Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX7YB2MSEYGBH4GNWY5P0J

Run Details

Duration:
20.7s
Cost:
$0.009970
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had slicked the paths of Richmond Park long before Aurora stepped off the cracked tarmac onto the damp grass. Her boots sank slightly into the earth, muffled by moss and fallen leaves. The city’s glow dimmed behind her, smothered by ancient oaks and the thick, breathing dark. She pulled her jacket tighter, fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant beneath the fabric. It pulsed once—soft, warm—like a drowsy heartbeat against her skin. She shouldn’t be here. The text had come three hours ago, scrambled through the restaurant’s burner app—*Eva missing. Grove. Come alone.* No signature. No proof. But the sender knew things only Eva would know. The codeword. The old nickname. The way they used to sign off with that stupid, childish rhyme. Rory had tried calling. Nothing. Sent texts. No reply. Then she checked the pendant. It had been cold for weeks—dormant since the night she'd fled Cardiff and Evan’s grip loosened like a rusted noose. But tonight, it sparked. Flickered like a dying bulb. When she held it up in the dim light of her flat, the crimson gem throbbed in rhythm with something beneath the floorboards. As if the city itself was holding its breath. Now, stepping past the first of the standing stones, she felt the shift. The air thickened. Not just colder—denser. Her breath didn’t plume. The rain had stopped, but the trees dripped anyway, each drop hitting the ground with a sound too crisp, too deliberate. *Plink. Plink. Plink.* Like glass beads on stone. She counted the oaks—one, two, three—her pace slowing. Five standing stones formed a rough circle ahead, gnarled and split with age, bark blackened as though scorched and never healed. Between them, the grove opened into a clearing where wildflowers glowed faintly under moonlight that didn’t exist when she’d entered the park. Time didn’t move here. Or it moved wrong. She stepped through. The pendant warmed instantly, a low hum rising in her chest. Rory froze, scanning the edges. Nothing moved. The flowers—bluebells, buttercups, things that shouldn’t bloom in November—swayed without wind. Their petals shimmered with a faint luminescence, casting pale halos on the moss. Beautiful. Wrong. “Eva?” Her voice didn’t echo. It just… disappeared. She took another step. Then another. The ground gave slightly, spongy beneath her feet. She glanced down. Tiny white mushrooms had sprouted where her boot had pressed. Already unfolding. Already watching. A whisper threaded through the trees. Not words. Not language. A breath. A syllable caught between teeth. Rory turned. Nothing. But the pendant—hotter now, almost prickling. She didn’t pull it out. Didn’t want to see it. Knew it was glowing. Something shuffled behind the farthest stone. She pivoted, hand snapping to the knife at her belt—just a delivery driver’s tool, not meant for this. The shape behind the stone didn’t step out. Didn’t have to. Its shadow did. Tall. Too tall. Limbs too long, joints bending where they shouldn’t. The shadow stretched across the moss, fingers twitching as if testing the air. Then—gone. Swallowed by the bark. “Who’s there?” Silence. Then, from her left: A giggle. High. Childlike. Eva’s laugh used to sound like that—before the world wore it down, before she started sleeping with the lights on. Rory ran toward it. “Eva! If this is some sick joke—” She stopped at the center of the clearing. A ring of red mushrooms circled a single, stunted oak. At its base lay a jacket. Pink. Leather. Tattered at the sleeves. Eva’s. Rory dropped to her knees, fingers trembling as she touched the collar. Smelled like smoke. Like old perfume. Like nothing at all. The pendant flared—searing. She yanked it out, chain clinking. The crimson gem pulsed like a raw nerve, light bleeding into the grove’s false moonlight. And then— A footstep. Behind her. She turned slowly. No one. But the flowers. All around the ring. They were no longer facing the center. Every bloom, every delicate face, now turned toward her. Another step. Closer. She stood, backing away from the tree. The jacket. The mushrooms. The air tasted metallic. Like licking a battery. Then—her name. “Rory…” Not Eva. Not close. It came from everywhere. A layered voice. Several mouths speaking at once. One high. One guttural. One weeping. “Rory… you shouldn’t… be here…” She gripped the knife, breath coming in short, silent bursts. “Show yourself.” The standing stones groaned. Not wind. Not wood. A deep, wet creak, like jaws opening. A figure stepped between two oaks. Tall. Wearing Eva’s face. But wrong. Its skin clung too tightly to the bones, stretched like damp parchment. Eyes too wide, pupils black and split vertically. It smiled. Too many teeth. All small. All sharp. It raised a hand. Offered something. A phone. Eva’s phone. Rory didn’t move. The thing tilted its head. “She’s waiting,” it said. Three tones in one sentence. One of them almost real. “I don’t believe you,” Rory said, voice steady. She didn’t. Not really. Not with the pendant screaming against her chest, and the flowers twitching like eyelids. The figure stepped forward. One foot. Then another. Its boots didn’t sink into the moss. They hovered just above. “She left this for you,” it whispered. It extended the phone. Screen lit. A photo displayed: Rory’s sleeping face, taken from above. The night before. In her flat. Her blood turned to ice. The pendant blazed. She didn’t hear the scream. Felt it. In her teeth. In her ribs. A sound without sound. And then the thing moved. Not walked. *Snapped* forward, like a frame skipped in film. Rory stumbled back, knife up. The thing’s smile widened. “She’s already gone,” it said. And this time, all three voices were Eva’s. One young. One terrified. One dead. The Heartstone flared once—blinding red. She turned and ran. Branches didn’t scrape. They reached. Fingers of ivy lashed at her coat. The ground shifted underfoot, roots rising like tendons. She didn’t look back. Couldn’t. The standing stones loomed. She lunged through, shoulder slamming into bark. She burst out— Cold city air hit her like a slap. Rain. Traffic. Headlights. She collapsed to her hands and knees on the path, gasping. Silence. Normal silence. Distant sirens. A dog barking. She turned. The gap between the trees where she’d entered—empty. Just shadow. Just trees. Her hand flew to her chest. The pendant was gone. Only a faint burn mark on her shirt. And the smell of burnt sugar clinging to her skin. Somewhere, deep behind her, a flower bloomed in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1092
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"tightly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1092
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"flickered"
2"throbbed"
3"scanning"
4"shimmered"
5"echo"
6"whisper"
7"silence"
8"searing"
9"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences208
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences208
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences213
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords9
totalWords1077
ratio0.008
matches
0"Eva missing. Grove. Come alone."
1"Plink. Plink. Plink."
2"Snapped"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1045
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"One"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora1
Heartstone2
Eva8
Cardiff1
Evan1
Like4
November1
Three1
Rory9
Cold1
One8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Like"
5"Three"
6"Rory"
7"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"Cold"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if testing the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1077
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences213
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean12.67
std14.17
cv1.119
sampleLengths
071
14
247
314
461
513
639
751
88
93
1044
118
1231
136
1411
152
161
1720
186
1932
2029
212
221
234
242
2522
264
277
2831
2922
3024
312
322
332
343
352
3623
373
3811
398
402
411
422
432
4418
455
4612
474
4811
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences208
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs197
matches
0"was holding"
1"was glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences213
ratio0.075
matches
0"It pulsed once—soft, warm—like a drowsy heartbeat against her skin."
1"The text had come three hours ago, scrambled through the restaurant’s burner app—*Eva missing."
2"It had been cold for weeks—dormant since the night she'd fled Cardiff and Evan’s grip loosened like a rusted noose."
3"Not just colder—denser."
4"She counted the oaks—one, two, three—her pace slowing."
5"The flowers—bluebells, buttercups, things that shouldn’t bloom in November—swayed without wind."
6"But the pendant—hotter now, almost prickling."
7"She pivoted, hand snapping to the knife at her belt—just a delivery driver’s tool, not meant for this."
8"Then—gone."
9"Eva’s laugh used to sound like that—before the world wore it down, before she started sleeping with the lights on."
10"The pendant flared—searing."
11"And then—"
12"Then—her name."
13"The Heartstone flared once—blinding red."
14"She burst out—"
15"The gap between the trees where she’d entered—empty."
90.42% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1060
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.0509433962264151
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010377358490566037
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences213
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences213
mean5.06
std4.48
cv0.887
sampleLengths
020
113
215
313
410
54
614
71
84
92
109
112
123
1312
144
151
162
172
185
1920
204
215
2223
239
2413
253
263
274
2821
291
301
316
328
3321
3422
354
364
373
3811
395
402
4111
4213
431
441
455
462
471
484
492
51.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.37089201877934275
totalSentences213
uniqueOpeners79
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences129
matches
0"Then she checked the pendant."
1"Then, from her left:"
2"Too many teeth."
3"Only a faint burn mark"
4"Somewhere, deep behind her, a"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences129
matches
0"Her boots sank slightly into"
1"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"It pulsed once—soft, warm—like a"
3"She shouldn’t be here."
4"It had been cold for"
5"Her breath didn’t plume."
6"She counted the oaks—one, two,"
7"She stepped through."
8"Their petals shimmered with a"
9"Her voice didn’t echo"
10"She took another step."
11"She glanced down."
12"She didn’t pull it out."
13"She pivoted, hand snapping to"
14"Its shadow did."
15"She stopped at the center"
16"She yanked it out, chain"
17"She turned slowly."
18"They were no longer facing"
19"She stood, backing away from"
ratio0.271
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences129
matches
0"Rain had slicked the paths"
1"Her boots sank slightly into"
2"The city’s glow dimmed behind"
3"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
4"It pulsed once—soft, warm—like a"
5"She shouldn’t be here."
6"The text had come three"
7"The old nickname."
8"The way they used to"
9"Rory had tried calling."
10"It had been cold for"
11"The air thickened."
12"Her breath didn’t plume."
13"The rain had stopped, but"
14"Plink.* Like glass beads on"
15"She counted the oaks—one, two,"
16"Time didn’t move here."
17"She stepped through."
18"The pendant warmed instantly, a"
19"Rory froze, scanning the edges."
ratio0.674
77.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences129
matches
0"As if the city itself"
1"Now, stepping past the first"
ratio0.016
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Five standing stones formed a rough circle ahead, gnarled and split with age, bark blackened as though scorched and never healed."
1"The flowers—bluebells, buttercups, things that shouldn’t bloom in November—swayed without wind."
2"The shadow stretched across the moss, fingers twitching as if testing the air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, voice steady"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.2
84.7258%