| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1092 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1092 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 208 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 213 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1077 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva missing. Grove. Come alone." | | 1 | "Plink. Plink. Plink." | | 2 | "Snapped" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1045 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "One" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Eva | 8 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Like | 4 | | November | 1 | | Three | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Cold | 1 | | One | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Like" | | 5 | "Three" | | 6 | "Rory" | | 7 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Cold" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1077 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 213 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 85 | | mean | 12.67 | | std | 14.17 | | cv | 1.119 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 208 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 213 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed once—soft, warm—like a drowsy heartbeat against her skin." | | 1 | "The text had come three hours ago, scrambled through the restaurant’s burner app—*Eva missing." | | 2 | "It had been cold for weeks—dormant since the night she'd fled Cardiff and Evan’s grip loosened like a rusted noose." | | 3 | "Not just colder—denser." | | 4 | "She counted the oaks—one, two, three—her pace slowing." | | 5 | "The flowers—bluebells, buttercups, things that shouldn’t bloom in November—swayed without wind." | | 6 | "But the pendant—hotter now, almost prickling." | | 7 | "She pivoted, hand snapping to the knife at her belt—just a delivery driver’s tool, not meant for this." | | 8 | "Then—gone." | | 9 | "Eva’s laugh used to sound like that—before the world wore it down, before she started sleeping with the lights on." | | 10 | "The pendant flared—searing." | | 11 | "And then—" | | 12 | "Then—her name." | | 13 | "The Heartstone flared once—blinding red." | | 14 | "She burst out—" | | 15 | "The gap between the trees where she’d entered—empty." |
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| 90.42% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1060 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.0509433962264151 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010377358490566037 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 213 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 213 | | mean | 5.06 | | std | 4.48 | | cv | 0.887 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 51.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.37089201877934275 | | totalSentences | 213 | | uniqueOpeners | 79 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she checked the pendant." | | 1 | "Then, from her left:" | | 2 | "Too many teeth." | | 3 | "Only a faint burn mark" | | 4 | "Somewhere, deep behind her, a" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank slightly into" | | 1 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 2 | "It pulsed once—soft, warm—like a" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 4 | "It had been cold for" | | 5 | "Her breath didn’t plume." | | 6 | "She counted the oaks—one, two," | | 7 | "She stepped through." | | 8 | "Their petals shimmered with a" | | 9 | "Her voice didn’t echo" | | 10 | "She took another step." | | 11 | "She glanced down." | | 12 | "She didn’t pull it out." | | 13 | "She pivoted, hand snapping to" | | 14 | "Its shadow did." | | 15 | "She stopped at the center" | | 16 | "She yanked it out, chain" | | 17 | "She turned slowly." | | 18 | "They were no longer facing" | | 19 | "She stood, backing away from" |
| | ratio | 0.271 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain had slicked the paths" | | 1 | "Her boots sank slightly into" | | 2 | "The city’s glow dimmed behind" | | 3 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 4 | "It pulsed once—soft, warm—like a" | | 5 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 6 | "The text had come three" | | 7 | "The old nickname." | | 8 | "The way they used to" | | 9 | "Rory had tried calling." | | 10 | "It had been cold for" | | 11 | "The air thickened." | | 12 | "Her breath didn’t plume." | | 13 | "The rain had stopped, but" | | 14 | "Plink.* Like glass beads on" | | 15 | "She counted the oaks—one, two," | | 16 | "Time didn’t move here." | | 17 | "She stepped through." | | 18 | "The pendant warmed instantly, a" | | 19 | "Rory froze, scanning the edges." |
| | ratio | 0.674 | |
| 77.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the city itself" | | 1 | "Now, stepping past the first" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Five standing stones formed a rough circle ahead, gnarled and split with age, bark blackened as though scorched and never healed." | | 1 | "The flowers—bluebells, buttercups, things that shouldn’t bloom in November—swayed without wind." | | 2 | "The shadow stretched across the moss, fingers twitching as if testing the air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, voice steady" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |