| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1300 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1300 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "echoes" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "desire" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "glistening" | | 15 | "velvet" | | 16 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 184 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 24 | | markdownWords | 40 | | totalWords | 1279 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "alive" | | 1 | "is" | | 2 | "sound" | | 3 | "in" | | 4 | "in the curve of her thoughts" | | 5 | "saw" | | 6 | "her" | | 7 | "inside" | | 8 | "grew" | | 9 | "Cut" | | 10 | "hungry" | | 11 | "something" | | 12 | "recognition" | | 13 | "split" | | 14 | "up" | | 15 | "movement" | | 16 | "air" | | 17 | "aware" | | 18 | "recognition" | | 19 | "passport" | | 20 | "through" | | 21 | "consumption" | | 22 | "\"You’ll be alright, a ghrá. Just don’t look at it. Don’t fixate.\"" | | 23 | "gears" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 969 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 10 | | Aurora | 14 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.778 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something between bone and polished onyx, spira" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.782 | | wordCount | 1279 | | matches | | 0 | "not from heat, but from something pushing *up* from within" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 94 | | mean | 13.61 | | std | 13.35 | | cv | 0.981 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 184 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a sound, not a vibration—something in between, like the echo of a voice spoken inside bone." | | 1 | "The air shimmered around her like heat rising from tarmac, but cold—cold like the inside of a glacier." | | 2 | "In places, translucent sacs bulged from the walls, each containing a swirling liquid that pulsed in time with the floor—slow, rhythmic, *alive*." | | 3 | "A chord rang out—three notes, dissonant, unresolved—that didn’t end." | | 4 | "And Aurora realised—*her* heartbeat was in it." | | 5 | "The corridor widened into a chamber—or perhaps the chamber was the throat, and the passage merely a narrowed artery." | | 6 | "A forest of pillars rose from floor to ceiling—except there was no ceiling." | | 7 | "The smell hit Aurora like a memory—her mother’s kitchen, Sunday mornings, the scent of cardamom and burnt sugar." | | 8 | "And yet—she heard it now." | | 9 | "And then the crust *split* open—not from heat, but from something pushing *up* from within." | | 10 | "The metal sang—thin, clear, a note that cut through the low pulse like a scalpel." | | 11 | "Then, from every table, every shadow, every veined wall—*movement*." | | 12 | "But their eyes—bright." | | 13 | "Another figure emerged—smaller, a woman in a gown of woven moonlight, now grey and frayed." | | 14 | "Her scar—small, crescent-shaped, on her left wrist—itched." | | 15 | "And the floor trembled beneath her feet—not with a heartbeat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 990 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03939393939393939 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00808080808080808 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 184 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 184 | | mean | 6.95 | | std | 5.92 | | cv | 0.852 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 61.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.42391304347826086 | | totalSentences | 184 | | uniqueOpeners | 78 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the pulse in the" | | 1 | "Only a distant, flickering glow," | | 2 | "Then an arm, wrapped in" | | 3 | "Then, from every table, every" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t wood." | | 1 | "It gave slightly underfoot, like" | | 2 | "they said, the whisper of" | | 3 | "She didn’t shiver." | | 4 | "she said, voice layered with" | | 5 | "They stood in a narrow" | | 6 | "she asked, but already the" | | 7 | "It stretched, warped, bent around" | | 8 | "It was *in* her molars," | | 9 | "She paused, turned." | | 10 | "She touched the Heartstone Pendant." | | 11 | "She took a step forward." | | 12 | "She pointed to the pomegranate." | | 13 | "It reached for the bread." | | 14 | "Their faces were gaunt." | | 15 | "He looked at her." | | 16 | "His voice was dry, used-up." | | 17 | "She held out a single," | | 18 | "Her scar—small, crescent-shaped, on her" | | 19 | "She remembered being seven." |
| | ratio | 0.204 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The floor wasn’t stone." | | 1 | "It wasn’t wood." | | 2 | "It gave slightly underfoot, like" | | 3 | "Aurora pressed her palm flat" | | 4 | "they said, the whisper of" | | 5 | "Isolde stepped through next, barefoot" | | 6 | "The air shimmered around her" | | 7 | "She didn’t shiver." | | 8 | "she said, voice layered with" | | 9 | "They stood in a narrow" | | 10 | "The walls curved inward, ribbed" | | 11 | "The surface glistened faintly, mottled" | | 12 | "Aurora’s breath fogged, then froze" | | 13 | "she asked, but already the" | | 14 | "Isolde tilted her head, lavender" | | 15 | "Nyx reached out, fingers gliding" | | 16 | "The fluid within surged, dark" | | 17 | "The sac burst." | | 18 | "A chord rang out—three notes," | | 19 | "It stretched, warped, bent around" |
| | ratio | 0.718 | |
| 48.54% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the pendant blazed against" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her mother rushing in, wrapping her wrist in cool cloth." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice layered with echoes," | | 1 | "Nyx laughed, a dry rattle like pebbles down a well" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx laughed (laugh)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |