| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1053 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.03% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1053 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "lurch" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1045 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "thump-thump-thump" | | 1 | "Crack. Snap." | | 2 | "Rory." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 1039 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.67 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | London | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if curtsying" | | 1 | "sounded like breaking bone" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to stretch impossibly far behind her, touching the ancient oaks that loomed over the perimeter" |
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| 8.61% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.914 | | wordCount | 1045 | | matches | | 0 | "not like a cloud, but like a small, curling snake" | | 1 | "not at her, but at the dark, twisted shape of the trees behind her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 32.66 | | std | 22.19 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 64 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 18 |
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| 89.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "get lost" | | 1 | "been aired" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "were bunched" |
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| 79.52% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "were getting" | | 1 | "was burning" | | 2 | "was pulsing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "It was late—past eleven on a Tuesday—but Yu-Fei had insisted on the double shift to cover for a sick cook." | | 1 | "Yet, the air around them felt wrong—stagnant, thick, as if she had walked into a room that hadn't been aired out in a century." | | 2 | "The transition was instant and nauseating—a sickening lurch of the stomach that dissolved into the scent of damp earth and ozone." | | 3 | "The deep crimson gemstone inside the silver cage was pulsing in time with a steady, rapid heartbeat—*thump-thump-thump*." | | 4 | "It wasn't just heat; it was a pressure, like the air in the room had thickened to the consistency of molasses." | | 5 | "Not from the breeze—the air was still." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1047 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.025787965616045846 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007640878701050621 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 11.36 | | std | 6.72 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 38.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.29347826086956524 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 78.43% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the lid of the" | | 1 | "Instead, where a head should" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 64.71% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "It was late—past eleven on" | | 1 | "She slowed, her boots crunching" | | 2 | "It wasn't the deer grazing" | | 3 | "It was the stones." | | 4 | "It was hot, searing against" | | 5 | "It was a rasp, wet" | | 6 | "She ducked, swatting at an" | | 7 | "She didn't think." | | 8 | "She just moved." | | 9 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 10 | "She fell forward, catching herself" | | 11 | "They glowed with a pale," | | 12 | "It wasn't just heat; it" | | 13 | "She began to walk, her" | | 14 | "She kept her hand on" | | 15 | "They moved in unison, the" | | 16 | "They looked like fingers." | | 17 | "She stilled, freezing like a" | | 18 | "It was rhythmic, wet, and" | | 19 | "She tightened her grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.388 | |
| 42.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The glow of the streetlamps" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the straps of" | | 2 | "It was late—past eleven on" | | 3 | "The spicy beef noodles inside" | | 4 | "She slowed, her boots crunching" | | 5 | "The ancient oaks of the" | | 6 | "Tonight, the trees stood rigid," | | 7 | "Rory focused on the path" | | 8 | "It wasn't the deer grazing" | | 9 | "It was the stones." | | 10 | "A cluster of granite monoliths" | | 11 | "Rory knew this spot well." | | 12 | "A popular spot for teenagers" | | 13 | "A faint, rhythmic throb pulsed" | | 14 | "The Heartstone pendant." | | 15 | "It was hot, searing against" | | 16 | "The voice wasn't hers." | | 17 | "It was a rasp, wet" | | 18 | "She ducked, swatting at an" | | 19 | "The pendant heated up, a" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the air around them" | | 1 | "To her left, a cluster" | | 2 | "If it was a deer," | | 3 | "If it was a fox," |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 61.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory focused on the path ahead, her gaze drifting past the chain-link fence that separated the road from the deer enclosure." | | 1 | "The transition was instant and nauseating—a sickening lurch of the stomach that dissolved into the scent of damp earth and ozone." | | 2 | "They glowed with a pale, sickly luminescence, casting long, wavy shadows that didn't match the angle of the moon." | | 3 | "The pendant flared, the crimson light casting frantic shadows that seemed to stretch impossibly far behind her, touching the ancient oaks that loomed over the p…" | | 4 | "It stood taller than a man, cloaked in shadows that refused to be displaced by the faint glow of the strange flowers." | | 5 | "She looked at the delivery bag that had opened, revealing the cold, flat noodles." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the creature asked, its voice a grinding of two rocks together" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |