| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "truly" | | 5 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "throb" | | 16 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 18.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "tried to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1052 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 980 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Grove | 4 | | October | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Wildflowers" | | 5 | "Silence" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.939 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like minutes could stretch into ho" | | 1 | "appeared beneath her feet, leading toward the Grove's heart where a circle of younger oaks formed a natural amphitheatre" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to shift and breathe independently of their sources" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1052 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 30.06 | | std | 19.76 | | cv | 0.658 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.15 | | matches | | 0 | "Three nights running, the same dream had plagued her—Isolde's voice calling from within the Grove, speaking words in a language that made Rory's teeth ache." | | 1 | "Time moved strangely here—Isolde had warned her about that." | | 2 | "But the sound had been deliberate, purposeful—the crack of weight settling on dead wood." | | 3 | "Something rustled in the undergrowth to her left—a sound like silk dragging across bark." | | 4 | "Not ahead of her—beside her." | | 5 | "In that stuttering illumination, she caught a glimpse of something pale moving between the trees—there and gone so quickly she couldn't be sure she'd seen anything at all." | | 6 | "Each night brought visions of herself standing in this very spot while something terrible unfolded around her—something she needed to prevent or understand or remember." | | 7 | "A figure stood between two of the oaks—tall, draped in shadows that clung like fabric." | | 8 | "It carried Isolde's musical accent but underneath lay something else—something hungry." | | 9 | "The figure stepped forward, and for a moment Isolde's familiar features solidified—sharp cheekbones, eyes like winter stars, hair that moved with its own wind." | | 10 | "\"Understanding comes too late.\" Isolde—or the thing wearing her shape—glided closer." | | 11 | "The figure that might have been Isolde smiled, and for just an instant her face became perfectly clear—except for the eyes." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 993 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.035246727089627394 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00906344410876133 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 13.15 | | std | 7.4 | | cv | 0.563 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 77.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.5125 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 49.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Just endless shadows between the" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 1 | "she whispered to the watching" | | 2 | "She spun around, pulse hammering" | | 3 | "She quickened her pace." | | 4 | "Her breath came shorter now." | | 5 | "It carried Isolde's musical accent" |
| | ratio | 0.09 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed against" | | 1 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant lay warm" | | 3 | "she whispered to the watching" | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground beneath" | | 5 | "The wrongness of it made" | | 6 | "Time moved strangely here—Isolde had" | | 7 | "Rory checked her phone, but" | | 8 | "A twig snapped somewhere behind" | | 9 | "She spun around, pulse hammering" | | 10 | "Nothing moved among the flower" | | 11 | "The standing stones stood silent" | | 12 | "The word left her lips" | | 13 | "Silence answered her, thick and" | | 14 | "Rory forced herself to continue" | | 15 | "This was where she'd first" | | 16 | "The pendant's pulse quickened." | | 17 | "Something rustled in the undergrowth" | | 18 | "Rory's head snapped toward it," | | 19 | "She quickened her pace." |
| | ratio | 0.701 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "As if someone walked just" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed against the starless sky like gnarled fingers, their branches weaving together to form a canopy so thick that Rory could barely make out…" | | 1 | "She stepped between the standing stones marking the Grove's boundary, her breath misting in the unnaturally cold air despite the mild October evening she'd left…" | | 2 | "Three nights running, the same dream had plagued her—Isolde's voice calling from within the Grove, speaking words in a language that made Rory's teeth ache." | | 3 | "But with each step, the Grove seemed to stretch longer, the path winding in directions that defied the clearing's modest size." | | 4 | "The crimson light pulsed faster, casting dancing shadows that made the flowers seem to writhe." | | 5 | "Twelve young oaks formed perfect points around a clearing carpeted in white flowers that glowed like captured moonlight." | | 6 | "The figure stepped forward, and for a moment Isolde's familiar features solidified—sharp cheekbones, eyes like winter stars, hair that moved with its own wind." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |