Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8ET1XFPD9B9YX5WW7S03

Run Details

Duration:
7.5s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign above the doorway pulsed a sickly green, casting a thin halo on the wet pavement. Inside, the air smelled of stale cigarette smoke and the faint tang of spilled whiskey. Maps curled at the edges of the wooden tables like ancient scars, black‑and‑white photographs stared from the walls, half‑remembered faces frozen in time. A low hum of conversation rose from the back, punctuated by the clink of glasses. Aurora slipped through the doorway, the strap of her delivery bag bouncing against her hip. The bar’s dim light caught the crescent scar on her left wrist, a faint line that seemed to glow under the neon. She brushed a stray lock of black hair from her face, her bright blue eyes scanning the room. She hadn’t expected anyone she knew here; she expected a quick drink before the next drop. Silas stood behind the polished mahogany bar, his grey‑streaked auburn hair catching the light. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand, the emblem of a forgotten order. His left leg bore a slight limp, each step measured, the weight of old wounds evident in the way his foot pressed into the floor. He lifted a glass with one hand, the other hovering over a stack of receipts, his hazel eyes flicking toward the doorway. She paused at the threshold, swallowed a breath that tasted of rain and city fumes. The years stretched between them like the distance between two train stations, each stop a memory she hadn’t visited. She walked to the bar, her boots echoing against the worn floorboards. “Silas,” she said, the name slipping out like a secret. His gaze lifted, a thin smile curving his lips. “Aurora. I thought the city had swallowed you whole.” She set the bag down, the strap thudding against the wood. “The city has a habit of holding onto people it likes.” He poured a measure of amber liquid, the liquid spilling over the edge of the glass for a heartbeat before settling. “What brings you to the Nest after all these years?” “Delivery. A last order before the night ends. And perhaps a drink to forget the weight of the day.” He nodded, the signet ring catching the light. “You still run on the streets. The city never lets you settle.” She lifted her glass, the clink resonating through the quiet. “I’ve learned to carry the weight rather than let it crush me.” His eyes narrowed, a flicker of the past flashing across them. “You used to say the same thing in the library, back when we were chasing deadlines instead of deliveries.” She laughed, a short bark that seemed to break the tension. “Those deadlines felt like lifelines then.” The bartender, a lanky man with a tattoo of a phoenix on his forearm, slid a fresh glass across the bar. Silas reached for it, his hand steady despite the limp. “You left the university then, didn’t you? You left the law behind.” She swirled the amber liquid, watching the reflections dance. “I left the law because it was a cage, not a choice. I left because I needed to find a way out of the shadows that followed me.” His gaze softened, the hazel turning a shade darker. “Shadows have a way of clinging, even when you think you’ve outrun them.” Silas leaned forward, the wood of the bar creaking under his weight. “You still remember the night we escaped the rain and hid under the old bridge? You were drenched, but you laughed as if the storm were a joke.” She shook her head, a small smile tugging at her corner. “I remember the taste of the cheap coffee we shared, the way you tried to convince me that the world was a chessboard, and you were the only one who could see the pieces.” He chuckled, a low sound that seemed to vibrate the air. “I was a pawn then, too. Thought I could move people without seeing the board.” Her eyes flicked to the scar on his wrist, a faint line that mirrored her own. “You always wore that ring, didn’t you? The one you said was a promise to yourself.” He lifted his right hand, the silver signet catching the dim light. “It’s a reminder that some promises survive the years, even when the people who made them forget.” She took a sip, the burn spreading down her throat. “I thought I’d forgotten the taste of blood, but I still feel it in my veins when I think of the past.” He set the glass down, the clink echoing. “We both carry scars, Aurora. Some are visible, some are hidden in the muscles we pretend don’t hurt.” She stared at the maps on the wall, the routes traced in ink like veins of a living thing. “Do you ever wonder where we could have been, if we’d taken different turns?” His eyes drifted to the corner where a photograph of a young man in a military uniform hung, the eyes of the portrait seeming to follow her. “I wondered if I’d ever see you again. I wondered if the city would keep you from yourself.” She leaned back, the chair creaking under her weight. “I wondered if I’d ever be able to forgive the man who left the law for a street that never slept.” Silas placed his hand on the bar, the signet ring catching a glint of neon. “Forgiveness is a word we give to the past when we’re ready to move forward. I’m not sure if I’m ready.” She stared at the glass, the amber reflecting the neon green. “I’m not ready either. I’m just trying to find a moment where the weight feels lighter.” He smiled, a thin line that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “Maybe the weight isn’t meant to be lighter, just to be carried with someone else.” She turned her head, catching his limp as he shifted his weight, the motion smooth despite the old injury. “You’ve always been good at making the impossible look easy.” He shrugged, the signet ring glinting again. “I learned to make the impossible look easy because I had to survive.” She placed her hand on the bar, feeling the cool wood under her palm. “Do you ever miss the days when we thought we could change the world?” His gaze lingered on the neon sign outside, the green glow painting the floor. “I miss the certainty of youth. I miss the belief that we could rewrite the rules.” She inhaled the smell of old wood and stale smoke. “I miss the sound of your voice, the way you could read a room like a map.” He lifted the glass, the liquid catching the light. “ I miss the way you could see through my walls, the way you never asked why I kept my past hidden.” She looked at the scar on his wrist, the crescent shape mirroring her own. “We both wore those scars like medals, didn’t we?” He pressed his thumb to the scar, a faint tremor in his hand. “Some medals are heavy. Some are reminders.” She smiled, the corners of her mouth turning up. “We’ve both changed. The city has reshaped us.” He nodded, his eyes reflecting the neon. “The city reshapes everyone. It carves us into new shapes, sometimes unrecognizable.” She left her bag on the bar, the strap slipping off her shoulder. “Do you still keep the secret room? The one behind the bookshelf?” His eyes flickered to the far wall, where a bookshelf stood like a silent sentinel. “It’s still there. Some doors never close, even when we forget the key.” She stood, the chair scraping against the floor. “I think I’ll take a look, if you don’t mind.” He lifted his hand, the signet ring glinting. “The room is for those who need a place to speak without ears listening.” She moved toward the bookshelf, her fingers brushing the spines of old maps. “I didn’t know you kept a place like this.” He watched her, his gaze steady. “I keep a place for people who need to disappear for a moment.” She pulled the shelf aside, the wood giving with a sigh. A narrow passage opened, the darkness swallowing the light. “It feels like stepping into another world.” He followed, his limp steadying each step. “Some worlds are hidden in plain sight.” They entered the secret room, the air cooler, the walls lined with soft cushions and a single lamp that cast a warm glow. The sound of the bar faded, replaced by the quiet hum of an old ceiling fan. She sat on a cushion, the leather creaking under her weight. He took a seat opposite, his ring catching the lamp’s glow. “The years have been harsh,” she said, her voice low. He nodded, his gaze fixed on the floor. “Time is a tide that pulls everything apart.” She traced the rim of her glass with a finger. “I still feel the pull of the past.” He placed his hand on the table, the signet ring resting against the wood. “The past is a river. You can’t stop it, but you can learn to swim.” She stared at the candle flame, the light dancing. “Do you ever feel that we lost something that could have been?” His eyes rose, meeting hers. “I feel that we both lost pieces of ourselves.” She lifted her glass, the amber catching the light. “To the pieces we lost, and the ones we still carry.” He lifted his glass in return, the clink echoing softly. “To the weight we bear, and the moments we share.” She took a sip, the bitterness of the drink mingling with the memory of rain on an old bridge. “Do you think we could ever be what we were?” He stared at the signet ring, the silver catching a flicker of neon. “We can’t go back. We can only move forward, carrying the echoes.” She lowered her glass, the amber settling. “I’m afraid the echoes will drown us.” He placed his hand over hers, the ring pressing against her skin. “The echo is a reminder that we once sang together.” She closed her eyes, the scent of old wood filling her lungs. “I’ll keep that song in my mind.” He opened his eyes, the neon outside a distant glow. “I’ll keep it in mine.” The silence stretched, the only sound the soft whir of the fan. She opened her eyes, the candle flickering. “Do you ever wish we’d never met?” He sighed, the sound low and steady. “I wish we’d met sooner, perhaps. I wish we’d stayed longer.” She smiled, a faint curve. “I wish I’d stayed longer, too.” He looked at the secret room, the shadows playing on the walls. “The world keeps moving. We can’t stop it.” She stood, the cushion shifting beneath her. “Maybe we can stop for a moment.” He rose, his limp steady, the signet ring glinting. “For a moment, we can be here.” She stepped toward the doorway, the neon sign spilling green light onto the floor. “The night is still young.” He placed a hand on the back of her chair, the wood warm. “The night is a canvas. We can paint it however we choose.” She brushed her fingers over the scar on his wrist, the crescent shape catching the light. “We’re both marked.” He watched her, his gaze steady. “Marks are stories.” She turned to leave, the door closing behind her with a soft thud. “I’ll see you again, Silas.” He nodded, the signet ring catching the neon. “I’ll be here, waiting for the next chance.” She stepped into the night, the rain beginning to fall, the neon sign flickering above the entrance. He watched her disappear into the street, the weight of the years settling like dust on the bar’s old wood. The secret room remained quiet, the candle sputtering, the shadows holding the memory of a brief reunion that lingered like a half‑spoken promise. The neon sign outside pulsed, a green heartbeat in the dark.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:16:09.035Z" 2/19/2026, 12:16:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.087
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2016
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2016
totalAiIsms40
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"weight"
count11
4
word"echoing"
count3
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"pawn"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count2
11
word"traced"
count2
12
word"glint"
count1
13
word"glinting"
count3
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"sentinel"
count1
16
word"cast a warm glow"
count1
17
word"dancing"
count1
18
word"echoes"
count2
19
word"echo"
count1
20
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"scanning"
2"measured"
3"weight"
4"echoing"
5"flicker"
6"tension"
7"dance"
8"pawn"
9"flicked"
10"reminder"
11"traced"
12"glint"
13"glinting"
14"flickered"
15"sentinel"
16"cast a warm glow"
17"dancing"
18"echoes"
19"echo"
20"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2016
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions4
wordCount1206
uniqueNames1
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas4
persons
0"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"line that seemed to glow under the neon"
1"bark that seemed to break the tension"
2"sound that seemed to vibrate the air"
3"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2016
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
98.99% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean26.53
std13.17
cv0.496
sampleLengths
071
171
276
346
410
518
622
731
819
920
1022
1130
1217
1343
1437
1522
1640
1745
1826
1932
2029
2132
2226
2333
2445
2530
2636
2727
2826
2929
3020
3128
3230
3327
3431
3523
3620
3717
3819
3925
4028
4118
4222
4322
4419
4527
4614
4761
4810
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences161
ratio0.006
matches
0"She hadn’t expected anyone she knew here; she expected a quick drink before the next drop."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount925
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.015135135135135135
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002162162162162162
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean12.52
std5.32
cv0.425
sampleLengths
018
115
223
315
415
522
618
716
814
915
1025
1122
1215
1319
1412
1510
169
179
1811
1911
2021
2110
2219
238
2412
2510
2612
2711
2819
2911
306
3121
3210
3312
349
3528
369
3713
3812
3928
4011
4134
4211
4315
4416
4516
4612
4717
4810
4922
48.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.16770186335403728
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount76
totalSentences95
matches
0"She brushed a stray lock"
1"She hadn’t expected anyone she"
2"His left leg bore a"
3"He lifted a glass with"
4"She paused at the threshold,"
5"She walked to the bar,"
6"she said, the name slipping"
7"His gaze lifted, a thin"
8"She set the bag down,"
9"He poured a measure of"
10"He nodded, the signet ring"
11"She lifted her glass, the"
12"His eyes narrowed, a flicker"
13"She laughed, a short bark"
14"She swirled the amber liquid,"
15"His gaze softened, the hazel"
16"She shook her head, a"
17"He chuckled, a low sound"
18"Her eyes flicked to the"
19"He lifted his right hand,"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences95
matches
0"The neon sign above the"
1"Maps curled at the edges"
2"A low hum of conversation"
3"Aurora slipped through the doorway,"
4"The bar’s dim light caught"
5"She brushed a stray lock"
6"She hadn’t expected anyone she"
7"Silas stood behind the polished"
8"A silver signet ring glinted"
9"His left leg bore a"
10"He lifted a glass with"
11"She paused at the threshold,"
12"The years stretched between them"
13"She walked to the bar,"
14"she said, the name slipping"
15"His gaze lifted, a thin"
16"She set the bag down,"
17"He poured a measure of"
18"He nodded, the signet ring"
19"She lifted her glass, the"
ratio0.989
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her eyes flicked to the scar on his wrist, a faint line that mirrored her own."
1"They entered the secret room, the air cooler, the walls lined with soft cushions and a single lamp that cast a warm glow."
2"The secret room remained quiet, the candle sputtering, the shadows holding the memory of a brief reunion that lingered like a half‑spoken promise."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, the name slipping out like a secret"
1"she said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.058
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.1703%