Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8J4FA7MYN9JGDV7QEFTP

Run Details

Duration:
51.4s
Cost:
$0.061100
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the streets of Camden like a punishment from above, turning the pavement into rivers of reflected neon. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slammed through puddles as she rounded the corner of Chalk Farm Road, her breath coming in sharp bursts that fogged the cold air. Ahead of her, maybe thirty meters, the figure in the dark hoodie vaulted a rusted railing and disappeared into the shadows between two derelict buildings. "Stop! Police!" The words tore from her throat, but the rain swallowed them whole. She knew he wouldn't stop. They never did when they ran this hard, this desperate. Quinn pushed herself faster, ignoring the burn in her lungs, the ache in her forty-one-year-old knees that reminded her she wasn't the young constable who'd once chased down suspects without breaking stride. The worn leather of her watch strap bit into her wrist as she pumped her arms, salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull. Tomás Herrera. That was the name in the file. Former paramedic. Spanish national. Lost his medical license under circumstances that didn't add up no matter how many times she read the reports. And now connected to at least three bodies that had turned up in the Thames over the past month, each one bearing wounds that the coroner couldn't quite explain. She hit the gap between the buildings at a dead sprint. The alley was narrow, barely wide enough for her shoulders, brick walls so close she could touch both sides. Water cascaded down from somewhere above, drenching her coat, running into her eyes. She blinked it away and kept moving. At the alley's end, a chain-link fence. Fresh bootprints in the mud on the other side. Quinn grabbed the metal links and hauled herself up, the fence rattling and swaying under her weight. She dropped down hard, felt the impact shudder up through her spine, and pushed on. The alley opened onto what looked like an abandoned loading dock behind a shuttered warehouse. No streetlights here. Just the distant orange glow of the city bouncing off low clouds, and the endless percussion of rain on concrete. Herrera was gone. Quinn stopped, chest heaving, turning in a slow circle. The loading dock offered three exits: a fire escape leading up, a set of double doors that hung crooked on their hinges, and a metal grate set into the ground that looked like it led to some kind of service tunnel. The grate was askew. Someone had moved it recently. She pulled out her phone, thumbed it on. No signal. Of course. She should call for backup, wait for support, follow procedure. That was what eighteen years of decorated service had taught her. Three years ago, she'd followed procedure. She'd waited for backup while DS Morris went ahead to secure a witness. By the time she'd caught up, Morris was dead, and the witness had vanished, and nobody could explain the burns on Morris's body that looked like they'd been made by something other than fire. Quinn grabbed the edge of the grate and heaved it aside. The tunnel below was darker than the night above, a rectangle of pure black that seemed to breathe cold air up at her. Metal rungs were set into the wall, leading down. She could hear water rushing somewhere far below, and beneath that, something else. Voices, maybe. Or music. Her hand moved to her hip, checked the weight of her service weapon. Still there. Still loaded. She climbed down. The rungs were slick with condensation and something that felt like moss. Quinn counted as she descended—ten rungs, twenty, thirty—until her boots finally hit solid ground. She was standing in what looked like an old maintenance tunnel for the Underground, the walls lined with cables and pipes that hadn't been touched in decades. Emergency lights had been strung along the ceiling at irregular intervals, casting pools of sickly yellow illumination that only made the shadows between them deeper. The sounds were clearer now. Definitely voices. Dozens of them, overlapping, haggling, laughing. And music—something rhythmic and strange, played on instruments she couldn't identify. Quinn moved forward, one hand on the wall, the other hovering near her weapon. The tunnel curved, then split. She followed the sounds, taking the left fork, then right, then left again, until she emerged onto a platform overlooking something that made her stop dead. The abandoned Tube station spread out below her like a fever dream. Where there should have been empty tracks and crumbling tile, there was instead a marketplace unlike anything she'd ever seen. Stalls lined the platform and spilled onto the tracks themselves, draped in fabrics that shimmered in colors that didn't exist in nature. Lanterns hung from the ceiling, floating without any visible means of support, casting light that seemed to bend around corners. Hundreds of people—if they were all people—moved through the narrow aisles, examining goods, exchanging currency that glinted strangely, speaking in languages Quinn didn't recognize. This was impossible. This couldn't exist. Not here, not beneath Camden, not beneath any city she knew. But it did exist. She could smell it—incense and copper and something like ozone. She could feel the vibration of all those bodies moving through the space, the heat rising from the crowd below. And there, weaving through the stalls maybe fifty meters away, was Tomás Herrera. He'd pushed back his hood. She could see his face now—olive skin, curly dark hair, the glint of something gold around his neck. He was moving fast but not running, keeping his head down, trying to lose himself in the crowd. Quinn's fingers closed around the grip of her weapon. She could draw it. She could announce herself, demand he stop. She was a Metropolitan Police detective with the authority of law behind her. But what law applied here? What jurisdiction covered a market that shouldn't exist, filled with people who might not be people at all? A figure moved to block her path. Tall, thin, wrapped in a cloak that seemed to absorb light. Where its face should have been, there was only shadow and the faint suggestion of features that shifted when she tried to focus on them. "Token." The word rasped out from somewhere within that darkness. A hand emerged from the cloak's folds—too long, too many joints—and extended palm up. "I don't—" "No token, no entry. Market rules." Quinn's hand tightened on her weapon. "I'm a police officer. I'm in pursuit of a suspect." The figure didn't move. Didn't react. The hand stayed extended, patient as stone. "Your authority means nothing here, Detective. This is the Veil Market. We move with the moon and answer to older laws than yours. If you wish to enter, you need a bone token. If you don't have one, you leave. Those are the only choices." Below, Herrera was getting further away. He'd stopped at one of the stalls, was speaking urgently to the vendor, gesturing with his hands. The scar on his left forearm caught the lantern light—a long, ugly thing that looked like it had been made by a knife. Quinn forced herself to think. Three bodies in the Thames. Wounds that couldn't be explained. A former paramedic who'd lost his license for treating patients that weren't in any medical database. And now this—a hidden world beneath the city, a market that dealt in things she couldn't name. This was what had killed Morris. Not specifically, but this. Whatever this was. The things that existed in the spaces between what was known and what was possible. She'd spent three years telling herself that Morris's death had a rational explanation, that the burns and the missing witness and the strange symbols carved into the floor could all be accounted for if she just looked hard enough. She'd been lying to herself. She could see that now, standing on the edge of the impossible. The figure in the cloak waited, hand still extended. Beyond it, the market churned with life and commerce and secrets she couldn't begin to fathom. Herrera was moving again. He'd gotten whatever he came for—a small package wrapped in cloth that he tucked into his jacket—and was heading for another exit on the far side of the station. Quinn made her decision. She released her weapon, reached into her coat pocket, and pulled out the evidence bag she'd been carrying. Inside was a fragment of bone—recovered from one of the Thames victims, kept on her person because something about it felt important, felt connected. She held it up. The cloaked figure studied it. The shadow where its face should have been seemed to shift, to smile. "Ah. You carry one already and didn't know. That makes you either very lucky or very unfortunate." It stepped aside. "Welcome to the Veil Market, Detective Quinn. Mind the wards. Mind your manners. And mind what you purchase—refunds are not our policy." Quinn stepped past it and descended into the crowd. The stalls pressed in on her immediately, vendors calling out in that strange mixture of languages, hands reaching to display their wares. She saw bottles filled with liquids that glowed and pulsed. Jewelry made from materials she couldn't identify. Books with titles that seemed to change when she looked away. A cage filled with shadows that moved independently of any light source. She kept her head down and pushed forward, following the path Herrera had taken. The crowd parted around her reluctantly, bodies that felt wrong when they brushed against her—too cold, too warm, too angular beneath their clothing. Eyes watched her from stalls and corners and high places, eyes that knew she didn't belong here. Ahead, Herrera reached the far exit. He glanced back once, scanning the crowd, and for a moment their eyes met across the chaos of the market. He ran. Quinn ran after him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"It stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.25
90.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1659
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1659
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"database"
count1
6
word"churned"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"rhythmic"
2"shimmered"
3"could feel"
4"glint"
5"database"
6"churned"
7"pulsed"
8"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
53.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1637
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1532
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Harlow1
Quinn14
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
Herrera7
Thames3
Morris5
Underground1
Tube1
Tomás2
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Herrera"
4"Morris"
5"Tomás"
places
0"Chalk"
1"Farm"
2"Road"
3"Thames"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount11
matches
0"quite explain"
1"looked like an abandoned loading dock beh"
2"looked like it led to some kind of servic"
3"looked like they'd been made by something"
4"felt like moss"
5"looked like an old maintenance tunnel for"
6"light that seemed to bend around corners"
7"something like ozone"
8"cloak that seemed to absorb light"
9"looked like it had been made by a knife"
10"titles that seemed to change when she looked away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.611
wordCount1637
matches
0"Not specifically, but this"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean31.48
std22.72
cv0.722
sampleLengths
071
12
227
354
461
550
648
738
83
950
109
1133
1253
1311
1449
1517
163
1778
1824
1945
2098
2117
2234
2313
2441
2533
2623
2743
281
2923
302
316
3216
3313
3445
3546
3648
3767
3817
3925
4033
414
4242
434
4418
4542
469
4762
4854
4926
91.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences128
matches
0"was gone"
1"been made"
2"been touched"
3"been made"
4"been seemed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs284
matches
0"was standing"
1"was getting"
2"was speaking"
3"was heading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences135
ratio0.081
matches
0"Quinn counted as she descended—ten rungs, twenty, thirty—until her boots finally hit solid ground."
1"And music—something rhythmic and strange, played on instruments she couldn't identify."
2"Hundreds of people—if they were all people—moved through the narrow aisles, examining goods, exchanging currency that glinted strangely, speaking in languages Quinn didn't recognize."
3"She could smell it—incense and copper and something like ozone."
4"She could see his face now—olive skin, curly dark hair, the glint of something gold around his neck."
5"A hand emerged from the cloak's folds—too long, too many joints—and extended palm up."
6"The scar on his left forearm caught the lantern light—a long, ugly thing that looked like it had been made by a knife."
7"And now this—a hidden world beneath the city, a market that dealt in things she couldn't name."
8"He'd gotten whatever he came for—a small package wrapped in cloth that he tucked into his jacket—and was heading for another exit on the far side of the station."
9"Inside was a fragment of bone—recovered from one of the Thames victims, kept on her person because something about it felt important, felt connected."
10"The crowd parted around her reluctantly, bodies that felt wrong when they brushed against her—too cold, too warm, too angular beneath their clothing."
97.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1553
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.04249839021249195
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.009658725048293626
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean12.13
std8.96
cv0.739
sampleLengths
019
127
225
32
412
55
610
732
822
92
107
112
122
1319
1429
1511
1619
1713
187
197
209
2117
2215
2315
243
2520
263
279
2841
294
305
318
322
332
3410
3511
366
3713
3834
3911
4023
419
4213
432
442
4513
462
472
483
4912
62.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4222222222222222
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners57
28.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Just the distant orange glow"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences116
matches
0"She knew he wouldn't stop."
1"They never did when they"
2"She hit the gap between"
3"She blinked it away and"
4"She dropped down hard, felt"
5"She pulled out her phone,"
6"She should call for backup,"
7"She'd waited for backup while"
8"She could hear water rushing"
9"Her hand moved to her"
10"She climbed down."
11"She was standing in what"
12"She followed the sounds, taking"
13"She could smell it—incense and"
14"She could feel the vibration"
15"He'd pushed back his hood."
16"She could see his face"
17"He was moving fast but"
18"She could draw it."
19"She could announce herself, demand"
ratio0.276
72.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences116
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slammed"
1"The words tore from her"
2"She knew he wouldn't stop."
3"They never did when they"
4"Quinn pushed herself faster, ignoring"
5"The worn leather of her"
6"That was the name in"
7"She hit the gap between"
8"The alley was narrow, barely"
9"Water cascaded down from somewhere"
10"She blinked it away and"
11"Quinn grabbed the metal links"
12"She dropped down hard, felt"
13"The alley opened onto what"
14"Herrera was gone."
15"Quinn stopped, chest heaving, turning"
16"The loading dock offered three"
17"The grate was askew."
18"Someone had moved it recently."
19"She pulled out her phone,"
ratio0.776
43.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"By the time she'd caught"
ratio0.009
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Quinn pushed herself faster, ignoring the burn in her lungs, the ache in her forty-one-year-old knees that reminded her she wasn't the young constable who'd onc…"
1"Lost his medical license under circumstances that didn't add up no matter how many times she read the reports."
2"And now connected to at least three bodies that had turned up in the Thames over the past month, each one bearing wounds that the coroner couldn't quite explain…"
3"She followed the sounds, taking the left fork, then right, then left again, until she emerged onto a platform overlooking something that made her stop dead."
4"Hundreds of people—if they were all people—moved through the narrow aisles, examining goods, exchanging currency that glinted strangely, speaking in languages Q…"
5"A former paramedic who'd lost his license for treating patients that weren't in any medical database."
6"The crowd parted around her reluctantly, bodies that felt wrong when they brushed against her—too cold, too warm, too angular beneath their clothing."
7"Eyes watched her from stalls and corners and high places, eyes that knew she didn't belong here."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.9819%