Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8BSCH8V95Q1TJNXX5AER

Run Details

Duration:
37.7s
Cost:
$0.025428

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks loomed against the starless sky like gnarled fingers, their branches weaving together to form a canopy so thick that Rory could barely make out the moon's pale glow filtering through the gaps. She stepped between the standing stones marking the Grove's boundary, her breath misting in the unnaturally cold air despite the mild October evening she'd left behind in Richmond Park proper. The Heartstone pendant lay warm against her chest, its crimson surface pulsing with that familiar inner light. Three nights running, the same dream had plagued her—Isolde's voice calling from within the Grove, speaking words in a language that made Rory's teeth ache. Three nights of waking with dirt under her fingernails and the taste of copper in her mouth. "Right then," she whispered to the watching darkness. "Let's get this over with." Wildflowers carpeted the ground beneath her feet, their petals luminescent in the pendant's glow. Primroses and bluebells that should have withered weeks ago swayed without any breeze to stir them. The wrongness of it made her skin crawl, but she pressed deeper into the clearing. Time moved strangely here—Isolde had warned her about that. What felt like minutes could stretch into hours in the world beyond the stones, or compress into mere seconds. Rory checked her phone, but the screen remained black despite her certainty that the battery had been full when she'd entered the park. A twig snapped somewhere behind her. She spun around, pulse hammering against her throat. Nothing moved among the flower beds. The standing stones stood silent as sentinels, their weathered surfaces seeming to absorb what little light reached them. But the sound had been deliberate, purposeful—the crack of weight settling on dead wood. "Hello?" The word left her lips before she could stop it, hanging in the air like an invitation. Silence answered her, thick and expectant. Rory forced herself to continue forward, following a path that hadn't existed moments before. Smooth river stones appeared beneath her feet, leading toward the Grove's heart where a circle of younger oaks formed a natural amphitheatre. This was where she'd first met Isolde, where the Fae woman had pressed cryptic warnings into her palm along with promises of answers. The pendant's pulse quickened. Something rustled in the undergrowth to her left—a sound like silk dragging across bark. Rory's head snapped toward it, but again she saw nothing. Just endless shadows between the trees, shadows that seemed to shift and breathe independently of their sources. She quickened her pace. The sooner she reached the centre, the sooner she could figure out what the dreams meant and leave this place behind. But with each step, the Grove seemed to stretch longer, the path winding in directions that defied the clearing's modest size. A whisper drifted from somewhere ahead, words too soft to understand but carrying the cadence of her name. Rory stopped walking. "Isolde?" she called. "Is that you?" The whisper came again, closer now. Not ahead of her—beside her. As if someone walked just beyond the edge of her vision, keeping pace with her every movement. Rory's hand went to the pendant, its warmth now burning against her palm. The crimson light pulsed faster, casting dancing shadows that made the flowers seem to writhe. In that stuttering illumination, she caught a glimpse of something pale moving between the trees—there and gone so quickly she couldn't be sure she'd seen anything at all. Her breath came shorter now. Every instinct screamed at her to turn back, to flee for the standing stones and the familiar world beyond. But the dreams had been getting stronger. Each night brought visions of herself standing in this very spot while something terrible unfolded around her—something she needed to prevent or understand or remember. The path curved sharply to the right, bringing her to the edge of the inner circle. Twelve young oaks formed perfect points around a clearing carpeted in white flowers that glowed like captured moonlight. At the circle's heart stood a stone altar, its surface carved with symbols that hurt to look at directly. This wasn't how she remembered it. When she'd met Isolde here weeks ago, it had been just another clearing. No altar. No glowing flowers. No sense of ancient power pressing against her skull like a migraine. Movement flickered at the edge of her vision again. This time she turned slowly, keeping her breathing steady. A figure stood between two of the oaks—tall, draped in shadows that clung like fabric. Features that shifted when she tried to focus on them, as if her eyes refused to hold the image steady. "You came." The voice emerged from everywhere and nowhere, seeming to rise from the ground itself rather than the shadowed figure. It carried Isolde's musical accent but underneath lay something else—something hungry. "The dreams," Rory said, surprised by how level her own voice sounded. "You've been calling me here." "Not calling. Warning." The figure stepped forward, and for a moment Isolde's familiar features solidified—sharp cheekbones, eyes like winter stars, hair that moved with its own wind. But then the shadows reasserted themselves, making her face a blur of possibilities. "Warning me about what?" "About this night. About what you carry." Isolde's gaze dropped to the pendant. "About what it truly opens." The Heartstone's pulse had become a steady throb now, so bright that crimson light painted the surrounding trees. The white flowers at Rory's feet began to wither, their glow fading as the pendant's radiance intensified. "I don't understand." "Understanding comes too late." Isolde—or the thing wearing her shape—glided closer. "The door is already ajar. Your presence here... completes the opening." A sound built in the distance, low and thrumming like a massive heartbeat. The ground beneath Rory's feet trembled with each pulse, and cracks appeared in the stone altar. Dark liquid seeped from the fissures, spreading across the white flowers and turning them black. "What door?" Rory backed toward the circle's edge, but the oak trees seemed to lean inward, their branches forming a cage of bark and leaves. "What are you talking about?" The figure that might have been Isolde smiled, and for just an instant her face became perfectly clear—except for the eyes. Where winter stars should have been, empty sockets gaped like wounds. "The door you've been carrying all along."
total_cost0.025428

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
2"sharply"
3"slowly"
4"truly"
5"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count4
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count2
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"throb"
count1
16
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"familiar"
2"pulse"
3"sentinels"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"quickened"
7"silk"
8"whisper"
9"warmth"
10"pulsed"
11"dancing"
12"perfect"
13"sense of"
14"flickered"
15"throb"
16"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
18.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1052
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount980
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Grove4
October1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Isolde9
Wildflowers1
Silence1
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Isolde"
4"Wildflowers"
5"Silence"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.939
windowScore0.833
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like minutes could stretch into ho"
1"appeared beneath her feet, leading toward the Grove's heart where a circle of younger oaks formed a natural amphitheatre"
2"shadows that seemed to shift and breathe independently of their sources"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1052
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.06
std19.76
cv0.658
sampleLengths
065
159
213
345
451
56
646
718
86
959
104
1141
1246
1321
146
1528
1656
1756
1853
1936
2053
212
2230
2317
243
2537
264
2718
2835
293
3022
3144
3230
3332
347
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences80
ratio0.15
matches
0"Three nights running, the same dream had plagued her—Isolde's voice calling from within the Grove, speaking words in a language that made Rory's teeth ache."
1"Time moved strangely here—Isolde had warned her about that."
2"But the sound had been deliberate, purposeful—the crack of weight settling on dead wood."
3"Something rustled in the undergrowth to her left—a sound like silk dragging across bark."
4"Not ahead of her—beside her."
5"In that stuttering illumination, she caught a glimpse of something pale moving between the trees—there and gone so quickly she couldn't be sure she'd seen anything at all."
6"Each night brought visions of herself standing in this very spot while something terrible unfolded around her—something she needed to prevent or understand or remember."
7"A figure stood between two of the oaks—tall, draped in shadows that clung like fabric."
8"It carried Isolde's musical accent but underneath lay something else—something hungry."
9"The figure stepped forward, and for a moment Isolde's familiar features solidified—sharp cheekbones, eyes like winter stars, hair that moved with its own wind."
10"\"Understanding comes too late.\" Isolde—or the thing wearing her shape—glided closer."
11"The figure that might have been Isolde smiled, and for just an instant her face became perfectly clear—except for the eyes."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount993
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.035246727089627394
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00906344410876133
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean13.15
std7.4
cv0.563
sampleLengths
035
130
217
325
417
58
65
714
816
915
109
1119
1223
136
148
156
1618
1714
1818
196
2014
2122
2223
234
2414
2510
2617
274
2821
2921
3018
313
323
333
346
355
3617
3713
3815
3928
405
4119
427
4325
4416
4518
4619
476
4813
492
77.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5125
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners41
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Just endless shadows between the"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences67
matches
0"She stepped between the standing"
1"she whispered to the watching"
2"She spun around, pulse hammering"
3"She quickened her pace."
4"Her breath came shorter now."
5"It carried Isolde's musical accent"
ratio0.09
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences67
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed against"
1"She stepped between the standing"
2"The Heartstone pendant lay warm"
3"she whispered to the watching"
4"Wildflowers carpeted the ground beneath"
5"The wrongness of it made"
6"Time moved strangely here—Isolde had"
7"Rory checked her phone, but"
8"A twig snapped somewhere behind"
9"She spun around, pulse hammering"
10"Nothing moved among the flower"
11"The standing stones stood silent"
12"The word left her lips"
13"Silence answered her, thick and"
14"Rory forced herself to continue"
15"This was where she'd first"
16"The pendant's pulse quickened."
17"Something rustled in the undergrowth"
18"Rory's head snapped toward it,"
19"She quickened her pace."
ratio0.701
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"As if someone walked just"
ratio0.015
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed against the starless sky like gnarled fingers, their branches weaving together to form a canopy so thick that Rory could barely make out…"
1"She stepped between the standing stones marking the Grove's boundary, her breath misting in the unnaturally cold air despite the mild October evening she'd left…"
2"Three nights running, the same dream had plagued her—Isolde's voice calling from within the Grove, speaking words in a language that made Rory's teeth ache."
3"But with each step, the Grove seemed to stretch longer, the path winding in directions that defied the clearing's modest size."
4"The crimson light pulsed faster, casting dancing shadows that made the flowers seem to writhe."
5"Twelve young oaks formed perfect points around a clearing carpeted in white flowers that glowed like captured moonlight."
6"The figure stepped forward, and for a moment Isolde's familiar features solidified—sharp cheekbones, eyes like winter stars, hair that moved with its own wind."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.111
80.8583%