| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 87.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 811 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 811 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "raced" | | 14 | "measured" | | 15 | "trembled" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "cacophony" | | 19 | "tracing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 37 | | totalWords | 809 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a quick look" | | 1 | "Confirm the portal's dormant and get out." | | 2 | "Don't go there alone, Rory. The in-between places are waking up." | | 3 | "Just a fox. A deer." | | 4 | "Scrape. Scrape. Scrape." | | 5 | "You brought it to us," | | 6 | "The key." |
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| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just a quick look*, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 809 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 3 | | Isolde | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed taller now, their bark-like surfaces twisting into grimacing faces in the gloom" | | 1 | "as if recoiling from a touch" | | 2 | "rock that seemed to come from all directions at once" | | 3 | "felt like splinters of glass in her bra" |
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| 76.39% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.236 | | wordCount | 809 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a snap or a rustle, but a soft, rhythmic scraping" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 47.59 | | std | 25.24 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 21 |
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| 92.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "was used" | | 1 | "being shaped" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.40% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 811 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slow, deliberate, grating rhythm." |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.040690505548705305 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011097410604192354 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 9.75 | | std | 6.53 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 35.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.2891566265060241 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just a quick look*, she" | | 1 | "Just the deepening shadows between" | | 2 | "*Just a fox." | | 3 | "Then started again, closer this" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 79.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "It looked exactly as Isolde" | | 1 | "It held the stillness of" | | 2 | "She clutched the silver chain" | | 3 | "Her heart hammered a frantic" | | 4 | "She turned back to the" | | 5 | "They were flowers." | | 6 | "They didn't move." | | 7 | "She took a step towards" | | 8 | "It was too quiet." | | 9 | "It wasn't the gentle, reassuring" | | 10 | "She stopped, her hand still" | | 11 | "It was faint, coming from" | | 12 | "Her mind raced, cataloguing possibilities." | | 13 | "It was the sound of" | | 14 | "She took a slow step" | | 15 | "She stumbled, catching herself before" | | 16 | "It was tall and slender," | | 17 | "It moved with a liquid" | | 18 | "It didn't walk." | | 19 | "She spun on her heel" |
| | ratio | 0.351 | |
| 47.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pushed past a" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove." | | 3 | "It looked exactly as Isolde" | | 4 | "The air, however, was wrong." | | 5 | "It held the stillness of" | | 6 | "She clutched the silver chain" | | 7 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed faintly," | | 8 | "The in-between places are waking" | | 9 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 10 | "Rory froze, her head whipping" | | 11 | "Her heart hammered a frantic" | | 12 | "A deer.* She forced a" | | 13 | "She turned back to the" | | 14 | "The wildflowers, a riot of" | | 15 | "They were flowers." | | 16 | "They didn't move." | | 17 | "She took a step towards" | | 18 | "The silence stretched, broken only" | | 19 | "It was too quiet." |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers trembled, their bright petals curling inwards as if recoiling from a touch." | | 1 | "The scraping sound erupted behind her, a cacophony of grating rock that seemed to come from all directions at once." | | 2 | "*You brought it to us,* the voice whispered, a thought that felt like splinters of glass in her brain." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |