| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 730 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 730 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "furrowed" | | 1 | "methodical" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "complex" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "delving" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 737 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 594 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 9 | | Morris | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.742 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for something unseen" | | 1 | "seemed familiar somehow" | | 2 | "quite place" |
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| 64.31% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.357 | | wordCount | 737 | | matches | | 0 | "not north, but towards a dark alcove at the end of the platform" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.03% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 35.1 | | std | 15.34 | | cv | 0.437 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 23 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "was tucked" | | 1 | "was etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 90 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 51 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung heavy with the stench of decay and something else - something coppery and acrid that made her nose wrinkle." | | 1 | "She noted the worn leather satchel nearby, its contents - books, papers, an old-fashioned compass - scattered across the tracks." | | 2 | "This wasn't a random attack - it was methodical, almost surgical." | | 3 | "The station was a mess - debris everywhere, graffiti covering the walls, but there was an odd sense of order to the chaos." | | 4 | "She'd heard whispers about Morris - how his last partner had disappeared under mysterious circumstances three years ago." | | 5 | "The girl's appearance - the red hair, the glasses, the books in her bag - it all seemed familiar somehow." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 588 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03231292517006803 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011904761904761904 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 51 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 51 | | mean | 14.45 | | std | 6.77 | | cv | 0.468 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 71.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.43137254901960786 | | totalSentences | 51 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "She followed him down the" | | 1 | "Her green eyes stared sightlessly" | | 2 | "She noted the worn leather" | | 3 | "She pulled on a pair" | | 4 | "She stood, brushing dust from" | | 5 | "She'd heard whispers about Morris" | | 6 | "she asked, nodding towards the" | | 7 | "She picked up the compass," | | 8 | "She stood, pocketing the compass." | | 9 | "She turned back to the" | | 10 | "It felt warm against her" |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The flickering fluorescent lights of" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped carefully" | | 2 | "The air hung heavy with" | | 3 | "She followed him down the" | | 4 | "A young woman, perhaps in" | | 5 | "Her green eyes stared sightlessly" | | 6 | "Quinn crouched beside the body," | | 7 | "She noted the worn leather" | | 8 | "The girl's left hand was" | | 9 | "the officer said, gesturing to" | | 10 | "Quinn's brow furrowed." | | 11 | "Something didn't sit right with" | | 12 | "She pulled on a pair" | | 13 | "This wasn't a random attack" | | 14 | "She stood, brushing dust from" | | 15 | "The station was a mess" | | 16 | "A voice called from the" | | 17 | "Quinn turned to face her" | | 18 | "She'd heard whispers about Morris" | | 19 | "she asked, nodding towards the" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "As if someone had gone" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn turned to face her colleague, taking in his nervous demeanor, the way his eyes kept darting around as if searching for something unseen." | | 1 | "Unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins, if the rumors were to be believed." | | 2 | "It felt warm against her thigh, as if it were alive, eager to lead her somewhere." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "called a young officer, his face pale in the dim light" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |