Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8KTG1WC68494QS8BSBPJ

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Duration:
32.8s
Cost:
$0.001293
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The glow of the streetlamps faded into a bruised purple smear behind her, swallowed instantly by the encroaching black of Richmond Park. Rory adjusted the straps of the nylon delivery bag, the sweat on her back beginning to chill as the evening wind picked up. It was late—past eleven on a Tuesday—but Yu-Fei had insisted on the double shift to cover for a sick cook. The spicy beef noodles inside were getting cold, a crime she couldn't let happen. She slowed, her boots crunching on gravel. The ancient oaks of the park usually swayed in a rhythmic whisper, a comforting lullaby of the city. Tonight, the trees stood rigid, their branches black against the starless sky. Rory focused on the path ahead, her gaze drifting past the chain-link fence that separated the road from the deer enclosure. It wasn't the deer grazing near the perimeter that caught her eye. It was the stones. A cluster of granite monoliths stood in a semi-circle near the tree line. Rory knew this spot well. A popular spot for teenagers looking to get lost in the thrill of breaking curfew. Yet, the air around them felt wrong—stagnant, thick, as if she had walked into a room that hadn't been aired out in a century. A faint, rhythmic throb pulsed against her collarbone. The Heartstone pendant. It was hot, searing against her skin, radiating heat through the fabric of her white delivery shirt. "Rory." The voice wasn't hers. It was a rasp, wet and tasting of phlegm, coming from directly above. She ducked, swatting at an empty branch, but the noise had been silent. The pendant heated up, a sudden spike of crimson light blooming through the silver chain, vibrating so hard it scratched her throat. She didn't think. She just moved. She stepped through the gap between the two tallest standing stones. The transition was instant and nauseating—a sickening lurch of the stomach that dissolved into the scent of damp earth and ozone. She fell forward, catching herself on hands and knees in tall, trembling grass. The noise of London was gone. There was no traffic, no sirens, no distant hum of the Tube. Only silence. Heavy, suffocating silence that pressed against her eardrums. Rory scrambled up, wiping the grass stains from her palms. This wasn't the park she knew. The flora was off. The wildflowers that normally carpeted the ground in a riot of spring colors were bunched together in unnatural, compact clusters. They glowed with a pale, sickly luminescence, casting long, wavy shadows that didn't match the angle of the moon. The pendant was burning now. The deep crimson gemstone inside the silver cage was pulsing in time with a steady, rapid heartbeat—*thump-thump-thump*. It wasn't just heat; it was a pressure, like the air in the room had thickened to the consistency of molasses. She began to walk, her strides short and deliberate, scanning the perimeter. The ground beneath her boots was soft, spongy, and covered in a fine mist that hissed when her shoes stepped through it. She kept her hand on the pendant, thumbing the rough stone, trying to tether herself to her human self. "Hello?" The word died in her throat, too small for the space. To her left, a cluster of foxgloves shivered. Not from the breeze—the air was still. They moved in unison, the flowers leaning toward her as if curtsying. The stems were thick, woody, devoid of the delicate fuzz that summer foxgloves possessed. They looked like fingers. Long, green fingers reaching for her ankles. Rory took a step back, her heel catching on a root. The root snapped with a dry, audible crack that sounded like breaking bone. She stilled, freezing like a statue. *Crack. Snap.* From the darkness between the trees, a sound repeated. It was rhythmic, wet, and clearly predatory. She tightened her grip on the bag of noodles, her fingers aching around the handles. If it was a deer, it would have fled by now. If it was a fox, it would be silent. A low, bubbling chuckle drifted toward her, followed by the rustle of heavy fur dragging against dry leaves. She picked up the pace, moving past the center of the clearing. The mist swirled around her ankles, cold and tasting of copper. The pendant flared, the crimson light casting frantic shadows that seemed to stretch impossibly far behind her, touching the ancient oaks that loomed over the perimeter. *Rory.* The voice was clearer this time. It came from inside her head, a cold finger sliding between her thoughts. She stopped. The air grew heavy, the gravity pulling down on her shoulders. She dropped the delivery bag. It hit the ground with a soft thud, the container inside unbroken. She stared at the bag, watching it. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, the lid of the container lifted on its own. Spicy steam curled out, shaped not like a cloud, but like a small, curling snake. It spiraled upward, twisting around her wrist, and dissipated into the crimson glow of the pendant. The Heartstone stopped pulsing and turned a deep, opaque charcoal black. The warmth vanished, replaced by an icy numbness that spread from her chest to her fingertips. Behind her, the rustling stopped. Something stepped out from behind the gnarled roots of a massive oak tree. It stood taller than a man, cloaked in shadows that refused to be displaced by the faint glow of the strange flowers. It had no face. Instead, where a head should be, a twisted mass of branches and bark grew, capped with a single, unblinking eye the color of the void. The creature extended a hand, a limb made of grey, mottled wood and grasping, bark-like fingers. It pointed not at her, but at the dark, twisted shape of the trees behind her, which were no longer trees, but the jagged stone teeth of a skull. "Where is the food?" the creature asked, its voice a grinding of two rocks together. Rory didn't answer. She looked at the stone skull. She looked at the dead flowers. She looked at the delivery bag that had opened, revealing the cold, flat noodles. The pendant burned against her skin again, hot and bright, pushing against her sternum. It wasn't hers anymore.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1053
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1053
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count3
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"searing"
count1
7
word"lurch"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"rhythmic"
2"whisper"
3"comforting"
4"throb"
5"pulsed"
6"searing"
7"lurch"
8"stomach"
9"silence"
10"scanning"
11"loomed"
12"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1045
ratio0.004
matches
0"thump-thump-thump"
1"Crack. Snap."
2"Rory."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1039
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Tuesday1
Yu-Fei1
Heartstone2
London1
Tube1
Rory7
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if curtsying"
1"sounded like breaking bone"
2"shadows that seemed to stretch impossibly far behind her, touching the ancient oaks that loomed over the perimeter"
8.61% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.914
wordCount1045
matches
0"not like a cloud, but like a small, curling snake"
1"not at her, but at the dark, twisted shape of the trees behind her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean32.66
std22.19
cv0.68
sampleLengths
079
170
24
357
428
51
630
760
841
959
1043
1153
121
1311
1452
1530
162
1716
1853
1949
201
2119
2237
2315
2431
2527
265
2764
2845
2915
3029
3118
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"get lost"
1"been aired"
2"was gone"
3"were bunched"
79.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs166
matches
0"were getting"
1"was burning"
2"was pulsing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences92
ratio0.065
matches
0"It was late—past eleven on a Tuesday—but Yu-Fei had insisted on the double shift to cover for a sick cook."
1"Yet, the air around them felt wrong—stagnant, thick, as if she had walked into a room that hadn't been aired out in a century."
2"The transition was instant and nauseating—a sickening lurch of the stomach that dissolved into the scent of damp earth and ozone."
3"The deep crimson gemstone inside the silver cage was pulsing in time with a steady, rapid heartbeat—*thump-thump-thump*."
4"It wasn't just heat; it was a pressure, like the air in the room had thickened to the consistency of molasses."
5"Not from the breeze—the air was still."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1047
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.025787965616045846
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007640878701050621
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.36
std6.72
cv0.592
sampleLengths
022
123
220
314
47
518
612
721
812
94
1013
115
1215
1324
148
153
1617
171
184
1913
2013
2122
223
233
2411
2521
2613
276
2812
292
308
3110
326
334
3420
3519
365
3717
3821
3912
4022
4119
421
4311
448
457
4612
4714
484
497
38.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.29347826086956524
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners27
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then, the lid of the"
1"Instead, where a head should"
ratio0.024
64.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences85
matches
0"It was late—past eleven on"
1"She slowed, her boots crunching"
2"It wasn't the deer grazing"
3"It was the stones."
4"It was hot, searing against"
5"It was a rasp, wet"
6"She ducked, swatting at an"
7"She didn't think."
8"She just moved."
9"She stepped through the gap"
10"She fell forward, catching herself"
11"They glowed with a pale,"
12"It wasn't just heat; it"
13"She began to walk, her"
14"She kept her hand on"
15"They moved in unison, the"
16"They looked like fingers."
17"She stilled, freezing like a"
18"It was rhythmic, wet, and"
19"She tightened her grip on"
ratio0.388
42.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences85
matches
0"The glow of the streetlamps"
1"Rory adjusted the straps of"
2"It was late—past eleven on"
3"The spicy beef noodles inside"
4"She slowed, her boots crunching"
5"The ancient oaks of the"
6"Tonight, the trees stood rigid,"
7"Rory focused on the path"
8"It wasn't the deer grazing"
9"It was the stones."
10"A cluster of granite monoliths"
11"Rory knew this spot well."
12"A popular spot for teenagers"
13"A faint, rhythmic throb pulsed"
14"The Heartstone pendant."
15"It was hot, searing against"
16"The voice wasn't hers."
17"It was a rasp, wet"
18"She ducked, swatting at an"
19"The pendant heated up, a"
ratio0.835
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences85
matches
0"Yet, the air around them"
1"To her left, a cluster"
2"If it was a deer,"
3"If it was a fox,"
ratio0.047
61.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rory focused on the path ahead, her gaze drifting past the chain-link fence that separated the road from the deer enclosure."
1"The transition was instant and nauseating—a sickening lurch of the stomach that dissolved into the scent of damp earth and ozone."
2"They glowed with a pale, sickly luminescence, casting long, wavy shadows that didn't match the angle of the moon."
3"The pendant flared, the crimson light casting frantic shadows that seemed to stretch impossibly far behind her, touching the ancient oaks that loomed over the p…"
4"It stood taller than a man, cloaked in shadows that refused to be displaced by the faint glow of the strange flowers."
5"She looked at the delivery bag that had opened, revealing the cold, flat noodles."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the creature asked, its voice a grinding of two rocks together"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.6737%