Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX8RTS6RWGNX27WXP7N6T8

Run Details

Duration:
22.3s
Cost:
$0.010846
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had started just as Aurora Carter crossed the A3, slicking the tarmac with oil-slick rainbows under the orange streetlamps. The city’s noise died behind her, swallowed by the dense, ancient trees of Richmond Park. She pulled her jacket tighter, fingers brushing the cool silver of the Heartstone pendant beneath her collar. It wasn’t cold—not really—but the air had a weight to it, like the sky was holding its breath. The grove’s entrance wasn’t marked on any map. Rory had found it two weeks ago, trailing a half-mad hedge witch who’d muttered about “the thinning” and vanished between two oaks older than Cardiff. Now she stepped between them again, boots sinking into moss that felt too plush, too deliberate. The air changed instantly—muffled, thick, as if the world beyond the trees had been placed under glass. “Isolde?” she called, her voice soft but firm. No answer. The standing stones loomed in a rough circle ahead, their bark peeled back in places to reveal swirling, rune-like scars. Wildflowers dotted the ground despite the season—purple bell-heather, white starflowers, something with petals like cracked porcelain. They shouldn’t be blooming. Not in November. Not under this bruise-coloured sky. She took another step. The pendant warmed against her chest. Not much. Just a whisper of heat, like a fingertip brushing skin. Rory stopped, hand sliding to the pendant. Her thumb traced the crescent scar on her wrist—a nervous habit. She hadn’t come looking for magic. But since Evan had smashed her phone, left that voicemail with his breath too close to the mic, since she’d woken twice in a week to find her front door unlocked and the smell of petrol in the hall… Yu-Fei had slipped the pendant into her delivery bag with a quiet, “You might need this. Don’t tell Silas.” Silas, who kept a shotgun behind the bar and knew the names of faeries you shouldn’t say aloud. The grove was too quiet. Not silent. There was the rustle of leaves, the distant caw of a crow. But no insects. No mice skittering in the undergrowth. Even the wind moved wrong—shivering through the branches in short, uneven bursts, like it was being pulled along by something with fingers. Rory stepped toward the central stone. The one that looked almost carved. “Isolde?” she tried again. “I need to talk. Someone’s watching my flat. I think—” A twig snapped behind her. She turned fast, heart slamming once against her ribs. Nothing. The trees stood too close. Their shadows stretched uneven, reaching toward her like limbs caught mid-reach. The pendant pulsed again—warmer this time. Not glowing, not yet, but insistent. She exhaled. “Right. Talking to empty air. Brilliant.” She took a breath, turned back— —and froze. The flowers had shifted. Not grown. Not bloomed. *Shifted*. The starflowers that had been clustered near her left boot were now in a tight knot ten feet away, facing the central stone. Their stems leaned as if pulled by a weight. Rory crouched, studying them. Then she looked at her own boots. The moss where she’d stepped a minute ago was flattened. But between her footprints—nothing. No marks. No sign of anything passing through. Yet the moss a few feet to her right was dented. Long, narrow dents. Like something had dragged itself. She straightened. “Someone’s here.” Her voice didn’t waver. But her fingers curled around the pendant now, pressing it hard into her palm. A sound rose from the edge of the clearing. Not a voice. Not an animal. It was a wet, clicking noise—like bone tapping against stone. Once. Then twice. Then a pause. Then again. From the opposite side of the grove. She turned slowly. Between two oaks, the shadows didn’t move with the wind. They *twitched*. One elongated, stretching downward like tar from the lowest branch. It pooled on the ground, too dark to be natural, too still. Then it began to rise. Not fast. Not all at once. Just a slow, deliberate lift—like smoke given intention. Rory didn’t run. She took a step back. Then another. The pendant throbbed. Warmth seeped into her chest, spreading down her arms. The crimson gem inside flickered—once—a faint pulse beneath the silver casing. From the trees to her left, another shadow peeled free. And another. They didn’t walk. They *unfolded*—stretching, elongating, their forms never settling. Too tall. Too thin. Joints where there shouldn’t be joints. And the clicking came again. Closer. She turned to run— —and the flowers *moved*. Not blown. *Shifted*. The porcelain-petaled things writhed, stems twisting like worms. They turned toward her, faces opening like mouths. No. Not mouths. *Eyes*. Tiny, black, glassy things nestled in the roots. They watched. The air thickened. Breath caught in her throat like cotton. Her pulse roared in her ears, but beneath it—another sound. Whispers. Not in any language she knew. Syllables like cracked glass. Hisses that curled behind her molars. One of the shadows stepped forward. Not on feet. It *glided*, its lower half dissolving into the moss, reforming a pace ahead. The others followed. Silent. Deliberate. Rory backed toward the standing stones. “No,” she said, sharp, clear. “You don’t get to do this here.” The central stone trembled. Just once. A low hum shivered through the ground, and for a heartbeat, the runes along the bark flared gold—faint, like a dying ember. The shadows *hissed*. Not a sound. A feeling. A vibration in the air, like the snap of teeth inches from her neck. She stumbled. Her hand slapped against the central stone. Cold. Too cold. And wet. She pulled back. Her palm came away slick. Not with moss or sap. Blood. Dark. Thick. Dripping down the bark in slow, deliberate trails. More oozed from the runes now, pooling at the base. The pendant flared. Heat flooded her chest. The crimson stone glowed—soft at first, then brighter, pulsing in time with her heart. The shadows recoiled. Not all of them. Two held their ground, heads tilting like broken dolls. But the others—retreated. Sliding back into the trees, melting into the bark, the roots, the soil. The blood stopped flowing. The runes dimmed. Silence. Rory breathed. Once. Twice. Then—laughter. Not hers. A dry, brittle sound, like leaves crushed underfoot. It came from the central stone. She looked. The blood had seeped into the grooves. Formed a shape. A mouth. Smiling. And from deep within the stone, something whispered her name. “*Rory.*” She didn’t answer. She pressed the pendant hard against the stone. A flash. White. Burning. The grove screamed. Not in sound. In *sensation*. A wave of pressure slammed into her—ears popping, vision blurring. The flowers wilted in an instant, petals blackening. The standing stones cracked, thin lines spiderwebbing across their bark. And the shadows— Were gone. No trace. No dents in the moss. No eyes in the roots. Nothing. Only the wind now. Normal. Steady. Blowing through trees that stood like ordinary trees again. Rory sagged against the stone. It was dry. No blood. She looked down. Her hand was clean. The pendant still glowed—faintly. Steadily. And the air… Was empty. She closed her eyes. Then opened them. The grove looked like a grove. But the silence was different now. Not peaceful. *Waiting*.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she tried again [again]"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
91.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1219
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1219
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"porcelain"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"porcelain"
3"whisper"
4"traced"
5"pulsed"
6"throbbed"
7"warmth"
8"flickered"
9"pulse"
10"trembled"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences201
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences201
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords11
totalWords1195
ratio0.009
matches
0"Shifted"
1"twitched"
2"unfolded"
3"moved"
4"Shifted"
5"Eyes"
6"glided"
7"hissed"
8"Rory."
9"sensation"
10"Waiting"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1157
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Cardiff1
November1
Evan1
Yu-Fei1
Silas1
Were1
Was1
Rory8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
4"Were"
5"Was"
6"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"November"
4"Yu-Fei"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a grove"
32.64% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.674
wordCount1195
matches
0"Not glowing, not yet, but insistent"
1"not yet, but insistent"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences206
matches
0"left that voicemail"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs121
mean9.88
std13.89
cv1.406
sampleLengths
070
166
28
32
448
54
66
794
818
95
1045
1112
1214
135
149
151
1628
178
186
192
204
2137
2211
2322
2419
252
262
2718
289
296
3016
312
327
333
3410
352
3627
376
388
393
407
4123
4210
432
4420
455
461
474
484
4919
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences201
matches
0"been placed"
1"being pulled"
2"been clustered"
3"was flattened"
4"was dented"
5"Were gone."
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount25
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences23
totalSentences206
ratio0.112
matches
0"It wasn’t cold—not really—but the air had a weight to it, like the sky was holding its breath."
1"The air changed instantly—muffled, thick, as if the world beyond the trees had been placed under glass."
2"Wildflowers dotted the ground despite the season—purple bell-heather, white starflowers, something with petals like cracked porcelain."
3"Her thumb traced the crescent scar on her wrist—a nervous habit."
4"Even the wind moved wrong—shivering through the branches in short, uneven bursts, like it was being pulled along by something with fingers."
5"The pendant pulsed again—warmer this time."
6"She took a breath, turned back—"
7"—and froze."
8"But between her footprints—nothing."
9"It was a wet, clicking noise—like bone tapping against stone."
10"Just a slow, deliberate lift—like smoke given intention."
11"The crimson gem inside flickered—once—a faint pulse beneath the silver casing."
12"They *unfolded*—stretching, elongating, their forms never settling."
13"She turned to run—"
14"—and the flowers *moved*."
15"Her pulse roared in her ears, but beneath it—another sound."
16"A low hum shivered through the ground, and for a heartbeat, the runes along the bark flared gold—faint, like a dying ember."
17"The crimson stone glowed—soft at first, then brighter, pulsing in time with her heart."
18"But the others—retreated."
19"Then—laughter."
20"A wave of pressure slammed into her—ears popping, vision blurring."
21"And the shadows—"
22"The pendant still glowed—faintly."
85.29% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1181
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Tiny, black, glassy things"
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.04995766299745978
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005080440304826418
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean5.8
std5.39
cv0.929
sampleLengths
020
115
217
318
48
525
616
717
88
92
1020
1116
124
133
145
154
166
172
1810
197
2011
216
2239
2319
2418
255
262
2712
283
296
3022
316
326
334
3410
355
369
371
385
3911
406
416
422
436
446
452
464
472
482
491
49.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3446601941747573
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners71
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences139
matches
0"Just a whisper of heat,"
1"Even the wind moved wrong—shivering"
2"Then she looked at her"
3"Then a pause."
4"Then it began to rise."
5"Just a slow, deliberate lift—like"
6"More oozed from the runes"
7"Only the wind now."
8"Then opened them."
ratio0.065
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences139
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
1"It wasn’t cold—not really—but the"
2"she called, her voice soft"
3"They shouldn’t be blooming."
4"She took another step."
5"Her thumb traced the crescent"
6"She hadn’t come looking for"
7"she tried again"
8"She turned fast, heart slamming"
9"Their shadows stretched uneven, reaching"
10"She took a breath, turned"
11"Their stems leaned as if"
12"Her voice didn’t waver."
13"It was a wet, clicking"
14"She turned slowly."
15"It pooled on the ground,"
16"She took a step back."
17"They didn’t walk."
18"They *unfolded*—stretching, elongating, their forms"
19"She turned to run—"
ratio0.245
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences139
matches
0"Rain had started just as"
1"The city’s noise died behind"
2"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
3"It wasn’t cold—not really—but the"
4"The grove’s entrance wasn’t marked"
5"Rory had found it two"
6"The air changed instantly—muffled, thick,"
7"she called, her voice soft"
8"The standing stones loomed in"
9"Wildflowers dotted the ground despite"
10"They shouldn’t be blooming."
11"She took another step."
12"The pendant warmed against her"
13"Rory stopped, hand sliding to"
14"Her thumb traced the crescent"
15"She hadn’t come looking for"
16"Yu-Fei had slipped the pendant"
17"Silas, who kept a shotgun"
18"The grove was too quiet."
19"Rory stepped toward the central"
ratio0.626
71.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"Now she stepped between them"
1"—and the flowers *moved*."
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The starflowers that had been clustered near her left boot were now in a tight knot ten feet away, facing the central stone."
1"A wave of pressure slammed into her—ears popping, vision blurring."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called, her voice soft but firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.8500%