Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX86KD382D3MWWEN88GE3G

Run Details

Duration:
7.5s
Cost:
$0.000276
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove hung thickand still, smelling of damp earth and something like ozone. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, pushed through the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary. Her breath misted in the cold night air, visible for a moment before vanishing. She’d come here, fleeing the suffocating familiarity of London, seeking the grove’s rumored peace. But peace was a luxury she couldn’t afford tonight. The silence wasn’t peaceful; it was a vacuum, pressing in on her, amplifying every tiny sound until it felt like a physical weight. She’d parked her bike a mile back, the engine’s growl swallowed by the dense trees. Now, the path ahead was barely more than a deer trail, overgrown and slick with dew. Her watch, a battered digital affair, showed 2:17 AM. She’d been walking for twenty minutes, the time feeling both stretched and compressed, like the grove itself was warping reality. The trees leaned in, their gnarled branches scratching the sky like skeletal fingers. Shadows pooled in the hollows between the roots, shifting and deepening as she passed. A faint, rhythmic scraping sound reached her ears. Not the wind, not the rustle of leaves. It sounded like… stone on stone. She froze, listening. The sound stopped. Then started again, closer this time, a dry, grating whisper that seemed to come from the ground itself. She spun around, heart hammering against her ribs. Nothing. Just the oppressive silence, broken only by the distant hoot of an owl that sounded unnaturally loud. She took a step forward, the crunch of dead leaves underfoot the only sound. The scraping resumed, this time from her left, near the ancient oak standing stones. She approached cautiously, the air growing colder, charged with an energy that made the hairs on her arms stand on end. The stones themselves seemed to pulse faintly, a deep, resonant hum vibrating through her boots. She touched one, rough bark scratching her palm. It felt warm, unnaturally so. A flicker of movement caught her eye at the edge of her vision. She turned, but the darkness was absolute. Just shadows. She pressed on, the path winding deeper into the heart of the grove. The scraping sound followed her, a persistent, unsettling companion. She heard whispers then, not words, but a low, sibilant murmur that seemed to coil around her thoughts, whispering her name. "Rory... Rory..." It wasn’t human, but it felt intimately familiar, like a memory dredged from a nightmare. She stumbled, catching herself on a gnarled root. The pendant around her neck, a gift from an unknown benefactor, warmed against her skin. It pulsed faintly, a deep crimson glow that seemed to absorb the surrounding gloom. She pulled it out, the silver chain cold in her hand. The glow intensified, casting a small, eerie circle of light on the damp earth. It felt like a beacon, but also a trap. The whispers grew louder, clearer, coalescing into a single, chilling voice that seemed to come from all around her. "You shouldn’t be here, Rory. This place isn’t for you." It wasn’t threatening, not yet. It was curious, predatory. She backed away, the path seeming to shift beneath her feet. The time distortion was worse now; her watch showed 2:17 again, but the grove felt like it had been hours. She looked up, trying to find the stars, but the canopy was too thick, a solid, impenetrable roof of dark leaves. The air felt thick, heavy, like breathing syrup. She felt watched, not just seen, but *known*. The scraping sound was now a constant, a dry, insistent rhythm that echoed through the silent trees. She heard footsteps, soft and padded, following her, always just out of sight. She spun around, heart pounding, but the path behind her was empty, the only disturbance the disturbed leaves she’d just walked over. The Heartstone pendant’s glow flared, bright enough to illuminate the immediate area, revealing nothing but twisted roots and moss. The whispers died down, replaced by a low, guttural growl that vibrated in her chest. She stumbled, falling hard onto her knees, the pendant slipping from her fingers. It landed with a soft clink on the cold earth. The growl intensified, closer now, a sound that wasn’t quite animal, not quite mechanical. It sounded like tearing, like something large and powerful forcing its way through dense undergrowth. She scrambled backwards, her hands scraping against the rough bark of a tree. The pendant’s glow dimmed, fading back to a faint pulse against her skin. The growl stopped. Silence descended again, heavier than before, broken only by her ragged breathing and the frantic beat of her own heart. She pressed herself against the tree, eyes wide, scanning the impenetrable darkness. The grove held its breath. She wasn’t alone. She knew it with a certainty that chilled her to the bone. The wrongness wasn’t just in the sounds or the shifting shadows anymore. It was in the air itself, thick and alive, watching her. The path back seemed to have vanished, swallowed by the encroaching darkness. The ancient stones loomed, silent sentinels in the heart of the Fae Grove, and she was trapped within their grasp.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"it felt intimately [intimately]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
94.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount864
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount864
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"beacon"
count1
12
word"chilling"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"footsteps"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"mechanical"
count1
18
word"scanning"
count1
19
word"chilled"
count1
20
word"loomed"
count1
21
word"sentinels"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"rhythmic"
3"whisper"
4"oppressive"
5"charged"
6"pulse"
7"flicker"
8"familiar"
9"pulsed"
10"gloom"
11"beacon"
12"chilling"
13"echoed"
14"footsteps"
15"pounding"
16"vibrated"
17"mechanical"
18"scanning"
19"chilled"
20"loomed"
21"sentinels"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords864
ratio0.001
matches
0"known"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount852
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.23
worstName"Fae"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove2
Carter1
Rory1
London1
Heartstone1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount9
matches
0"something like ozone"
1"felt like a physical weight"
2"whisper that seemed to come from the ground itself"
3"murmur that seemed to coil around her thoughts, whispering her name"
4"glow that seemed to absorb the surrounding gloom"
5"felt like a beacon, but also a trap"
6"voice that seemed to come from all around her"
7"felt like it had been hours"
8"sounded like tearing, like something large"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.315
wordCount864
matches
0"not words, but a low, sibilant murmur"
1"not just seen, but *known*"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
46.01% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs6
mean144
std44.79
cv0.311
sampleLengths
095
187
2149
3153
4158
5222
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was warping"
1"wasn’t threatening"
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences70
ratio0.029
matches
0"The silence wasn’t peaceful; it was a vacuum, pressing in on her, amplifying every tiny sound until it felt like a physical weight."
1"The time distortion was worse now; her watch showed 2:17 again, but the grove felt like it had been hours."
92.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount852
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04812206572769953
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012910798122065728
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean12.34
std5.53
cv0.448
sampleLengths
017
118
214
314
49
523
615
716
89
920
1013
1114
128
138
143
153
163
173
1818
198
201
2117
2214
2314
2421
2515
268
275
2813
297
302
3113
329
3321
3417
358
3615
3714
3811
3914
409
4119
4215
434
4411
4520
4621
478
488
4917
42.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.24285714285714285
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners17
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"Then started again, closer this"
1"Just the oppressive silence, broken"
ratio0.029
14.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her breath misted in the"
1"She’d come here, fleeing the"
2"She’d parked her bike a"
3"Her watch, a battered digital"
4"She’d been walking for twenty"
5"It sounded like…"
6"She froze, listening."
7"She spun around, heart hammering"
8"She took a step forward,"
9"She approached cautiously, the air"
10"She touched one, rough bark"
11"It felt warm, unnaturally so."
12"She turned, but the darkness"
13"She pressed on, the path"
14"She heard whispers then, not"
15"It wasn’t human, but it"
16"She stumbled, catching herself on"
17"It pulsed faintly, a deep"
18"She pulled it out, the"
19"It felt like a beacon,"
ratio0.515
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences68
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"Aurora Carter, known to her"
2"Her breath misted in the"
3"She’d come here, fleeing the"
4"The silence wasn’t peaceful; it"
5"She’d parked her bike a"
6"Her watch, a battered digital"
7"She’d been walking for twenty"
8"The trees leaned in, their"
9"Shadows pooled in the hollows"
10"A faint, rhythmic scraping sound"
11"It sounded like…"
12"stone on stone."
13"She froze, listening."
14"The sound stopped."
15"She spun around, heart hammering"
16"She took a step forward,"
17"The scraping resumed, this time"
18"She approached cautiously, the air"
19"The stones themselves seemed to"
ratio0.926
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Now, the path ahead was"
ratio0.015
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Just the oppressive silence, broken only by the distant hoot of an owl that sounded unnaturally loud."
1"She approached cautiously, the air growing colder, charged with an energy that made the hairs on her arms stand on end."
2"She heard whispers then, not words, but a low, sibilant murmur that seemed to coil around her thoughts, whispering her name."
3"The whispers grew louder, clearer, coalescing into a single, chilling voice that seemed to come from all around her."
4"The scraping sound was now a constant, a dry, insistent rhythm that echoed through the silent trees."
5"The growl intensified, closer now, a sound that wasn’t quite animal, not quite mechanical."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
69.0167%