| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she tried again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 91.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "porcelain" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 201 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 201 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 206 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 1195 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Shifted" | | 1 | "twitched" | | 2 | "unfolded" | | 3 | "moved" | | 4 | "Shifted" | | 5 | "Eyes" | | 6 | "glided" | | 7 | "hissed" | | 8 | "Rory." | | 9 | "sensation" | | 10 | "Waiting" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1157 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | November | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Were | 1 | | Was | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Were" | | 5 | "Was" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 32.64% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.674 | | wordCount | 1195 | | matches | | 0 | "Not glowing, not yet, but insistent" | | 1 | "not yet, but insistent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 206 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 121 | | mean | 9.88 | | std | 13.89 | | cv | 1.406 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 94 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 94.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "been placed" | | 1 | "being pulled" | | 2 | "been clustered" | | 3 | "was flattened" | | 4 | "was dented" | | 5 | "Were gone." |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 23 | | totalSentences | 206 | | ratio | 0.112 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t cold—not really—but the air had a weight to it, like the sky was holding its breath." | | 1 | "The air changed instantly—muffled, thick, as if the world beyond the trees had been placed under glass." | | 2 | "Wildflowers dotted the ground despite the season—purple bell-heather, white starflowers, something with petals like cracked porcelain." | | 3 | "Her thumb traced the crescent scar on her wrist—a nervous habit." | | 4 | "Even the wind moved wrong—shivering through the branches in short, uneven bursts, like it was being pulled along by something with fingers." | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed again—warmer this time." | | 6 | "She took a breath, turned back—" | | 7 | "—and froze." | | 8 | "But between her footprints—nothing." | | 9 | "It was a wet, clicking noise—like bone tapping against stone." | | 10 | "Just a slow, deliberate lift—like smoke given intention." | | 11 | "The crimson gem inside flickered—once—a faint pulse beneath the silver casing." | | 12 | "They *unfolded*—stretching, elongating, their forms never settling." | | 13 | "She turned to run—" | | 14 | "—and the flowers *moved*." | | 15 | "Her pulse roared in her ears, but beneath it—another sound." | | 16 | "A low hum shivered through the ground, and for a heartbeat, the runes along the bark flared gold—faint, like a dying ember." | | 17 | "The crimson stone glowed—soft at first, then brighter, pulsing in time with her heart." | | 18 | "But the others—retreated." | | 19 | "Then—laughter." | | 20 | "A wave of pressure slammed into her—ears popping, vision blurring." | | 21 | "And the shadows—" | | 22 | "The pendant still glowed—faintly." |
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| 85.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1181 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Tiny, black, glassy things" |
| | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.04995766299745978 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005080440304826418 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 206 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 206 | | mean | 5.8 | | std | 5.39 | | cv | 0.929 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 49.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3446601941747573 | | totalSentences | 206 | | uniqueOpeners | 71 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a whisper of heat," | | 1 | "Even the wind moved wrong—shivering" | | 2 | "Then she looked at her" | | 3 | "Then a pause." | | 4 | "Then it began to rise." | | 5 | "Just a slow, deliberate lift—like" | | 6 | "More oozed from the runes" | | 7 | "Only the wind now." | | 8 | "Then opened them." |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 1 | "It wasn’t cold—not really—but the" | | 2 | "she called, her voice soft" | | 3 | "They shouldn’t be blooming." | | 4 | "She took another step." | | 5 | "Her thumb traced the crescent" | | 6 | "She hadn’t come looking for" | | 7 | "she tried again" | | 8 | "She turned fast, heart slamming" | | 9 | "Their shadows stretched uneven, reaching" | | 10 | "She took a breath, turned" | | 11 | "Their stems leaned as if" | | 12 | "Her voice didn’t waver." | | 13 | "It was a wet, clicking" | | 14 | "She turned slowly." | | 15 | "It pooled on the ground," | | 16 | "She took a step back." | | 17 | "They didn’t walk." | | 18 | "They *unfolded*—stretching, elongating, their forms" | | 19 | "She turned to run—" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain had started just as" | | 1 | "The city’s noise died behind" | | 2 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 3 | "It wasn’t cold—not really—but the" | | 4 | "The grove’s entrance wasn’t marked" | | 5 | "Rory had found it two" | | 6 | "The air changed instantly—muffled, thick," | | 7 | "she called, her voice soft" | | 8 | "The standing stones loomed in" | | 9 | "Wildflowers dotted the ground despite" | | 10 | "They shouldn’t be blooming." | | 11 | "She took another step." | | 12 | "The pendant warmed against her" | | 13 | "Rory stopped, hand sliding to" | | 14 | "Her thumb traced the crescent" | | 15 | "She hadn’t come looking for" | | 16 | "Yu-Fei had slipped the pendant" | | 17 | "Silas, who kept a shotgun" | | 18 | "The grove was too quiet." | | 19 | "Rory stepped toward the central" |
| | ratio | 0.626 | |
| 71.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she stepped between them" | | 1 | "—and the flowers *moved*." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The starflowers that had been clustered near her left boot were now in a tight knot ten feet away, facing the central stone." | | 1 | "A wave of pressure slammed into her—ears popping, vision blurring." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice soft but firm" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |