Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8GM60SSX38KQ1SK8VMBK

Run Details

Duration:
8.0s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones of Soho, turning the neon green of the Raven’s Nest sign into a blurred halo. Harlow Quinn stood at the doorway, the leather watch on her left wrist ticking against the drizzle. Her salt‑and‑pepper hair clung to her neck, and her brown eyes narrowed as a figure slipped past the bar’s doorway, coat flapping like a dark sail. “Stop!” she called, voice cutting through the downpour. The man turned, eyes flashing. He darted into the alley, the rain splashing against the brick walls. Harlow’s boots splashed in the puddles, matching his erratic rhythm. She chased, her military‑precise gait never faltering. The alley narrowed, a stack of discarded crates forming a barricade. She vaulted over them, landing with a soft thud that sent a spray of water onto the street. “Don’t make this harder than it needs to be,” she shouted, breath fogging in the chill. The suspect slowed, half‑turning to glance over his shoulder. A flash of a scar on his forearm caught the weak light. He twisted, ducking into a side door marked by a faded black‑and‑white photograph of a ship. The door creaked, then shut, swallowing him in darkness. Harlow’s hand brushed the doorframe, feeling the cold metal. She pressed her ear to the wood. The muffled thrum of the city faded, replaced by a low, metallic hum. She slipped inside, the rain pattering on the roof above. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the dim interior smelled of stale beer and old paper. Maps of forgotten wars hung on the walls, their edges curled. The green neon sign outside filtered through the cracked window, casting eerie shadows. Tomás Herrera leaned against the bar, his warm brown eyes scanning the room, a Saint Christopher medallion glinting against his chest. His scar ran along his left forearm, a reminder of past violence. “Tommy,” Harlow said, her voice low, “You see anyone slip out?” Tomás lifted his head, his hair damp, his expression unreadable. “I saw a flash of coat, a man with a scar. He headed toward the back.” He pointed a thumb toward a bookshelf that seemed out of place among the maps. The shelf held a series of leather‑bound journals, their spines cracked. Harlow moved to it, feeling the hidden latch beneath the dust. A soft click echoed, and the shelf swung inward, revealing a narrow stairwell descending into darkness. “Looks like a shortcut,” Tomás muttered, his tone half‑joking, half‑serious. Harlow glanced at the rain‑slicked street outside, then at Tomás’ face, illuminated by the green glow. “You think it leads to the market?” Tomás shrugged, his scar catching a glint of the neon. “Veil Market moves every full moon. If the token’s there, it’s the only way in.” A sudden gust slammed the bar’s door shut, the wind howling through the cracks. Harlow’s hand tightened on the leather watch as she descended, each step echoing like a drumbeat. The air grew colder, the scent of damp earth mixing with an ozone tang. The stairwell opened onto a vaulted chamber, the walls lined with iron pipes and old signage. A flickering bulb cast long shadows over a crowd of figures huddled around stalls. A boy in a tattered coat handed a bone token to a cloaked vendor. The token glowed faintly, its ivory surface etched with strange symbols. The vendor’s eyes flickered, then widened as Harlow stepped forward. “Looking for a token?” he hissed, voice rasping like sand. Harlow’s jaw tightened. “I’m not here for tokens. I’m after a man.” The vendor glanced toward a dark corner where a figure crouched, a coat dripping with rain. The man’s eyes met Harlow’s, a flash of recognition passing through them. He slipped a hand into his coat, pulling out a small, humming vial. “Don’t follow me,” he whispered, voice low, “The market isn’t safe for outsiders.” “Then why bring me here?” Harlow asked, stepping closer, rain dripping from her coat. The man’s smile was thin, a line of teeth. “You think you can police what you don’t understand.” A sudden shout erupted from the stall opposite. A woman in a red scarf cried out, “Thieves! They stole my amulet!” The crowd surged, spilling over tables. Harlow pushed through, the weight of the crowd pressing against her. Tomás appeared behind her, his medallion catching a stray beam of light. He slipped a hand into his jacket, revealing a compact first‑aid kit. “Need a hand?” he offered, his voice barely audible over the commotion. Harlow glanced at the suspect, who was now weaving through the stalls, his coat flapping. She saw the glimmer of a silver blade tucked at his belt. The market’s stalls displayed enchanted trinkets, bottled shadows, and alchemical powders that fizzed ominously. “Tommy, this place… it bends reality,” she said, voice low, “If we go deeper, we might not get out.” Tomás’ eyes narrowed, his scar catching the dim light. “Or we might find out why your partner disappeared.” A sudden crack of glass echoed as a stall’s display shattered, releasing a cloud of neon dust. The suspect ducked behind a table, the silver blade flashing as he pulled a small, ornate lockpick from his coat. “Give it up,” Harlow demanded, stepping forward, rain pooling at her boots. The suspect’s lips curled. “You think you can stop the tide? The market feeds on fear, detective.” A vendor shouted, “Pay the price!” as a figure in a hooded cloak thrust a blood‑stained dagger toward Harlow. She ducked, the blade whistling past her ear. The crowd surged, the market’s low hum rising to a frantic pitch. Tomás moved right behind her, his hand gripping the wrist of a woman whose eyes widened in terror. “Hold on,” he said, his voice firm, “I’ll patch you up.” He pressed a gauze to her shoulder, his scar flashing as he worked. Harlow turned her attention back to the suspect, who now stood at the entrance of a hidden doorway—an old wooden door set into a wall of crates, its surface carved with arcane symbols. “Every step you take pulls you deeper into the Veil,” the suspect hissed, “You can’t turn back now.” Harlow’s mind raced, the weight of the bone token in her pocket feeling heavier than any gun. The market’s walls seemed to pulse, the neon sign outside now a distant memory. She could feel the rain’s chill under her coat, the metal of her watch against her wrist, the faint thrum of the market’s heart. “Tommy, I need a decision,” she said, voice steady, “Do we go after him, or do we pull back?” Tomás glanced at the token, then at the suspect disappearing into the doorway, his blade glinting. “If we go in, we’re stepping into a world that doesn’t play by our rules.” Harlow’s eyes flicked to the secret room behind the bookshelf at the Raven’s Nest, the place where clandestine meetings were held. She thought of DS Morris, his voice echoing in her mind, the unsolved case that had haunted her for three years. The rain hammered the streets above, a relentless rhythm. “Do we risk everything for a clue?” she asked, voice low, “Or do we stay in the light?” Tomás’ hand rested on her shoulder, his grip firm. “The market moves, but the truth doesn’t. If we stay, we’ll never know what happened to your partner.” A sudden clang reverberated through the market as a barrel of alchemical powder ignited, sending a wave of orange fire across the stalls. The crowd screamed, scattering like startled birds. The suspect seized the moment, slipping through the hidden doorway, the silver blade disappearing into darkness. Harlow stared at the door, the symbols pulsing faintly. The market’s low murmur rose, a chorus of whispers promising power and danger. She felt the rain’s chill seep through her coat, the weight of her decision pressing against her chest. “Tommy,” she said, voice barely a whisper, “We go in.” Tomás nodded, his scar catching a glint of the firelight. “Then we move fast.” They stepped toward the doorway, the market’s chaos swallowing them. The hidden passage opened into a narrow tunnel, walls lined with ancient stone and luminous fungi. A faint, metallic scent filled the air, mingling with the lingering rain. The tunnel led to a vaulted chamber, the floor slick with water. In the center, a stone altar stood, upon it a small, glowing bone token pulsed like a heart. Around it, shadows writhed, forming shapes that seemed to watch. “That's the token,” Harlow said, voice low, “If he’s here, he’s using it.” A low chuckle echoed from the darkness. The suspect emerged, his coat dripping, silver blade now drawn, eyes glinting with a manic light. “You shouldn’t have followed,” he hissed, “The Veil devours those who pry.” Harlow tightened her grip on her leather watch, feeling the cold metal against her skin. “We’re not leaving without answers.” The suspect lunged, the blade flashing. Tomás stepped forward, his medallion catching a stray spark, and swung a small, brass knuckle that sent the blade skittering across the stone. The suspect staggered, his balance broken. “Now!” Harlow shouted, voice ringing through the chamber. She lunged, her hand grabbing the token, the pulse in her palm syncing with the thrum of the market’s heart. The suspect tried to retreat, but the shadows coalesced, forming a barrier that sealed the exit. “Give it up,” Harlow demanded, her eyes blazing, “You can’t hide in darkness forever.” The suspect’s grin faded, his shoulders slumping. He raised his hands, the silver blade clattering to the ground. “Fine,” he whispered, “Ask what you want.” Harlow inhaled the damp, metallic air, the rain’s echo still audible through the tunnel. “Where did my partner go?” she asked, voice steady, “What did you do?” The suspect’s eyes flicked to the token, then to the shadows that lingered. “Your partner… he crossed the Veil, chasing a whisper. He didn’t come back.” A cold wind swirled, the torchlight flickering. Harlow’s jaw tightened, her mind racing back to the night DS Morris vanished. The market’s walls seemed to pulse, the token’s glow intensifying. Tomás placed a hand on her shoulder, his scar catching a glint of light. “We can find his trail,” he said, “But it will take us deeper.” Harlow stared at the token, the rain’s rhythm still thundering above them, the market’s whispers humming around her. The decision hung like a knife’s edge, the choice to step further into the Veil or retreat to the rain‑slick streets above. She lifted her gaze, eyes meeting Tomás’ steady stare, the market’s shadows watching, the token pulsing like a heartbeat. “We go deeper,” she said, voice firm, “We find the truth.” The suspect nodded, a faint smile playing at his lips. “Then the Veil will show you what it hides.” The chamber’s air thickened, the shadows quivered, and the rain outside intensified, a storm that seemed to echo the decision made within the underground. Harlow stepped forward, the token clutched in her hand, the stone altar behind her, the mystery ahead.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:16:10.891Z" 2/19/2026, 12:16:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.684
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1836
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1836
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"chill"
count3
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count3
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count3
6
word"glint"
count3
7
word"echoing"
count2
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count3
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"flicked"
count2
16
word"clandestine"
count1
17
word"reverberated"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count2
19
word"pulsed"
count1
20
word"echo"
count2
21
word"racing"
count1
22
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanning"
2"glinting"
3"reminder"
4"unreadable"
5"echoed"
6"glint"
7"echoing"
8"etched"
9"flickered"
10"weight"
11"shattered"
12"raced"
13"pulse"
14"could feel"
15"flicked"
16"clandestine"
17"reverberated"
18"whisper"
19"pulsed"
20"echo"
21"racing"
22"quivered"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"a flash of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences125
matches
0"d in terror"
40.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences125
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1835
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.35% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1473
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven3
Nest3
Quinn1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás10
Harlow27
Morris2
Veil1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
6"Harlow"
7"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Veil"
globalScore0.584
windowScore0.667
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"appeared behind her, his medallion catching a stray beam of light"
1"shapes that seemed to watch"
2"storm that seemed to echo the decision made within the underground"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1835
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean28.67
std16.12
cv0.562
sampleLengths
062
18
263
316
446
539
671
711
826
953
1010
1123
1225
1374
1435
1510
1612
1741
1813
1914
2018
2121
2241
2312
2441
2519
2618
2737
2812
2917
3039
3129
3246
3318
3455
3519
3631
3751
3818
3927
4046
4140
4210
4314
4438
4540
4613
4723
4812
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"were held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs277
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences140
ratio0.007
matches
0"Harlow turned her attention back to the suspect, who now stood at the entrance of a hidden doorway—an old wooden door set into a wall of crates, its surface carved with arcane symbols."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount575
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.008695652173913044
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0017391304347826088
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
87.25% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean13.11
std4.83
cv0.368
sampleLengths
019
117
226
38
45
512
610
77
811
918
1016
119
1212
1316
149
159
167
1713
1810
1914
2011
2113
2221
2312
2411
2510
2616
2715
2811
2911
3016
3110
3216
337
3410
3515
3614
3716
3814
3916
4014
4114
4211
4310
4410
453
469
4716
4812
4913
45.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2571428571428571
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences122
matches
0"Her salt‑and‑pepper hair clung to"
1"she called, voice cutting through"
2"He darted into the alley,"
3"She chased, her military‑precise gait"
4"She vaulted over them, landing"
5"she shouted, breath fogging in"
6"He twisted, ducking into a"
7"She pressed her ear to"
8"She slipped inside, the rain"
9"His scar ran along his"
10"He pointed a thumb toward"
11"he hissed, voice rasping like"
12"He slipped a hand into"
13"he whispered, voice low"
14"He slipped a hand into"
15"he offered, his voice barely"
16"She saw the glimmer of"
17"she said, voice low"
18"She ducked, the blade whistling"
19"he said, his voice firm"
ratio0.27
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences122
matches
0"Harlow Quinn stood at the"
1"Her salt‑and‑pepper hair clung to"
2"she called, voice cutting through"
3"The man turned, eyes flashing."
4"He darted into the alley,"
5"Harlow’s boots splashed in the"
6"She chased, her military‑precise gait"
7"The alley narrowed, a stack"
8"She vaulted over them, landing"
9"she shouted, breath fogging in"
10"The suspect slowed, half‑turning to"
11"A flash of a scar"
12"He twisted, ducking into a"
13"The door creaked, then shut,"
14"Harlow’s hand brushed the doorframe,"
15"She pressed her ear to"
16"The muffled thrum of the"
17"She slipped inside, the rain"
18"Maps of forgotten wars hung"
19"The green neon sign outside"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences78
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Harlow glanced at the suspect, who was now weaving through the stalls, his coat flapping."
1"The market’s stalls displayed enchanted trinkets, bottled shadows, and alchemical powders that fizzed ominously."
2"She thought of DS Morris, his voice echoing in her mind, the unsolved case that had haunted her for three years."
3"The suspect emerged, his coat dripping, silver blade now drawn, eyes glinting with a manic light."
4"Tomás stepped forward, his medallion catching a stray spark, and swung a small, brass knuckle that sent the blade skittering across the stone."
5"She lunged, her hand grabbing the token, the pulse in her palm syncing with the thrum of the market’s heart."
6"Harlow stared at the token, the rain’s rhythm still thundering above them, the market’s whispers humming around her."
7"The chamber’s air thickened, the shadows quivered, and the rain outside intensified, a storm that seemed to echo the decision made within the underground."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount17
matches
0"she called, voice cutting through the downpour"
1"she shouted, breath fogging in the chill"
2"Harlow said, her voice low,"
3"Tomás muttered, his tone half‑joking, half‑serious"
4"he hissed, voice rasping like sand"
5"he whispered, voice low,"
6"he offered, his voice barely audible over the commotion"
7"she said, voice low,"
8"he said, his voice firm,"
9"she said, voice steady,"
10"she asked, voice low,"
11"she said, voice barely a whisper,"
12"Harlow said, voice low,"
13"Harlow shouted, voice ringing through the chamber"
14"Harlow demanded, her eyes blazing,"
15"she asked, voice steady,"
16"she said, voice firm,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"Tomás muttered (mutter)"
2"he hissed (hiss)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"a red scarf cried out (cry out)"
5"Harlow demanded (demand)"
6"A vendor shouted (shout)"
7"he hissed (hiss)"
8"Harlow shouted (shout)"
9"Harlow demanded (demand)"
10"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.605
leniency1
rawRatio0.478
effectiveRatio0.478
70.4934%