself." She kept turning, putting her back to nothing, scanning the perimeter. The crescent scar on her wrist itch, a phantom pain from the glass shard years ago. "Smart girl. Lovely girl. Stupid girl." A shadow detached itself from the gloom between two oaks. It wore a human shape, but the proportions were wrong. The shoulders were too narrow, the arms dangling past the knees. It wore a hoodie—grey, zip-up, just like Evan used to wear. But the face was a blur of static, featureless and shifting. Aurora didn't scream. She assessed. The distance to the boundary was twenty feet. The ground was uneven. The thing blocking her path was fast—she had seen it move before. "You're not him," she spat. "You're just bad static." The thing tilted its head. The angle was acute, the neck snapping with a wet crunch to rest the head on the shoulder. "Static," it mimicked. The voice distorted, shifting pitch from Evan’s baritone to her own soprano. "Static. Static." It took a step. The movement was jerky, missing frames of animation. One moment it was by the tree, the next it was five feet closer. No sound of footsteps. Just the *click-click-click* of that wet tongue. Aurora hurled the torch. The heavy metal cylinder spun through the air, striking the figure in the chest. It didn't thud; it splashed, sinking into the grey hoodie as if the torso were made of tar. The light flickered and died inside the creature. She ran. She didn't run away from it; experience had taught her that predators liked a chase. She ran perpendicular, diving into the cluster of ferns to her right, banking on the dense foliage to break its line of sight. The Grove shifted. The trees she ran toward receded, stretching away like a dolly-zoom camera effect. The ground beneath her feet turned spongy, sucking at her boots, trying to hold her in place. The distance to the oaks didn't close. She was sprinting on a treadmill of moss and loam. *Click.* Right beside her ear. She threw an elbow back, hard. Impact. It felt like hitting a bag of wet sand. A cold shockwave traveled up her arm, numbing her shoulder. She stumbled, falling to her knees in the dirt. Aurora scrambled up, gasping. The air was too thick to breathe now, like inhaling syrup. She looked at her wrist. The scar was glowing—a faint, sickly blue luminescence that matched the sap of the crushed flowers. She looked up. The figure stood over her. Up close, the "hoodie" wasn't fabric. It was grey skin, folded and textured to mimic clothing, complete with a zipper made of bone ridges. The face remained a blur, but where the eyes should be, two hollow pits opened. "Rory," it said, using her mother's voice now. Soft. Disappointed. Aurora gripped the Heartstone Pendant. It was burning hot, searing her palm. "Whatever you are," she hissed through gritted teeth, "you have no idea who I deal with." She shoved the burning red stone toward the creature’s face. The creature didn't recoil. It paused. The static over its face cleared for a microsecond, revealing a reflection. Not of Evan, or her mother. It was a reflection of Aurora, but her eyes were black pits, and her mouth was sewn shut with silver wire. The reflection smiled, tearing the stitches. The ground beneath Aurora vanished. She didn't fall down. She fell *through*. The texture of the world dissolved. The cold air of Richmond Park was replaced by a crushing, silent void. She tumbled through layers of darkness, the scream trapped in her throat by the sudden lack of atmosphere. Then, impact. Hard wood. The smell of varnish and stale beer. Aurora gasped, her lungs convulsing as they pulled in oxygen. She rolled onto her back, coughing violently. She lay on a wooden floor. Above her wasn't the sky or the canopy of the Fae Grove. It was a ceiling fan, spinning lazily. She pushed herself up on shaking arms. She recognized the room. It was the staff room of the Golden Empress. The familiar red lockers stood against the wall. The schedule whiteboard had Yu-Fei’s neat handwriting on it. Safe. She must have hallucinated. Passed out in the park and dreamed the fall. Aurora stood up, brushing the dirt from her jeans. Her legs wobbled. She reached for the door handle to go out into the restaurant. She stopped. The silence was total. No clatter of woks from the kitchen. No phones ringing. She looked at the whiteboard again. The handwriting was Yu-Fei’s, but the words were wrong. *DON'T TURN AROUND* was written in red marker, over and over, filling every inch of the white space. The hair on Aurora's arms stood up. The air smelled of rotting fruit and copper. *Click.* From inside the locker behind her.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:15:48.659Z" 2/19/2026, 12:15:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1900
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"perfectly"
2"slowly"
3"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1900
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"imposing"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"profound"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count2
6
word"magnetic"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count2
9
word"glinting"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count2
13
word"perfect"
count1
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"imposing"
2"silence"
3"profound"
4"chill"
5"gloom"
6"magnetic"
7"chaotic"
8"pulsed"
9"glinting"
10"oppressive"
11"whisper"
12"familiar"
13"perfect"
14"scanning"
15"footsteps"
16"flickered"
17"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences219
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences219
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences228
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords14
totalWords1886
ratio0.007
matches
0"Cool-headed. Think."
1"Click."
2"Click."
3"Movement."
4"Crack."
5"impossible"
6"click-click-click"
7"Click."
8"through"
9"DON'T TURN AROUND"
10"Click."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1829
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora17
Richmond3
Park3
London1
October1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Silas1
Heathrow1
Fae3
Grove4
Isolde2
Cardiff1
Wales1
Hell1
Evan4
Right1
Soft1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"October"
2"Pendant"
3"Silas"
4"Heathrow"
5"Evan"
6"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Cardiff"
6"Wales"
7"Right"
globalScore1
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences144
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like a graveyard"
1"as if screaming"
2"sounded like dry leaves skittering over pa"
3"felt like hitting a bag of wet sand"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.53
wordCount1886
matches
0"not the earthy decay of autumn leaves, but something sickly sweet"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences228
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean20.73
std17.54
cv0.846
sampleLengths
056
159
272
33
438
59
62
755
851
943
1040
1111
126
1339
141
1510
1653
1737
183
1943
206
211
2214
2336
241
258
2629
2724
2812
2920
3044
3118
321
3325
3410
354
3618
3735
381
397
4012
417
4218
431
4431
451
4640
476
4818
4929
92.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences219
matches
0"being hunted"
1"was gone"
2"were crushed"
3"was mixed"
4"were made"
5"was sewn"
6"was replaced"
7"was written"
80.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs334
matches
0"was warning"
1"was hunting"
2"was sprinting"
3"was glowing"
4"was burning"
17.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences228
ratio0.044
matches
0"The map in her head—or rather, the magnetic pull of the crimson stone against her chest—led her toward the dense cluster of woodland that locals avoided after dusk."
1"The ambient hum of the city—the distant roar of Heathrow planes, the low murmur of traffic on the A3—faded into a suffocating vacuum."
2"The smell hit her next—not the earthy decay of autumn leaves, but something sickly sweet."
3"It wasn't guiding her anymore; it was warning her."
4"This wasn't a summoning; it was a lure."
5"It wore a hoodie—grey, zip-up, just like Evan used to wear."
6"The thing blocking her path was fast—she had seen it move before."
7"It didn't thud; it splashed, sinking into the grey hoodie as if the torso were made of tar."
8"She didn't run away from it; experience had taught her that predators liked a chase."
9"The scar was glowing—a faint, sickly blue luminescence that matched the sap of the crushed flowers."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1843
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly blue luminescence"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.02333152468800868
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.008681497558328812
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences228
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences228
mean8.27
std5.37
cv0.649
sampleLengths
017
115
224
316
417
512
614
716
814
92
1016
1124
123
1313
146
1519
169
172
1811
1913
209
2114
223
233
242
2512
2611
2728
286
2914
3023
314
3215
338
3413
3511
366
374
389
3915
408
413
421
4310
448
454
468
4714
4819
495
36.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats31
diversityRatio0.2719298245614035
totalSentences228
uniqueOpeners62
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences189
matches
0"Usually, the fallow deer were"
1"Just the oppressive wall of"
2"Just the *click-click-click* of that"
ratio0.016
76.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount68
totalSentences189
matches
0"It was technically closed, the"
1"She swung her leg over"
2"Her breath plumed in the"
3"It was colder than a"
4"It had started an hour"
5"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
6"She clicked on a small"
7"They didn't graze."
8"They didn't shift."
9"She lowered the light, breaking"
10"She reached the boundary."
11"Her ears popped, a sharp"
12"She swept the torch beam"
13"She gasped, grabbing the stone"
14"It wasn't guiding her anymore;"
15"She wasn't alone."
16"She stood perfectly still, controlling"
17"It was wet, like a"
18"Her hand went to her"
19"It came from the right"
ratio0.36
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount162
totalSentences189
matches
0"Gravel crunched beneath the tires"
1"The rhythmic whir of the"
2"It was technically closed, the"
3"She swung her leg over"
4"Her breath plumed in the"
5"It was colder than a"
6"A profound, bone-deep chill that"
7"Aurora tugged the collar of"
8"The Heartstone Pendant sat against"
9"A erratic, feverish vibration against"
10"It had started an hour"
11"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
12"She clicked on a small"
13"The beam cut a pale"
14"The beam swung left, catching"
15"A herd of deer stood"
16"Tonight, they stood like statues"
17"A dozen pairs of eyes"
18"They didn't graze."
19"They didn't shift."
ratio0.857
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences189
matches
0"Now, under a sliver of"
1"If she was hunting, light"
2"If she was being hunted,"
3"To a small, damp flat"
ratio0.021
97.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences78
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It had started an hour ago at the flat above Silas’s bar, waking her from a dead sleep, pulling her south across the river."
1"Here, poppies and foxgloves stood wide open, their petals stretched back as if screaming."
2"She gasped, grabbing the stone through her shirt, pulling it away from her flesh."
3"She stood perfectly still, controlling her breathing, forcing her heart rate down."
4"The scar was glowing—a faint, sickly blue luminescence that matched the sap of the crushed flowers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she spat (spit)"
1"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.25
83.8420%