Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8EMH3NBWBR7PE6BAE2MQ

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Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.000444
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knocker echoed like a gunshot in the quiet hallway. Aurora Carter, mid-sip of lukewarm tea, set the mug down with a clatter. *Who the hell—* She moved with practiced speed, not bothering with the deadbolts. The door swung inward to reveal Lucien Moreau, framed in the doorway like a portrait from a nightmare. His platinum hair, slicked back to a mirror shine, caught the hallway light. His tailored charcoal suit looked like it had been pressed by angels, but his eyes—one amber, one black—held the cold certainty of a predator. The ivory-handled cane he leaned against the doorframe wasn’t just a prop; it looked like it could decapitate a man. He didn’t smile. He didn’t even blink. He just stood there, radiating the kind of menace that made the air taste metallic. Aurora’s breath hitched. Not surprise. Not fear. Something sharper. *Evan’s ghost, you’re early.* She crossed her arms, the black fabric of her delivery uniform shirt swallowing her frame. "Lucien Moreau. To what do I owe the... pleasure?" Her voice was low, controlled, but the scar on her left wrist—a crescent moon of pale flesh—twitched beneath her sleeve. She’d hidden it well, but it was there, a constant reminder of the past he’d helped shatter. He pushed off the doorframe, the cane clicking sharply on the parquet. He didn’t step inside. He just stood there, surveying the flat with the detached interest of a collector examining a rare artifact. "Aurora. Still living above a bar, I see. How... quaint." His voice was smooth, dripping with a French accent that made her skin prickle. "I heard you’d taken up delivering pastries. Quite the career pivot from Pre-Law, wouldn’t you say?" Aurora’s knuckles whitened around the doorframe. *Don’t let him see you flinch.* "Career pivots happen when the law firm fires you for sleeping with the client’s wife." She pushed the door wider, forcing him to choose: enter or stay in the hallway. He didn’t hesitate. He glided past her, the scent of expensive cologne and something darker—like ozone and old blood—filling the small space. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, bolted from the armchair, tail puffed like a dandelion gone rogue. "Ptolemy," Aurora murmured, more to herself than him. "He’s not usually this skittish." Lucien paused, his gaze lingering on the cat before snapping back to her. "Scared of me, are you?" He didn’t wait for an answer. He moved deeper into the flat, his polished shoes clicking on the worn floorboards. "I’m here for information." His voice was a low rumble, vibrating in the small room. "About the fire at the Old Town Records office last night." Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs. *The fire.* She’d delivered to that place twice that week. The scent of singed paper and melted plastic still haunted her dreams. "You think I know something?" She followed him, keeping a careful distance. The flat was a mess—books stacked precariously, scrolls spilling from shelves, papers covered in arcane symbols. It smelled of dust and desperation. "I deliver to the owner’s niece. That’s it." Lucien stopped before a bookshelf, his fingers trailing over the spines. "The niece is a witch, isn’t she? Eva. The one who dragged you back from Cardiff." He didn’t turn around. "You left Evan. You fled to London. And now you’re here, hiding behind a bar and delivering pastries. What happened, Aurora? Did the law firm’s rejection sting worse than his betrayal?" Aurora’s breath caught. *How does he know about Eva?* "I don’t owe you explanations," she spat, her voice tight. "And I don’t know anything about the fire." She crossed her arms again, the scar on her wrist burning beneath her sleeve. "Now get out." He finally turned, the amber eye locking onto hers. "Get out? After I risked my neck to find you? After I know you’re hiding something?" He took a step closer, and the scent of him intensified—cologne, ozone, and something primal. "You think I don’t see it? The way you tense when someone mentions Evan. The way you flinch at shadows. You’re not just running from a man, Aurora. You’re running from yourself." The words hung in the air, thick and suffocating. Aurora felt the heat rise in her cheeks. *Don’t let him see you break.* "I’m not running," she whispered, the lie tasting bitter on her tongue. "I’m surviving." She took another step towards the door, her hand hovering near the deadbolt. "Now leave." Lucien’s smile was cold, predatory. "Survival often requires allies, Aurora. Even in the darkest corners." He raised his cane, the ivory handle glinting. "Tell me what you know. Or I’ll make you wish you’d never left Cardiff." The door was inches from her hand. The flat was a cage. The past was a ghost at her shoulder. And Lucien Moreau, the half-demon fixer, stood in her living room, holding the key to her secrets—and her heart—in his gloved hand. The choice was hers. Run. Or face the storm he’d finally tracked her to.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount843
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount843
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"predator"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"predator"
2"reminder"
3"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches
0"see"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords27
totalWords831
ratio0.032
matches
0"Who the hell—"
1"Evan’s ghost, you’re early."
2"Don’t let him see you flinch."
3"The fire."
4"How does he know about Eva?"
5"Don’t let him see you break."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount600
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Lucien5
Moreau2
French1
Aurora7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.917
windowScore1
33.72% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like it had been pressed by angels"
1"looked like it could decapitate a man"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount831
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
56.75% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean69.25
std24.14
cv0.349
sampleLengths
0134
174
274
392
464
570
662
744
872
952
1037
1156
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences66
ratio0.121
matches
0"*Who the hell—* She moved with practiced speed, not bothering with the deadbolts."
1"His tailored charcoal suit looked like it had been pressed by angels, but his eyes—one amber, one black—held the cold certainty of a predator."
2"The ivory-handled cane he leaned against the doorframe wasn’t just a prop; it looked like it could decapitate a man."
3"\"Lucien Moreau. To what do I owe the... pleasure?\" Her voice was low, controlled, but the scar on her left wrist—a crescent moon of pale flesh—twitched beneath her sleeve."
4"He glided past her, the scent of expensive cologne and something darker—like ozone and old blood—filling the small space."
5"The flat was a mess—books stacked precariously, scrolls spilling from shelves, papers covered in arcane symbols."
6"\"Get out? After I risked my neck to find you? After I know you’re hiding something?\" He took a step closer, and the scent of him intensified—cologne, ozone, and something primal."
7"And Lucien Moreau, the half-demon fixer, stood in her living room, holding the key to her secrets—and her heart—in his gloved hand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount612
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03431372549019608
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008169934640522876
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean12.59
std8.2
cv0.651
sampleLengths
011
113
213
318
413
524
620
73
84
915
103
112
122
132
1419
1529
1617
1712
184
1918
2024
2116
226
2336
243
2519
2615
278
285
2913
3011
3114
3215
3311
346
3510
3612
3712
3816
396
408
4111
4220
4331
443
4516
4622
473
489
4931
46.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3787878787878788
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences53
matches
0"His platinum hair, slicked back"
1"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
2"He didn’t smile."
3"He didn’t even blink."
4"He just stood there, radiating"
5"Her voice was low, controlled,"
6"She’d hidden it well, but"
7"He pushed off the doorframe,"
8"He didn’t step inside."
9"He just stood there, surveying"
10"His voice was smooth, dripping"
11"He didn’t hesitate."
12"He glided past her, the"
13"He didn’t wait for an"
14"He moved deeper into the"
15"His voice was a low"
16"She followed him, keeping a"
17"It smelled of dust and"
18"He didn’t turn around"
19"She crossed her arms again,"
ratio0.453
16.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences53
matches
0"The brass knocker echoed like"
1"Aurora Carter, mid-sip of lukewarm"
2"The door swung inward to"
3"His platinum hair, slicked back"
4"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
5"The ivory-handled cane he leaned"
6"He didn’t smile."
7"He didn’t even blink."
8"He just stood there, radiating"
9"Aurora’s breath hitched."
10"*Evan’s ghost, you’re early.* She"
11"Her voice was low, controlled,"
12"She’d hidden it well, but"
13"He pushed off the doorframe,"
14"He didn’t step inside."
15"He just stood there, surveying"
16"His voice was smooth, dripping"
17"Aurora’s knuckles whitened around the"
18"He didn’t hesitate."
19"He glided past her, the"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien paused, his gaze lingering on the cat before snapping back to her."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora murmured, more to herself than him"
1"She took, her hand hovering near the deadbolt"
2"He raised, the ivory handle glinting"
19.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"he know (know)"
2"him see (see)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.261
71.6792%