Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8QPABAF4CANCE2AXR746

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked open one by one. Eva's voice filtered through the chain, muffled and suspicious. "Yeah?" "It's me." The chain rattled free. Eva swung the door wide, and for a moment, neither of them moved. Rory stood in the narrow hallway with rain plastered across her delivery jacket, dark hair curling at the edges where moisture had touched it. Her blue eyes held that particular shade they got when she'd been cycling hard through East London traffic—that wild, unbothered look that had first caught Lucien's attention three years ago. Lucien Moreau stepped backward to let her in. "You're soaked." Eva's tone managed to be both accusation and invitation. She wore an oversized jumper that hung past her hips, and her short auburn hair stuck up at odd angles. Behind her, their tabby Ptolemy wound between her ankles, utterly unimpressed by the interruption. "Golden Empress delivery," Rory said, peeling off her jacket. Water dripped onto the floorboards. "Yu-Fei had a catering order two streets over. Thought I'd stop by." The lie was so smooth that Eva didn't even blink. She'd practiced it, probably, the whole ride over. Rory was good at lies when she needed to be—the kind of lie that sounded like truth because it was close enough to it. Lucien recognised the technique. He used it constantly. What Rory hadn't counted on was finding him here. His tailored charcoal suit hung over the back of Eva's sofa, jacket and waistcoat both abandoned. His white shirt was partially unbuttoned, sleeves rolled to the elbows. The ivory-handled cane rested against the armchair. He'd been reading—one of Eva's research journals lay open on the coffee table, pages marked in his precise handwriting. Rory's jaw tightened. Just a flicker, but Lucien caught it. "Bad timing?" Eva glanced between them, suddenly aware of the electricity humming beneath the flat's cramped surfaces. Books and scrolls covered every available inch. The space felt even smaller with all three of them in it. "Not at all." Lucien moved toward his jacket with the casual grace of someone who'd mastered the art of seeming unbothered whilst being acutely aware of every shift in the room. "I was just leaving." "You were in the middle of explaining the alchemical properties of-" Eva started. "Which can wait." He buttoned his shirt, movements precise. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, found Rory's. "I'm sure you two have catching up to do." Rory said nothing. She stood dripping in her delivery jacket, which clung to her frame and made her look younger than twenty-five, more like the girl who'd fled Cardiff on a whim rather than the woman who'd chosen to stay gone. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight as she gripped her jacket tighter. Eva's flat always smelled like paper and possibility, like the thousand questions her research never quite answered. But underneath it was something else now. Something that smelled like Lucien's cologne—that particular blend of bergamot and something darker, something that tasted like smoke on the back of Rory's throat. "How'd you know I was here?" Rory asked. "I didn't." Lucien reached for his cane. The movement was fluid, no affectation, though everyone who saw him use it assumed otherwise. "Eva's been helping me with a project. Thought it was prudent to have her expertise before I approached you." "You were going to approach me." It wasn't a question. Rory's voice had that quality it always did when she was working through something—flat and sharp at once, like a blade being tested on a whetstone. "Eventually." He settled the cane's weight, and the ivory handle gleamed under Eva's mismatched lamps. "There are complications with the Beaumont situation that require your particular talents." "My particular talents for breaking into secure locations and stealing things that don't belong to me?" Eva made a small noise that might have been a laugh or might have been alarm. She picked up Ptolemy, who immediately began purring despite the tension threading through the flat like exposed wire. Lucien smiled. It was a thin thing, that smile. "Your talents for seeing solutions where others see only locked doors. Though the breaking and stealing is certainly a bonus." "I'm not doing that again." "You haven't heard the offer." "Don't need to." Rory finally moved deeper into the flat, shedding her jacket. She draped it over Eva's writing desk, where it immediately began soaking papers she'd been annotating. "Last time you made me an offer, it took six months to untangle the consequences." That was more or less accurate. The Chelsea job. The one that had gotten people hurt and had forced Rory and Lucien into a separation that was supposed to be permanent. The kind of ending that meant he wouldn't show up at Eva's flat three years later, fresh off a conversation that had apparently convinced him that approaching Rory was necessary. "The Beaumont situation is entirely different," Lucien said. "They always are. Until they're not." Eva set Ptolemy down and excused herself with practiced grace, murmuring something about tea that was clearly just a pretext to leave them alone. The kitchen door swung shut, though not before Rory caught the sympathetic look she threw toward them both. The flat seemed to shrink further without Eva's presence. Rory stood near the window where rain drummed against the glass, her silhouette angular and sharp. Three years and she still had that effect on him—the sensation that the room's oxygen levels had shifted, that the air between them had become something thicker, something requiring negotiation. "You look well," Lucien said. "Don't." Rory didn't turn from the window. "Don't do that thing where you pretend this is a casual reunion." "I'm not pretending anything. You do look well. Stronger than the last time I saw you." That was the night she'd left. The night he'd made the choice not to stop her, which was perhaps the same as choosing to let her go. She'd been pale then, hollowed out by something that had moved between them like rot through wood. He'd stood in his Mayfair flat and watched her pack, and he'd said nothing because everything he could say would have been a lie or a manipulation, and for once, he'd wanted to give her something clean. "I've built a life here," Rory said quietly. "A small one. Quiet. Exactly the opposite of what comes with knowing you." "And yet you're still friends with Eva." "Eva didn't ask me to do anything illegal." "Eva would, if the right crisis presented itself. That's not why you're avoiding the point though, is it?" Rory's fingers curled against the window frame. Rain continued its patient percussion. "The point," Lucien continued, "is that when Eva mentioned you'd helped her with her recent research, when she described your insights and your methodology, I realised that whatever happened between us doesn't actually matter. Not for this. What matters is that I need someone with your particular mind, and you're the only person I trust to have it." "You don't trust anyone." "Precisely my point. Which makes you extraordinarily rare." She finally turned to face him. Her bright blue eyes held that mix of anger and hunger that he'd spent three years trying to forget. He'd failed rather spectacularly at that particular task. "If you're here to proposition me-" Rory began. "I'm here because something is breaking in the underworld, and I believe the Beaumont collection contains the key to understanding it. I need someone who can think like you think. Someone who won't panic when things go sideways. Someone I can trust to know exactly how far to go and when to stop." "I'm not that person anymore." "You absolutely are. You're just trying very hard not to be." The accusation hung between them, sharp and undeniable. Through the kitchen door, Eva's kettle whistled, deliberately loud. A kindness, a warning, a reminder that they weren't actually alone. Rory crossed the space between them in three steps. Up close, he could see the fine tremor in her hands, could smell the rain and the curry spice from her delivery jacket, could trace the exact moment her body remembered what his proximity meant. "If I say yes," she said, "that doesn't mean anything changes between us." "I'm not asking for anything to change between us. I'm asking you to steal something." "And after?" "After," Lucien said softly, "you disappear again if you want to. I won't stop you this time either." She raised her hand and, for a moment, he thought she might strike him. Instead, her fingers closed on his collar, pulling him forward until their foreheads nearly touched. "Tell me exactly what you need stolen," she whispered. The kitchen door swung open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.087
79.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1464
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"suddenly"
2"precisely"
3"very"
4"deliberately"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1464
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"absolutely"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"weight"
2"tension"
3"absolutely"
4"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1455
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1005
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
East1
London1
Lucien13
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Water1
Eva16
Rory20
Books1
Cardiff1
Chelsea1
Mayfair1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Water"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
5"Chelsea"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.505
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like truth because it was close en"
1"smelled like paper and possibility, like t"
2"smelled like Lucien's cologne—that particu"
3"tasted like smoke on the back of Rory's t"
4"ation that had apparently convinced him that"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1455
matches(empty)
46.55% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"had that quality"
1"had that effect shifted, that the"
2"held that mix"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean24.66
std19.8
cv0.803
sampleLengths
016
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22
371
48
545
626
750
89
953
1010
1136
1235
1313
1428
1557
1648
178
1841
196
2030
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2216
2334
2429
255
265
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2861
298
306
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335
3419
3516
3681
3721
387
398
4018
4112
4258
434
448
4533
468
4753
485
4911
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"being tested"
1"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was finding"
1"was working"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences111
ratio0.054
matches
0"Her blue eyes held that particular shade they got when she'd been cycling hard through East London traffic—that wild, unbothered look that had first caught Lucien's attention three years ago."
1"Rory was good at lies when she needed to be—the kind of lie that sounded like truth because it was close enough to it."
2"He'd been reading—one of Eva's research journals lay open on the coffee table, pages marked in his precise handwriting."
3"Something that smelled like Lucien's cologne—that particular blend of bergamot and something darker, something that tasted like smoke on the back of Rory's throat."
4"Rory's voice had that quality it always did when she was working through something—flat and sharp at once, like a blade being tested on a whetstone."
5"Three years and she still had that effect on him—the sensation that the room's oxygen levels had shifted, that the air between them had become something thicker, something requiring negotiation."
96.13% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1013
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.044422507403751234
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.017769002961500493
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean13.11
std9.73
cv0.743
sampleLengths
07
19
21
32
44
513
624
730
88
911
1020
1114
129
135
1412
1510
168
1724
184
194
209
2116
2211
237
2419
253
267
2717
287
2912
3031
314
3213
339
3410
359
363
3738
3816
3917
407
4124
428
437
4415
4519
466
474
4826
4915
58.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3963963963963964
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners44
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Just a flicker, but Lucien"
1"Instead, her fingers closed on"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences75
matches
0"Her blue eyes held that"
1"She wore an oversized jumper"
2"She'd practiced it, probably, the"
3"He used it constantly."
4"His tailored charcoal suit hung"
5"His white shirt was partially"
6"He'd been reading—one of Eva's"
7"He buttoned his shirt, movements"
8"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
9"She stood dripping in her"
10"It wasn't a question."
11"He settled the cane's weight,"
12"She picked up Ptolemy, who"
13"It was a thin thing,"
14"She draped it over Eva's"
15"She'd been pale then, hollowed"
16"He'd stood in his Mayfair"
17"She finally turned to face"
18"Her bright blue eyes held"
19"He'd failed rather spectacularly at"
ratio0.28
13.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences75
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked open one"
1"Eva's voice filtered through the"
2"The chain rattled free."
3"Eva swung the door wide,"
4"Rory stood in the narrow"
5"Her blue eyes held that"
6"Lucien Moreau stepped backward to"
7"Eva's tone managed to be"
8"She wore an oversized jumper"
9"Rory said, peeling off her"
10"Water dripped onto the floorboards."
11"The lie was so smooth"
12"She'd practiced it, probably, the"
13"Rory was good at lies"
14"Lucien recognised the technique."
15"He used it constantly."
16"His tailored charcoal suit hung"
17"His white shirt was partially"
18"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
19"He'd been reading—one of Eva's"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Her blue eyes held that particular shade they got when she'd been cycling hard through East London traffic—that wild, unbothered look that had first caught Luci…"
1"She wore an oversized jumper that hung past her hips, and her short auburn hair stuck up at odd angles."
2"She stood dripping in her delivery jacket, which clung to her frame and made her look younger than twenty-five, more like the girl who'd fled Cardiff on a whim …"
3"Something that smelled like Lucien's cologne—that particular blend of bergamot and something darker, something that tasted like smoke on the back of Rory's thro…"
4"The kind of ending that meant he wouldn't show up at Eva's flat three years later, fresh off a conversation that had apparently convinced him that approaching R…"
5"Eva set Ptolemy down and excused herself with practiced grace, murmuring something about tea that was clearly just a pretext to leave them alone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien continued (continue)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.391
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.087
77.5280%