Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8PGBVWJ4N970YWBE289M

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.1
Duration:
2m 57s
Cost:
$0.061817
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon raven over the door buzzed and flickered in the wet glass of the window. Inside, The Raven’s Nest glowed in amber light. Bottles lined the back bar like a stained glass city. Old maps curled at their corners on the walls, continents browned and seas faded to pale blue. A low murmur of conversation floated above the clink of ice and the dull thud of bass from the tiny speakers in the rafters. Aurora hunched over the far end of the bar with her elbows on the wood. The lacquer had worn down under her forearms to a dull patch that caught the light where someone had once carved initials and someone else had sanded them out. A half‑finished gin and tonic waited by her fingers. A Golden Empress delivery hoodie hung off the back of her stool, still damp at the cuffs from the drizzle outside. She tore a napkin into strips without looking up. White shreds piled next to the coaster. Her wrist flashed pale in the dim light whenever her sleeve rode up and the little crescent scar showed, thin as a fingernail clipping. Behind the bar, Silas dried a glass with a clean cloth and watched the door between glances at her. His limp settled him into a rhythm: step, drag, turn. The silver ring on his right hand tapped the counter as he lined up the glass with the others. “You're going to run me out of napkins,” he leaned, lowering a fresh bowl of peanuts into her line of sight. “That your way of cutting me off?” Her fingers hovered over the glass. “You’re on your first.” He glanced at her drink. “You going soft on me, Carter?” “Trying to pace myself.” Her mouth curved without lifting her gaze from the lime floating in her drink. “Yu‑Fei doubled the shift. I’m still vibrating from scooter fumes.” “You could sleep.” He moved along the bar with a slight grunt as his knee locked, reaching for a bottle a pair of tourists pointed at. “Too quiet up there.” He nodded once, already focused on the next order. The door opened and brought in a gust of cold air that smelled of wet pavement and exhaust. Street noise burst in with it—sirens somewhere far, a laugh too loud—then muffled when the door thudded shut. Aurora didn’t look up at first. The Nest saw a rotation of strangers and regulars every night. The regulars blended into the furniture. The strangers kept their coats on and their voices high. “Hi. Pint of whatever’s coldest that doesn’t taste like soap.” The voice cut through her fog. Welsh cadence. Familiar vowels rolled through English like round stones. Her hand froze on the glass. Silas reached for a tap with a flick of his wrist. “Stella do?” His tone softened around his own Welsh lilt that hid under the London growl. “Perfect. I’m not picky. Just off the train.” The voice laughed, a deeper sound now, but the rhythm punched into Aurora’s chest like an old song. She lifted her head. The woman at the bar shrugged a damp wool coat off her shoulders. Dark hair, once waist‑length and dyed a stubborn purple, fell now in a sleek bob that swung with each movement, glossy and controlled. A tailored navy suit clung to her, charcoal blouse buttoned to the throat. A leather briefcase leaned against her calf. She tucked it between her feet like she expected someone to lift it. Her profile under the bar’s low lights took Aurora back in an instant: the straight nose, the cleft in the chin, the way the left eyebrow arched higher than the right when she focused on something. “Niamh,” slipped out before Aurora knew it left her. The woman’s shoulders stiffened. She half turned, fingers still curled around the wet glass Silas slid toward her. “Rory?” For a second, everything in the bar narrowed. The tourists’ chatter blurred. The maps on the walls sagged out of focus. Even the neon outside felt distant. Aurora’s mouth went dry. The name she hadn’t heard in years—Rory—sounded rough around the edges in Niamh’s voice, as if it had scraped its way up. She swallowed, tried again. “Yeah.” Niamh’s eyes swept her in one quick, almost clinical pass. Black hoodie, faded jeans, wet trainers, hair pulled into a stubby knot at the nape of her neck, wisps of it damp around her face. The bright blue gaze that had impressed half their law cohort met hazel now shadowed with city fatigue. “Shit.” Niamh leaned back a little, then forward again with a short laugh that never quite found humour. “You’re... here.” “Observation skills intact then, counsellor.” “So you do know what I am now.” She lifted the pint. “Can I—? Is this your spot? Am I invading the sacred stool of Rory Carter, Queen of… whatever this is?” “She pays rent upstairs.” Silas polished another glass with one eye on them. “As long as she doesn’t bleed on the floor again, she’s fine.” Niamh’s gaze flicked to him, back to Aurora. “Again?” “Work accident.” Aurora shrugged. “You, uh, want to sit?” She nudged the empty stool beside her with her foot. Niamh dragged her briefcase around and climbed onto the stool. She unbuttoned her coat, revealing the precise lines of her suit. A small enamel badge glinted at her lapel: Crown Prosecution Service. Aurora’s lips flattened. “So you did it.” She nodded at the badge. “You went full establishment.” “You used to mock that badge in the careers office.” “I used to mock everything in the careers office.” “You tried to stage a sit‑in because they only advertised corporate firms.” “Seemed justified at the time.” Niamh tipped back a long swallow of beer. Foam clung to her upper lip for a second. She wiped it off with the side of her hand. “Christ.” Her gaze drifted along the row of bottles, then landed on Aurora again. “You look...” “Don’t say ‘different’. That’s lazy.” “I was going to say ‘good’, but okay, you little tyrant.” Aurora huffed a laugh, short and shocked in her own ears. “Look at you.” She gestured at Niamh’s suit. “You swallowed a law textbook and spat out a person.” “Occupational hazard. You—” Niamh let the rest hang for a beat. “You disappeared.” Silas drifted toward the far end of the bar, leaving them a long stretch of polished wood and bowls of nuts. Aurora touched the rim of her glass. Her fingers left damp crescents. “People keep using that word like I turned into smoke. I just moved to London.” “Without telling anyone.” “You weren’t exactly taking my calls before I left.” “That’s not—” Niamh’s jaw shifted. “We’re really starting there?” “Where do you want to start?” Niamh breathed out through her nose, looked at the scarred bar surface. “Maybe with ‘hi, how are you, I thought you were dead in a ditch’.” “You didn’t.” “I did.” The edge in her voice sharpened. “You dropped off every grid we had. No Facebook, no Insta, your number went dead. Even your mum didn’t know where you’d gone.” Aurora’s grip on the glass tightened. Lime bumped against ice. “Mum knew enough.” “She called me, Rory.” Niamh’s eyes found hers again. “She thought something I’d done drove you off." Aurora looked away, toward the old map of Europe behind the bar. Meridians cut across the continent in faded ink. Prague sat just under the reflection of a hanging bulb. “You didn’t do anything.” “That is debatable.” Aurora picked at the napkin scraps. “Doesn’t matter now.” “It does to me.” A couple at the other end of the bar burst into laughter over something on a phone. Their voices filled the silence between the two women for a beat. Niamh twisted her pint glass. Her thumbnail had a crescent of chipped dark polish. “Last time I saw you,” she went on, eyes on the beer, “you had a concussion.” “Yeah. Fun memory.” “You were on my sofa, head bandaged. Evan hammered your phone with messages. I told you to block him, and you...” “He walked through the door ten minutes later.” “And I left.” The words landed hard. “I left you there with him.” Aurora’s jaw tensed. She lifted her drink, held it at her lip, then lowered it again. “You had court in the morning.” “Don’t do that.” “What?” “Don’t make it sound practical. I saw his face. I saw the hand mark on your throat. I grabbed my bag and told myself you were a grown woman who could make her own choices, and I left.” Aurora traced the edge of the coaster with her fingernail, round and round, until the cardboard lifted. “You weren’t the only one who told yourself that.” “I heard what happened a week later from Emma.” Niamh’s voice dropped. “A and E. Police. Your dad driving up from Cardiff like a madman. And you—you’d gone. No note. No call. Nothing. You think I don’t replay that night?” Aurora’s shoulders lifted, then fell, like a shrug that never completed itself. “I don’t think about it at all,” she lied. Niamh’s look cut through that. “You’re still a terrible liar.” A laugh pushed its way out of Aurora, raw and crooked. “Lost my touch.” “You once convinced an entire tutorial group that Mens Rea was Latin for ‘mind rat’.” “It worked, didn’t it?” “The lecturer docked marks because he thought everyone plagiarised the same wrong case.” They both smiled, small, wary things that hovered and then faded. Silas appeared like a shadow, swapping Niamh’s half‑empty bowl of peanuts for a fresh one, topping up Aurora’s tonic from a slim bottle without asking. “This one conned me out of free crisps for a month when she moved in,” he remarked, nodding at Aurora. “Careful. She weaponises charm.” Niamh’s head snapped toward him. “She lives here?” “Upstairs.” His ring caught the light as he gestured at the ceiling. “Keeps odd hours. Collects stray takeaway containers and trouble.” “She used to collect case law and stray first‑years.” “Upgrade,” Aurora muttered. Silas’s mouth twitched. He retreated, letting them spin around each other again. Niamh watched him go. “Of course you’d find the one bar in Soho that looks like a Cold War safe house.” “Man’s got a type.” “How’d you end up here?” “Long story.” “I’ve got time. Hotel’s around the corner, and I’m not due in court until ten.” Aurora lifted her drink again, stared through the clear liquid. “I had options, you know. Dad lined them up like little soldiers. Chambers in Cardiff, internships, all tidy. Then everything blew sideways and I... couldn’t make myself sit in those rooms again.” “With him.” “With any of them. Men in suits arguing over language while people bled outside. Felt wrong.” She rubbed her thumb over the scar at her wrist. “Eva called from London. Said she had a spare sofa and less questions than my parents. So I packed a bag. Got on a coach. Landed here. Picked up work where I could.” “Delivery driver.” “Golden Empress. Best dumplings in Soho.” “You could have called.” Niamh’s voice softened, not by much. “I would’ve wired you money, hooked you up with someone. Anything. Instead your mother rang me, sobbing into the phone about you running away like a teenager.” Aurora’s laugh caught. “I was twenty‑two.” “That counts.” “I didn’t want any of you cleaning up the mess I jumped into.” “You didn’t jump.” “It doesn’t matter how I got there. I still walked through the same door.” “God, you’re stubborn.” “Says the woman who dated a philosophy major just to win an argument about Kant.” “I did win.” “You got hives from his incense.” “He cried during sex.” They broke again, a brief burst of shocked laughter, then both glanced around as if someone might shush them. No one paid them attention. Silence settled, not comfortable, not hostile, just thick with the years. “So,” Aurora pushed her glass away, “CPS. You’re putting people in prison for a living?” “Sometimes. Sometimes I keep them out. That’s the job. Evidence stands or it doesn’t.” “You used to stand on tables and shout about prison abolition.” “I used to drink vodka with squash in it and think Radiohead were deep.” “Still do.” “Upgraded to gin, actually.” Niamh raised the pint in mock salute. “We grow.” Aurora watched her over the rim of her glass. “You look... sharp.” “That a compliment or a diagnosis?” “You used to wear band T‑shirts with holes in them and write case notes on your arms. Now you look like you walked out of a recruitment poster.” “Is that the change you clocked or is it something else?” Aurora’s gaze slid to the enamel badge again. “You believe in it?” she asked. “What you’re doing.” “Most days.” Niamh didn’t blink. “Some days I get a file and my stomach turns, and I go home and stare at the wall. Then I think about my student overdraft and my landlord, and I go back to work in the morning.” “Comforting.” “You always wanted everything pure. Every choice righteous.” Niamh studied her. “World doesn’t fit like that.” “I figured that out.” “Did you, though?” She leaned in a fraction. “Because from where I'm sitting, you pulled a disappearing act instead of letting anyone help. You left your mum etching circles into the kitchen table with her nails. You left Emma fielding questions. You left me—” “You left me on that sofa with him.” Aurora’s voice cut through. Niamh flinched. “I know.” The words hung there. Soft, blunt. Aurora’s throat worked. “You grabbed your bag and your keys, and you looked at me once like I was homework you’d finished, and you walked out.” “I walked out because if I stayed, I’d have done something stupid. I’d have swung at him. He’d have swung back. The cops would’ve carted us both off, and you’d still have been there with him the next day, and I would’ve had an assault charge to spice up my CV.” “You don’t know that.” “I know the way you looked at him.” Aurora stared at the melting ice in her drink, watching it thin. “I know the way you looked at yourself.” Niamh’s voice dropped. “Like you deserved it.” The hum of the bar filled another gap. A woman in the corner tapped ash into a glass votive. A group of office workers squeezed past, coats brushed Aurora’s back. “You kept going, though.” Niamh knocked her knuckles against the wood. “You’re here. You’re... alive. That’s...” “Messy for your lawyer brain?” “It’s more than I let myself picture when I couldn’t find you.” Aurora’s hand spread flat on the counter. “I thought if I stayed in Cardiff someone would drag me back into that orbit. Parents. Tutors. You. They’d smile and smooth it over and pretend it was a blip, and I’d end up in court defending a man who looked like him while my hands shook.” She dragged her palm back, leaving a streak of condensation. “So I ran.” “From him or from us?” “From the version of me you all liked. The one who knew the right cases to cite and the right jokes to make in the union bar.” “I liked all the versions,” Niamh murmured. “Even the one who cried into my pillow after moot court and left mascara stripes.” “You liked having an argument partner.” “That too.” Aurora nudged the peanut bowl between them. “Do you still live with three houseplants and a toaster?” “I live with a cactus named Judith and a Nespresso.” “Upgrade.” “We grow,” Niamh echoed herself, faint smile at her own repetition. She took another swallow of beer. “My dad retired. Mum’s hips are a mess. They keep asking when I’ll bring someone home.” “You could bring Judith.” “She’d outshine me.” “You never had that problem.” Niamh studied her face. “Do your parents know you work in a bar and deliver chow mein?” “They know I’m in London. I send postcards. Mum thinks I’m in ‘logistics’.” Aurora mimed quotation marks. “She pictures clipboards and safety vests.” “Your dad?” “He invoices me for my ‘lost tuition’. It’s a joke. Mostly.” “They miss you.” Aurora stiffened. “They have each other.” “That’s not how that works.” “You keep in touch with them?” “Christmas cards. The occasional panicked phone call when your mother thinks she’s found you in a missing persons article.” Aurora blinked. “What?” “She watches the news with a notebook.” Niamh’s mouth twisted. “Every time some woman your age pops up in a headline, she writes down the name to prove it’s not you.” A strange, unsteady sound escaped Aurora. Somewhere between a scoff and a sigh. “I didn’t know that.” “How would you?” “I told myself... If they weren’t calling, they were fine. Better without me.” “That’s not how that works either.” Niamh drained the last of her pint. Glass thudded on wood. “I have to—” She looked at her watch. “My manager will murder me if I stroll in hungover and sentimental.” “You?” Aurora’s brows rose. “Sentimental?” “Don’t spread it around. Ruins the brand.” They both glanced at the door. The neon raven flickered green against the dark glass. “London’s small,” Niamh went on. “Smaller than it looks on the map.” Her fingers fiddled with the CPS badge, then dropped. “We’re bound to bump into each other again. Courts, streets, some dingy coffee place.” “You assuming I’ll start loitering in Crown Courts now?” “I’m assuming you’ll keep walking around under these lights and I’ll keep walking around under the same ones.” She dug in her bag, pulled out a business card, slid it across the bar. “This hasn’t changed. Email, work mobile. If you fall off the face of the earth again, at least I’ll know where to send the search party.” Aurora stared at the thick white rectangle. Black letters spelled out NIAMH O’SULLIVAN, CROWN PROSECUTOR, and a string of numbers. “You got fancy.” “Government issue.” Niamh’s eyes held hers. “You don’t have to use it. Just... Don’t make me read your name in a notebook.” Aurora picked up the card, turned it over. Blank on the back. She slipped it into her hoodie pocket, the outline a sharp rectangle against worn fabric. “I’m not great on phones.” “Email exists.” “So does walking around the block and never coming back.” “Yeah.” Niamh slid off the stool, the briefcase strap over her shoulder. She paused, hand on the bar. “Do what you want with it. That’s always been your speciality.” Aurora’s fingers tapped an uneven rhythm on the wood. “Hey.” Niamh stopped. “What.” “I don’t...” The words felt thick in Aurora’s mouth. “About that night. On the sofa. You walking out. I don’t—” She ground her teeth. “You’re not the villain in that story.” Niamh’s throat bobbed. “Good to know,” she managed. “I am.” “That’s above my pay grade.” Aurora almost smiled. Niamh glanced at Silas, who pretended to be engrossed in stacking glasses. “Keep an eye on her,” she tossed toward him. “Trouble finds her before I do.” His hand tightened around the cloth. “But I keep the doors open.” Niamh gave a brief nod, like that answer passed some unspoken test. She moved toward the exit. The door sighed when she pushed it. Cold air crept in again. For a moment, her silhouette framed in the neon glow looked like the student who once danced on tables in the union bar, hair wild, tie stolen from someone else’s neck. Then the door closed, and she joined the blur of umbrellas on the pavement. Aurora’s reflection stared back at her from the dark window, layered over the ghost of the street. Silas set a fresh drink down by her elbow without asking. Gin this time, cleaner, colder. “You all right?” His voice carried no weight, just the question. “She changed.” Aurora kept her gaze on the window. “So did you.” “I’m still in a bar.” Her finger tapped her pocket where the card dug into her. “She’s in court.” “Different fronts. Same war.” Aurora let out a breath she hadn’t noticed she held. “Do you have a lighter?” she asked. “You don’t smoke.” “Thought about starting.” “Don’t.” He wiped a ring of moisture into nothing. “Too many ghosts in that habit.” She huffed. “Got enough already.” Her fingers slipped over the card again, feeling the edges, the indent of printed letters, as the bar settled back into its regular rhythm around her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags58
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"His tone softened around [around]"
1"Niamh leaned back [back]"
2"The words landed hard [hard]"
3"His hand tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences212
tagDensity0.274
leniency0.547
rawRatio0.069
effectiveRatio0.038
98.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3414
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3414
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"comfortable"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"comforting"
count1
12
word"etching"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"lilt"
3"perfect"
4"eyebrow"
5"flicked"
6"silence"
7"traced"
8"charm"
9"comfortable"
10"stomach"
11"comforting"
12"etching"
13"echoed"
14"unspoken"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences191
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences191
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences342
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3409
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions105
wordCount1742
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.64
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
Silas9
Welsh2
English1
London1
Aurora46
Rory1
Niamh36
Crown1
Prosecution1
Service1
Europe1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Rory"
5"Niamh"
places
0"English"
1"London"
2"Europe"
globalScore0.18
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences128
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like the student who once danced o"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount3409
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences342
matches
0"like that answer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs242
mean14.09
std13.82
cv0.981
sampleLengths
076
174
240
348
421
513
615
728
826
94
109
1136
1233
1326
146
1511
1616
1726
184
1969
2036
219
2218
231
2427
2526
264
271
2853
2920
305
3132
3225
338
341
3519
3632
373
3813
3910
409
4112
425
4327
4416
455
4611
4711
4818
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs299
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences342
ratio0.006
matches
0"Street noise burst in with it—sirens somewhere far, a laugh too loud—then muffled when the door thudded shut."
1"The name she hadn’t heard in years—Rory—sounded rough around the edges in Niamh’s voice, as if it had scraped its way up."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1591
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.0295411690760528
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0006285355122564425
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences342
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences342
mean9.97
std7.99
cv0.802
sampleLengths
017
18
210
317
424
515
629
79
821
99
107
1124
1219
1310
1419
1521
1613
179
186
1918
2010
2126
224
239
2418
2518
266
2711
286
2910
3016
312
328
336
3411
3516
3626
374
3813
3923
4013
417
4213
4336
449
454
4614
471
488
494
54.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.34502923976608185
totalSentences342
uniqueOpeners118
56.82% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences176
matches
0"Even the neon outside felt"
1"Somewhere between a scoff and"
2"Then the door closed, and"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences176
matches
0"She tore a napkin into"
1"Her wrist flashed pale in"
2"His limp settled him into"
3"he leaned, lowering a fresh"
4"Her fingers hovered over the"
5"He glanced at her drink"
6"Her mouth curved without lifting"
7"He moved along the bar"
8"He nodded once, already focused"
9"Her hand froze on the"
10"His tone softened around his"
11"She lifted her head."
12"She tucked it between her"
13"Her profile under the bar’s"
14"She half turned, fingers still"
15"She swallowed, tried again."
16"She lifted the pint"
17"She nudged the empty stool"
18"She unbuttoned her coat, revealing"
19"She nodded at the badge"
ratio0.29
11.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences176
matches
0"The green neon raven over"
1"Bottles lined the back bar"
2"A low murmur of conversation"
3"Aurora hunched over the far"
4"The lacquer had worn down"
5"A half‑finished gin and tonic"
6"A Golden Empress delivery hoodie"
7"She tore a napkin into"
8"Her wrist flashed pale in"
9"His limp settled him into"
10"The silver ring on his"
11"he leaned, lowering a fresh"
12"Her fingers hovered over the"
13"He glanced at her drink"
14"Her mouth curved without lifting"
15"He moved along the bar"
16"He nodded once, already focused"
17"The door opened and brought"
18"Street noise burst in with"
19"Aurora didn’t look up at"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Dark hair, once waist‑length and dyed a stubborn purple, fell now in a sleek bob that swung with each movement, glossy and controlled."
1"The bright blue gaze that had impressed half their law cohort met hazel now shadowed with city fatigue."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags58
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Niamh slid, the briefcase strap over her shoulder"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"The voice laughed (laugh)"
1"she lied (lie)"
2"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
3"Niamh murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences212
tagDensity0.028
leniency0.057
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.038
86.4708%